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== 06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007 == |
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{{Lafc|username=MonkeyBanjo007|ts=06:41, 22 December 2024|draft=Conor McLeod}} |
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To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game. |
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Overly Sarcastic Productions deserves its own page as it is increasing in subscribers and has become a very widely-viewed channel in history youtube. |
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[[User:Venicestan|Venicestan]] ([[User talk:Venicestan|talk]]) 03:23, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:Notability|What you just said is completely irrelevant.]] No sources, no article, no exceptions. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Hasteur Hasteur Ha-- oh....]]</small></sup> 03:26, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person. |
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== 06:00:28, 1 October 2020 review of draft by Spmenon33 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Spmenon33|ts=06:00:28, 1 October 2020|draft=Draft:PayPoint_India}} |
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I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files. |
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Thanks- [[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] ([[User talk:MonkeyBanjo007|talk]]) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Can you shorten the timeline to publish my draft? also, is there a paid page online which can be locked against editing by unwanted elements? |
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:@[[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] see [[Help:Pictures]] for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources that [[WP:N|notability]] do. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 == |
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[[User:Spmenon33|Spmenon33]] ([[User talk:Spmenon33|talk]]) 06:00, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|ts=06:43, 22 December 2024|draft=He Is Younger Businessman}} |
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:(1) [[WP:Copyright violations|We do not accept text taken wholesale, or closely paraphrased, from another website.]] (2) [[WP:Protection policy|Protection is not for enforcing content.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Hasteur Hasteur Ha-- oh....]]</small></sup> 06:55, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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You Should Agree This Draft [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Link to the draft: [[Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar]] --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are [[WP:N|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Previously answered [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#12:14,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Bollysocialmedia|here]] (question posted by blocked user [[User:Bollysocialmedia]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#11:37,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Royaloaksschoolking|here]] (by [[User:Royaloaksschoolking]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_10#02:00,_10_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|here]]. |
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:See also: [[Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde]] about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2024 August 9#14:43, 9 August 2024 review of submission by 2402:8100:3106:E5B8:47DC:DA3A:BF3A:D9DA|this question]] as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account [[User:Shubhamxrameshwar564]]. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador == |
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{{Lafc|username=Batoenonghistoryador|ts=10:54, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Howard_Calleja_et.al_v._Anti-Terrorism_Council}} |
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{{anchor|07:35:50, 1 October 2020 review of submission by JaredsBios}} |
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Hello, |
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{{Lafc|username=JaredsBios|ts=07:35:50, 1 October 2020|declinedtalk=User:JaredsBios/sandbox}} |
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I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."? |
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Good Day Team, |
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I would like to find out further info as to why my article is being rejected? |
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If perhaps you could assist me with this info as to how i can possibility get it accepted? |
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I am busy writing a article about Mark Alpha Abrahams with references and links but i keep getting a message back saying its not from a reliable source. |
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Please can you explain what a reliable source would be? |
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Additionally, I have a few questions: |
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How does one qualify to have an article in Wikipedia? |
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Your assistance in this matter would be greatly appreciated |
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1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? |
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Best Regards |
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2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it? |
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Thank you so much for your guidance! |
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[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:Biographies of living persons|We are not interested]] in a rerun of the [[Wikipedia Seigenthaler biography incident|Seigenthaler incident]]. EVERY claim made in the draft MUST be cited to a [[WP:Reliable sources|credible secondary source]] that corroborates it. No exceptions. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Hasteur Hasteur Ha-- oh....]]</small></sup> 08:08, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]]: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title. |
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== 08:39:23, 1 October 2020 review of draft by Violeta Čapovska == |
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:You can cite online PDFs with the {{tl|cite web}} template. The <code>format=</code> parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. |
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{{Lafc|username=Violeta Čapovska|ts=08:39:23, 1 October 2020|draft=Draft:Ivan_Čapovski}} |
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:Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliably published sources]] say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all? |
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:As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been [[WP:RS|reliably published]] or not. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you so much for this informative response. [[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 == |
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Dear Wikipedia, I have created a new Wikipedia page about the Macedonian writer Ivan Čapovski. Wikipedia page in Macedonian already exists. My page is in a Draft form. Can I please ask for help from an experienced editor in the English wikipedia to review the Draft:Ivan Čapovski? Many thanks and kind regards, |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|ts=11:37, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}} |
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[[User:Violeta Čapovska|Violeta Čapovska]] ([[User talk:Violeta Čapovska|talk]]) 08:39, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|talk]]) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah okay. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Violeta Čapovska}}, {{Accepted}} The English is fine. I have flagged certain improvements that we need and left a comment on the new article's talk page [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 11:31, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Njames05|ts=16:10, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:University_of_Texas_Rugby_Club}} |
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{{anchor|09:12:48, 1 October 2020 review of submission by Clarealev}} |
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How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? [[User:Njames05|Nigel D James]] ([[User talk:Njames05|talk]]) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Clarealev|ts=09:12:48, 1 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Sano_Genetics}} |
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:@[[User:Njames05|Njames05]]: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hi there! I'm looking for some help with an article I've been working on, [[Draft:Sano Genetics]]. I've been through lots of rounds of edits and asked for help from multiple Wikipedia users to improve it but I'm still having no luck with it. I'd really appreciate some help of what I can do next, where I'm going wrong, and any other tips you may have! Thank you so much. (Sorry my original message didn't show for some reason, thanks for the pointer!) [[User:Clarealev|Clarealev]] ([[User talk:Clarealev|talk]]) 15:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should. |
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:One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say. |
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:You should also unbold the section headers. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|ts=16:59, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kinhola_BK}} |
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Check now [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|talk]]) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Clarealev|Clarealev]] ([[User talk:Clarealev|talk]]) 09:12, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Clarealev}}, Traditionally a help desk is a place where questions are asked and then answered. Perhaps we might start with your question, please? [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 11:32, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127 == |
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{{Lafc|username=LR.127|ts=17:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Rafael de Miguel González}} |
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This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion [[Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation/Archive 58#Draft:Rafael de Miguel Gonz%C3%A1lez declined 5 times.|here]] on the [[Rafael de Miguel González]] page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft. |
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I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed. |
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I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: [[User:Timtrent]], [[User:Joe Roe]], [[User:Benison]], [[User:Mr.choppers]], and [[User:asilvering]]. Cheers. [[User:LR.127|LR.127]] ([[User talk:LR.127|talk]]) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I made some changes in my submission on June 8, but it has not yet been reviewed. This seems like an unusually long time, do you know when it will be reviewed? Thanks. |
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:Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a [[WP:RFC|request for comment]]) or on the [[WP:HD|more general Help Desk]]. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Whintl|Whintl]] ([[User talk:Whintl|talk]]) 17:18, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Whintl}} You havent resubmitted the draft for review, so no one looked at it. The Resubmit button is in the first red box at the top .[[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 17:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, [[Rafael de Miguel González]] reads more like a CV than anything else. <span style="background:#ff0000;font-family:Times New Roman;">[[User:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">''' Mr.choppers | '''</span>]][[User talk:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">✎ </span>]]</span> 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 20:25:37, 1 October 2020 review of draft by EldenSelections == |
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:::{{tq|Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.}} Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=EldenSelections|ts=20:25:37, 1 October 2020|draft=User:EldenSelections/sandbox}} |
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== 18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1 == |
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I work for Elden Selections and we want to create a wikipedia page for our company. I took the content off of our website and cited it and it was rejected. I was wondering if wikipedia can just create us a page. If Elden Selections has to do it, can we use any of the content off of our website? Do I just have to source every sentence? |
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{{Lafc|username=Bentasyt.1|ts=18:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Lanksti_linija,_UAB}} |
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[[User:EldenSelections|EldenSelections]] ([[User talk:EldenSelections|talk]]) 20:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia [[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]] ([[User talk:Bentasyt.1|talk]]) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|EldenSelections}}, as I have told you on my talk page, We require references from ''significant'' coverage ''about'' the topic of the article, and ''independent'' of it, and ''in [[WP:RS]]'' please. See [[WP:42]]. Please also see [[WP:PRIMARY]] which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and [[WP:SELFPUB]] which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact referred to, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make any draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the topic is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. |
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:Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Reading the primary sources element will help you, as will the selfpub element |
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:Hello, @[[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Writing an article is the absolute hardest thing to attempt on Wikipedia. Writing a neutral article about your employer is even harder. Generally you will find that Wikipedia editors, almost all of whom are volunteers, will not do as a volunteer something you are being paid to do by your corporation. |
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:Very brief summary of writing an article: |
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:I have no idea why any corporation would even want a Wikipedia article about it. It is not 'your page' (see [[WP:OWN]]) and you have no control of any description over it. It is a true two edged sword [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 21:26, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:# Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See [[WP:42]] |
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:::Because [[Search engine optimization|Alexa ranking and preferential treatment]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Hasteur Hasteur Ha-- oh....]]</small></sup> 00:17, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:# If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else. |
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::{{u|EldenSelections}}, And, as you have seen, editors using Wikipedia for promotion find they are blocked for infringing that very solid rule. That happened between my starting and posting my reply to you here. |
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:# If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it. |
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::Should you choose to create a new account you '''must''' follow [[WP:PAID]] in all respects. This is an area where second chances are very few, and are exceptions, not a right [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 21:30, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sophisticatedevening|ts=19:35, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Emma_Howell_Knight}} |
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I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Fixed up for you [[User:Sophisticatedevening|Sophisticatedevening]]. Cheers [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks! [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:39, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Niharika Sahoo Nayak}}, Traditionally a help desk is a place where questions are asked and then answered. Perhaps we might start with your question, please? [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mariah Hopkins|ts=20:03, 22 December 2024|draft=Kokoa Amor}} |
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Why was the article declined [[User:Mariah Hopkins|Mariah Hopkins]] ([[User talk:Mariah Hopkins|talk]]) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{courtesy link|User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 22:23:53, 1 October 2020 review of submission by Niharika Sahoo Nayak == |
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:It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:notability|notability]] - see [[WP:42]]. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have [[WP:significant coverage|significant coverage]] of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited. |
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{{Lafc|username=NiharikasahoonayakNiharika Sahoo Nayak|ts=22:23:53, 1 October 2020|declined=User:Niharika_Sahoo_Nayak/sandbox}} |
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:{{HD/WINI}} |
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:Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as [[WP:disruptive editing|disruptive editing]]. |
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:My comments to another editor [[#18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1|above]] are equally applicable to your case. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 23 = |
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[[User:Niharika Sahoo Nayak|Niharika Sahoo Nayak]] ([[User talk:Niharika Sahoo Nayak|talk]]) 22:23, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Niharika Sahoo Nayak}}, once is enough to ask a question and to get answers. There is no need to duplicate a submission here. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:26, 1 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv == |
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= October 2 = |
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{{Lafc|username=Sonshiv|ts=06:08, 23 December 2024|draft=User:Sonshiv/sandbox}} |
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please upload my wikipedia |
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[[User:Sonshiv|Sonshiv]] ([[User talk:Sonshiv|talk]]) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 04:20:17, 2 October 2020 review of submission by Saroj k86 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Saroj k86|ts=04:20:17, 2 October 2020|declined=Draft:Sandeep_Pandit}} |
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== 06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE == |
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[[User:Saroj k86|Saroj k86]] ([[User talk:Saroj k86|talk]]) 04:20, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|ts=06:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Buladaco}} |
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:{{u|Saroj k86}}, Traditionally a help desk is a place where questions are asked and then answered. Perhaps we might start with your question, please? [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 07:38, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me [[Special:Contributions/2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE]] ([[User talk:2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|talk]]) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Saroj k86}}, I had not expected the question to be asked on my talk page, but I have given you advice there. |
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::Asking on one editor's talk page relies on their being online to give you an answer. Asking it here receives the wisdom of those who patrol this page who feel they have something to add [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 12:02, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Timtrent}}, Sorry, Thank you for your advice. |
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:Assuming you're {{u|Manasi32}}, please log into your account when editing. |
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== 04:35:52, 2 October 2020 review of submission by 2409:4073:312:DCF8:255C:D3C1:8204:38A3 == |
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:There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources. |
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:Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway. |
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:Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see [[WP:AUTOBIO]] for why you shouldn't. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Thanvi 032|ts=07:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi}} |
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Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: your draft [[Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi]] has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[Special:Contributions/2409:4073:312:DCF8:255C:D3C1:8204:38A3|2409:4073:312:DCF8:255C:D3C1:8204:38A3]] ([[User talk:2409:4073:312:DCF8:255C:D3C1:8204:38A3|talk]]) 04:35, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Thanvi 032}}, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of [[WP:V|Verifiability]], a core content policy. Please read and study [[WP:RS|Reliable sources]] and [[WP:REFBEGIN|Referencing for beginners]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{re|2409:4073:312:DCF8:255C:D3C1:8204:38A3}} This edit is the only edit from your IP. if you used an account to edit, please login before you ask your question. Othrwise, please indicate the draft you ask about, either as the [[URL]] or, if you manage to do it, a [[Help:Wikilinks|Wikilink]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt mobil|Victor Schmidt mobil]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt mobil|talk]]) 06:17, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you ''have'' made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Tropical Appreciater10001-400|ts=08:31, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Palame_State}} |
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Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Draft:Alina Padikkal |
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:You are wrong see [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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}}It shouldn't be rejected subject is so popular |
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:@[[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]]: not so; every article has to cite its sources. |
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:In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context. |
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::Thank you for your time and consideration. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::[[WP:USERGEN|User-generated content]], such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70 == |
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[[User:JJMhonest 2020|JJMhonest 2020]] ([[User talk:JJMhonest 2020|talk]]) 04:44, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=14.194.64.70|ts=10:43, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:A_Step-By-Step_Guide_on_Choosing_the_Perfect_Property_in_Chennai}} |
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:{{u|JJMhonest 2020}}, For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is ''about them'', and is ''independent of them'', and ''is in [[WP:RS]]'', and is ''significant coverage''. Please also see [[WP:PRIMARY]] which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and [[WP:SELFPUB]] which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 07:37, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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this is page information please live it. [[Special:Contributions/14.194.64.70|14.194.64.70]] ([[User talk:14.194.64.70|talk]]) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition == |
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{{Lafc|username=Pr.nutrition|ts=12:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Vladimir_Dadali}} |
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I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. [[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] ([[User talk:Pr.nutrition|talk]]) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher == |
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Good morning, |
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{{Lafc|username=FelixKerscher|ts=16:39, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Clinical Versus Statistical Prediction}} |
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Why was my submission declined? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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apparently my contribution cannot be published because there are not many references. However, there are no sources that I could indicate. The information in the article is first-hand, i.e. the person or institute has given it to me. |
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::It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You could also ask the reviewer {{u|CSMention269}} if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|FelixKerscher}} By commenting on [[User talk:CSMention269|their user talk page]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz == |
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So what can I do to make sure that the article is published anyway? |
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{{Lafc|username=Zraffarz|ts=19:05, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Surmesur}} |
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Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ? |
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I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments. |
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I thank you in advance. |
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Regards. [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Best regards, |
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:Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work. |
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::Regards [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? [[Draft:Surmesur]] |
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:::Much appreciated [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 == |
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Liz |
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{{Lafc|username=2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|ts=23:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sentinai}} |
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hey what exactly was wrong [[Special:Contributions/2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09]] ([[User talk:2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|talk]]) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what ''independent'' reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Liz Lambert|Liz Lambert]] ([[User talk:Liz Lambert|talk]]) 06:15, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Liz Lambert}}, For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is ''about them'', and is ''independent of them'', and ''is in [[WP:RS]]'', and is ''significant coverage''. Please also see [[WP:PRIMARY]] which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and [[WP:SELFPUB]] which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 07:36, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Liz Lambert}} do please take a good look at the specific [[WP:NACADEMIC|notability criteria for academics]] for further guidance. [[User:Dodger67|Roger (Dodger67)]] ([[User talk:Dodger67|talk]]) 19:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest == |
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{{Lafc|username=Nycrest|ts=00:17, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Venhue}} |
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Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I feel the draft is right. See once |
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:@[[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] "no promotion"? I don't see how {{tq|unorthodox approach to fine dining}}, {{tq|theatrical presentations}}, and {{tq|playful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions}} is neutral. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[Special:Contributions/223.189.184.250|223.189.184.250]] ([[User talk:223.189.184.250|talk]]) 13:37, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists? |
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::I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not seeing how this establishment meets [[WP:ORG]]- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212 == |
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:I have looked. I disagree. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 14:01, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Hedax212|ts=02:27, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Signatures, INC.}} |
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I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being {{tq|US patent number US4988065A}}, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see [[Help:Your first article]] first. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Unfortunately that means they are likely not [[WP:NORG|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Articles require ''significant coverage'' in ''reliable sources'' that are ''independent'' of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer == |
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{{Lafc|username=MarkDiBelloBiographer|ts=02:55, 24 December 2024|draft=Mark Anthony DiBello}} |
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Why it is written in english not in hindi <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jitendra Srivastava Kumar|Jitendra Srivastava Kumar]] ([[User talk:Jitendra Srivastava Kumar#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jitendra Srivastava Kumar|contribs]]) 14:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. [[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]] ([[User talk:MarkDiBelloBiographer|talk]]) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Jitendra Srivastava Kumar}} Hello and welcome to Wikipedia! We are writing in english here, because this is the english Wikipedia. If you are interested, a Wikipedia in hindi is available at [[:hi:|hi.wikipedia.org]] and it has currently a total of 55 articles. Since I assume this is about [[Draft:Kumar Jitendra]], I add [[WP:YFA|Help:Your first article]], a guideline for your first article. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 17:15, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:[[Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello]] [[User:Knitsey|<span style="color:DarkMagenta">Knitsey</span>]] ([[User talk:Knitsey|<span style="color: maroon">talk</span>]]) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Request on 18:34:49, 2 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Zjholder == |
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:@[[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]]: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image. |
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{{anchor|18:34:49, 2 October 2020 review of submission by Zjholder}} |
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:Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least. |
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{{Lafc|username=Zjholder|ts=18:34:49, 2 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:A-2_(Michigan_county_highway)}} |
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:On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18 == |
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Why My edit is declined? [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of [[WP:notability|notability]], not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view. |
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:What is your relationship with this school? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I am a Co Founder of this school. [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]. Writing a new article is '''much''' more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a [[WP:conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible. |
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:Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world ''except'' you and your colleagues. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242 == |
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:{{u|Zjholder}}, Traditionally a help desk is a place where questions are asked and then answered. Perhaps we might start with your question, please? [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 19:10, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article [[Special:Contributions/223.190.86.242|223.190.86.242]] ([[User talk:223.190.86.242|talk]]) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:NOTGUIDE|Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India]] and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. [[User:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:navy;">''cyberdog''</span><span style="color:orange;">'''958'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:teal;">Talk</span>]]</sup> 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 20:29:33, 2 October 2020 review of draft by Michfen == |
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{{Lafc|username=Michfen|ts=20:29:33, 2 October 2020|draft=Draft:Gregor_Ebner}} |
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== 08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju == |
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I have been battling with this problem for a while and have no idea how to fix it. When I view the Wiki page in Edit source, it looks perfect with all the references appearing under the heading References, where they should be. |
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{{Lafc|username=Sunuraju|ts=08:04, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hum_Dono_(2024_TV_series)}} |
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But when you Read it on the Wiki page, the references appear under External Links i.e. in the completely wrong place. Please help or advise how to fix this.[[User:Michfen|Michfen]] ([[User talk:Michfen|talk]]) 20:29, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? [[User:Sunuraju|Sunuraju]] ([[User talk:Sunuraju|talk]]) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji == |
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[[User:Michfen|Michfen]] ([[User talk:Michfen|talk]]) 20:29, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=JustBeenji|ts=10:27, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Henry_Stickmin}} |
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:{{u|Michfen}}, see [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft%3AGregor_Ebner&type=revision&diff=981525495&oldid=970184063 how it is cured] |
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I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:However it is more usual to place citations directly at the fact they are intended to verify [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 21:01, 2 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: you ''are'' an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia. |
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= October 3 = |
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:But no editor can magic [[WP:notability|notability]] out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::So do i have to create a new draft? [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: in a word, no. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It ''could'' be notable, as it does seem to be a popular ''series'' of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin ''is'', let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{ping|JustBeenji}} Popularity is fleeting, [[WP:N|notability]] is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell == |
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i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? [[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]] ([[User talk:SarahSamuell|talk]]) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:OBIAGELI2020|OBIAGELI2020]] ([[User talk:OBIAGELI2020|talk]]) 10:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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The article name with Helen obiageli should not be deleted,contest this speedy deletion because am writing about myself and no one knows me better than i do and i want to contribute to wikipedia so why are you discouraging me |
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:{{u|OBIAGELI2020}} Wikipedia is not a place for people to write about themselves, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. This is not social media, but an encyclopedia, and as an encyclopedia Wikipedia is only interested in what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about you, showing how you meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. Wikipedia has no interest in what people want to say about themselves. If you just want to tell the world about yourself and your career, you should use social media. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 11:05, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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==12:41:32, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Francisjk2020== |
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I have made all the changes as mentioned by the reviewers to improve the draft here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Massar_Solutions. The company belongs to the government of UAE and does that give it notability([[User:Francisjk2020|Francisjk2020]] ([[User talk:Francisjk2020|talk]]) 12:41, 3 October 2020 (UTC)) |
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:{{re|Francisjk2020}} no, belonging to a government is not a shortcut to get an article on Wikipedia. The meaning of "notability" in Wikipedia for companies is at [[WP:NCORP]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 12:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 13:53:13, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Elwati Elve == |
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{{Lafc|username=Elwati Elve|ts=13:53:13, 3 October 2020|declined=User:Elwati_Elve/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Elwati Elve|Elwati Elve]] ([[User talk:Elwati Elve|talk]]) 13:53, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Elwati Elve}} You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves or advance their music career; see [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]] for more information. Please use social media to spread the word about yourself. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:07, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 15:00:06, 3 October 2020 review of submission by 105.112.39.181 == |
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{{Lafc|username=105.112.39.181|ts=15:00:06, 3 October 2020|declined=Draft:Abba_Yusuf_Bichi_(Bichi_Jr)}} |
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[[Special:Contributions/105.112.39.181|105.112.39.181]] ([[User talk:105.112.39.181|talk]]) 15:00, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:Commonly, a Help desk is a place where you come when you have a specific question. May we start with your question please? [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 17:29, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 18:18:33, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Elwati Elve == |
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[[User:Elwati Elve|Elwati Elve]] ([[User talk:Elwati Elve|talk]]) 18:18, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Help me to correct my wikimedia common which is broked |
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== 18:29:11, 3 October 2020 review of draft by Ceefrop == |
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{{Lafc|username=Ceefrop|ts=18:29:11, 3 October 2020|draft=Draft:DFD_Music}} |
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Article got denied when it clearly meets the requirements. |
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Here's wikipedia's Notability requirements for music: |
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- Criteria for musicians and ensembles |
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2. Has had a single or album on any country's national music chart. |
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Suitable charts |
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A chart is normally considered suitable for inclusion if it meets both of the following characteristics: |
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It is published by a recognized reliable source. This includes any IFPI affiliate, Billboard magazine, or any organization with the support of Nielsen SoundScan. |
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DFD Music has charted on BILLBOARD multiple times. The sources are linked in the article. |
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They have always worked with major labels and signed artists. Another notability requirement which is linked. |
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[[User:Ceefrop|Ceefrop]] ([[User talk:Ceefrop|talk]]) 18:29, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{declined}} for the reasons explained on the draft. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 22:23, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 18:30:12, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Elwati Elve == |
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{{Lafc|username=Elwati Elve|ts=18:30:12, 3 October 2020|declined=User:Elwati_Elve/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Elwati Elve|Elwati Elve]] ([[User talk:Elwati Elve|talk]]) 18:30, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Elwati Elve}}, please stop spamming this request. It has no verification and "Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves or advance their music career; see [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]] for more information. Please use social media to spread the word about yourself" as stated by [[User:331dot|331dot]]. [[User:HeartGlow30797|'''<span style="color:red; text-shadow:#ffdf00 0.0em 0.0em 2.0em">Heart</span>''']] <sup><small>[[User talk:HeartGlow30797|''(talk)'']]</small></sup> 04:12, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Please help me to create this page |
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== 18:32:01, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Elwati Elve == |
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{{Lafc|username=Elwati Elve|ts=18:32:01, 3 October 2020|page=User:Elwati Elve/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Elwati Elve|Elwati Elve]] ([[User talk:Elwati Elve|talk]]) 18:32, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Please help me to create this page |
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:{{re|Elwati Elve}} this submission lacks any form of [[WP:V|verification]]. Therefore, it currently also fails [[WP:NARTIST]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 18:54, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 21:45:58, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Right cite == |
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{{Lafc|username=Right cite|ts=21:45:58, 3 October 2020|declined=Draft:The_Henry_Stickmin_Collection}} |
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Added more on release and reception, reviews of the game, coverage from news media, and more overall research. Could deserve another look. Thank you! |
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[[User:Right cite|Right cite]] ([[User talk:Right cite|talk]]) 21:45, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 23:32:08, 3 October 2020 review of submission by Sedimentary7 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sedimentary7|ts=23:32:08, 3 October 2020|page= |
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Draft: Lily Cox-Richard |
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I recieved a message saying this artist does not meet the notability requirements. I have seen other start-class articles where artists have recieved the same amount of recognition. Since this is my first article, I would love to have pin-pointed feedback. Could I have more clarification on why this artist does not meet the requirements? |
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[[User:Sedimentary7|Sedimentary7]] ([[User talk:Sedimentary7|talk]]) 23:32, 3 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Sedimentary7}} Please note that each draft or article is judged on its own merits, and that the existence of other similar articles does not mean yours can exist too. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible to get inappropriate articles by us. |
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:For this artist to merit an article, you must show with significant coverage in independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that they meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:NARTIST|a notable artist]]. Most of the sources you provided merely confirm the existence of her work or points in her career. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:32, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 03:58:02, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Mustafa Divinatory == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mustafa Divinatory|ts=03:58:02, 4 October 2020|declined=User:Mustafa_Divinatory/sandbox}} |
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Hi, |
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Can you please advise are there any mistakes in the submitted draft? Also, please guide me on how may I alter this draft so that it may not look like an advertisement as pointed out by the reviewer. |
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Thanks |
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[[User:Mustafa Divinatory|Mustafa Divinatory]] ([[User talk:Mustafa Divinatory|talk]]) 03:58, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Mustafa Divinatory}}, at a brief glance, it looks like it look [[WP:PROMOTION]]. If you can provide facts backed up my sources that present [[WP:NPOV|a neutral point of view]] it will clear up that issue. I am also worried about [[WP:NOTABILITY]] as a quick search for it in the news does not yield anything other than job listings and the official website. My last concern is your username implies that you are involved in the company, if you could, could you disclose whether or not you are involved in the company? [[User:HeartGlow30797|'''<span style="color:red; text-shadow:#ffdf00 0.0em 0.0em 2.0em">Heart</span>''']] <sup><small>[[User talk:HeartGlow30797|''(talk)'']]</small></sup> 04:05, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== Request on 10:55:04, 4 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by 2409:4070:897:5824:7237:1F32:6D94:A100 == |
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{{anchor|10:55:04, 4 October 2020 review of submission by 2409:4070:897:5824:7237:1F32:6D94:A100}} |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:4070:897:5824:7237:1F32:6D94:A100|ts=10:55:04, 4 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Rinson_Simon}} |
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:You don't ask a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:56, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 12:12:04, 4 October 2020 review of submission by 139.5.253.223 == |
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{{Lafc|username=139.5.253.223|ts=12:12:04, 4 October 2020|declined=User:Sanjeevsharma1967/sandbox}} |
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[[Special:Contributions/139.5.253.223|139.5.253.223]] ([[User talk:139.5.253.223|talk]]) 12:12, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:If you are Sanjeevsharma1967, remember to log in before posting. You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:23, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 13:14:02, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Geoffstokes == |
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{{Lafc|username=Geoffstokes|ts=13:14:02, 4 October 2020|page= |
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Birmingham Wasps Hockey Club |
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I have had lots of feedback telling me why my page has been rejected but none of them reference my comments on my talk page. its a page about a small topic (a now defunct field hockey club) so will have limited external references but does this mean that Wikipedia is only for large topics or organisations? I have seen (and referenced in my talk page) other pages with fewer links. |
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I was connected with the club (who else would be bothered enough to write about it?) but don't understand why that makes the entry invalid. |
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I would really like to get my page published and would be grateful for any advice. |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Birmingham_Wasps_Hockey_Club |
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[[User:Geoffstokes|Geoffstokes]] ([[User talk:Geoffstokes|talk]]) 13:14, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Geoffstokes}}, The real answer is solely to do with notability. If you can assert and verify notability then you are onto a winner. |
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:We require references from ''significant'' coverage ''about'' the topic of the article, and ''independent'' of it, and ''in [[WP:RS]]'' please. See [[WP:42]]. Please also see [[WP:PRIMARY]] which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and [[WP:SELFPUB]] which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact referred to, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the topic is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 13:50, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Geoffstokes}}, Our role as reviewers is to seek to ensure that an article will not immediately be subject to one of our deletion processes when it is accepted. That is why we push it back to the author. We want to accept articles. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 13:52, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 14:33:46, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Yairc22-Pro == |
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{{Lafc|username=Yairc22-Pro|ts=14:33:46, 4 October 2020|declined=Draft:ProMe-_Online_Shopping}} |
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Hello, I did not understand why it was removed I have been working on it for a long time and I want it to stay. |
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Do you think this is advertising? And if so then what can I edit or remove that will be approved? |
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thank you and have a nice day! |
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[[User:Yairc22-Pro|Yairc22-Pro]] ([[User talk:Yairc22-Pro|talk]]) 14:33, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== Request on 16:43:13, 4 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Holcman1 == |
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{{anchor|16:43:13, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Holcman1}} |
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{{Lafc|username=Holcman1|ts=16:43:13, 4 October 2020|declinedtalk=User_talk:Holcman1}} |
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1-As the owner, I am giving right to Wikipedia |
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2-I have made substantial changes,so that the article contains much more material compared to the arXiv articles. |
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What do I need to tdo to access my draft? |
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David. |
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:This has been answered at [[User talk:Holcman1#Help me!]]. Holcman1, please dont ask the same question in multiple places. It wastes the time of everone attempting to respond to you. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 17:09, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 21:10:15, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Suraj0791 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Suraj0791|ts=21:10:15, 4 October 2020|declined=User:Suraj0791/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Suraj0791|Suraj0791]] ([[User talk:Suraj0791|talk]]) 21:10, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:I'm afraid that like most of us, you are not [[WP:GNG|notable]] in Wikipedia terms, so we cannot have an article about you, your draft had zero acceptable reliable independent sources and the content was in any case inappropriate, sorry to disappoint you. Try social media. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 21:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Suraj0791}}, there is nothing about this person to suggest that he passes [[WP:GNG]], so it has been rejected. I am using the telepathy interface 1.09.3b to examine your intent in posting with no actual question asked [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 21:14, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 22:46:04, 4 October 2020 review of submission by Astro1995 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Astro1995|ts=22:46:04, 4 October 2020|declined=Draft:Jonn_Poker_(Internet_Personality)}} |
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Hi, I would like to know why this page was considered not notable as I have added sources to prove that the subject is notable, I have seen multiple pages on wikipedia that very little references and are up and live on the site. please explain, if you still believe my page should be deleted, then go ahead, but I would like an explanation. Thank you |
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[[User:Astro1995|Astro1995]] ([[User talk:Astro1995|talk]]) 22:46, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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the page represents an actual notable artist, and I have included a few references to prove so. I, before proceeding with the creation of the article, have done some research and noticed that multiple people are on wikipedia with very little references and are still up on the site or have been approved. So please explain why this is any different. I can provide links of these other wikipedia articles. Thank You |
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[[User:Astro1995|Astro1995]] ([[User talk:Astro1995|talk]]) 22:59, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Astro1995}} Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Other poor articles existing does not automatically mean yours can too. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible to get inappropriate articles by us. This is why each article is judged on its own merits. Feel free to point out these other articles so they can be addressed, we can use the help. |
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:Your draft was only sourced to sources related to the person; Wikipedia articles should summarize only what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] completely unconnected with the subject have chosen on their own to say about it, with significant coverage, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. Your draft also had much promotional language("a passion for acting", which is impossible to independently verify) which is inappropriate for an encyclopedia article. Please read [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]] for more information. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:12, 4 October 2020 (UTC) |
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= October 5 = |
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== 07:30:43, 5 October 2020 review of submission by Baolovesmochi == |
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{{Lafc|username=Baolovesmochi|ts=07:30:43, 5 October 2020|page= |
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{{Lafc|username=Baolovesmochi|ts=07:30:43, 5 October 2020|link= |
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[[Draft:AAAtrade]] -->}} |
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Hello, |
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I have submitted several edits of the AAAtrade page and I am not sure which content I need to remove to ensure that the page is not considered promotional. If you could point out what needs to be removed I would greatly appreciate it. |
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Kind Regards [[User:Baolovesmochi|Baolovesmochi]] ([[User talk:Baolovesmochi|talk]]) 07:30, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See [[WP:N]]) which in most cases requires significant coverage ([[WP:SIGCOV]]) in multiple independent ([[WP:INDY]]) reliable sources ([[WP:RS]]). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see [[WP:NSCHOOL]] and [[WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES]]. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Baolovesmochi|Baolovesmochi]] ([[User talk:Baolovesmochi|talk]]) 07:30, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]]. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 [[#06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18|above]], most of which applies to you as well. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Baolovesmochi}} Wikipedia is not for merely telling about a subject. Your draft merely tells about the company, and is only sourced to things confirming the specific factual information in the article. Wikipedia articles must do more, they must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] '''with significant coverage''' have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]]. Wikipedia is not interested in what an organization wants to say about itself, only in what others completely unaffiliated with the organization choose to say about it. "Significant coverage" does not include press releases, the company website, staff interviews, announcements of routine business transactions, brief mentions, or other [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]]. In essence, you need to forget everything you know about your organization and only write based on the content of independent sources with significant coverage. If no such sources exist, your company will not merit an article at this time. Not every company does, even within the same field. Please see [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]] for more information. |
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:In addition to what has already been said, there are ''serious'' problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at [[WP:NFC]]. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I see you declared as a paid editor- feel free to show your superiors this message. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:22, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore == |
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{{Lafc|username=WikiBaltimore|ts=14:09, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Turner_Development}} |
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Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission..... |
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"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater." |
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Hey, we at the Institute for Social ecology were wondering if we could get some tips or pointers as to how we could improve the article since it seems fairly devoid of "peacock terms" & was written by one of Bookchin's editors in a style similar to that used for other political entries. Any insights would be greatly appreciated! Thanks! |
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[[User:Phohammer|Phohammer]] ([[User talk:Phohammer|talk]]) 08:46, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Phohammer}} Please note that only a single person should have access to and be operating your account. You will also need to review [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] and [[WP:PAID|paid editing]] for information on formal disclosures you may be required to make. Most of what was written seems to be [[WP:OR|original research]] which is not permitted on Wikipedia. A Wikipedia article should only be summarizing what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] state about the topic, and should not be drawing conclusions. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:54, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit. |
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== 11:41:07, 5 October 2020 review of submission by Greenock1998 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Greenock1998|ts=11:41:07, 5 October 2020|page= |
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For example, [[Silo Point]] is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past. |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ardmaleish_boatbuilding_company_(2) Ardmaleish boatbuilding company |
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Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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the article I wrote about Ardmaleish boatbuilding company the last shipyard to the Scottish island of Bute was rejected for ( not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia ) by Salimfadhley who lives in London in England and is of Arab descent, has rejected my article on part of Scottish shipbuilding history I find this very offensive I wish for a ethically Scottish person to review my article some who should under stand the importance of shipbuilding in Scottish history , I was say this again I find this very offensive that my article was rejected for ( not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia ) by some I believe who does not understand Scottish history . |
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:@[[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]]: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see [[WP:YESPROMO]]), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for [[WP:REFBOMBING]] purposes. |
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thank you your time. |
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:Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The references are about the ''projects'' Turner Development has been involved in, not, ''about'' Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "''specializes'' in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's [[WP:OR]]. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Well said, thank you for the feedback [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez == |
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{{Lafc|username=Juanestebanfernandez|ts=14:21, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Juanestebanfernandez/sandbox}} |
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I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. [[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]] ([[User talk:Juanestebanfernandez|talk]]) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]]: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources. |
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when there are other article about other shipyards that have not been rejected |
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:Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like [[Language interpretation]]. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder == |
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here are 25 article on other British shipyards that were not rejected for being ( not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia ) |
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{{Lafc|username=CerebralPathfinder|ts=21:23, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:dogAdvisor}} |
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Why has my article been denied? |
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I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|CerebralPathfinder}} I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::ah yes just seen! thank you [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. |
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:If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see [[WP:PAID]], as well as [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 25 = |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ferguson_Marine |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scotts_Shipbuilding_and_Engineering_Company |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parkol_Marine_Engineering |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hall,_Russell_%26_Company |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Richard_Dunston |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J_W_Miller_%26_Sons |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/McTay_Marine |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herd_%26_McKenzie_Shipbuilders |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Appledore_Shipbuilders |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ailsa_Shipbuilding_Company |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swan_Hunter |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yarrow_Shipbuilders_Limited |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/British_Shipbuilders |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/VT_Group |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scott_Lithgow |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vickers_Shipbuilding_and_Engineering |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A%26P_Group |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brooke_Marine |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cammell_Laird |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clelands_Shipbuilding_Company |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Govan_Shipbuilders |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blackwall_Yard |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henry_Robb |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smith%27s_Dock_Company |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_Doxford_%26_Sons |
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[[User:Greenock1998|Greenock1998]] ([[User talk:Greenock1998|talk]]) 11:41, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:I have roughely checked some of them. All that I looked at seems to meet [[WP:NCORP]] respectively [[WP:NPERSON]] for persons. If you want me to have a detailed and explained look at one or two of them, tell me which and I can see... [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 12:44, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Greenock1998}}, Seriously, this is racist. All Wikipedia editors are equal. Reviewers review based upon the cotent of the draft before them. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:43, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::{{U|Greenock1998}} I have raised this matter on your talk page [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 23:37, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS == |
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{{Lafc|username=NOMAN ABBASS|ts=05:21, 25 December 2024|draft=Above Ground Pool Removal Cost - Average Prices in 2025}} |
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I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me [[User:NOMAN ABBASS|NOMAN ABBASS]] ([[User talk:NOMAN ABBASS|talk]]) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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This is my first submission, I made a first draft and I think I followed the NPOV rules, but it seems I didn't. Can anyone help me understand which points are non-neutral and/or look like advertisement? |
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[[User:Zimne|Zimne]] ([[User talk:Zimne|talk]]) 14:44, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Zimne}}, the best person to ask is the reviewer who declined it. All of us who review must be able to explain our rationale when asked [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:41, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|NOMAN ABBASS}} [[WP:NOT#HOWTO|We do not accept guides.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 15:31:59, 5 October 2020 review of draft by Westfield1800 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Westfield1800|ts=15:31:59, 5 October 2020|draft=Draft:Marcus_Hayes}} |
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== 06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Anonymous 21710|ts=06:02, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sree_Udhyan_.M}} |
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can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article. |
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[[User:Anonymous 21710|Anonymous 21710]] ([[User talk:Anonymous 21710|talk]]) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Anonymous21710}} Not only is this draft [[WP:SPAM|blatantly promotional]] and [[WP:BLP|entirely unsourced]], the subject is a [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|''minor'']] and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Westfield1800|Westfield1800]] ([[User talk:Westfield1800|talk]]) 15:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Westfield1800}} You don't ask a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:58, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence == |
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{{Lafc|username=NakiwugeFlorence|ts=08:29, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Waya_Boy}} |
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What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hi, I edited this page and am requesting a re-review. The reason it was rejected was the it does not appear to be notable. The user left the note "The article is about a temporary video store which appears to be no longer open. At the time it received some coverage in blogs and independent media, but no significant coverage in reliable secondary sources. It does not appear to be notable." However, from this note, it would appear that the user did not even read the page.. The video store was a temporary exhibition, yes, but it makes up maybe 5% of the page's total content. e-flux is not a "temporary video store"; it is an arts institution with a robust platform and a significant spot in the contemporary art world. I am requesting a re-review on the basis that the rejection was unfounded. I've spent the past 6 months editing this page after it initially was taken down because a user flagged it as an advertisement. Since then, I have changed approximate 75% of the wording of the initial page. My investment in this page is that I am a student who has relied on e-flux sources for many years, and I want this wikipedia resource to be available to other people within the arts community. Thanks. |
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[[User:Hallieedit|Hallieedit]] ([[User talk:Hallieedit|talk]]) 17:16, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been rejected, not just declined, meaning that it will not be considered further. You may ask the reviewer if they read the entirety of the draft. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:28, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general [[WP:GNG]] or the special [[WP:MUSICBIO]] guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 20:11:35, 5 October 2020 review of draft by Thesocialmatters == |
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::Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Thesocialmatters|ts=20:11:35, 5 October 2020|draft=Draft:Tejaswani_Behera}} |
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:::@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement == |
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{{Lafc|username=KimJongUnsBasement|ts=13:27, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Pau_Quesada}} |
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It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Thesocialmatters|Thesocialmatters]] ([[User talk:Thesocialmatters|talk]]) 20:11, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Thesocialmatters}} You haven't asked a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:26, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]]: footballers have to demonstrate notability per [[WP:GNG]], which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none. |
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== 21:22:49, 5 October 2020 review of submission by Jamesinhere == |
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:What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Jamesinhere|ts=21:22:49, 5 October 2020|page=Draft:Certified_Professional_Coder |
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:{{u|KimJonUnsBasement}} Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for [[WP:AFD|a deletion discussion]]. |
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:As for other articles, see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2.190.166.198|ts=14:00, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SOBI}} |
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this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article [[Special:Contributions/2.190.166.198|2.190.166.198]] ([[User talk:2.190.166.198|talk]]) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I have created draft article, pending review. Need help with template selection. This page is about a kind of certification examination done in the United states to be licensed as a medical coder/Clinical Coder and want to know if I need to use any specific template type in it. |
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== 14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso == |
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[[User:Jamesinhere|Jamesinhere]] ([[User talk:Jamesinhere|talk]]) 21:22, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Amjsso|ts=14:01, 25 December 2024|draft=User:Amjsso/sandbox}} |
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:{{u|Jamesinhere}}, generally these things take care of themselves once an article is accepted because other editors jump in. in the search box start typing ''Template:infobox'' and see what it brings up as suggested templates. I haven't checked, but there is likely to be a useful one there [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:38, 5 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I just wanted to create a politician page [[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]] ([[User talk:Amjsso|talk]]) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]], have you read the policy at [[WP:VERIFY]]? Everything on Wikipedia ''must'' have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18 == |
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= October 6 = |
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{{Lafc|username=Sanjaygowda18|ts=18:44, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SANJAY_GOWDA_S_G}} |
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My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 01:23:34, 6 October 2020 review of submission by 41.202.241.36 == |
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::Please [[Wikipedia:Spam|don't write spam]] on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit [[Help:Your first article]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=41.202.241.36|ts=01:23:34, 6 October 2020|declined=Draft:Kiirya_Beats}} |
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== 23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud == |
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[[Special:Contributions/41.202.241.36|41.202.241.36]] ([[User talk:41.202.241.36|talk]]) 01:23, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=AngelicaMonsalud|ts=23:20, 25 December 2024|draft=User:AngelicaMonsalud/sandbox}} |
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:You don't ask a question, but the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:25, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? [[User:AngelicaMonsalud|AngelicaMonsalud]] ([[User talk:AngelicaMonsalud|talk]]) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:22:24, 6 October 2020 review of submission by WikiSantashines == |
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{{Lafc|username=WikiSantashines|ts=08:22:24, 6 October 2020|page= |
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Hello it has been months since i have submitted my article for review. When will it get reviewed? I have corrected everything. |
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[[User:WikiSantashines|WikiSantashines]] ([[User talk:WikiSantashines|talk]]) 08:22, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|WikiSantashines}} As noted in the box on your draft, "This may take 2 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 3,622 pending submissions waiting for review." There are a limited number of editors that review drafts, and reviews are conducted in no particular order. You will need to continue to be patient. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:25, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23 == |
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My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. [[Special:Contributions/117.254.37.23|117.254.37.23]] ([[User talk:117.254.37.23|talk]]) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Pretty notable I think |
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[[Special:Contributions/64.222.180.90|64.222.180.90]] ([[User talk:64.222.180.90|talk]]) 13:01, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:Firstly, if you're {{u|Ssaisushanth45}}, please log into your account whenever editing. |
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:Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing). |
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:I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts? |
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:It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any. |
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:We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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:As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a [[WP:deadline|deadline]]. |
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:Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: [[WP:BOSS]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this |
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::: "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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::: As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us." |
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::: Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me. |
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::[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]] ([[User talk:Ssaisushanth45|talk]]) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]]: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. ''When'' you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug == |
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{{Lafc|username=Ramakrishnan.babug|ts=06:47, 26 December 2024|draft=Babu Ramakrishnan.G}} |
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May I know the reason for rejecting my article? |
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I am requesting a re review because the earlier user had added many a non essential and incorrect citations due to which the review got cancelled. I desired to start it fresh from scratch and have given many notable links to the person. Will be highly obliged if it is re reviewed. |
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[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] ([[User talk:Ramakrishnan.babug|talk]]) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] Wikipedia is not for [[WP:PROMO|self-promotion]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Rav Ktoch}}, I'm afraid the gentleman as written fails [[WP:GNG]] and the references do nothing whatsoever to aid your case. |
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:For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is ''about them'', and is ''independent of them'', and ''is in [[WP:RS]]'', and is ''significant coverage''. Please also see [[WP:PRIMARY]] which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and [[WP:SELFPUB]] which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 13:21, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Shaurya4455|ts=15:22, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shaurya 2}} |
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regarding to uploading a new page or Article |
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Prior_Park_School_Gibraltar |
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i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it [[User:Shaurya4455|Shaurya4455]] ([[User talk:Shaurya4455|talk]]) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at [[WP:GNG]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Shaurya4455}} (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD == |
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Im not sure why my creation was declined again. i added some references |
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{{Lafc|username=CorosanD|ts=19:25, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:Michail_Boiadjiev_(Михаил_Бояджиев)}} |
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Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. [[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]] ([[User talk:CorosanD|talk]]) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{yo|CorosanD}} That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]]. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft [[WP:BACKWARDS|BACKWARDS]], starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is ''only'' interested in what reliable published sources say. |
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:Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see [[WP:42]]. |
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:Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{tl|ill}}: so <code>{{tlx|ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}</code> is displayed as {{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}} - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it. |
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:The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the [[:C:COM:Threshold of originality|COM:Threshold of originality]], and so is in the public domain). |
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:You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see [[WP:image use policy|image use policy]]. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 27 = |
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[[User:Earth777|Earth777]] ([[User talk:Earth777|talk]]) 17:23, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=03:24, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office_Hours_Live}} |
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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved. |
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Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Glammazon|Glammazon]] ([[User talk:Glammazon|talk]]) 18:51, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I've been going through some of my old entries,and have corrected the references on this one. Why are they now at the bottom of the page? [[User:Glammazon|Glammazon]] ([[User talk:Glammazon|talk]]) 18:51, 6 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany == |
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{{Lafc|username=Al Gattany|ts=08:01, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Mohammad_Hossain}} |
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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi == |
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Hi and thanks in advance for your help. I have been working on a page for Johnny Rotella, the musician and songwriter. I added citations as requested, however when I tried to submit the page for review with tags (songs, composer, biography), I was unable to enter a draft title. I discovered there seems to be a page already approved about Johnny Rotella on the German Wikipedia, so I'm not sure if I should be trying to update there (I'm not fluent in German), or if it makes sense for me to continue creating the new page. |
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{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=12:42, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}} |
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Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. |
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I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions ''in this thread'' explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Jrt1234|Jrt1234]] ([[User talk:Jrt1234|talk]]) 00:38, 7 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::I addressed the '''peacock prose''' by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[edit]03:00, 21 December 2024 review of submission by MajorbucksYT
[edit]- MajorbucksYT (talk · contribs) (TB)
Are corp.roblox.com, kristolex.com, ginx.tv, dilt.co or Roblox dev forum reliable sources?
Roblox dev forum only allows a select amount of people post, not everyone.
MajorbucksYT (talk) 03:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MajorbucksYT: How many people are allowed to post is irrelevant. What matters is if they have an editorial staff that fact-checks, issues retractions, etc. And by default BBSes do not have those. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 09:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
08:46, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Vishalarya1
[edit]Please reload page Vishalarya1 (talk) 08:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not social media for people to tell about themselves or post their resume. Please use actual social media to do that. Writing about yourself is highly discouraged, please see the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 09:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
09:09, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Spworld2
[edit]I have been requesting to move this article to the main space for many months and have not received a proper result from the admins. The article is developed based on the available information and the sources are notable Spworld2 (talk) 09:09, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reviewers are not just admins. The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to post essays. 331dot (talk) 09:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
15:25, 21 December 2024 review of submission by JaredWEngland
[edit]- JaredWEngland (talk · contribs) (TB)
Greetings. I'm trying to establish a new page, but am unsure how to adequately address the comments provided to my first draft. I added several additional references, but am not sure that will be adequate. In short, I'm trying address some confusion with the hierarchy of existing Wikipedia articles. There are articles about Air Station Elizabeth City and the Elizabeth City Regional Airport. However, these are just two of several Base Elizabeth City tenants. My goal is to create a Base page to clarify the structure, better communicate what's at the campus, and provide a framework that will enable better information moving forward. Without a Base page, there isn't a location for this information to be built. Contributing to the challenge, the general pubic is largely unclear of the differing functions on the Base, so external references I can cite often have embedded in them the very confusion that I'm trying to address with this article. I know I cannot cite myself, but I'm a career Coast Guard officer who has worked on the Base at high levels. I'm seeking to address a problem I've seen both in the community here, and to a lesser degree within the Coast Guard itself. Especially for new members transferring to Elizabeth City, it is difficult to understand the makeup of the location. My hope is that this new page can become a repository for useful information to address these concerns, but it must exist first. Thanks for any help or guidance you can provide. JaredWEngland (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- The purposes you outline above are no doubt very laudable, but they are not what we do at Wikipedia. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what reliable indpendent sources say about a notable topic, and very little else. "A base page to clarify the structure" doesn't sound like that - it sounds more like original research, which is not permitted in Wikipedia articles. ColinFine (talk) 18:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: All but the articles on Ketchikan and Cape Cod predate the drafting process entirely, and those two predate drafting being made all-but mandatory. They did not go thru the same process as your draft has to. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Beware of the other stuff exists argument. Those other articles could themselves be inappropriate and just not addressed yet by volunteers.
- A draft article does not need to be complete, but it does need to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the base. If you have a source for the claim that it generates 50% of the GDP for part of North Carolina, that's a start. 331dot (talk) 18:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've edited again and resubmitted. Unfortunately, many of the sources for information I have aren't available on the internet, so citing them isn't possible. The most recent adds & references what I was able to find in existing sources.
- Taking a step back, I understand the need for a draft/review process but this feels excessive. I've put a fair amount of time into this (creating a page and learning all the rules/software/formatting/ect has a steep learning curve) for what still may be 100% waste effort. I'm afraid that most people will give up much quicker, and Wikipedia will devolve to the major mainstream dated info model that the now defunct encyclopedias of yore used. In the balance between the unconstrained free for all of the early wiki days and absolute odious control of a rigorous academic reference, this feels too much like the latter. However, I'm an infrequent Wikipedia contributor and light financial backer, so my opinion is likely of low value. Volunteers are the magic of Wikipedia, and that's mostly you. Even though this has been frustrating, thanks for what you do! JaredWEngland (talk) 20:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: You can still cite - and we can still accept - offline sources, as long as they are cited properly. If we disallowed offline sources, we'd basically have to decimate every article on historical events and figures that we have. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:14, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello again @JaredWEngland. Neither the number of people who work there nor the revenue it generates is necessarily indicative of meeting Wikipedia's criteria for notability. Meeting those criteria is the absolute first stage of creating an article, because otherwise the article is not going to get accepted. ColinFine (talk) 19:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sources do not need to be online, they only need to be publicly available; books/magazines in a library are fine.. 331dot (talk) 22:20, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
15:41, 21 December 2024 review of submission by ProofandTrust
[edit]- ProofandTrust (talk · contribs) (TB)
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you for your feedback on my submission. I’ve carefully reviewed your explanation but still find it unclear why my article was not accepted. I noticed that Wikipedia currently lacks a dedicated definition of Vendor Risk Assessment, a fundamental concept in information security. My goal is to provide an encyclopedic explanation of this widely used term to inform readers about its importance and relevance. Your feedback mentioned that the article resembles an essay. However, I intended it to be a neutral, fact-based description aligned with Wikipedia’s standards. If there are specific sections or phrases that need revision to make it more suitable, I’d appreciate detailed guidance. I’m committed to improving the article to meet Wikipedia's guidelines and would greatly value further clarification to ensure it aligns with community standards.
Thank you for your time and assistance. ProofandTrust (talk) 15:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @ProofandTrust. Your draft is a blog-post style essay/how to guide/critique. That's not what an encyclopaedic entry on Wikipedia about a subject should look like. Instead, you should be paraphrasing reliable published sources (not blog posts, which most of your sources are) in a dry, factual manner using the Wikipedia Voice. I am afraid you will have to completely re-write your draft from scratch and find new sources for there to be any chance of it being accepted. qcne (talk) 16:36, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
17:07, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Wilfred Day
[edit]- Wilfred Day (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am surprised this is not in place. It is highly relevant since the government will fall on the next confidence vote. What is wikipedia waiting for? Wilfred Day (talk) 17:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia, being an encyclopaedia and not a news organ, is waiting until there is substantial independent coverage of the subject in reliable sources. I suspect that by the time there are adequate sources for such an article, the election will already have taken place, so there will be no need for this article. But I know nothing of Canadian politics.
- See also there is no deadline. ColinFine (talk) 18:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- There are no certainties in life. We don't assume something might happen, no matter how likely it is. 331dot (talk) 23:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
December 22
[edit]06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007
[edit]To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game.
I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person.
I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files.
Thanks- MonkeyBanjo007 (talk) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MonkeyBanjo007 see Help:Pictures for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple independent reliable sources that notability do. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0
[edit]You Should Agree This Draft 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Link to the draft: Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar --bonadea contributions talk 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Previously answered here (question posted by blocked user User:Bollysocialmedia) and here (by User:Royaloaksschoolking) and here.
- See also: Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and this question as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account User:Shubhamxrameshwar564. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --bonadea contributions talk 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador
[edit]- Batoenonghistoryador (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello,
I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."?
Additionally, I have a few questions:
1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? 2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it?
Thank you so much for your guidance!
Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Batoenonghistoryador: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title.
- You can cite online PDFs with the {{cite web}} template. The
format=
parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. - Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliably published sources say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all?
- As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been reliably published or not. ColinFine (talk) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for this informative response. Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566
[edit]HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 (talk) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah okay. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05
[edit]How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? Nigel D James (talk) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Njames05: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should.
- One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say.
- You should also unbold the section headers. ColinFine (talk) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B
[edit]Check now 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B (talk) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. 331dot (talk) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127
[edit]This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion here on the Rafael de Miguel González page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft.
I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed.
I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: User:Timtrent, User:Joe Roe, User:Benison, User:Mr.choppers, and User:asilvering. Cheers. LR.127 (talk) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a request for comment) or on the more general Help Desk. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.
Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- asilvering (talk) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1
[edit]- Bentasyt.1 (talk · contribs) (TB)
what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia Bentasyt.1 (talk) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. 331dot (talk) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Bentasyt.1. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Very brief summary of writing an article:
- Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See WP:42
- If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else.
- If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it.
- ColinFine (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening
[edit]- Sophisticatedevening (talk · contribs) (TB)
I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. Sophisticatedevening (talk) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed up for you Sophisticatedevening. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins
[edit]Why was the article declined Mariah Hopkins (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Courtesy link: User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox ColinFine (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for notability - see WP:42. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have significant coverage of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited.
- Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources.
- Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as disruptive editing.
- My comments to another editor above are equally applicable to your case. ColinFine (talk) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
December 23
[edit]06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv
[edit]please upload my wikipedia
Sonshiv (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE
[edit]i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE (talk) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assuming you're Manasi32, please log into your account when editing.
- There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources.
- Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway.
- Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see WP:AUTOBIO for why you shouldn't. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032
[edit]- Thanvi 032 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. Thanvi 032 (talk) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: your draft Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanvi 032, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of Verifiability, a core content policy. Please read and study Reliable sources and Referencing for beginners. Cullen328 (talk) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. Thanvi 032 (talk) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you have made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400
[edit]Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You are wrong see Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. Theroadislong (talk) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Tropical Appreciater10001-400: not so; every article has to cite its sources.
- In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context.
- Thank you for your time and consideration. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. 331dot (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- User-generated content, such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70
[edit]- 14.194.64.70 (talk · contribs) (TB)
this is page information please live it. 14.194.64.70 (talk) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition
[edit]- Pr.nutrition (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. Pr.nutrition (talk) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pr.nutrition Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher
[edit]- FelixKerscher (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why was my submission declined? FelixKerscher (talk) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You could also ask the reviewer CSMention269 if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. KylieTastic (talk) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher: By commenting on their user talk page. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz
[edit]Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ?
I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments.
Regards. Zraffarz (talk) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. Theroadislong (talk) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work.
- Regards Zraffarz (talk) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? Draft:Surmesur
- Much appreciated Zraffarz (talk) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09
[edit]hey what exactly was wrong 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 (talk) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. ColinFine (talk) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 24
[edit]00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest
[edit]Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) Nycrest (talk) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nycrest "no promotion"? I don't see how
unorthodox approach to fine dining
,theatrical presentations
, andplayful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions
is neutral. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists?
- I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. Nycrest (talk) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing how this establishment meets WP:ORG- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. 331dot (talk) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212
[edit]I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. Hedax212 (talk) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hedax212 to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being
US patent number US4988065A
, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see Help:Your first article first. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer
[edit]- MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk · contribs) (TB)
Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello Knitsey (talk) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MarkDiBelloBiographer: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image.
- Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least.
- On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18
[edit]- Muhammedramees18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why My edit is declined? Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of notability, not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view.
- What is your relationship with this school? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Muhammedramees18. Writing a new article is much more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a conflict of interest. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible.
- Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world except you and your colleagues. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242
[edit]- 223.190.86.242 (talk · contribs) (TB)
how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article 223.190.86.242 (talk) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. cyberdog958Talk 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju
[edit]should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? Sunuraju (talk) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji
[edit]- JustBeenji (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. JustBeenji (talk) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: you are an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia.
- But no editor can magic notability out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It could be notable, as it does seem to be a popular series of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin is, let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: Popularity is fleeting, notability is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell
[edit]- SarahSamuell (talk · contribs) (TB)
i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? SarahSamuell (talk) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see WP:NSCHOOL and WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES. KylieTastic (talk) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @SarahSamuell. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 above, most of which applies to you as well. ColinFine (talk) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- In addition to what has already been said, there are serious problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at WP:NFC. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore
[edit]- WikiBaltimore (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission.....
"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater."
I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit.
For example, Silo Point is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past.
Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. WikiBaltimore (talk) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiBaltimore: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see WP:YESPROMO), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for WP:REFBOMBING purposes.
- Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- The references are about the projects Turner Development has been involved in, not, about Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's WP:OR. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well said, thank you for the feedback WikiBaltimore (talk) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez
[edit]- Juanestebanfernandez (talk · contribs) (TB)
I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. Juanestebanfernandez (talk) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Juanestebanfernandez: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources.
- Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like Language interpretation. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder
[edit]- CerebralPathfinder (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has my article been denied? I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- CerebralPathfinder I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? 331dot (talk) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah yes just seen! thank you CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
- If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see WP:PAID, as well as conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 25
[edit]05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS
[edit]- NOMAN ABBASS (talk · contribs) (TB)
I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me NOMAN ABBASS (talk) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NOMAN ABBASS: We do not accept guides. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710
[edit]- Anonymous 21710 (talk · contribs) (TB)
can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article.
Anonymous 21710 (talk) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Anonymous21710: Not only is this draft blatantly promotional and entirely unsourced, the subject is a minor and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence
[edit]- NakiwugeFlorence (talk · contribs) (TB)
What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general WP:GNG or the special WP:MUSICBIO guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement
[edit]- KimJongUnsBasement (talk · contribs) (TB)
It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. 331dot (talk) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @KimJongUnsBasement: footballers have to demonstrate notability per WP:GNG, which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none.
- What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- KimJonUnsBasement Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for a deletion discussion.
- As for other articles, see other stuff exists. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. 331dot (talk) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. 331dot (talk) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198
[edit]this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article 2.190.166.198 (talk) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. qcne (talk) 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso
[edit]I just wanted to create a politician page Amjsso (talk) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Amjsso, have you read the policy at WP:VERIFY? Everything on Wikipedia must have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. qcne (talk) 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18
[edit]- Sanjaygowda18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please don't write spam on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit Help:Your first article. qcne (talk) 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud
[edit]- AngelicaMonsalud (talk · contribs) (TB)
I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? AngelicaMonsalud (talk) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. Theroadislong (talk) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
December 26
[edit]06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23
[edit]- 117.254.37.23 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
- Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
- I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
- It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
- We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
- Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
- "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
- Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
- Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug
[edit]- Ramakrishnan.babug (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I know the reason for rejecting my article?
Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455
[edit]regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD
[edit]Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
- Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
- Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so
is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.{{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}
- The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
- You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
December 27
[edit]03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.
Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Fuzzpumpkin Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany
[edit]- Al Gattany (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi
[edit]- Itsfaizanfaizi (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions in this thread explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)