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A summary of this article appears in Water fluoridation.

1990 end date for fluoridation in East Germany: reason?

I notice that the article lists 1990 as the end date for water fluoridation in East Germany. Was that date due merely to the termination of the DDR as a legal entity upon unification with the BRD; was it due to the DDR's adoption, upon unification, of the BRD policy of non-fluoridation; or did the DDR abandon fluoridation pre-unification, and if the last, did it do so under the influence of the USSR, which abandoned fluoridation in the same year?

Request to add information from The Fluoride Deception by Christopher Bryson

Hi everyone,

I think that the findings in Christopher Bryson's book The Fluoride Deception should be given more attention. According to this, journalist Christopher Bryson, who worked for the BBC and The Guardian, and another journalist, both on assignment with the Christian Science Monitor, conducted an in-depth investigation on supposed connections between fluoridation of public water supplies and the Manhattan Project that Bryson eventually turned into book-length exposé. As far as I understand, The Fluoride Deception claims that (to oversimplify) the need to deal with fluoride compound-containing runoff/waste from industrial projects, including the Manhattan Project, led to efforts to reclassify fluoride — which was challenging to filter out of the water for some reason — as medically or dentally beneficial. They also found industry-controlled studies showing harmful effects of fluoridation, that they say were deliberately not published.

Bryson also claims, according to this — which derives some of its information from a blacklisted site, fluoridealert.org — that "industrial interests, concerned about liabilities from fluoride pollution and health effects on workers, played a significant role in the early promotion of fluoridation" and that the fluoride used for fluoridation is from industrial waste. (Assuming that low-level fluoride is indeed mildly beneficial for dental health, the fact that its use and subsequent disposal were, at one point or another, industrially necessary is merely a fortunate coincidence.)

In other words, Bryson indicts the Left's boogeyman (the military-industrial complex) rather than the Right's (the world Communist plot). I think this observation deserves more attention; it's also notable in of itself that this is a horseshoe issue. Yet, this article only has a major section for the right-wing conspiracy theory. That may or may not be a balanced way to faithfully reflect the controversy. I would just point out that, most likely, the conspiracy theory based off of The Fluoride Deception is arguably more grounded in fact.

Bryson's book is already listed as citation 45, but it contains additional notable information about the controversy that I did not find in this article (nor in the water fluoridation article) which I would suggest for inclusion.

Full disclosure: I found out about this from r/conspiracy. But still, it might be surprising for many Wikipedia readers that such a reasonably high-quality source, as Bryson's book seems to be, is cited by conspiracy theorists but neither it nor its core claims are referenced in Wikipedia at all. While fluoridealert.org is not a valid source, the book itself is, as far as I understand (assuming it says what they say it says).

If this has already been brought to your attention, I'd love to know why it was decided not to include it.

Respectfully,

... RecentlyZealous (talk) 21:45, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It reads like a conspiracy. Three quotes from the Intro:

“The plot (to add fluoride to toothpaste and drinking water) includes … Hiroshima atomic bomb..”
“Twists and turns of the fluoride story are propelled by nothing less than the often grim requirements of accumulating power…”
“… fluoride was systematically removed from public association with ill health by … U.S. military and big corporations”--Smokefoot (talk) 22:10, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, it's a poor souce. I've trimmed it (with some other unreliable/undue stuff). For WP:BMI we need WP:MEDRS. Bon courage (talk) 00:59, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, why do you say this is a poor source? Sorry if I'm showing my ignorance of the rules for good sources. For example, had his article been published in the Christian Science Monitor, as it originally was apparently going to be, it could be counted as a source, right? But since CSM declined to print it (while others publishers did), it can't be? Is that correct?

Also, how is it determined that this article or suggested portion of this article is or isn't WP:BMI as opposed (biomedical/health-related) public policy controversy. Arguably, this source/information touches more on the non-WP:BMI categories of information such as Beliefs, Medical Ethics, History, Society and Culture, etc. rather than Health Effects, Medical Decisions, etc. RecentlyZealous (talk) 01:45, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Some claims are WP:BMI, some not. As to sources, the WP:BESTSOURCES tend to be WP:SECONDARY sources from recognized authorities in the field, published by high-quality publishers. They must be WP:FRIND. Bryson's book was actually reviewed in Nature – doi:10.1038/434275a – and it seems it mixes some solid reportage with dangerous misinformation and scientific incompetence. For the basic science, Wikipedia would use the underlying literature rather than a questionable book by a reporter/TV producer. Bon courage (talk) 02:05, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, thanks for your comment. A partial rebuttal, if I may:

- Book-length journalism pieces by prominent reporters, used as sources elsewhere, often use colorful language suggestive of conspiracy theories. This is not traditionally understand to detract from the credibility of their claims. Many exposes (e.g. those of Erin Brockovich, the Watergate reporters, the Miami Herald on the Epstein affair, etc.) use such language and even claim (actual) conspiracies.

- In this case, the reporter/investigator is otherwise as credible as any of the above, based on his credentials in his biography. I didn't do an extensive search, but as far as I can tell, his factual claims regarding fluoride waste from industrial processes have not been publicly contradicted.

- The first quote you listed, including the preceding sentence, is "Yet the story of how fluoride was added to our toothpaste and drinking water is an extraordinary, almost fantastic tale. The plot includes some of the most spectacular events in human affairs—the explosion of the Hiroshima atomic bomb, for example." In this context, I think most readers would read "plot" to refer to the "story" referred to in the preceding sentence, not the presumed "plot" to improve the public image of fluoride, implement water fluoridation, etc.

I'm wondering what you would think about including something like this: "The 1997 book The Fluoride Deception by investigative journalist Christopher Bryson claims that ... [1 sentence summary of the claims].[citation]. [Optional:] The claims regarding [specific subject] have been disputed by... "? RecentlyZealous (talk) 01:35, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unless some secondary source is commenting on those claims, why? If the rest of the world is ignoring Bryson's claims Wikipedia needs to also. Bon courage (talk) 02:06, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am simply voicing my opinion as a professional chemist. Yes, Bryson has a fine resume as an investigative reporter. But now he is doing investigation of chemistry, and he is out of his depth. Why link Hiroshima to the fluoride controversy? What does it mean to say that fluoride is "muscular"? Listen, I predict that this book will be admitted into Wikipedia. The fluoride dispute is over, fluoridation won. Water fluoridation is fading slowly, but fluoride is pervasive in toothpastes. What I want to see from the Brysons and supporters is some commentary on fluoride from a top-level dentistry textbook, the kind of text used at highly ranked dental schools. --Smokefoot (talk) 12:59, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. We really don't want to be using sources that confuse fluoride and fluorine. Bon courage (talk) 17:20, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

RFK Jr.

I've readded RFK Jr. as he's been nominated to Secretary of Health. Darrelljon (talk) 22:10, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

...in one country where 95% of the world's population don't live. He is regarded as a nutter even by half the people in that country. He is NOT representative of the issue. I have reverted your addition. HiLo48 (talk) 22:32, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

He may not be credible but isn't it a matter of notability? Darrelljon (talk) 22:47, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is a global article. Kennedy's thoughts are irrelevant to most of the globe. Please avoid US-centrism. HiLo48 (talk) 01:31, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

RFK Jr is American appointed to high office in America but that doesn't demonstrate non-notability or US centrism. He's headline news today in BBC, Guardian and Sky. An article here even says he will impact global health https://theconversation.com/if-trump-puts-rfk-jr-in-charge-of-health-get-ready-for-a-distorted-reality-where-global-health-suffers-243152 Darrelljon (talk) 05:21, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If you look carefully, that's what the headline says, but the article doesn't really make that case. It describes some idiotic things he has said and done in he past. then just makes generalised speculation about what might happen in future. Nothing specific. HiLo48 (talk) 08:05, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reverted as RFK Jr. is notable on this article. Darrelljon (talk) 14:12, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

NO he's not. He's not even mentioned in hte article. HiLo48 (talk) 23:00, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Response to third opinion request:

Oppose adding the photograph without article changes: Adding a third opinion here, in my read of things it's not completely unreasonable for the article to mention RFK Jr. as a powerful advocate for the conspiratorial perspective here, but:

He certainly shouldn't be featured in the lead section as things currently stand, that is US-centrism on a global issue.
He isn't mentioned once in the article—if he's a notable advocate for this and his advocacy is significant enough to be included in this article, some work should be done to reflect that in content before inclusion of a picture could be justified.

In my opinion, having a photo of him included near well-sourced content about his impact on the subject of the article would be just fine, but there's no reason to feature his photo in the article as it currently stands, and I don't think there's any reason to have him in the lead unless and until significant, noted, well-sourced major events change that. I also think enriching the article with a few more illustrations would decrease the impact of one photo of RFK Jr. being added and alleviate any potential WP:UNDUE concerns around the picture. — penultimate_supper 🚀 ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:22, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've included mention of RFK Jr. under opposition from environmental groups as he worked at Riverkeeper and founded Waterkeeper Alliance. Darrelljon (talk) 06:54, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This more US-centrism. It's not a good look for a global article. HiLo48 (talk) 08:40, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The same sentence references the American groups the John Birch Society and the KKK. Inclusion of notable Americans is not US centrism. Darrelljon (talk) 08:58, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well, it actually is. 95% of the world's people don't live in the USA. Unless you include proportionate mention of people and bodies from elsewhere, it's classic US-centrism. The fact those other American bodies were already mentioned just makes things worse. HiLo48 (talk) 09:04, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Is this about diff which added "(including senior politician Robert F. Kennedy Jr.)"? Does the reference at the end of the sentence mention RFK? Have reliable sources made statements about RFK and this topic which would make material on RFK WP:DUE? Johnuniq (talk) 09:11, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I include some non-US sources here

Darrelljon (talk) 08:19, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Non-US sources don't help. Most of those are simply telling us about something happening in the USA. So it's still US-centrism.HiLo48 (talk) 08:50, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Things happen in the USA that are notable enough to be referenced in articles not specifically about the US. Nominating RFK Jr to Secretary of Health is one thing that is notable for his opposition to water fluoridation. Darrelljon (talk) 09:42, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

But it's STILL about events entirely within the USA. Is nobody elsewhere opposed to fluoridation? I can actually help you here. Australia has its own similar nutter, though not with the an equivalent political ancestry - Pete Evans. He's a fan of RFK Jr too. Maybe write about him rather than the all-American hero.HiLo48 (talk) 05:22, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Are there ten sources about Pete Evans views on fluoridation that are not from his own country? Is Pete Evans presumptive nominee for Minister/Secretary of Health in his own country or likely to be? Or the same questions for any other opponent of fluoridation. Including the John Birch society or the KKK for that matter? What is their impact on fluoridation outside the USA? What was RFK Jrs impact on public health in Samoa? Was it notable? Darrelljon (talk) 11:24, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

RFK Jr being presumptive nominee for Minister/Secretary of Health in his own country is obviously a US-centric matter. RFK Jr is mostly laughed at outside the US, so his influence on fluoridation outside the USA is probably the opposite of what he seeks. HiLo48 (talk) 22:34, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[1] I have posted on the talk page before your revert "I have written something on the talk page, now I can continue edit-warring" is not how WP:BRD works. You wait until the discussion is over (and you have reached consensus). --Hob Gadling (talk) 09:43, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sept. 25, 2024 fed court ruling

The findings in Judge Chen's ruling merit mention. I propose language like this:

On Sept. 25, 2024, U.S. Federal Judge Edward Chen ruled that water fluoridation posed an, “unreasonable risk of reduced IQ in children…a risk sufficient to require the EPA to engage with a regulatory response…One thing the EPA cannot do, however, in the face of this Court’s finding, is to ignore that risk.”

https://news.bloomberglaw.com/environment-and-energy/epa-must-reduce-fluorides-risks-to-childrens-iq-court-says

Many other sources will verify this information if needed. The addition would help get the section, "Court Cases, United States" up to date. Petergkeyes (talk) 00:54, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It certainly seems to be a fact hat the judge made this ruling. I just wish we would place more emphasis on the fact that courts can never decide science. HiLo48 (talk) 01:25, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]