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Maon Kurosaki

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm planning to bring her article up to GA class. I feel that it's almost ready for a GAN, and while a number of suggested references were added to the talk page, further feedback is appreciate. Right now, I'm planning to nominate this and the article ClariS for GA status simultaneously, but I'll only do so when this article is ready. Based on experience, a "musical style and influences" section is recommended, but what sources can I use for writing such a section for Kurosaki's article?

Thanks, Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 03:42, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Somethings about it.Tintor2 (talk) 13:49, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is there information about her personal life? That and influences could also work to improve the article's prose.
Expand the lead per WP:Lead

I agree with Tintor2. The article should look good after doing those things. MCMLXXXIX 17:18, 25 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: @1989: Sorry for the late replies, real life caught up with me, so I've only been able to improve the lede and biography section now. How does the article look now? Is it now good enough for B-class at least? Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 14:48, 15 March 2017 (UTC) I've now added a musical style and influences section to her article. Right now one of the paragraphs is uncited as the reference used is currently blacklisted; however, I've made a request for the link to be whitelisted (for now, the citation has been commented out). Is the article otherwise ready for a GAN? I'm planning to bring the article to GAN once the blacklisted reference has been whitelisted. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 16:10, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Since I'm not an native English speaker, I can't tell whether the prose is good or not but I suggest you giving it a try if you think the article is ready.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments in this peer review. I am now going to nominate the article for GA status; as such, I will now request that this PR be closed. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 06:08, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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 I've listed this article for peer review because I'm planning to bring her article up to GA class. I feel that it's almost ready for a GAN, and while a number of suggested references were added to the talk page, further feedback is appreciate. Right now, I'm planning to nominate this and the article [[ClariS]] for GA status simultaneously, but I'll only do so when this article is ready. Based on experience, a "musical style and influences" section is recommended, but what sources can I use for writing such a section for Kurosaki's article?
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 *Is there information about her personal life? That and influences could also work to improve the article's prose.
 *Expand the lead per [[WP:Lead]]
-:*I agree with Tintor2. The article should look good after doing those things. [[User talk:1989|<font face="MV Boli" color="#000"><b>MCMLXXXIX</b></font>]] 17:18, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
+:*I agree with Tintor2. The article should look good after doing those things. [[User talk:1989|<span style="font-family:MV Boli; color:#000;"><b>MCMLXXXIX</b></span>]] 17:18, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
+{{ping|Tintor2}} {{ping|1989}} Sorry for the late replies, real life caught up with me, so I've only been able to improve the lede and biography section now. How does the article look now? Is it now good enough for B-class at least? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 14:48, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
+I've now added a musical style and influences section to her article. Right now one of the paragraphs is uncited as the reference used is currently blacklisted; however, I've made a request for the link to be whitelisted (for now, the citation has been commented out). Is the article otherwise ready for a GAN? I'm planning to bring the article to GAN once the blacklisted reference has been whitelisted. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 16:10, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
+::Since I'm not an native English speaker, I can't tell whether the prose is good or not but I suggest you giving it a try if you think the article is ready.[[User:Tintor2|Tintor2]] ([[User talk:Tintor2|talk]]) 22:16, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
+Thank you for the comments in this peer review. I am now going to nominate the article for GA status; as such, I will now request that this PR be closed. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 06:08, 20 March 2017 (UTC)