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=== Wellington Article: === |
=== Wellington Article: === |
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After reading the Wellington article I find it relevant to the topic. |
After reading the Wellington article I find it relevant to the topic. The article is neutral it does not appear biased toward any particular position. The article is very objective there are no viewpoints that are neither overrepresented nor underrepresented. Most of the links and citations on this article work annd are realiable sources. Most of them are pictures of ancient documents, some are his work and others are about him. We could add more citations and sources. In the talk page we can see people commenting about adding more citations and about the correctness of the picture. The article is rated B,C-class, low-importance and high-importance. It is a part of Wikiproject trains, wikiproject biography and Wikiproject civil engineering. We can talk about articles written about him. |
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=== Grant |
=== Eugene M.Grant: === |
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The article is relevant to the topic. It is a |
The article is relevant to the topic. It is a short article with few but essential information. The article is neutral and objective. Out of five citations, one link does not work and the other four are not reliable sources. We need to add more reliable sources. We can see that the information was taken from New york Times (newspaper), the real deal and the New york post . We can add some information from '''ogin'',wrlchu.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/discovery/fulldisplaydocid=proquest2113780334&context=PC&vid=01WRLC_HOW%3Awkbkconfig&lang=en&search_scope=MyInst_and_CI&adaptor=Primo%2BCentral&tab=Everything&query=any%2Ccontains%2Ceugene%2Bm%2Bgrant&offset=0' .There are no comments on the talk page, the article is rated stub-class, low-importance. It is a part of wikiproject biography and wikiproject business, wikiproject New york city. |
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=== Lounsberry |
=== William Lounsberry: === |
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The article is relevant to the topic. It only has 2 paragraphs. The article is neutral, |
The article is relevant to the topic. It only has 2 paragraphs. The article is neutral, the source and the link are working. They give us access to archives , ancient documents that contain few information about William Lounsberry. We don't have really any information on the subject. We can maybe add some of the work and equations from his thesis from the US naval postgraduate school. There are no comments on the talk page, the article is rated stub-class. It is a part of Wikiproject US congress, Wikiproject New york (state), and Wikiproject Biography/ Politics and government.<br /> |
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= Fra Giovanni da Verona = |
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He was born in the Venetian city around 1457 and was soon initiated into monastic life in the order of the Benedictines and more precisely in the Olivetan congregation. In 1476 we know this in the abbey of Monte Oliveto Maggiore , near Siena , where he already works as a qualified sculptor. |
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The life among the Olivetan monks also constituted - according to the Benedictine motto "now and labora" - for Fra Giovanni an apprenticeship in the art of inlaying and woodworking: he learned the fundamentals of this art (the choice of woods, their treatment with impregnating substances, the cutting and fitting of strips, the use of mastics, etc.) by a converso called Fra Sebastiano da Rovigno. |
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We know that in 1493 he was active as an architect at the monastery of Santa Maria in Organo. The works for the choir stalls, with the magnificent inlaid espaliers - depicting views of ideal cities and Renaissance churches, images of saints, closets with objects of various kinds, etc. - they were executed between 1494 and 1499 . In 1500 , before going to Rome , for the celebrations of the jubilee, he had time to create the elegant lectern placed at the center of the choir. |
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The fame of his work - as attested by Vasari - soon did so that his art was sought in many parts of Italy and even by Pope Julius II . |
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He built between 1503 and 1506 the stalls of the abbey of Monteoliveto Maggiore , in part now placed in the cathedral of Siena . Between 1511 and 1512 he was in Rome, near the Vatican , where he made the benches and inlays for the Stanza della Segnatura . Then he was in Lodi , engaged in the work of the wooden choir of the Cathedral. |
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In 1519 we find the indefatigable Brother Giovanni again in Verona, where he was engaged until 1523 in the execution of his masterpiece: the back of the wardrobes placed on the right wall in the sacristy. In the large rectangular hall - frescoed by Francesco Morone with portraits of famous people who were received in the Benedictine order - Fra Giovanni realized the superb espalier divided into ten compartments formed by pairs of finely carved columns supporting the same arches in which they show itself inlays that, as usual, constitute an extraordinary collection of subjects of a different nature (landscapes, symbolic objects of the Passion , cabinets with books and polyhedra , poultry, etc.) [[User:Yasminekhiri|Yasminekhiri]] ([[User talk:Yasminekhiri|talk]]) 16:07, 22 February 2019 (UTC) |
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Stigmatization of St Catherine of Siena by BECCAFUMI, Domenico, www.wga.hu/bio_m/g/giovanni/verona/biograph.html. |
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Latest revision as of 16:09, 22 February 2019
''Article evaluation''
For the article about 'William Milnor Roberts' I think that the name of his Professor Joseph Roberts was not relevant to the topic. The amount of reports he wrote distracted me, there are so many of them but unfortunately some don't have citations or sources on them. His reports and work should be described more. And his major achievements should be mentioned. The article is pretty neutral, there are no viewpoints overrepresented or underrepresented. On the references part, four out of six links don't work, the third link doesn't give any information about William Milnor Roberts but his second wife's name. It is not a very reliable source. The fifth link in the references takes us to an article in Archives West which provides access to descriptions of primary sources in the western United states, including diaries, correspondance and photographs. On the Bibliography the links don't work. In the External links section I can only find 4 reports, but I can see more than 7 of his works not cited.
The talk page contain four comments that say that either the article didn't have citations, reliable sources or that it didn't have enough information about the subject, the comments are recommendations for edits about the article. It is rated start-class, mid-importance, low-importance). It is also a part of four different wikiprojects such as: wikiproject Pennsylvania, Wikiprojects train, Wikiprojects biography and Wikiproject Philadelphia. Wikipedia discusses the topic differently from class by talking about family, career etc... and it provides citations and sources.
Wellington Article:
[edit]After reading the Wellington article I find it relevant to the topic. The article is neutral it does not appear biased toward any particular position. The article is very objective there are no viewpoints that are neither overrepresented nor underrepresented. Most of the links and citations on this article work annd are realiable sources. Most of them are pictures of ancient documents, some are his work and others are about him. We could add more citations and sources. In the talk page we can see people commenting about adding more citations and about the correctness of the picture. The article is rated B,C-class, low-importance and high-importance. It is a part of Wikiproject trains, wikiproject biography and Wikiproject civil engineering. We can talk about articles written about him.
Eugene M.Grant:
[edit]The article is relevant to the topic. It is a short article with few but essential information. The article is neutral and objective. Out of five citations, one link does not work and the other four are not reliable sources. We need to add more reliable sources. We can see that the information was taken from New york Times (newspaper), the real deal and the New york post . We can add some information from 'ogin,wrlchu.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/discovery/fulldisplaydocid=proquest2113780334&context=PC&vid=01WRLC_HOW%3Awkbkconfig&lang=en&search_scope=MyInst_and_CI&adaptor=Primo%2BCentral&tab=Everything&query=any%2Ccontains%2Ceugene%2Bm%2Bgrant&offset=0' .There are no comments on the talk page, the article is rated stub-class, low-importance. It is a part of wikiproject biography and wikiproject business, wikiproject New york city.
William Lounsberry:
[edit]The article is relevant to the topic. It only has 2 paragraphs. The article is neutral, the source and the link are working. They give us access to archives , ancient documents that contain few information about William Lounsberry. We don't have really any information on the subject. We can maybe add some of the work and equations from his thesis from the US naval postgraduate school. There are no comments on the talk page, the article is rated stub-class. It is a part of Wikiproject US congress, Wikiproject New york (state), and Wikiproject Biography/ Politics and government.
Fra Giovanni da Verona
[edit]He was born in the Venetian city around 1457 and was soon initiated into monastic life in the order of the Benedictines and more precisely in the Olivetan congregation. In 1476 we know this in the abbey of Monte Oliveto Maggiore , near Siena , where he already works as a qualified sculptor.
The life among the Olivetan monks also constituted - according to the Benedictine motto "now and labora" - for Fra Giovanni an apprenticeship in the art of inlaying and woodworking: he learned the fundamentals of this art (the choice of woods, their treatment with impregnating substances, the cutting and fitting of strips, the use of mastics, etc.) by a converso called Fra Sebastiano da Rovigno.
We know that in 1493 he was active as an architect at the monastery of Santa Maria in Organo. The works for the choir stalls, with the magnificent inlaid espaliers - depicting views of ideal cities and Renaissance churches, images of saints, closets with objects of various kinds, etc. - they were executed between 1494 and 1499 . In 1500 , before going to Rome , for the celebrations of the jubilee, he had time to create the elegant lectern placed at the center of the choir.
The fame of his work - as attested by Vasari - soon did so that his art was sought in many parts of Italy and even by Pope Julius II .
He built between 1503 and 1506 the stalls of the abbey of Monteoliveto Maggiore , in part now placed in the cathedral of Siena . Between 1511 and 1512 he was in Rome, near the Vatican , where he made the benches and inlays for the Stanza della Segnatura . Then he was in Lodi , engaged in the work of the wooden choir of the Cathedral.
In 1519 we find the indefatigable Brother Giovanni again in Verona, where he was engaged until 1523 in the execution of his masterpiece: the back of the wardrobes placed on the right wall in the sacristy. In the large rectangular hall - frescoed by Francesco Morone with portraits of famous people who were received in the Benedictine order - Fra Giovanni realized the superb espalier divided into ten compartments formed by pairs of finely carved columns supporting the same arches in which they show itself inlays that, as usual, constitute an extraordinary collection of subjects of a different nature (landscapes, symbolic objects of the Passion , cabinets with books and polyhedra , poultry, etc.) Yasminekhiri (talk) 16:07, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
Stigmatization of St Catherine of Siena by BECCAFUMI, Domenico, www.wga.hu/bio_m/g/giovanni/verona/biograph.html.
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[edit]'ogin,wrlchu.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/discovery/fulldisplaydocid=proquest2113780334&context=PC&vid=01WRLC_HOW%3Awkbkconfig&lang=en&search_scope=MyInst_and_CI&adaptor=Primo%2BCentral&tab=Everything&query=any%2Ccontains%2Ceugene%2Bm%2Bgrant&offset=0' .There are no comments on the talk page, the article is rated stub-class, low-importance. It is a part of wikiproject biography and wikiproject business, wikiproject New york city.
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