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== Expressing “the film was good” ==
== correction ==


The lead states that “the film was good” could not be expressed under E-prime. What about “I considered it a good film”? Or does that contain a contracted “to be”—“I considered it [to be] a good film”? Either way, it may be worth mentioning in the lead. —[[Special:Contributions/174.141.182.82|174.141.182.82]] ([[User talk:174.141.182.82|talk]]) 13:48, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
''An anonymous user wrote:''
:No. the real trick that your sentence contains "I", i.e., it is a rephrasing with significantly changed structure of the sentence. You will find similar example in the article, e.g, "I see this film as good". [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 23:37, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
::"Some people experience the film as good". [[user:Randy Kryn|Randy Kryn]] 10:45, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
: I think it's more that an utterance such as "the film was good" has the form of a universal objective statement about the world, whereas there is no doubt that "I considered it a good film" is an existential subjective statement about a personal taste. [[User:Sean_O%27Halpin|Sean O'Halpin]] 20:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
::Yep. This is a good illustration of why E-Prime-Prime, which our article does not seem to cover, is so much more practical: "It was a good film to me" and "I thought it was a good film" are equivalent and much more natural. In E-Prime-Prime it's permissible to use "the ''to be'' of identity" if it is explicitly qualified as a subjective perception. Whether derived directly from E-Prime-Prime or not, this is a big factor in [[nonviolent communication]] and several other approaches. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — [[User:SMcCandlish|'''SMcCandlish''' ☺]] [[User talk:SMcCandlish|☏]] [[Special:Contributions/SMcCandlish|¢]] ≽<sup>ʌ</sup>ⱷ҅<sub>ᴥ</sub>ⱷ<sup>ʌ</sup>≼ </span> 05:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
:::Nope. The correct equivalent, albeit clumsy, is "The film exhibited the property of goodness". And this zen-like trick creates loopholes in many arguments about e-prime; in particular, my version simply sweeps under the carpet the problem of universal vs. subjective. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 02:30, 24 February 2017 (UTC)


== reasoning ==
CORRECTION: the inventor of E-Prime was a student and follower of Alfred Korzybski, Dr. Bourland.
"To be" is the language of observation, tending toward abbreviated observation, fueling ambiguity/confusion, often fueling conflict. Also tendinf toward judgment (right/wrong), fueling the fire of authoritarianism (domination/submission, reward/punishment).
[[User:Rtdrury|Rtdrury]] ([[User talk:Rtdrury|talk]]) 18:29, 3 January 2017 (UTC)


== Self-e-primed ==


Please don't try to rewrite this article in e-prime. This will be invariably reverted, because this sub-language is not commonly accepted. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 20:57, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
W. Paul Tabaka http://Korzybski.Org


i find this utterly sad... how little humour wikipedia have.
== Almost E-Prime, but not quite ==


would it stay alive if done in the talk page? i wouldn't do it, anyway! 🤣 [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
This article conforms almost entirely, but not entirely, to E-Prime. The "Criticisms" section, in particular, needs reframing. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/71.241.239.232|71.241.239.232]] ([[User talk:71.241.239.232|talk]]) 00:36, 28 February 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:We shouldn't be trying to rewrite this article in E-Prime, just as we shouldn't be trying to rewrite the [[limerick (poetry)]] article as a series of limericks. [[WP:TONE]] tells us to "follow the style used by reliable sources, while remaining clear and understandable" - rewording "these are category errors" to "these fall into the category of category errors" might be good E-Prime, but it loses clarity in tone, and is not how a "reliable source" (a newspaper or academic paper) would write it. --[[User:McGeddon|McGeddon]] ([[User talk:McGeddon|talk]]) 18:18, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
::Perhaps it is just too difficult to think in rhythm and rhyme, but it is easy enough to lean that way. The pillars of Wikipedia bare a strange resemblance to there subjects, as I reveal in my ''[[User:Cpiral/essay_on_wikipediaStyle|Essay on WikipediaStyle]]''. &mdash; [[User:Cpiral|<font color="#00C000">Cp</font><font color="#80C000">i</font><font color="#C08000">r</font><font color="#C00000">al</font>]][[User talk:Cpiral|<font color="#2820F0"><u>Cpiral</u></font>]] 05:06, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
:::I did some research for another wiki on plausible in-universe justifications for the use of verse in [[musical theatre]]. I [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Analysis/MusicalWorldHypotheses ended up making an analogy] to [[Freestyle_rap#Newer_definition|improvised rap]]. --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:16, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
::Unlike [[Toki Pona]], English has [[TIMTOWTDI|more than one way to do it]]. With practice, one can rephrase something clearly without "be". For example, instead of "these fall into the category of category errors", say "these fall under category errors". --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:16, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
:Of all articles on Wikipedia any editor should freely allow a sense of obligation to rewrite the article in E-Prime. It is now evidenced, by the publications listed in the section ''[[E-prime#Works_written_in_E-Prime|Works written in E-Prime]]'', that the so-called E-Prime proves very highly able to clarify and make understandable both new and previously published articulations of all sorts. Critical thinking and clarity become a [[Rational Living Therapy]] as a practical state of personal waking consciousness. Can someone think habitually in E-prime? I must believe so. Unedited speech acts, all forms of improvisation, these seem to indicate intervals of an inspired "life sentence" in the prison ward of consensus consciousness. A consistent style might recommend the whole thing at once, but would anyone even notice of only parts of it were rewritten? &mdash; [[User:Cpiral|<font color="#00C000">Cp</font><font color="#80C000">i</font><font color="#C08000">r</font><font color="#C00000">al</font>]][[User talk:Cpiral|<font color="#2820F0"><u>Cpiral</u></font>]] 05:06, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
::Except Wikipedia has adopted "consensus consciousness" as policy. See, for example, [[Wikipedia:Verifiability]] (that an article should reflect the consensus of reliable sources) and [[Wikipedia:Consensus]] (among editors). --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:16, 6 October 2013 (UTC)


==An important issue which is not really discussed directly==
== Bad Poem Translation ==
The article doesn't very directly confront the fact that linguistic scholars do not find E-Prime to be of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it). For academic linguists, E-Prime is another in a long line of ideas arrived at by non-linguists ([[Basic English]] is another) which does not have much validity from a linguistic point of view. Whoever the "scholars" mentioned in the third paragraph of the article are, it's a safe bet they are not reputable linguists... [[User:AnonMoos|AnonMoos]] ([[User talk:AnonMoos|talk]]) 18:53, 13 February 2018 (UTC)


:Huh? There an extensive section "Criticisms". I added this to the lede. (BTW, the references of kins "third paragraph" are not very good. For example, I've just moved the 3rd para out of the lede as an unnecessary detail.) [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 19:41, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
"Honey tastes sweet,/And so do you." does not convey the same meaning as "Honey is sweet,/And so are you."
The adjective "sweet" takes on a different meaning in the 4th line of the poem which is completely lost in the translation.
This is somewhat creepy and a terrible example of E-Prime. Perhaps there is a better translation of this? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/24.12.88.141|24.12.88.141]] ([[User talk:24.12.88.141|talk]]) 06:44, 11 March 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I thought so too. Besides the poem is very trivial. A more difficult challenge would be this famous sentence from the King James Bible, Romans Chapter 13: "For there is no power but of God: the powers that be are ordained of God." [[User:Borock|Borock]] ([[User talk:Borock|talk]]) 09:10, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
::Religious texts often suffer from an excess of "is". [[User:Sicherman|Sicherman]] ([[User talk:Sicherman|talk]]) 03:34, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
::Jehovah's Witnesses appear to have already gone halfway to E' on this passage in their formal-equivalent [[New World Translation]]: "for there is no authority except by God; the existing authorities stand placed in their relative positions by God." ([http://www.jw.org/en/publications/bible/nwt/books/romans/13/ Romans 13:1, NWT]) Change the first words to "for no authority exists" to complete the translation. --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:31, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
:::The comparison with the NWT in the article gave the appearance that the NWT takes a similar approach throughout that volume, which is not the case. I have therefore removed the comparison. The examples provided in the article already make the point.--[[User:Jeffro77|<span style='color:#365F91'>'''Jeffro'''</span><span style='color:#FFC000'>''77''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jeffro77|talk]]) 08:47, 18 December 2013 (UTC)


::"Some support it, some criticize it" is fine as far as it goes -- but as I said, it doesn't really address the fact that that E-prime is about language, while scholars in the field of the scientific study of language (linguistics) overwhelmingly do not find it of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it, which many wouldn't have, because it's so remote from what they're mainly concerned with in their day-to-day work). Robin Lakoff is a somewhat well-known linguist; I don't recognize the other names. It would be nice to have more material which is not sourced to General Semantics publications... [[User:AnonMoos|AnonMoos]] ([[User talk:AnonMoos|talk]]) 23:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
== Sources for translations (King James, Alice in Wonderland)? ==


do you have any updates on this yourself, anon?
Are there sources for the translations/versions of the King James Bible and Alice's Adventures in Wonderland?


also, why do you give this "scholars grading" so much importance, anyway?
(or perhaps I will say instead: "Sources of translations exist where for "Bible Translation Accounted to King James" and "Adventures Recounted by One Named Alice".. <rolls eyes - would a title with an adjective phrase have an implied [and un-allowed] 'be' ?) [[User:Jimw338|Jimw338]] ([[User talk:Jimw338|talk]]) 20:57, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
:I'd've used "Where can one find sources for..." --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:26, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
i personally believe that pure logic beats scholarship any time, any where. 😁 [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:14, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


== More examples ==
== i am depressed because ==


i wonder why the psychological effect compared 2 completely different things on that study.
I would like to ask that more examples be added. Specifically for the Examples section to be integrated with the "Different functions of "to be"" section, to provide an example of each.


"instead of saying i am depressed" differs a lot when replacing it for "i feel depressed when". unless we include "because" in there!
[[User:Fulldecent|Full Decent]] ([[User talk:Fulldecent|talk]]) 02:00, 21 October 2013 (UTC)


anyone knows why? [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:21, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
== Arabic ==
:Well, yeah. I mean that is kind of the point, to make a subtle change in the effect of the statement. [[User:Herostratus|Herostratus]] ([[User talk:Herostratus|talk]]) 03:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


== Explanation needing in asymmetrical relations ==
Arabic does have a verb 'to be' in the present tense - yakuun (يَكُون)
What is followint text supposed to mean: """To be statements convey not only identity but also asymmetrical relations ("X heights more than Y"); negation ("A differs from B"); location ("Another castle contains the princess"); auxiliary ("He goes to the store") etc., forms that would also have to be excluded.""" at #Criticisms <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/87.116.165.130|87.116.165.130]] ([[User talk:87.116.165.130#top|talk]]) 18:24, 13 September 2023 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
It is not used in the same way as in English of course.

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Expressing “the film was good”

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The lead states that “the film was good” could not be expressed under E-prime. What about “I considered it a good film”? Or does that contain a contracted “to be”—“I considered it [to be] a good film”? Either way, it may be worth mentioning in the lead. —174.141.182.82 (talk) 13:48, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No. the real trick that your sentence contains "I", i.e., it is a rephrasing with significantly changed structure of the sentence. You will find similar example in the article, e.g, "I see this film as good". Staszek Lem (talk) 23:37, 25 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Some people experience the film as good". Randy Kryn 10:45, 26 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's more that an utterance such as "the film was good" has the form of a universal objective statement about the world, whereas there is no doubt that "I considered it a good film" is an existential subjective statement about a personal taste. Sean O'Halpin 20:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yep. This is a good illustration of why E-Prime-Prime, which our article does not seem to cover, is so much more practical: "It was a good film to me" and "I thought it was a good film" are equivalent and much more natural. In E-Prime-Prime it's permissible to use "the to be of identity" if it is explicitly qualified as a subjective perception. Whether derived directly from E-Prime-Prime or not, this is a big factor in nonviolent communication and several other approaches.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  05:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Nope. The correct equivalent, albeit clumsy, is "The film exhibited the property of goodness". And this zen-like trick creates loopholes in many arguments about e-prime; in particular, my version simply sweeps under the carpet the problem of universal vs. subjective. Staszek Lem (talk) 02:30, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

reasoning

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"To be" is the language of observation, tending toward abbreviated observation, fueling ambiguity/confusion, often fueling conflict. Also tendinf toward judgment (right/wrong), fueling the fire of authoritarianism (domination/submission, reward/punishment). Rtdrury (talk) 18:29, 3 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Self-e-primed

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Please don't try to rewrite this article in e-prime. This will be invariably reverted, because this sub-language is not commonly accepted. Staszek Lem (talk) 20:57, 11 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

i find this utterly sad... how little humour wikipedia have.

would it stay alive if done in the talk page? i wouldn't do it, anyway! 🤣 cregox (talk) 01:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

An important issue which is not really discussed directly

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The article doesn't very directly confront the fact that linguistic scholars do not find E-Prime to be of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it). For academic linguists, E-Prime is another in a long line of ideas arrived at by non-linguists (Basic English is another) which does not have much validity from a linguistic point of view. Whoever the "scholars" mentioned in the third paragraph of the article are, it's a safe bet they are not reputable linguists... AnonMoos (talk) 18:53, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Huh? There an extensive section "Criticisms". I added this to the lede. (BTW, the references of kins "third paragraph" are not very good. For example, I've just moved the 3rd para out of the lede as an unnecessary detail.) Staszek Lem (talk) 19:41, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Some support it, some criticize it" is fine as far as it goes -- but as I said, it doesn't really address the fact that that E-prime is about language, while scholars in the field of the scientific study of language (linguistics) overwhelmingly do not find it of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it, which many wouldn't have, because it's so remote from what they're mainly concerned with in their day-to-day work). Robin Lakoff is a somewhat well-known linguist; I don't recognize the other names. It would be nice to have more material which is not sourced to General Semantics publications... AnonMoos (talk) 23:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

do you have any updates on this yourself, anon?

also, why do you give this "scholars grading" so much importance, anyway? i personally believe that pure logic beats scholarship any time, any where. 😁 cregox (talk) 01:14, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

i am depressed because

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i wonder why the psychological effect compared 2 completely different things on that study.

"instead of saying i am depressed" differs a lot when replacing it for "i feel depressed when". unless we include "because" in there!

anyone knows why? cregox (talk) 01:21, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Well, yeah. I mean that is kind of the point, to make a subtle change in the effect of the statement. Herostratus (talk) 03:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Explanation needing in asymmetrical relations

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What is followint text supposed to mean: """To be statements convey not only identity but also asymmetrical relations ("X heights more than Y"); negation ("A differs from B"); location ("Another castle contains the princess"); auxiliary ("He goes to the store") etc., forms that would also have to be excluded.""" at #Criticisms — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.116.165.130 (talk) 18:24, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]