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== 06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007 == |
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{{Lafc|username=MonkeyBanjo007|ts=06:41, 22 December 2024|draft=Conor McLeod}} |
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To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game. |
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I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person. |
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I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files. |
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[[User:Helhelfafa|Helhelfafa]] ([[User talk:Helhelfafa|talk]]) 03:04, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Not an article. No question here. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 03:21, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Thanks- [[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] ([[User talk:MonkeyBanjo007|talk]]) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:15:48, 6 March 2019 review of submission by Hsvenkatesh == |
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:@[[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] see [[Help:Pictures]] for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources that [[WP:N|notability]] do. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Hsvenkatesh|ts=08:15:48, 6 March 2019|declined=Draft:Yelhankanadu_Prabhus}} |
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== 06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|ts=06:43, 22 December 2024|draft=He Is Younger Businessman}} |
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You Should Agree This Draft [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Link to the draft: [[Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar]] --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are [[WP:N|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Previously answered [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#12:14,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Bollysocialmedia|here]] (question posted by blocked user [[User:Bollysocialmedia]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#11:37,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Royaloaksschoolking|here]] (by [[User:Royaloaksschoolking]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_10#02:00,_10_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|here]]. |
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:See also: [[Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde]] about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2024 August 9#14:43, 9 August 2024 review of submission by 2402:8100:3106:E5B8:47DC:DA3A:BF3A:D9DA|this question]] as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account [[User:Shubhamxrameshwar564]]. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador == |
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[[User:Hsvenkatesh|Hsvenkatesh]] ([[User talk:Hsvenkatesh|talk]]) 08:15, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Batoenonghistoryador|ts=10:54, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Howard_Calleja_et.al_v._Anti-Terrorism_Council}} |
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Hello, |
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I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."? |
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::{{replyto|Hsvenkatesh}} - you don't include any sources so there's no way this draft could demonstrate its notability. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 09:16, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Additionally, I have a few questions: |
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== 11:58:09, 6 March 2019 review of submission by 60.241.181.164 == |
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{{Lafc|username=60.241.181.164|ts=11:58:09, 6 March 2019|page= |
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1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? |
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Colin Guillarmou |
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2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it? |
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Thank you so much for your guidance! |
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[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]]: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title. |
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I am asking for a second opinion on the acceptance of the page of Colin Guillarmou, a French mathematician. The draft was rejected because it contained too many citations to subject's own works. However, this is common in a mathematician's page. Compare this entry, for instance, to the one of the following mathematicians: [[Guido De Philippis]], [[Vincent Pilloni]], [[Fanny Kassel]], [[Serge Cantat]], etc. The fact that we refer to a mathematician's accomplishments by quoting its publications is normal. What gives credit to them is the fact that the publications appeared in prestigious journals. For a mathematician, the very top journals are: [[Acta Mathematica]], [[Annals of Mathematics]], [[Inventiones Mathematicae]], [[Journal of the American Mathematical Society]], [[Duke Mathematical Journal]]. The caliber of these journals correspond to the one of, say, [[Nature (journal)]] for a natural scientist. If you check the Wikipedia page of the other mathematicians that I mentioned, you will see that they all cite the person's best papers. |
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:You can cite online PDFs with the {{tl|cite web}} template. The <code>format=</code> parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. |
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:Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliably published sources]] say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all? |
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:As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been [[WP:RS|reliably published]] or not. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you so much for this informative response. [[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 == |
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[[Special:Contributions/60.241.181.164|60.241.181.164]] ([[User talk:60.241.181.164|talk]]) 11:58, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|ts=11:37, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}} |
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:Per [[WP:RSPRIMARY]], the bulk of any article should come from reliable secondary sources. Guillarmou's works are primary sources with regard to any information about Guillarmou. The mathematician examples you give are not great articles, so they are poor patterns to follow. [[WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS]] may help you understand why. If you wish to learn from examples, be sure to use Wikipedia's best, such as [[Georg Cantor]], [[Johannes Kepler]], [[Emmy Noether]], or [[Marian Rejewski]]. They contain a sprinkling of citations to their own work, but mostly they cite what other people have written about them. |
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HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|talk]]) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah okay. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:As far as notability is concerned, the caliber of journals in which an academic has published may be used as a contributing factor in satisfying criterion #1 of [[WP:PROF]], but it isn't normally sufficient. The draft could do a better job of conveying which criteria you think he satisfies, and how. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 03:13, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05 == |
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Well, if the pattern of a mathematician's Wikipedia page should be similar to those of Cantor, Kepler, or Noether, you may as well go ahead and remove the Wikipedia pages of 99% of contemporary scientists, as well as those of 99% percent of the statesmen (say, those whose patterns fall below the ones of Julius Caesar and Napoleon). <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/129.78.56.218|129.78.56.218]] ([[User talk:129.78.56.218#top|talk]]) 06:26, 7 March 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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{{Lafc|username=Njames05|ts=16:10, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:University_of_Texas_Rugby_Club}} |
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How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? [[User:Njames05|Nigel D James]] ([[User talk:Njames05|talk]]) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Njames05|Njames05]]: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:19:14, 6 March 2019 review of draft by Venusthelovegoddess == |
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:You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should. |
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{{Lafc|username=Venusthelovegoddess|ts=12:19:14, 6 March 2019|draft=Draft:Zafar_Yunus_Sareshwala}} |
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:One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say. |
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:You should also unbold the section headers. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|ts=16:59, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kinhola_BK}} |
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Check now [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|talk]]) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Venusthelovegoddess|Venusthelovegoddess]] ([[User talk:Venusthelovegoddess|talk]]) 12:19, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127 == |
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Whenever I try to edit the information about Zafar Sareshwala, it gets changed. my edited details are removed and the page goes back to its previous form. please help me to improve the details about Zafar Sareshwala. |
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{{Lafc|username=LR.127|ts=17:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Rafael de Miguel González}} |
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This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion [[Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation/Archive 58#Draft:Rafael de Miguel Gonz%C3%A1lez declined 5 times.|here]] on the [[Rafael de Miguel González]] page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft. |
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I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed. |
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::{{Ping|Venusthelovegoddess}} - so this draft was correctly declined as there is an actual article on it already - you've already edited it, so I assume you're now aware of that. |
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I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: [[User:Timtrent]], [[User:Joe Roe]], [[User:Benison]], [[User:Mr.choppers]], and [[User:asilvering]]. Cheers. [[User:LR.127|LR.127]] ([[User talk:LR.127|talk]]) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::This isn't really the place for you having content difficulties on an article, but to save you bouncing around, I'll give a few points. |
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:Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a [[WP:RFC|request for comment]]) or on the [[WP:HD|more general Help Desk]]. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::The editor who reverted your edits did not do so unreasonably. There were two main faults with the changes. |
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::My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, [[Rafael de Miguel González]] reads more like a CV than anything else. <span style="background:#ff0000;font-family:Times New Roman;">[[User:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">''' Mr.choppers | '''</span>]][[User talk:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">✎ </span>]]</span> 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::1) They were written in a promotional manner - generally a very positive tone "here is the good thing he did, here's another" etc |
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:::{{tq|Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.}} Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1 == |
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::2) Articles on living persons have to use inline sources (the little blue numbers) for any controversial detail. By its nature, this generally includes anything in a controversies section and anything particularly positive about an individual. [[WP:INCITE|Inline citations]] has a few different ways to add inline citations. |
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{{Lafc|username=Bentasyt.1|ts=18:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Lanksti_linija,_UAB}} |
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what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia [[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]] ([[User talk:Bentasyt.1|talk]]) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Very brief summary of writing an article: |
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:# Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See [[WP:42]] |
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:# If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else. |
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:# If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it. |
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:[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening == |
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::If you have disagreements about your edits being reverted, then going to the talk page and asking the other individual why they're reverting it and saying why you think it should remain are critical to the whole process. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 20:37, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Sophisticatedevening|ts=19:35, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Emma_Howell_Knight}} |
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I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Fixed up for you [[User:Sophisticatedevening|Sophisticatedevening]]. Cheers [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 13:20:21, 6 March 2019 review of draft by Dosseman == |
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::Thanks! [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:39, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Dosseman|ts=13:20:21, 6 March 2019|draft=Draft:Afyon_Ulu_Camii}} |
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== 20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins == |
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After having added pictures to three important wooden mosques (some on UNESCO lists) in Turkey and having received "thanks" messages from another user for doing so I noticed that, though mentioned several times in articles, there was no information in the English Wikipedia on a mosque in Afyon(karahisar) that is important too. I thought I'd be useful in supplying some pictures and what information I had in my first article in the WIkipedia. I now am informed the information lacks a source. |
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{{Lafc|username=Mariah Hopkins|ts=20:03, 22 December 2024|draft=Kokoa Amor}} |
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Why was the article declined [[User:Mariah Hopkins|Mariah Hopkins]] ([[User talk:Mariah Hopkins|talk]]) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{courtesy link|User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Though I know several languages my Turkish is poor. But I checked the Turkish Wikipedia and found information about this mosque that roughly corresponds with what I wrote, though Google translate corrupted some parts. A first question is: might I use that as a reference? What worries me is that the three sources mentioned as reference in that article all link to the WaybackMachine. I find that very many articles nowadays about Turkey end up there, probably because the English Wikipedia is blocked in Turkey. |
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:It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:notability|notability]] - see [[WP:42]]. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have [[WP:significant coverage|significant coverage]] of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited. |
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:{{HD/WINI}} |
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:Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as [[WP:disruptive editing|disruptive editing]]. |
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:My comments to another editor [[#18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1|above]] are equally applicable to your case. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 23 = |
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I found a picture I took in 2012 of a notice at the mosque itself, undoubtedly put there by (or accepted by) local authorities. In English it provides the information I used in my article. I might put a jpg of that picture in the gallery I put in. Might that be a reference, and be sufficient? |
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== 06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv == |
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I also find the information confirmed in several travel guides that I own and use, how valid as sources would you consider those? I mentioned a Dutch translation of a Knaurs book, I find the same information in a Dumont "Reisefüher" in German, as well as on several tourist sites on the web. One I found (in Turkish) seems to be by the government (gv in the address: https://www.kulturportali.gov.tr/turkiye/afyonkarahisar/gezilecekyer/ulu-camii839501 ) Might that be a valid source? |
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{{Lafc|username=Sonshiv|ts=06:08, 23 December 2024|draft=User:Sonshiv/sandbox}} |
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please upload my wikipedia |
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[[User:Sonshiv|Sonshiv]] ([[User talk:Sonshiv|talk]]) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Sorry for asking many questions, I try and write a good article, but Turksih sources that are dependable are hard to find. |
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[[User:Dosseman|Dosseman]] ([[User talk:Dosseman|talk]]) 13:20, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE == |
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[[User:Dosseman|Dosseman]] ([[User talk:Dosseman|talk]]) 13:20, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|ts=06:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Buladaco}} |
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i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me [[Special:Contributions/2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE]] ([[User talk:2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|talk]]) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Assuming you're {{u|Manasi32}}, please log into your account when editing. |
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:Hi {{U|Dosseman}}. No language version of Wikipeida may be cited as a source, because all are user-generated, and thus not [[WP:RS|reliable]]. |
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:There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources. |
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:Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway. |
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:Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see [[WP:AUTOBIO]] for why you shouldn't. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032 == |
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:If a source is reliable, then the same source archived in the WaybackMachine is also reliable. The fact that it's archived shouldn't worry you. Ideally all sources would be archived there. |
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{{Lafc|username=Thanvi 032|ts=07:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi}} |
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Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: your draft [[Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi]] has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:A sign may be used as a reference. There is even a {{tl|cite sign}} template for the purpose. It won't be sufficient to demonstrate [[WP:NBUILDING|notability]] for two reasons. First, a single source is alsmost never sufficient. Second, if it was erected by the organization responsible for managing the mosque, they have a vested interest in promoting it, so it isn't independent. |
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::{{u|Thanvi 032}}, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of [[WP:V|Verifiability]], a core content policy. Please read and study [[WP:RS|Reliable sources]] and [[WP:REFBEGIN|Referencing for beginners]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you ''have'' made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400 == |
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:Travel guide books (whether in Dutch, German, or by the government) are an acceptable source for much of the information about a tourist attraction, but they aren't as desirable as a scholarly source, and I wouldn't use them for history because they aren't written by historians. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 02:25, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Tropical Appreciater10001-400|ts=08:31, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Palame_State}} |
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* A published travel guide is as good as any RS for the history. They have editors and verificatio processes and don't just make stuff up. A government source for the history is also fine unless there is a reason to believe it is inaccurate but it seems unlikely the government of a muslum country will fabricate hisory of an old mosque. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 03:31, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You are wrong see [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]]: not so; every article has to cite its sources. |
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:In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context. |
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::Thank you for your time and consideration. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::[[WP:USERGEN|User-generated content]], such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70 == |
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Thanks for a speedy answer. Could you confirm you read this, my answer, as I do not understand the Talk-system quite yet? |
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{{Lafc|username=14.194.64.70|ts=10:43, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:A_Step-By-Step_Guide_on_Choosing_the_Perfect_Property_in_Chennai}} |
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this is page information please live it. [[Special:Contributions/14.194.64.70|14.194.64.70]] ([[User talk:14.194.64.70|talk]]) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition == |
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When writing "Travel guide books" I meant "published travel guide" books. I have contributed to several over the years and know how thorough their proof-reading and checking of sources generally is. As for history of muslim buildings, I'd not be too trusting. For certain periods the source may be just one traveller who visited a town and wrote a book about his travels, or such. Or a stone above the entrance. Because of earthquakes and resulting fires many archives were lost. And there also is the problem of differing calendars and resulting errors. |
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{{Lafc|username=Pr.nutrition|ts=12:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Vladimir_Dadali}} |
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[[User:Dosseman|Dosseman]] ([[User talk:Dosseman|talk]]) 13:27, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. [[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] ([[User talk:Pr.nutrition|talk]]) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:33:47, 6 March 2019 review of submission by Kunwarbrarmusic == |
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{{Lafc|username=Kunwarbrarmusic|ts=14:33:47, 6 March 2019|declined=Draft:Kunwar_Brar}} |
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== 16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher == |
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[[User:Kunwarbrarmusic|Kunwarbrarmusic]] ([[User talk:Kunwarbrarmusic|talk]]) 14:33, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=FelixKerscher|ts=16:39, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Clinical Versus Statistical Prediction}} |
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:Tagged for speedy deletion as spam. Username is also promotional so will tag that. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 17:55, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Why was my submission declined? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:17:25, 6 March 2019 review of submission by EdgarJackson == |
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::It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=EdgarJackson|ts=16:17:25, 6 March 2019|declined=Draft:Hatton_W._Sumners_Foundation}} |
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:You could also ask the reviewer {{u|CSMention269}} if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|FelixKerscher}} By commenting on [[User talk:CSMention269|their user talk page]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz == |
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{{Lafc|username=Zraffarz|ts=19:05, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Surmesur}} |
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Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ? |
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I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments. |
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Any suggestions for resubmitting this? If I can gather more notable sources is that sufficient? |
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Regards. [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Thanks for any guidance you can provide. |
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:Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work. |
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::Regards [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? [[Draft:Surmesur]] |
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:::Much appreciated [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 == |
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-Edgar |
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{{Lafc|username=2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|ts=23:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sentinai}} |
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hey what exactly was wrong [[Special:Contributions/2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09]] ([[User talk:2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|talk]]) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what ''independent'' reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:EdgarJackson|EdgarJackson]] ([[User talk:EdgarJackson|talk]]) 16:17, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::While there is always room for more good sources, I've accepted the page. Obviously notable to me - non notable organizations do not get Past Presidents and royalty from various countries to speak at their conferences. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 17:53, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 19:39:02, 6 March 2019 review of submission by Mamtapawar512 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mamtapawar512|ts=19:39:02, 6 March 2019|declined=Draft:Jhund_(film)}} |
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== 00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest == |
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{{Lafc|username=Nycrest|ts=00:17, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Venhue}} |
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Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] "no promotion"? I don't see how {{tq|unorthodox approach to fine dining}}, {{tq|theatrical presentations}}, and {{tq|playful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions}} is neutral. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists? |
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::I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not seeing how this establishment meets [[WP:ORG]]- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212 == |
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[[User:Mamtapawar512|Mamtapawar512]] ([[User talk:Mamtapawar512|talk]]) 19:39, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Hedax212|ts=02:27, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Signatures, INC.}} |
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I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being {{tq|US patent number US4988065A}}, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see [[Help:Your first article]] first. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Unfortunately that means they are likely not [[WP:NORG|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Articles require ''significant coverage'' in ''reliable sources'' that are ''independent'' of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer == |
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::{{replyto|Mamtapawar512}} - hi there. The previous editors were correct, as films are rarely notable before they are released. The sources given are not special enough (most are completely unsuitable - twitter, quora etc aren't reliable) to change that. Just hold the draft until release, add any reviews about it, and resubmit then. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 20:40, 6 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=MarkDiBelloBiographer|ts=02:55, 24 December 2024|draft=Mark Anthony DiBello}} |
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Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. [[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]] ([[User talk:MarkDiBelloBiographer|talk]]) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello]] [[User:Knitsey|<span style="color:DarkMagenta">Knitsey</span>]] ([[User talk:Knitsey|<span style="color: maroon">talk</span>]]) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]]: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image. |
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:Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least. |
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:On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18 == |
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= March 7 = |
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{{Lafc|username=Muhammedramees18|ts=06:57, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Muhammedramees18/sandbox}} |
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Why My edit is declined? [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of [[WP:notability|notability]], not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view. |
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== 00:05:46, 7 March 2019 review of submission by Yungzizope == |
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:What is your relationship with this school? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Yungzizope|ts=00:05:46, 7 March 2019|page= |
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::I am a Co Founder of this school. [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]. Writing a new article is '''much''' more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a [[WP:conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible. |
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:Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world ''except'' you and your colleagues. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242 == |
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{{Lafc|username=223.190.86.242|ts=07:35, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Omd-course/sandbox}} |
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how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article [[Special:Contributions/223.190.86.242|223.190.86.242]] ([[User talk:223.190.86.242|talk]]) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:NOTGUIDE|Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India]] and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. [[User:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:navy;">''cyberdog''</span><span style="color:orange;">'''958'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:teal;">Talk</span>]]</sup> 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Yungzizope|Yungzizope]] ([[User talk:Yungzizope|talk]]) 00:05, 7 March 2019 (UTC) why is my article named ''Yungziz'' not accepted |
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:Hi {{U|Yungzizope}}. [[Draft:Yungziz]] has been declined for the reasons explained in the big pink box at the top of the draft, and in the comment the reviewer left below it (both also appear on [[User talk:Yungzizope|your talk page]] within a large mustard yellow box). --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 02:04, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sunuraju|ts=08:04, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hum_Dono_(2024_TV_series)}} |
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should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? [[User:Sunuraju|Sunuraju]] ([[User talk:Sunuraju|talk]]) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji == |
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I have many external links, but need help getting them into the external link area. |
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{{Lafc|username=JustBeenji|ts=10:27, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Henry_Stickmin}} |
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Same for references and a photo. |
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I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I will take the Adventure tutorial soon. |
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[[User:HHHOSMER|HHHOSMER]] ([[User talk:HHHOSMER|talk]]) 00:06, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Hi {{U|HHHOSMER}}. I suggest that you forget about photos and [[WP:EL|external links]] for now. The presence or absence of photos will have no effect on whether or not the draft is accepted. Articles do not require any external links. |
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:@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: you ''are'' an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia. |
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:Concentrate on references. "Personal conversation, 1979" is not an acceptable source. Unlike other types of writing, on Wikipedia all references must be published. The remaining four citations do not adequately describe the sources you're citing. I strongly recommend that you use templates within the ref tags, such as {{tl|cite book}}, {{tl|cite news}}, {{tl|cite web}}, etc. By structuring the bibliographic data, they help you make sure you've given readers everything they need to find the source for themselves. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 01:58, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:But no editor can magic [[WP:notability|notability]] out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::So do i have to create a new draft? [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: in a word, no. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It ''could'' be notable, as it does seem to be a popular ''series'' of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin ''is'', let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{ping|JustBeenji}} Popularity is fleeting, [[WP:N|notability]] is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell == |
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{{Lafc|username=SarahSamuell|ts=11:39, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sacred_Heart_School_(_Alexandria_)}} |
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{{Lafc|username=LRamachandran (International Photographer)|ts=06:06:59, 7 March 2019|page= |
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i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? [[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]] ([[User talk:SarahSamuell|talk]]) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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LRamachandran(International Photographer) |
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Why my wikipedia page got declined. Can you pls suggest in this regard |
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[[User:LRamachandran (International Photographer)|LRamachandran (International Photographer)]] ([[User talk:LRamachandran (International Photographer)|talk]]) 06:06, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Zero sources on a BLP. Answered on draft and requested a username block, as it needs to be changed before we carry on. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 06:11, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See [[WP:N]]) which in most cases requires significant coverage ([[WP:SIGCOV]]) in multiple independent ([[WP:INDY]]) reliable sources ([[WP:RS]]). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see [[WP:NSCHOOL]] and [[WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES]]. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]]. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 [[#06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18|above]], most of which applies to you as well. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:In addition to what has already been said, there are ''serious'' problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at [[WP:NFC]]. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore == |
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The [[Draft:Akash_Ambani]] is completely eligible to be at Article Space of Wikipedia as its completely based on the reliable sources. everyone can find the 100s of sources from Google. It was created earlier without sources. Akash Ambani is now completely Notable Person by his Work, Family, And Media Coverages. |
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{{Lafc|username=WikiBaltimore|ts=14:09, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Turner_Development}} |
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Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission..... |
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"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater." |
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[[User:Radadiyageet|Radadiyageet]] ([[User talk:Radadiyageet|talk]]) 08:22, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit. |
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::{{replyto|Radadiyageet}} - we are an encyclopedia. We exist for the benefit of our readers - and so we don't set them the obligation of hunting down sources to see if there reliable support. Article creators are obligated to find the sources. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 14:57, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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For example, [[Silo Point]] is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past. |
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::{{replyto|Nosebagbear}} - Well said dear, But each and everything are based on Reliable Source, That is only The [[Draft:Akash_Ambani]] is completely eligible to be at Article Space of Wikipedia. |
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Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 09:21:43, 7 March 2019 review of submission by MLKinsella == |
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{{Lafc|username=MLKinsella|ts=09:21:43, 7 March 2019|page= draft:buyagift}} |
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:@[[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]]: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see [[WP:YESPROMO]]), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for [[WP:REFBOMBING]] purposes. |
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Hey. I'm currently writing the [[draft:buyagift]] page and looking for some feedback. Is there anything you'd suggest to make the article better? Is the layout good, or does it need to be broken down more? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! |
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:Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The references are about the ''projects'' Turner Development has been involved in, not, ''about'' Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "''specializes'' in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's [[WP:OR]]. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Well said, thank you for the feedback [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez == |
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Thanks.[[User:MLKinsella|MLKinsella]] ([[User talk:MLKinsella|talk]]) 09:21, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Juanestebanfernandez|ts=14:21, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Juanestebanfernandez/sandbox}} |
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[[User:MLKinsella|MLKinsella]] ([[User talk:MLKinsella|talk]]) 09:21, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. [[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]] ([[User talk:Juanestebanfernandez|talk]]) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]]: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources. |
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== 14:29:30, 7 March 2019 review of draft by Salim Blasini == |
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:Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Salim Blasini|ts=14:29:30, 7 March 2019|draft=Draft:Red_Squad_Reborn}} |
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:It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like [[Language interpretation]]. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hello, I joined Wikipedia today and I created an article about "Red Squad Reborn" but it got declined, can someone please help me with it? Any help is appreciated. Thank you in advance! :) |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Red_Squad_Reborn |
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== 21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder == |
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[[User:Salim Blasini|Salim Blasini]] ([[User talk:Salim Blasini|talk]]) 14:29, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=CerebralPathfinder|ts=21:23, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:dogAdvisor}} |
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:{{u|Salim Blasini}}, [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] are required for Wikipedia articles in order to [[WP:V|verify]] their content and ensure their [[WP:N|notability]]. For a walkthrough on formatting citations, please see [[WP:REFB]]. Thanks, '''<span style="font-family: Arial">[[User:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: red">SITH</span>]] [[User talk:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: blue">(talk)</span>]]</span>''' 23:22, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Why has my article been denied? |
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I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|CerebralPathfinder}} I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::ah yes just seen! thank you [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. |
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:If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see [[WP:PAID]], as well as [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Request on 16:23:49, 7 March 2019 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Scotteggert == |
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{{Lafc|username=Scotteggert|ts=16:23:49, 7 March 2019|declinedtalk=Draft:Charles_O_Scott}} |
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== 05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS == |
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{{Lafc|username=NOMAN ABBASS|ts=05:21, 25 December 2024|draft=Above Ground Pool Removal Cost - Average Prices in 2025}} |
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An article that was drafted, one of my first Wiki submissions was tagged as "speedily deleted". The subject was the employer of a good friend who is a prominent African American entrepreneur. The article was drafted in a neutral third person voice without superlatives. I included links to several other articles and a single citation. I was going to proceed with writing about some personnel and a couple of businesses he owns that would reference him. |
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I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me [[User:NOMAN ABBASS|NOMAN ABBASS]] ([[User talk:NOMAN ABBASS|talk]]) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|NOMAN ABBASS}} [[WP:NOT#HOWTO|We do not accept guides.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I would appreciate some pointers about how to edit this to Wiki standards. I drafted a similar article about six years ago under very similar circumstance, and as another user, which remains mostly intact today. |
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== 06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Anonymous 21710|ts=06:02, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sree_Udhyan_.M}} |
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can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article. |
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[[User:Anonymous 21710|Anonymous 21710]] ([[User talk:Anonymous 21710|talk]]) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Anonymous21710}} Not only is this draft [[WP:SPAM|blatantly promotional]] and [[WP:BLP|entirely unsourced]], the subject is a [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|''minor'']] and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Scotteggert}}, I can't see the deleted page, I am pinging {{u|Liz}}, the deleting admin, for input. '''<span style="font-family: Arial">[[User:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: red">SITH</span>]] [[User talk:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: blue">(talk)</span>]]</span>''' 23:21, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence == |
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{{Lafc|username=NakiwugeFlorence|ts=08:29, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Waya_Boy}} |
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What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general [[WP:GNG]] or the special [[WP:MUSICBIO]] guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I am not related to James C. Madden. The fact that we share the last name is a coincidence. However, I am employed by the PR firm that represents his company. Can you tell me if, and where, I need to disclose this? Thanks! |
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::Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|MachieMadden}}, if money is involved, you need to see [[WP:COIPAYDISCLOSE]] and follow the instructions there. If no money is involved, putting {{tlp|UserboxCOI|2=Draft:YOUR DRAFT HERE}} on [[Special:MyPage|your userpage]] will suffice. Thanks, '''<span style="font-family: Arial">[[User:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: red">SITH</span>]] [[User talk:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: blue">(talk)</span>]]</span>''' 23:18, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement == |
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{{Lafc|username=KimJongUnsBasement|ts=13:27, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Pau_Quesada}} |
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{{anchor|19:09:18, 7 March 2019 review of submission by 24.136.10.218}} |
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It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=24.136.10.218|ts=19:09:18, 7 March 2019|declinedtalk=Draft:Stefanie_Minatee}} |
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:It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]]: footballers have to demonstrate notability per [[WP:GNG]], which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none. |
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I am working on a biography of Stefanie Minatee for Wikipedia. The first time the article was declined, I was asked to add more citations. I have done that. Today it was declined again; here is the message I received this time around: |
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:What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|KimJonUnsBasement}} Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for [[WP:AFD|a deletion discussion]]. |
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:As for other articles, see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198 == |
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Please list the WP:THREE sources that would enable this person to meet notability. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:36, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2.190.166.198|ts=14:00, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SOBI}} |
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this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article [[Special:Contributions/2.190.166.198|2.190.166.198]] ([[User talk:2.190.166.198|talk]]) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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In my list of sources, I have included one book not associated with the subject (The Gospel Truth), an online resource not associated with me (GOSPELflava), though my Journal of Gospel Music has been cited on Wikipedia by others in the past, a newspaper (Union News Daily), and two online news sources (Nj.com and northjersey.com). Are none of these sources enough to determine notability? |
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== 14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso == |
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The other question is, where do I list the WP:THREE sources in the body of the article, and are any of the references cited considered one of these three sources? If not, do the three sources need to be paper-based? |
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{{Lafc|username=Amjsso|ts=14:01, 25 December 2024|draft=User:Amjsso/sandbox}} |
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I just wanted to create a politician page [[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]] ([[User talk:Amjsso|talk]]) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]], have you read the policy at [[WP:VERIFY]]? Everything on Wikipedia ''must'' have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I apologize for my confusion – I have seen Wikipedia articles with only three references get published and I have provided more than 20 and can’t seem to get through the system! |
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== 18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18 == |
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Best regards, |
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{{Lafc|username=Sanjaygowda18|ts=18:44, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SANJAY_GOWDA_S_G}} |
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Bob Marovich |
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My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Please [[Wikipedia:Spam|don't write spam]] on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit [[Help:Your first article]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud == |
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::General comments. Use the Draft talkpage to list your best sources. We have several thousand Draft pages waiting so wading through 20+ sources is not a good use of time when the [[WP:N]] is not obvious. Quality of sources, not quantity is important. Sources do NOT need to be paper, and online sources are much easier for us to check. I'll look at the page for you now. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 19:31, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? [[User:AngelicaMonsalud|AngelicaMonsalud]] ([[User talk:AngelicaMonsalud|talk]]) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 26 = |
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== 19:18:56, 7 March 2019 review of draft by Scott8905 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Scott8905|ts=19:18:56, 7 March 2019|draft=Draft:Executive_Office_for_United_States_Attorneys}} |
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== 06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23 == |
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Our content was reviewed and denied. So I had a question about how we can get our specific content up as a separate article. Our office, the Executive Office for U.S. Attorneys, is mentioned on the [[United_States_Attorney|United States Attorney Wikipedia page]], but there are significant differences between the US Attorneys (USA) office and the Executive Office for US Attorneys (EOUSA). It was recommended that we add our content to the EOUSA section of the United States Attorney page. I would submit that adding this content would cause confusion to readers since US Attorneys and EOUSA have different responsibilities and perform different roles withing the Department of Justice. EOUSA provides support with respect to policy and guidance to all 94 US Attorneys' offices including overseeing their budget, but EOUSA does not make decisions affecting civil or criminal cases. US attorneys are the chief Federal law enforcement officers in their district. They lead investigations and direct the prosecution of criminal and civil cases on behalf of the Federal government. The Director of EOUSA oversees the evaluation of those offices, supervising the operation of the Office of Legal Education, the Attorney General’s Advocacy Institute and the Legal Education Institute and much more as our submission provides. Thirdly, US Attorneys are appointed by the President of the United States and have to go through the Senate confirmation process, while the Director of EOUSA is selected by the Attorney General. |
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{{Lafc|username=117.254.37.23|ts=06:11, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:ATMECS_Global}} |
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My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. [[Special:Contributions/117.254.37.23|117.254.37.23]] ([[User talk:117.254.37.23|talk]]) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Firstly, if you're {{u|Ssaisushanth45}}, please log into your account whenever editing. |
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Though I would agree that referencing EOUSA on the US Attorneys Wikipedia page would provide the reader a basic understanding of who US Attorneys work with regarding Department of Justice policy and guidance. I would reiterate that having all the information about EOUSA on the US Attorneys Wikipedia page may cause confusion to the readers since the responsibilities and leadership roles differ greatly. To have a separate EOUSA page linked to the content on the US Attorneys and the Department of Justice’s Wikipedia pages would provide readers a separate resource focused specifically on the function and responsibilities of EOUSA and avoid confusion with the duties of the US Attorneys. |
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:Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing). |
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:I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts? |
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:It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any. |
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:We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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:As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a [[WP:deadline|deadline]]. |
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:Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: [[WP:BOSS]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this |
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::: "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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::: As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us." |
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::: Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me. |
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::[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]] ([[User talk:Ssaisushanth45|talk]]) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]]: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. ''When'' you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug == |
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Lastly, other Federal agencies have pages devoted to specific offices, bureaus and divisions. Please see examples under the following: |
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{{Lafc|username=Ramakrishnan.babug|ts=06:47, 26 December 2024|draft=Babu Ramakrishnan.G}} |
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May I know the reason for rejecting my article? |
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[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] ([[User talk:Ramakrishnan.babug|talk]]) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] Wikipedia is not for [[WP:PROMO|self-promotion]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455 == |
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1. United States Department of Justice under Offices - [[United_States_Department_of_Justice#Offices|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_Justice#Offices]] |
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{{Lafc|username=Shaurya4455|ts=15:22, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shaurya 2}} |
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2. United States Department of State under Organization [[United_States_Department_of_State#Organization|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_State#Organization]] show a number of different offices/bureaus with their own pages. |
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regarding to uploading a new page or Article |
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3. United States Department of Agriculture under Organization, budget, and tasks - [[United_States_Department_of_Agriculture#Organization,_budget_and_tasks|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_Agriculture#Organization,_budget_and_tasks]] |
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i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it [[User:Shaurya4455|Shaurya4455]] ([[User talk:Shaurya4455|talk]]) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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4. United States Department of the Interior under Operating Units - [[United_States_Department_of_the_Interior#Operating_units|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_the_Interior#Operating_units]] |
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:Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at [[WP:GNG]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Shaurya4455}} (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD == |
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These are just some examples of pages that reference other offices who have their own dedicated page. |
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{{Lafc|username=CorosanD|ts=19:25, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:Michail_Boiadjiev_(Михаил_Бояджиев)}} |
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Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. [[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]] ([[User talk:CorosanD|talk]]) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{yo|CorosanD}} That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]]. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft [[WP:BACKWARDS|BACKWARDS]], starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is ''only'' interested in what reliable published sources say. |
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:Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see [[WP:42]]. |
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:Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{tl|ill}}: so <code>{{tlx|ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}</code> is displayed as {{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}} - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it. |
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:The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the [[:C:COM:Threshold of originality|COM:Threshold of originality]], and so is in the public domain). |
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:You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see [[WP:image use policy|image use policy]]. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 27 = |
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Should I resubmit for someone to review? Or, what would be the next steps to get a separate posted. Previous reviewers did not have an issue with the being a separate article. They provided other input with respect to adding more specific references about the content pulled directly from Justice.gov's website. |
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== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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Any direction and guidance would be greatly appreciated. |
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{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=03:24, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office_Hours_Live}} |
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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved. |
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Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Scott8905|Scott8905]] ([[User talk:Scott8905|talk]]) 19:18, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Scott Armstrong-Cezar (employee of the US Dept. of Justice) |
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:@[[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Scott8905|Scott8905]] ([[User talk:Scott8905|talk]]) 19:18, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:I was the one who suggested that it belongs on the other page but if a seperate page explains the difference between the titles that is fine. If you include material from gov published sources that is fine and copyright free but be sure to very clearly label the source and comment on ten talkpage. [[Executive Office for United States Attorneys]] already exists as a title but it is currently a redirect. You can just replace the redirect with the new article. You don't need us. Clink the link to the Executive Office page, scroll to the top, and click the redirected from link. Then paste over the # REDIRECT. Thanks for helping improve the coverage on Wikipedia of the DOJ. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 19:24, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany == |
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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Companies such as Microsoft and Google have 'Company' above their wikipedia logo. How do i do the same for companies i write about? |
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::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi == |
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[[User:BlazeJimX|BlazeJimX]] ([[User talk:BlazeJimX|talk]]) 20:42, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=12:42, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}} |
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::It is an infobox. Responded on the draft. You have much bigger problems in your effort to promote your company - like no good sources. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 20:55, 7 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. |
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I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions ''in this thread'' explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= March 8 = |
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::I addressed the '''peacock prose''' by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 01:34:15, 8 March 2019 review of submission by Gravis Sonjiuson == |
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{{Lafc|username=Gravis Sonjiuson|ts=01:34:15, 8 March 2019|declined=Draft:The_most_serene_peoples_democratic_republic_of_the_provinces_and_greater_confederates_of_Henristan}} |
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[[User:Gravis Sonjiuson|Gravis Sonjiuson]] ([[User talk:Gravis Sonjiuson|talk]]) 01:34, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::Block of this user requested. Only here to promote his creation. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 06:20, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 03:14:21, 8 March 2019 review of submission by Sizcoo == |
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[[User:Sizcoo|Sizcoo]] ([[User talk:Sizcoo|talk]]) 03:14, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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I had an article rejected, but the editor has not come back after a really long time, and not responding to their Talk. I am concerned. Any help would be appreciated. The article is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nick_Birbilis |
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Thanks |
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[[User:Sizcoo|Sizcoo]] ([[User talk:Sizcoo|talk]]) 03:14, 8 March 2019 (UTC) Sizcoo |
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::Meets [[WP:PROF]] so I accepted. We have a large backlog [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 06:16, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 07:21:14, 8 March 2019 review of submission by Minu Bakshi == |
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Please advise me what changes I can do to approve the content. |
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Minu Bakshi |
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[[User:Minu Bakshi|Minu Bakshi]] ([[User talk:Minu Bakshi|talk]]) 07:21, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Thank-you for bringing your amazingly self serving page to my attention. I've sought deletion on it. Don't post it again. Cheers [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 07:26, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 09:30:52, 8 March 2019 review of draft by Mitchelaaa == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mitchelaaa|ts=09:30:52, 8 March 2019|draft=Draft_talk:International_Achievement_Recognition_Awards_UK}} |
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[[Draft:International Achievement Recognition Awards UK]] try to review it faster and improve this article I have written. |
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[[User:Mitchelaaa|Mitchelaaa]] ([[User talk:Mitchelaaa|talk]]) 09:30, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Mitchelaaa}}, we'll review it in due course. Thanks for not making it a copyright violation this time, that helps. '''<span style="font-family: Arial">[[User:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: red">SITH</span>]] [[User talk:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: blue">(talk)</span>]]</span>''' 11:25, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== Request on 10:15:03, 8 March 2019 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by RimaPOD2018 == |
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{{anchor|10:15:03, 8 March 2019 review of submission by RimaPOD2018}} |
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{{Lafc|username=RimaPOD2018|ts=10:15:03, 8 March 2019|declinedtalk=Draft:Impact_Profile}} |
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Hello, thank you for your feedback and input. I was wondering if social media sites might increasingly count as 'reputable' sources. There is plenty of coverage over facebook, linked in and youtube. Impact Profile can be downloaded and used and so on. My point is that it's out there and has a lot of coverage, it seems perfect for wikipedia article! Thank you again for everything you do. |
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:{{u|RimaPOD2018}}, please see [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources]]. Facebook and YouTube are not considered reliable because reliable sources e.g. NYT, BBC, WaPo, NBC also self-publish as well as publishing videos on such sites, making references to them unnecessary. '''<span style="font-family: Arial">[[User:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: red">SITH</span>]] [[User talk:StraussInTheHouse|<span style="color: blue">(talk)</span>]]</span>''' 11:27, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 12:24:24, 8 March 2019 review of draft by Catoco == |
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{{Lafc|username=Catoco|ts=12:24:24, 8 March 2019|draft=Draft:UMLAUT_(band)}} |
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Trying to fully verify sources, but some information was gathered directly from band members, through messenger and email, not a published article. How can I site this source? |
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[[User:Catoco|Catoco]] ([[User talk:Catoco|talk]]) 12:24, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Catoco}} Unpublished information may not be included in Wikipedia articles. Putting it in would violate one of the pillars of the encyclopedia, [[WP:V|verifiability]]. It's common for Wikipedia articles to present an incomplete picture of a subject (in the sense of lacking some information that a reader might like to know). That's okay if there is no [[WP:RS|reliable]] published source for the information. |
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:If you're close enough to your subject to be emailing and instant messaging them, you probably have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. Be sure to disclose the nature of any connection. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 13:34, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== Request on 16:00:15, 8 March 2019 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Scott8905 == |
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Our content was reviewed and denied. Since we disagree with the reviewer's reason, should we resubmit? The individual who denied our content recommended that our content be added to the [[United_States_Attorney|United States Attorney Wikipedia page]]. Though our content is written about very briefly on the United States Attorney Wikipedia page, adding information about the [[United_States_Attorney#Executive_Office_for_United_States_Attorneys|Executive Office for US Attorneys (EOUSA)]] does not make much sense to us since the roles of US Attorneys and EOUSA are very different. For example, the responsibilities of EOUSA is to provide support with respect to policy, guidance. and budget to the 94 US Attorneys offices including. EOUSA does not make decisions affecting civil or criminal cases. On the other hand, US Attorneys are the chief Federal law enforcement officers in their district. They lead investigations and direct the prosecution of criminal and civil cases on behalf of the Federal government. Additionally, US Attorneys are appointed by the President of the United States and have to go through the Senate confirmation process, while the Director of EOUSA is selected by the Attorney General. |
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Though I would agree that referencing EOUSA on the US Attorneys and the Department of Justice's Wikipedia page would provide the reader a basic understanding of who US Attorneys work with regarding Department of Justice policy and guidance. I would submit that having all the information about EOUSA on the US Attorneys Wikipedia page would provide confusion to the readers since the responsibilities and leadership roles differ greatly. To have a separate EOUSA page linked to the content on the US Attorneys and the Department of Justice’s Wikipedia pages would provide readers a separate resource focused specifically on the function and responsibilities of EOUSA and avoid confusion with the duties of the US Attorneys. |
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Lastly, other Federal agencies have pages devoted to specific offices, bureaus and divisions. Please see examples under the following: |
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# United States Department of Justice under Offices - [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_Justice#Offices]] |
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# United States Department of State under Organization ([[United_States_Department_of_State#Organization|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_State#Organization]]) show a number of different offices/bureaus with their own pages. |
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# United States Department of Agriculture under Organization, budget, and tasks - [[United_States_Department_of_Agriculture#Organization,_budget_and_tasks|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_Agriculture#Organization,_budget_and_tasks]] |
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# United States Department of the Interior under Operating Units - [[United_States_Department_of_the_Interior#Operating_units|https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Department_of_the_Interior#Operating_units]] |
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These are just some examples of pages that reference other Federal agencies who have dedicated pages specific to offices within their Department who perform a specific function. |
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Previous reviews of our content did not make the same recommendation for our content to be added to the US Attorney Wikipedia page, their only suggestions were to add more specific references to the content that was directly pulled for the Department of Justice's website. Any insight and direction would be greatly appreciated. |
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:Answered above [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk#19:18:56,_7_March_2019_review_of_draft_by_Scott8905] [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 20:24, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 16:20:48, 8 March 2019 review of submission by Catoco == |
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A wikipedia article I submitted for publishing was rejected on the grounds that the " subject was not significant" enough to qualify for it's own page. My draft is about the Bär McKinnon music group Umlaut, which can easily be located with a google search. Draft here: |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:UMLAUT_(band) |
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Bär McKinnon has his own public Wikipedia https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clinton_McKinnon_(musician) |
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Which mentions the band, as well as the related group, Mr Bungle: |
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https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mr._Bungle |
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Maybe I am misunderstanding the "significance" mention, because the subject seems quite significant. |
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[[User:Catoco|Catoco]] ([[User talk:Catoco|talk]]) 16:20, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:If it were significant, there would be sources to the article not related to the subject. You have provided no evidence of [[:WP:BAND|notability as we define it here]] whatsoever. --[[User:Orangemike|<span style="color:#F80">Orange Mike</span>]] | [[User talk:Orangemike|<span style="color:#FA0">Talk</span>]] 16:27, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 18:05:09, 8 March 2019 review of draft by Martimartins == |
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{{Lafc|username=Martimartins|ts=18:05:09, 8 March 2019|draft=Draft:Patricia_Kaersenhout}} |
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hi, I need help with the creation of my first article. I cannot understand if my article in English about Patrica Kaersenhout has been sent to review or not? If not, how can I do it? thank you for your help! |
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[[User:Martimartins|Martimartins]] ([[User talk:Martimartins|talk]]) 18:05, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:It was sent for review and found to be a copyright violation. You must use your own words not copy from sources. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 20:18, 8 March 2019 (UTC) |
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= March 9 = |
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== 00:19:13, 9 March 2019 review of draft by Haleyofwg == |
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{{Lafc|username=Haleyofwg|ts=00:19:13, 9 March 2019|draft=Draft:JameirKGolden}} |
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I was wondering if i was aloud to use places such as Apple music, spotify, twitter google box etc. i see other artist do it but when i do it always says that i'm advertising. [[User:Haleyofwg|Haleyofwg]] ([[User talk:Haleyofwg|talk]]) 00:19, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:You need reliable sources [[WP:RS]] about the artist not just links that proge they released music [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 00:26, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 05:54:37, 9 March 2019 review of submission by Mohit Bajgain == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mohit Bajgain|ts=05:54:37, 9 March 2019|page= |
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Why My article is Not posted? |
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[[User:Mohit Bajgain|Mohit Bajgain]] ([[User talk:Mohit Bajgain|talk]]) 05:54, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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[[Draft:Mahadev Bajgain|Link to Mahadev Bajgain draft]] |
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::{{Ping|Mohit Bajgain}} - it's not become an article yet because you posted 3 days ago and there is a backlog in excess of 7 weeks at the moment. |
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::As a mayor, he falls into one areas of [[WP:NPOV|political notability]] that will require significant judgement to be exercised - as their notability is based off how major the region/city is. Please just be patient. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 12:51, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 10:51:16, 9 March 2019 review of submission by Rohit sir india == |
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{{Lafc|username=Rohit sir india|ts=10:51:16, 9 March 2019|declined=User:Rohit_sir_india/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Rohit sir india|Rohit sir india]] ([[User talk:Rohit sir india|talk]]) 10:51, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::{{Ping|Rohit sir india}} - as the reviewer noted, this is just an advertorial few facts about the individual (yourself?) and the company. It also has no sources which means it could never be added to Wikipedia. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 12:53, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 12:15:19, 9 March 2019 review of submission by Rohitiyengar1729 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Rohitiyengar1729|ts=12:15:19, 9 March 2019|declined=Draft:Abraham_Sasi}} |
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[[User:Rohitiyengar1729|Rohitiyengar1729]] ([[User talk:Rohitiyengar1729|talk]]) 12:15, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::{{Ping|Rohitiyengar1729}} - there's nothing in the article that suggests he meets what we call [[WP:NOTABILITY|notability]]. Additionally, Wikipedia can't use primary sources of information, we need things like newspapers, books etc - not personal accounts. [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 12:54, 9 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 02:49:23, 10 March 2019 review of submission by 141.0.155.187 == |
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{{Lafc|username=141.0.155.187|ts=02:49:23, 10 March 2019|declined=Draft:Entroware}} |
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[[Special:Contributions/141.0.155.187|141.0.155.187]] ([[User talk:141.0.155.187|talk]]) 02:49, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::{{ping|141.0.155.187}} - the original reviewer was correct in this not meeting [[WP:NCORP|corporate notability]], remember that sources have to be secondary (newspapers, books, journals, etc). As such, this draft is not notable [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 11:18, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 02:52:32, 10 March 2019 review of submission by 141.0.155.187 == |
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{{Lafc|username=141.0.155.187|ts=02:52:32, 10 March 2019|declined=Draft:Entroware}} |
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I disagree with this article being rejected. This business is a well known one within the Linux community and others like it with equal notoriety have a Wikipedia entry. They have appeared in technology news numerous times and Forbes was even sourced for this article. I would appreciate it is this article is reviewed again. Thank you for your time. |
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[[Special:Contributions/141.0.155.187|141.0.155.187]] ([[User talk:141.0.155.187|talk]]) 02:52, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:www.forbes.com/sites by contributors (rather than Forbes staff) are not the same as Forbes magazine. They are blogs, so not reliable sources for facts, only for the opinion of the author. As for articles similar to the draft, see the essay [[WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS]] to understand the flaw in that argument for inclusion. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 13:42, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:::If you disagree with AfC you could create an account, edit with it for a bit, and create your own pages. As an IP you have to use AfC [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 19:49, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 11:27:05, 10 March 2019 review of draft by Pequena Princesa == |
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{{Lafc|username=Pequena Princesa|ts=11:27:05, 10 March 2019|draft=Draft:Marisa_McKaye}} |
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1. Is YouTube not a reliable source for the creation date and number of views on a YouTube Channel? |
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2. Is YouTube not a reliable source for the fact that the subject appears in a number of videos on YouTube doing a certain thing? |
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3. Is the subject's website not a reliable source for a photograph of the subject? |
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[[User:Pequena Princesa|Pequena Princesa]] ([[User talk:Pequena Princesa|talk]]) 11:27, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Hi {{U|Pequena Princesa}}. YouTube can be a reliable source sometimes. See [[Wikipedia:External links/Perennial websites]] for a fuller discussion of the problems with YouTube as a source. What is perhaps more relevant in this case is that being on YouTube does not help establish that a person is [[WP:BIO|notable]] (suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). Nor is it usually worth mentioning in an encyclopedia biography, unless the presence on YouTube has been discussed in mainstream media (think ''Billboard'', ''Rolling Stone'', ''Slant Magazine'', and the like). --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 14:10, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 14:36:01, 10 March 2019 review of submission by Ritu67 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Ritu67|ts=14:36:01, 10 March 2019|declined=User:Ritu67/sandbox}} |
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Ritu67 14:36, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::This is a recurring (near)blank submission [[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 18:13, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 14:37:47, 10 March 2019 review of submission by 117.234.121.8 == |
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{{Lafc|username=117.234.121.8|ts=14:37:47, 10 March 2019|declined=Draft:Sanjay_Chhimpa}} |
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Draft has been rejected for no reason. There is also a proper reference in the draft, which is worth making the article, all the references are official, I tried to get help from the English Wikipedia Helpline, I was blocked from there, if this article is not made If you do not want to do it, please continue it, thank you |
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[[Special:Contributions/117.234.121.8|117.234.121.8]] ([[User talk:117.234.121.8|talk]]) 14:37, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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::{{replyto|117.234.121.8}} - this individual does not meet the requirements for [[WP:MUSICBIO|musician notability]]. You can add loads of sources, but you just end up duplicating the same issue. Lots of sources don't cover him at all, which makes them rather pointless. |
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::There is, in fact, a notability grounds that covers performing in films etc - criterion 10: |
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::''Has performed music for a work of media that is notable, e.g., a theme for a network television show, performance in a television show or notable film, inclusion on a notable compilation album, etc. (But if this is the only claim, it is probably more appropriate to have a mention in the main article and redirect to that article. Read the policy and notability guideline on subjects notable only for one event, for further clarifications).'' |
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::However, there are two main flaws. 1) Your [https://www.moviebuff.com/alone own source] indicates that he was just a playback singer for one of the tracks. To qualify under this ground he'd need to be the primary singer for the whole film's music. 2) As the grounds says, this is currently his own claim, so it makes more sense to add him to the film's article, rather than generate a new article just for this. |
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::He may in the future perform more and surpass both of those issues, but at this point, that has not been satisfied. |
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::Finally, what do you mean by "English Wikipedia Helpline"? We have several help groups - chats, boards, email etc, but I've not heard of that one. |
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::[[User:Nosebagbear|Nosebagbear]] ([[User talk:Nosebagbear|talk]]) 18:12, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 18:17:36, 10 March 2019 review of draft by NorthPark1417 == |
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{{Lafc|username=NorthPark1417|ts=18:17:36, 10 March 2019|draft=Draft:Dagger_(zine)}} |
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Hello, I am the writer of ''[[Dagger (zine)|Dagger]]'' that was recently [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dagger (zine)|deleted]], and I've expanded the article, for review at [[Draft:Dagger (zine)]]. - [[User:NorthPark1417|NorthPark1417]] ([[User talk:NorthPark1417|talk]]) 18:17, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Wrong venue. You need [[WP:DRV]]. We can't override the deletion discussion. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 19:45, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 18:48:39, 10 March 2019 review of draft by Esmemusic == |
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{{Lafc|username=Esmemusic|ts=18:48:39, 10 March 2019|draft=Draft:Esme}} |
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[[User:Esmemusic|Esmemusic]] ([[User talk:Esmemusic|talk]]) 18:48, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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to check the new refrences and see if it is enough to publish the well known bachata artist Esme wikipedia page. |
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::Nope no refs, and it is highly promotional of a non-notable singer, yiu. Tagged for speedy deletion. Also user blocked [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 19:40, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 22:15:26, 10 March 2019 review of submission by Fyzix == |
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{{Lafc|username=Fyzix|ts=22:15:26, 10 March 2019|declined=Draft:Cvlt_Ov_The_Svn}} |
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I recently discovered this small and interesting up and coming band called Cvlt Ov The Svn. I fell in love with their music and wanted to honor them by creating a Wikipedia article about them so that others can find all and any information about them in a concise format on a well known website. The thing is, this band is brand new, and '''there's no information about them''' aside from their social media pages. There are only a few web articles that have been made about them but they all say the same thing. I was informed that social media is not a valid source of information for a Wikipedia article so I took all necessary information from one of these articles. As I then submitted my draft for review I was told that this isn't the type of article Wikipedia desires. Despite the fact that there are plenty of articles about even more trivial subjects, with no sources stating where the information is from, I was told that this isn't good enough. |
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I just wanted to make a Wikipedia article about this cool band that I discovered. But my requests were denied. For what reason? Because the editor who happened to review it decided so? Because it's not what Wikipedia wants? Because who would care about some no-name band? Well let me tell you. '''I''' care. |
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[[User:Fyzix|Fyzix]] ([[User talk:Fyzix|talk]]) 22:15, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Topic must be [[WP:N]]otable. If you see pages about non-notable topic send them to [[WP:AFD]] [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 22:39, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 22:40:21, 10 March 2019 review of draft by Mkukuchka == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mkukuchka|ts=22:40:21, 10 March 2019|draft=Draft:Brian_Springer_(mixer)}} |
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Need clarification on my submission of Brian B Springer. First is it being treated as an article or a biography? |
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It's a biography and I patterned it from another on Manny Marroquin |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manny_Marroquin |
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"This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia." |
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Does he need to be the subject of interviews from studio executives, or others he has worked with? |
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I included references listing him from Billboard, and other books. |
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[[User:Mkukuchka|Mkukuchka]] ([[User talk:Mkukuchka|talk]]) 22:40, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:Biographies are just a subset of articles about people. |
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:The reviewer did not find the references to be sufficent. AfC is an an optional process so if you disagree you can move it yourself. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 22:43, 10 March 2019 (UTC) |
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= March 11 = |
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== 05:21:25, 11 March 2019 review of submission by Mukesh Kumar Rao == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mukesh Kumar Rao|ts=05:21:25, 11 March 2019|declined=Draft:Rakshit_Tandon}} |
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I am requesting you, why you rejected this page. And tell me please what is the reason for rejection. Is I am violating any term or condition policy of Wikipedia. |
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What is the thing should I follow to create this page. I am editing this page for a very geniue person. Who I am knowing personally, and He given me all the content which I write on this page, so there is no copyright issue arises. Please guide me to publish this page. Thanks in advance for Helping to create this page. |
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[[User:Mukesh Kumar Rao|Mukesh Kumar Rao]] ([[User talk:Mukesh Kumar Rao|talk]]) 05:21, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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* [[WP:PROMO]], it is a resume, fails [[WP:N]] and totally formated wrong. Page deleted and user blocked [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 05:30, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 05:28:11, 11 March 2019 review of submission by Ukunsumo == |
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{{Lafc|username=Ukunsumo|ts=05:28:11, 11 March 2019|page= |
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User:Ukunsumo/sandbox |
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Can you help me to validate my own page in the sand box. See the link above |
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[[User:Ukunsumo|Ukunsumo]] ([[User talk:Ukunsumo|talk]]) 05:28, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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Hi all, |
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I am a freelance web developer based in Japan. |
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I wanted to create my own page in the sandbox as shown on YouTube. |
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I received an error message: |
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"Submission declined on 11 March 2019 by PrussianOwl (talk). |
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This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources." |
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Can you give me some advices on how to resolve this issue. |
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Cheers, |
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Remi |
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:Hi {{U|Ukunsumo}}. Unlike Facebook, LinkedIn, or similar networking sites, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. It is not a place to write about yourself. See [[Wikipedia:Autobiography]] for more information --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 05:56, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== Request on 07:08:40, 11 March 2019 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by RSMPAO == |
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{{anchor|07:08:40, 11 March 2019 review of submission by RSMPAO}} |
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{{Lafc|username=RSMPAO|ts=07:08:40, 11 March 2019|declinedtalk=User_talk:RSMPAO}} |
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Good morning Sir, I am the Public Affairs Officers of the NATO Resolute Support Mission in Afghanistan. I wrote [[Draft:Salvatore Camporeale]]'s draft and I always tried to modify it by following your suggestions. You tell me that the text is copied from the Resolute Support website https://rs.nato.int. However, I ask you to approve my draft for the following reasons: |
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- I modified the draft by quoting the source from which I got the information (ie the Resolute Support website); |
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- I modified the text as much as possible, but better than that I can not do because it is a short biography of General Camporeale; |
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- in my opinion there is no copyright infringement because I am the Public Affairs of Resolute Support Missione, I am the webmaster of the Resolute Support website and I wrote the biography of General Camporeale which is published on https: // rs. nato.int. |
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Please, I ask you, kindly, to help me write the draft in order for it to be published. |
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Thanks in advance. |
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<!-- End of message -->[[User:RSMPAO|RSMPAO]] ([[User talk:RSMPAO|talk]]) 07:08, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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: {{u|RSMPAO}}, {{On hold}}. Pls disclose your COI on your user page and the [[Draft:Salvatore Camporeale]] article talk page - pls see the COI info and instructions at your talk page. Also, pls note that Wikipedia highly discourage (not welcome) editor with COI to edit/create the affected page as content at times does not meet [[WP:NPOV]]. Thank you.[[User:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 07:26, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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:: Ma'am [[User:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup>, I followed your suggestion disclosing my COI on user page and on the [[Draft:Salvatore Camporeale]]. I try to be as neutral as possible, but the article is a simple biography. Please let me know if I have to do something else. |
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::Thank you very much. |
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:::{{U|RSMPAO}} Greetings. Pls note the disclosure should be placed on (1) User page and (2) Article "talk" page and not article page. Pls read and follow instructions provided and rework. Please Please remember to [[Wikipedia:Signatures|sign your posts]] on [[Help:Talk pages|talk pages]] by typing four tildes (<code><nowiki>~~~~</nowiki></code>).. Thank you.[[User:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="font-family:Georgia;font-size:80%;color:#FA0"> CASSIOPEIA</b>]]<sup>([[User talk:CASSIOPEIA|<b style="#0000FF">talk</b>]])</sup> 11:30, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 07:17:07, 11 March 2019 review of submission by Savithashanmugam == |
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{{Lafc|username=Savithashanmugam|ts=07:17:07, 11 March 2019|declined=User:Savithashanmugam/sandbox}} |
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Because there is no copyright content, or any kind of issues so that kindly re-review it. |
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[[User:Savithashanmugam|Savithashanmugam]] ([[User talk:Savithashanmugam|talk]]) 07:17, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 12:59:27, 11 March 2019 review of draft by Lpouliot == |
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{{Lafc|username=Lpouliot|ts=12:59:27, 11 March 2019|draft=Draft:Blake_pouliot}} |
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The title of my Wiki article contains an error. It now reads Blake pouliot. Both first and last names should be capitalized to read Blake Pouliot. I do not seem have the faculty to make this edit. Can you do this for me? Thank you. |
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[[User:Lpouliot|Lpouliot]] ([[User talk:Lpouliot|talk]]) 12:59, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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[[User:Lpouliot|Lpouliot]] ([[User talk:Lpouliot|talk]]) 12:59, 11 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== 21:17:27, 11 March 2019 review of submission by Jordanslp312 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Jordanslp312|ts=21:17:27, 11 March 2019|declined=Draft:Amir_Siraj}} |
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After the helpful comments from DGG, all concerns raised were explicitly addressed, specifically showing significant coverage about Siraj's work in published, reliable, secondary sources (including a standalone piece in Forbes<ref>{{cite web |last1=Dorminey |first1=Bruce |title=Astronomers Are Tracking Four Potential Interstellar Objects Now In Our Outer Solar System |url=https://www.forbes.com/sites/brucedorminey/2018/11/30/astronomers-are-tracking-4-potential-interstellar-objects-now-in-our-outer-solar-system/#2919a7c4b5c3 |website=Forbes.com |publisher=Forbes}}</ref>, among several others), as well as showing evidence that the scientific works referenced in the Wikipedia page is attributable to Siraj, given his first authorships. It is therefore puzzling what about the entry does not meet notability guidelines. It is also worth mentioning that Siraj appears in the Wikipedia entry on [['Oumuamua]] and on [[interstellar object]]s. Interstellar objects are a brand new field of [[astronomy]]; one of Siraj's works has pioneered the study of trapped objects, and another work has become one of the most-read<ref>{{cite web |title=Research Notes of the AAS |url=https://iopscience.iop.org/journal/2515-5172 |website=Institute of Physics |publisher=IOP Publishing}}</ref> Research Notes of the American Astronomical Society. |
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December 21
[edit]03:00, 21 December 2024 review of submission by MajorbucksYT
[edit]- MajorbucksYT (talk · contribs) (TB)
Are corp.roblox.com, kristolex.com, ginx.tv, dilt.co or Roblox dev forum reliable sources?
Roblox dev forum only allows a select amount of people post, not everyone.
MajorbucksYT (talk) 03:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MajorbucksYT: How many people are allowed to post is irrelevant. What matters is if they have an editorial staff that fact-checks, issues retractions, etc. And by default BBSes do not have those. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 09:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
08:46, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Vishalarya1
[edit]Please reload page Vishalarya1 (talk) 08:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not social media for people to tell about themselves or post their resume. Please use actual social media to do that. Writing about yourself is highly discouraged, please see the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 09:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
09:09, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Spworld2
[edit]I have been requesting to move this article to the main space for many months and have not received a proper result from the admins. The article is developed based on the available information and the sources are notable Spworld2 (talk) 09:09, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reviewers are not just admins. The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to post essays. 331dot (talk) 09:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
15:25, 21 December 2024 review of submission by JaredWEngland
[edit]- JaredWEngland (talk · contribs) (TB)
Greetings. I'm trying to establish a new page, but am unsure how to adequately address the comments provided to my first draft. I added several additional references, but am not sure that will be adequate. In short, I'm trying address some confusion with the hierarchy of existing Wikipedia articles. There are articles about Air Station Elizabeth City and the Elizabeth City Regional Airport. However, these are just two of several Base Elizabeth City tenants. My goal is to create a Base page to clarify the structure, better communicate what's at the campus, and provide a framework that will enable better information moving forward. Without a Base page, there isn't a location for this information to be built. Contributing to the challenge, the general pubic is largely unclear of the differing functions on the Base, so external references I can cite often have embedded in them the very confusion that I'm trying to address with this article. I know I cannot cite myself, but I'm a career Coast Guard officer who has worked on the Base at high levels. I'm seeking to address a problem I've seen both in the community here, and to a lesser degree within the Coast Guard itself. Especially for new members transferring to Elizabeth City, it is difficult to understand the makeup of the location. My hope is that this new page can become a repository for useful information to address these concerns, but it must exist first. Thanks for any help or guidance you can provide. JaredWEngland (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- The purposes you outline above are no doubt very laudable, but they are not what we do at Wikipedia. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what reliable indpendent sources say about a notable topic, and very little else. "A base page to clarify the structure" doesn't sound like that - it sounds more like original research, which is not permitted in Wikipedia articles. ColinFine (talk) 18:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: All but the articles on Ketchikan and Cape Cod predate the drafting process entirely, and those two predate drafting being made all-but mandatory. They did not go thru the same process as your draft has to. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Beware of the other stuff exists argument. Those other articles could themselves be inappropriate and just not addressed yet by volunteers.
- A draft article does not need to be complete, but it does need to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the base. If you have a source for the claim that it generates 50% of the GDP for part of North Carolina, that's a start. 331dot (talk) 18:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've edited again and resubmitted. Unfortunately, many of the sources for information I have aren't available on the internet, so citing them isn't possible. The most recent adds & references what I was able to find in existing sources.
- Taking a step back, I understand the need for a draft/review process but this feels excessive. I've put a fair amount of time into this (creating a page and learning all the rules/software/formatting/ect has a steep learning curve) for what still may be 100% waste effort. I'm afraid that most people will give up much quicker, and Wikipedia will devolve to the major mainstream dated info model that the now defunct encyclopedias of yore used. In the balance between the unconstrained free for all of the early wiki days and absolute odious control of a rigorous academic reference, this feels too much like the latter. However, I'm an infrequent Wikipedia contributor and light financial backer, so my opinion is likely of low value. Volunteers are the magic of Wikipedia, and that's mostly you. Even though this has been frustrating, thanks for what you do! JaredWEngland (talk) 20:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: You can still cite - and we can still accept - offline sources, as long as they are cited properly. If we disallowed offline sources, we'd basically have to decimate every article on historical events and figures that we have. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:14, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello again @JaredWEngland. Neither the number of people who work there nor the revenue it generates is necessarily indicative of meeting Wikipedia's criteria for notability. Meeting those criteria is the absolute first stage of creating an article, because otherwise the article is not going to get accepted. ColinFine (talk) 19:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sources do not need to be online, they only need to be publicly available; books/magazines in a library are fine.. 331dot (talk) 22:20, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
15:41, 21 December 2024 review of submission by ProofandTrust
[edit]- ProofandTrust (talk · contribs) (TB)
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you for your feedback on my submission. I’ve carefully reviewed your explanation but still find it unclear why my article was not accepted. I noticed that Wikipedia currently lacks a dedicated definition of Vendor Risk Assessment, a fundamental concept in information security. My goal is to provide an encyclopedic explanation of this widely used term to inform readers about its importance and relevance. Your feedback mentioned that the article resembles an essay. However, I intended it to be a neutral, fact-based description aligned with Wikipedia’s standards. If there are specific sections or phrases that need revision to make it more suitable, I’d appreciate detailed guidance. I’m committed to improving the article to meet Wikipedia's guidelines and would greatly value further clarification to ensure it aligns with community standards.
Thank you for your time and assistance. ProofandTrust (talk) 15:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @ProofandTrust. Your draft is a blog-post style essay/how to guide/critique. That's not what an encyclopaedic entry on Wikipedia about a subject should look like. Instead, you should be paraphrasing reliable published sources (not blog posts, which most of your sources are) in a dry, factual manner using the Wikipedia Voice. I am afraid you will have to completely re-write your draft from scratch and find new sources for there to be any chance of it being accepted. qcne (talk) 16:36, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
17:07, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Wilfred Day
[edit]- Wilfred Day (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am surprised this is not in place. It is highly relevant since the government will fall on the next confidence vote. What is wikipedia waiting for? Wilfred Day (talk) 17:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia, being an encyclopaedia and not a news organ, is waiting until there is substantial independent coverage of the subject in reliable sources. I suspect that by the time there are adequate sources for such an article, the election will already have taken place, so there will be no need for this article. But I know nothing of Canadian politics.
- See also there is no deadline. ColinFine (talk) 18:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- There are no certainties in life. We don't assume something might happen, no matter how likely it is. 331dot (talk) 23:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
December 22
[edit]06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007
[edit]To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game.
I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person.
I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files.
Thanks- MonkeyBanjo007 (talk) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MonkeyBanjo007 see Help:Pictures for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple independent reliable sources that notability do. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0
[edit]You Should Agree This Draft 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Link to the draft: Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar --bonadea contributions talk 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Previously answered here (question posted by blocked user User:Bollysocialmedia) and here (by User:Royaloaksschoolking) and here.
- See also: Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and this question as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account User:Shubhamxrameshwar564. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --bonadea contributions talk 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador
[edit]- Batoenonghistoryador (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello,
I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."?
Additionally, I have a few questions:
1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? 2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it?
Thank you so much for your guidance!
Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Batoenonghistoryador: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title.
- You can cite online PDFs with the {{cite web}} template. The
format=
parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. - Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliably published sources say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all?
- As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been reliably published or not. ColinFine (talk) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for this informative response. Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566
[edit]HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 (talk) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah okay. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05
[edit]How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? Nigel D James (talk) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Njames05: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should.
- One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say.
- You should also unbold the section headers. ColinFine (talk) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B
[edit]Check now 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B (talk) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. 331dot (talk) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127
[edit]This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion here on the Rafael de Miguel González page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft.
I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed.
I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: User:Timtrent, User:Joe Roe, User:Benison, User:Mr.choppers, and User:asilvering. Cheers. LR.127 (talk) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a request for comment) or on the more general Help Desk. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.
Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- asilvering (talk) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1
[edit]- Bentasyt.1 (talk · contribs) (TB)
what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia Bentasyt.1 (talk) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. 331dot (talk) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Bentasyt.1. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Very brief summary of writing an article:
- Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See WP:42
- If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else.
- If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it.
- ColinFine (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening
[edit]- Sophisticatedevening (talk · contribs) (TB)
I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. Sophisticatedevening (talk) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed up for you Sophisticatedevening. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins
[edit]Why was the article declined Mariah Hopkins (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Courtesy link: User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox ColinFine (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for notability - see WP:42. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have significant coverage of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited.
- Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources.
- Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as disruptive editing.
- My comments to another editor above are equally applicable to your case. ColinFine (talk) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
December 23
[edit]06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv
[edit]please upload my wikipedia
Sonshiv (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE
[edit]i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE (talk) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assuming you're Manasi32, please log into your account when editing.
- There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources.
- Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway.
- Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see WP:AUTOBIO for why you shouldn't. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032
[edit]- Thanvi 032 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. Thanvi 032 (talk) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: your draft Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanvi 032, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of Verifiability, a core content policy. Please read and study Reliable sources and Referencing for beginners. Cullen328 (talk) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. Thanvi 032 (talk) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you have made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400
[edit]Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You are wrong see Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. Theroadislong (talk) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Tropical Appreciater10001-400: not so; every article has to cite its sources.
- In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context.
- Thank you for your time and consideration. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. 331dot (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- User-generated content, such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70
[edit]- 14.194.64.70 (talk · contribs) (TB)
this is page information please live it. 14.194.64.70 (talk) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition
[edit]- Pr.nutrition (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. Pr.nutrition (talk) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pr.nutrition Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher
[edit]- FelixKerscher (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why was my submission declined? FelixKerscher (talk) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You could also ask the reviewer CSMention269 if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. KylieTastic (talk) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher: By commenting on their user talk page. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz
[edit]Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ?
I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments.
Regards. Zraffarz (talk) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. Theroadislong (talk) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work.
- Regards Zraffarz (talk) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? Draft:Surmesur
- Much appreciated Zraffarz (talk) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09
[edit]hey what exactly was wrong 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 (talk) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. ColinFine (talk) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 24
[edit]00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest
[edit]Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) Nycrest (talk) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nycrest "no promotion"? I don't see how
unorthodox approach to fine dining
,theatrical presentations
, andplayful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions
is neutral. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists?
- I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. Nycrest (talk) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing how this establishment meets WP:ORG- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. 331dot (talk) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212
[edit]I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. Hedax212 (talk) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hedax212 to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being
US patent number US4988065A
, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see Help:Your first article first. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer
[edit]- MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk · contribs) (TB)
Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello Knitsey (talk) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MarkDiBelloBiographer: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image.
- Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least.
- On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18
[edit]- Muhammedramees18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why My edit is declined? Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of notability, not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view.
- What is your relationship with this school? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Muhammedramees18. Writing a new article is much more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a conflict of interest. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible.
- Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world except you and your colleagues. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242
[edit]- 223.190.86.242 (talk · contribs) (TB)
how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article 223.190.86.242 (talk) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. cyberdog958Talk 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju
[edit]should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? Sunuraju (talk) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji
[edit]- JustBeenji (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. JustBeenji (talk) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: you are an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia.
- But no editor can magic notability out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It could be notable, as it does seem to be a popular series of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin is, let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: Popularity is fleeting, notability is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell
[edit]- SarahSamuell (talk · contribs) (TB)
i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? SarahSamuell (talk) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see WP:NSCHOOL and WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES. KylieTastic (talk) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @SarahSamuell. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 above, most of which applies to you as well. ColinFine (talk) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- In addition to what has already been said, there are serious problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at WP:NFC. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore
[edit]- WikiBaltimore (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission.....
"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater."
I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit.
For example, Silo Point is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past.
Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. WikiBaltimore (talk) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiBaltimore: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see WP:YESPROMO), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for WP:REFBOMBING purposes.
- Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- The references are about the projects Turner Development has been involved in, not, about Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's WP:OR. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well said, thank you for the feedback WikiBaltimore (talk) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez
[edit]- Juanestebanfernandez (talk · contribs) (TB)
I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. Juanestebanfernandez (talk) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Juanestebanfernandez: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources.
- Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like Language interpretation. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder
[edit]- CerebralPathfinder (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has my article been denied? I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- CerebralPathfinder I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? 331dot (talk) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah yes just seen! thank you CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
- If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see WP:PAID, as well as conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 25
[edit]05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS
[edit]- NOMAN ABBASS (talk · contribs) (TB)
I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me NOMAN ABBASS (talk) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NOMAN ABBASS: We do not accept guides. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710
[edit]- Anonymous 21710 (talk · contribs) (TB)
can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article.
Anonymous 21710 (talk) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Anonymous21710: Not only is this draft blatantly promotional and entirely unsourced, the subject is a minor and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence
[edit]- NakiwugeFlorence (talk · contribs) (TB)
What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general WP:GNG or the special WP:MUSICBIO guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement
[edit]- KimJongUnsBasement (talk · contribs) (TB)
It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. 331dot (talk) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @KimJongUnsBasement: footballers have to demonstrate notability per WP:GNG, which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none.
- What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- KimJonUnsBasement Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for a deletion discussion.
- As for other articles, see other stuff exists. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. 331dot (talk) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. 331dot (talk) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198
[edit]this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article 2.190.166.198 (talk) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. qcne (talk) 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso
[edit]I just wanted to create a politician page Amjsso (talk) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Amjsso, have you read the policy at WP:VERIFY? Everything on Wikipedia must have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. qcne (talk) 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18
[edit]- Sanjaygowda18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please don't write spam on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit Help:Your first article. qcne (talk) 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud
[edit]- AngelicaMonsalud (talk · contribs) (TB)
I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? AngelicaMonsalud (talk) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. Theroadislong (talk) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
December 26
[edit]06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23
[edit]- 117.254.37.23 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
- Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
- I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
- It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
- We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
- Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
- "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
- Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
- Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug
[edit]- Ramakrishnan.babug (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I know the reason for rejecting my article?
Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455
[edit]regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD
[edit]Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
- Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
- Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so
is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.{{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}
- The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
- You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
December 27
[edit]03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.
Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Fuzzpumpkin Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany
[edit]- Al Gattany (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi
[edit]- Itsfaizanfaizi (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions in this thread explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)