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== 06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007 == |
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{{Lafc|username=MonkeyBanjo007|ts=06:41, 22 December 2024|draft=Conor McLeod}} |
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{{anchor|01:31:51, 22 October 2020 review of submission by MEEM WEAVER}} |
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To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game. |
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{{Lafc|username=MEEM WEAVER|ts=01:31:51, 22 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Numbs}} |
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I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person. |
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Hi I got a message on my user talk page saying my new draft article needs more reliable sources, can someone on here review it and give more specifics please. I don't know whether to expand with new information but there isn't a lot of information on the band out there and I don't know where else to get info from besides Allmusic. I have always considered Allmusic a pretty reputable site, they have editors there who know music and the other page I cited was written by one of the band members in their biography section on their profile. The page is [[Draft:Numbs]] I hope this link works. Thanks in advance |
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I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files. |
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Thanks- [[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] ([[User talk:MonkeyBanjo007|talk]]) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 09:11:42, 22 October 2020 review of draft by Oficialtowhid == |
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:@[[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] see [[Help:Pictures]] for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources that [[WP:N|notability]] do. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Oficialtowhid|ts=09:11:42, 22 October 2020|draft=Draft:Ashish_Chanchlani}} |
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== 06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|ts=06:43, 22 December 2024|draft=He Is Younger Businessman}} |
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You Should Agree This Draft [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Link to the draft: [[Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar]] --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are [[WP:N|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Previously answered [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#12:14,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Bollysocialmedia|here]] (question posted by blocked user [[User:Bollysocialmedia]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#11:37,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Royaloaksschoolking|here]] (by [[User:Royaloaksschoolking]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_10#02:00,_10_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|here]]. |
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:See also: [[Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde]] about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2024 August 9#14:43, 9 August 2024 review of submission by 2402:8100:3106:E5B8:47DC:DA3A:BF3A:D9DA|this question]] as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account [[User:Shubhamxrameshwar564]]. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador == |
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Review these articles -- |
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{{Lafc|username=Batoenonghistoryador|ts=10:54, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Howard_Calleja_et.al_v._Anti-Terrorism_Council}} |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ashish_Chanchlani |
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Hello, |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nischay_Malhan |
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I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."? |
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Additionally, I have a few questions: |
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[[User:Oficialtowhid|Oficialtowhid]] ([[User talk:Oficialtowhid|talk]]) 09:11, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? |
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Real <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/103.232.236.45|103.232.236.45]] ([[User talk:103.232.236.45#top|talk]]) 12:05, 22 October 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it? |
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:The draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. What is your [[WP:UPE|connexion]] to the editors who were behind [[Ashish Chanchlani]] and [[Ashish A. Chanchlani]]? —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 14:41, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Thank you so much for your guidance! |
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== 13:12:30, 22 October 2020 review of submission by Sudhindra Athreya == |
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[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Sudhindra Athreya|ts=13:12:30, 22 October 2020|declined=Draft:Samarth_Athreya}} |
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:@[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]]: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title. |
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Additional details added for the young talent. |
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:You can cite online PDFs with the {{tl|cite web}} template. The <code>format=</code> parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. |
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:Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliably published sources]] say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all? |
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:As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been [[WP:RS|reliably published]] or not. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you so much for this informative response. [[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 == |
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[[User:Sudhindra Athreya|Sudhindra Athreya]] ([[User talk:Sudhindra Athreya|talk]]) 13:12, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|ts=11:37, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}} |
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:This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. You haven't changed a single thing since [[#16:27:10, 21 October 2020 review of submission by Sudhindra Athreya|the last time I looked at it]], and as such it still violates our [[WP:Biographies of living persons|biographical policies]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 13:15, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|talk]]) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah okay. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:30:44, 22 October 2020 review of submission by Pratsmusings == |
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{{Lafc|username=Pratsmusings|ts=14:30:44, 22 October 2020|declined=User:Pratsmusings/sandbox/PratsMusings_-_ECO_BLOGGER_FROM_INDIA}} |
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== 16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05 == |
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Please guide me on how to get the page accepted. |
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{{Lafc|username=Njames05|ts=16:10, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:University_of_Texas_Rugby_Club}} |
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How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? [[User:Njames05|Nigel D James]] ([[User talk:Njames05|talk]]) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Njames05|Njames05]]: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should. |
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:Moot as draft is [[WP:CSD#G11|deleted]] and user has been shown the door. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 14:37, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say. |
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:You should also unbold the section headers. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|ts=16:59, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kinhola_BK}} |
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Check now [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|talk]]) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Leon M-Zack|Leon M-Zack]] ([[User talk:Leon M-Zack|talk]]) 15:32, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Leon M-Zack}} It appears that you have (attempted to) [[WP:AUTOBIO|write an article about yourself]]. While autobiographys are not strictly forbidden, they are strongely discouraged. Pleasse be aware that [[WP:PROUD|a Wikipedia article about yourself may not nessesarely be desireable]]. This article does not meet [[WP:BLP]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 15:49, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127 == |
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{{Lafc|username=LR.127|ts=17:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Rafael de Miguel González}} |
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{{anchor|16:16:14, 22 October 2020 review of submission by LaundryPizza03}} |
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This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion [[Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation/Archive 58#Draft:Rafael de Miguel Gonz%C3%A1lez declined 5 times.|here]] on the [[Rafael de Miguel González]] page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft. |
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{{Lafc|username=LaundryPizza03|ts=16:16:14, 22 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Racially_motivated_emergency_calls}} |
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I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed. |
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It was declined due to NPOV problems; specifically, that it reads like an essay. I need help correcting this; specifically, how should the causes and impacts be summarized neutrally? I'm pretty sure this topic is notable. |
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I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: [[User:Timtrent]], [[User:Joe Roe]], [[User:Benison]], [[User:Mr.choppers]], and [[User:asilvering]]. Cheers. [[User:LR.127|LR.127]] ([[User talk:LR.127|talk]]) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a [[WP:RFC|request for comment]]) or on the [[WP:HD|more general Help Desk]]. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:00:27, 22 October 2020 review of submission by Maciek X == |
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{{Lafc|username=Maciek X|ts=17:00:27, 22 October 2020|page= |
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Stefan Wolski |
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Hello, my draft was checked and I canceled the categories before publishing how I understand from the comments, is it all, and should I wait now for publishing? Thanks in advance for your feedback! |
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::My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, [[Rafael de Miguel González]] reads more like a CV than anything else. <span style="background:#ff0000;font-family:Times New Roman;">[[User:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">''' Mr.choppers | '''</span>]][[User talk:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">✎ </span>]]</span> 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Maciek X|Maciek X]] ([[User talk:Maciek X|talk]]) 17:00, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:::{{tq|Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.}} Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Bentasyt.1|ts=18:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Lanksti_linija,_UAB}} |
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{{anchor|18:33:28, 22 October 2020 review of submission by Stoptosmellroses}} |
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what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia [[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]] ([[User talk:Bentasyt.1|talk]]) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Stoptosmellroses|ts=18:33:28, 22 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Guo_Shiyou}} |
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:Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Very brief summary of writing an article: |
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:# Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See [[WP:42]] |
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:# If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else. |
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:# If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it. |
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:[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sophisticatedevening|ts=19:35, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Emma_Howell_Knight}} |
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Dear Reviewer, |
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I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I made significant changes and resubmitted my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Guo_Shiyou. I was told that it would take 3 months for the second review. Is there a way to get feedback a little sooner? The first review pointed out that I needed reliable sources. I added several sources such as Baidu which is China's Wikipedia. I also added links to people who reviewed the works of the historian I wrote about. All the reviewers I mentioned are Chinese academics who have a solid reputation. All the works are published in reputable journals by reputable publishers. Mr. Guo's works have not yet been translated into English but he has readers in American universities and institutions on China studies. I modeled my draft on a wikipedia article on Mr. Guo's fellow historian in China https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zi_Zhongyun. Any advice to improve my draft is appreciated. |
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:Fixed up for you [[User:Sophisticatedevening|Sophisticatedevening]]. Cheers [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks! [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:39, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mariah Hopkins|ts=20:03, 22 December 2024|draft=Kokoa Amor}} |
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{{anchor|19:34:17, 22 October 2020 review of submission by Lagardet}} |
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Why was the article declined [[User:Mariah Hopkins|Mariah Hopkins]] ([[User talk:Mariah Hopkins|talk]]) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Lagardet|ts=19:34:17, 22 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Editta_Braun}} |
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:{{courtesy link|User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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My draft has been declined several times and since my last changes I did not get any answer. This has been nearly 6 months now. I fear the draft to be moved. [[User:Lagardet|Lagardet]] ([[User talk:Lagardet|talk]]) 19:34, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:notability|notability]] - see [[WP:42]]. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have [[WP:significant coverage|significant coverage]] of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited. |
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:{{ping|Lagardet}} I'm not sure what answer you were looking to get. It looks like [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Editta_Braun&diff=962039823&oldid=955263592 here] you asked a rhetorical question in the body of your edit summary, which would not allow anybody to respond to you. We usually discuss things on talk pages. I see you've recently resubmitted the draft, so perhaps you'll receive feedback in due time. [[User:Cyphoidbomb|Cyphoidbomb]] ([[User talk:Cyphoidbomb|talk]]) 19:49, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{HD/WINI}} |
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:Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as [[WP:disruptive editing|disruptive editing]]. |
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:My comments to another editor [[#18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1|above]] are equally applicable to your case. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 20:35:23, 22 October 2020 review of draft by JimZBrewer == |
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{{Lafc|username=JimZBrewer|ts=20:35:23, 22 October 2020|draft=Draft:David_A._Deitch}} |
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== 06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv == |
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The article Draft: David A. Deitch was declined on Aug. 1 by Editor Eternal Shadow. I understand that there are many articles to review, but it has now been nearly three months since I resubmitted and it has not been re-reviewed. Is there some way I can expedite the process? |
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{{Lafc|username=Sonshiv|ts=06:08, 23 December 2024|draft=User:Sonshiv/sandbox}} |
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[[User:JimZBrewer|JimZBrewer]] ([[User talk:JimZBrewer|talk]]) 20:35, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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please upload my wikipedia |
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[[User:Sonshiv|Sonshiv]] ([[User talk:Sonshiv|talk]]) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:54:31, 22 October 2020 review of draft by R2T2M == |
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{{Lafc|username=R2T2M|ts=21:54:31, 22 October 2020|draft=Draft:Air_Squared}} |
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== 06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE == |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|ts=06:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Buladaco}} |
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i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me [[Special:Contributions/2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE]] ([[User talk:2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|talk]]) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Assuming you're {{u|Manasi32}}, please log into your account when editing. |
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Thank you for providing an avenue for the AfC help desk. I have recently submitted Draft:Air_Squared for review and have received a "reads more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia" rejection. While I understand this is not the place to argue what should or should not be removed before resubmission, I am concerned that there were no details provided in the rejection. Specifically, apart from an external link to Air Squared's website in the Infobox and a link to Air Squared's Youtube channel, 26 of the 27 references meet Wikipedia's range of independent, reliable, published sources. If the concern in notability, other [[Mars Oxygen ISRU Experiment|MOXIE]] partners including [[CoorsTek|Ceramatec, Inc]] are represented on Wikipedia and I would argue that the commercial space industry should be represented on Wikipedia. |
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:There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources. |
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:Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway. |
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:Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see [[WP:AUTOBIO]] for why you shouldn't. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032 == |
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May I ask if the best course of action would be to edit the draft to make it read more like an encyclopedia article regardless of feedback or should I reach out to the user who provided the rejection for further details? Thank you for your time and support, my apologies for being unfamiliar in submitting my first Wikipedia article. [[User:R2T2M|R2T2M]] ([[User talk:R2T2M|talk]]) 21:54, 22 October 2020 (UTC)R2T2M |
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{{Lafc|username=Thanvi 032|ts=07:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi}} |
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Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: your draft [[Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi]] has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:R2T2M|R2T2M]] ([[User talk:R2T2M|talk]]) 21:54, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Thanvi 032}}, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of [[WP:V|Verifiability]], a core content policy. Please read and study [[WP:RS|Reliable sources]] and [[WP:REFBEGIN|Referencing for beginners]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:If someone says your draft reads like an ad, it has very little, if anything, to do with the sources [[WP:Neutral point of view|and ''everything'' with how the article itself is written]]. Sourcing is where you get your facts, neutrality is how you are supposed to present them. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 22:28, 22 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you ''have'' made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Tropical Appreciater10001-400|ts=08:31, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Palame_State}} |
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Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You are wrong see [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]]: not so; every article has to cite its sources. |
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:In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context. |
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::Thank you for your time and consideration. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::[[WP:USERGEN|User-generated content]], such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70 == |
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{{Lafc|username=14.194.64.70|ts=10:43, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:A_Step-By-Step_Guide_on_Choosing_the_Perfect_Property_in_Chennai}} |
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this is page information please live it. [[Special:Contributions/14.194.64.70|14.194.64.70]] ([[User talk:14.194.64.70|talk]]) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition == |
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I need help with my references and citations |
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{{Lafc|username=Pr.nutrition|ts=12:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Vladimir_Dadali}} |
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Can you help? I |
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I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. [[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] ([[User talk:Pr.nutrition|talk]]) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Collingwood Supporter3|Collingwood Supporter3]] ([[User talk:Collingwood Supporter3|talk]]) 09:40, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Collingwood Supporter3}} I have attempted to fix them. The most part is done, though I have not suceeded in every case. You may want to look at [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Jye_Bolton&diff=prev&oldid=985005940 my Changes] before attempting to fix the rest. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 11:48, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:17:16, 23 October 2020 review of submission by Sudhindra Athreya == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sudhindra Athreya|ts=14:17:16, 23 October 2020|declined=Draft:Samarth_Athreya}} |
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== 16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher == |
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I'm not able to upload the correct picture. The one uploaded is partially done and I would like to change it. Please suggest. |
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{{Lafc|username=FelixKerscher|ts=16:39, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Clinical Versus Statistical Prediction}} |
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Why was my submission declined? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Sudhindra Athreya|Sudhindra Athreya]] ([[User talk:Sudhindra Athreya|talk]]) 14:17, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Sudhindra Athreya}} Please do not [[WP:AUTOBIO|write an article about yourself]]. Its not forbidden, but the count of persons I have seen writing their autobiography sucessfully in a suitable way is zero. Next, if You are affilated with the person depicted in [[:c:File:Samarth Athreya.jpg|this image]], I have another concern: Wikipedia is not [[WP:NOTSOCIAL|a social Network]] like Facebook or Instagram. |
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:You could also ask the reviewer {{u|CSMention269}} if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I am not able to read deleted pages and therefore can't give you advice on [[Draft:Samarth_Athreya]], but its extremely unlikely that this topic meets [[WP:BLP]], let alone [[WP:NPERSON]]. The former is especially important when writing about minors. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 15:34, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|FelixKerscher}} By commenting on [[User talk:CSMention269|their user talk page]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz == |
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{{Lafc|username=Zraffarz|ts=19:05, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Surmesur}} |
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Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ? |
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I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments. |
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Hi guys im just wondering if you can help me and give me some advice on why my page i wrote about the professional boxer was not accepted? if anything im asking for some help and advice on what i need to add into it to make it acceptable for wikipedia |
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Regards. [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. We do not permit official or shared accounts, nor (as you have found out) do we tolerate [[WP:UPE|mercenary editors who do not explain their circumstances]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 22:34, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work. |
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::Regards [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? [[Draft:Surmesur]] |
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:::Much appreciated [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|ts=23:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sentinai}} |
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hey what exactly was wrong [[Special:Contributions/2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09]] ([[User talk:2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|talk]]) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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My page was declined because of the sources. I have gathered news articles from trade publications as well as local media publications so I am unsure why this information was declined. |
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[[User:OWC12345|OWC12345]] ([[User talk:OWC12345|talk]]) 17:34, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:It comes down to the [[WP:Reliable sources|sourcing]]. Company profiles (Bloomberg) are not reliable sources. Anything written by [[WP:FORBESCON|Forbes contributors]] is useless as a source. Press releases (nationalmortgageprofessional) are not reliable sources. Trivial mentions (Union Recorder) are not reliable sources. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 22:30, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what ''independent'' reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Request on 18:27:28, 23 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Jfritter == |
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{{anchor|18:27:28, 23 October 2020 review of submission by Jfritter}} |
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{{Lafc|username=Jfritter|ts=18:27:28, 23 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Sean_Garnhart}} |
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Hi there! I don't quite understand why my article for submission has been rejected twice now. It's about a film sound designer named Sean Garnhart, and the reason it was rejected was because it apparently doesn't show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article through published, reliable sources that are independent of the subject. I included sources from credible entities like the Emmys (which he has won one of), Motion Picture Editors Guild, and the British Film Institute. I have seen other pages that have been published using similar award entities as sources - Skip Lievsay and Ren Klyce can be used as examples. I do notice the main difference is that those pages have references to sources from the Oscars - but my question would be: does a sound designer really need to have been nominated for an Oscar to be qualified to have a Wikipedia page? In my opinion, that should not be the only metric that would make a sound designer credible/notable. The Emmys are a similarly large award, as are awards from the Motion Picture Editors Guild and BFI. |
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== 00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest == |
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I would really appreciate any and all guidance here, and thank you in advance![[User:Jfritter|Jfritter]] ([[User talk:Jfritter|talk]]) 18:27, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Nycrest|ts=00:17, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Venhue}} |
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Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] "no promotion"? I don't see how {{tq|unorthodox approach to fine dining}}, {{tq|theatrical presentations}}, and {{tq|playful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions}} is neutral. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists? |
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::I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not seeing how this establishment meets [[WP:ORG]]- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212 == |
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:Your draft has NOT been rejected twice, it has been declined, there is a subtle difference, being declined means there is hope that it can be accepted. you need to find some independent reliable sources, the two sources you have at the moment are not independent. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 18:44, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being {{tq|US patent number US4988065A}}, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see [[Help:Your first article]] first. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Unfortunately that means they are likely not [[WP:NORG|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Articles require ''significant coverage'' in ''reliable sources'' that are ''independent'' of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer == |
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:I appreciate the prompt reply and the clarification of terminology! I don't quite understand how the Emmys and BFI aren't independent resources, though, especially since the Oscars ''are'' considered independent. I would consider the Emmys and BFI to be "news media", which would qualify them as independent sources according to [[Wikipedia:Independent_sources|this page]]. Would it be possible for you to explain to me what prevents these sources from being considered independent?[[User:Jfritter|Jfritter]] ([[User talk:Jfritter|talk]]) 19:30, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=MarkDiBelloBiographer|ts=02:55, 24 December 2024|draft=Mark Anthony DiBello}} |
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Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. [[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]] ([[User talk:MarkDiBelloBiographer|talk]]) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello]] [[User:Knitsey|<span style="color:DarkMagenta">Knitsey</span>]] ([[User talk:Knitsey|<span style="color: maroon">talk</span>]]) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:12:51, 23 October 2020 review of submission by Chukwu3buka01 == |
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:@[[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]]: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image. |
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{{Lafc|username=Chukwu3buka01|ts=19:12:51, 23 October 2020|page=Draft:Udu Moses Ogechi |
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:Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least. |
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:On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Muhammedramees18|ts=06:57, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Muhammedramees18/sandbox}} |
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Why My edit is declined? [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of [[WP:notability|notability]], not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view. |
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[[User:Chukwu3buka01|Chukwu3buka01]] ([[User talk:Chukwu3buka01|talk]]) 19:12, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:What is your relationship with this school? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I am a Co Founder of this school. [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]. Writing a new article is '''much''' more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a [[WP:conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible. |
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:Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world ''except'' you and your colleagues. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242 == |
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Why is my article disallowed? |
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{{Lafc|username=223.190.86.242|ts=07:35, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Omd-course/sandbox}} |
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how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article [[Special:Contributions/223.190.86.242|223.190.86.242]] ([[User talk:223.190.86.242|talk]]) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:NOTGUIDE|Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India]] and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. [[User:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:navy;">''cyberdog''</span><span style="color:orange;">'''958'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:teal;">Talk</span>]]</sup> 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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My references are legit. You can visit the pages to confirm the authenticity. |
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:[[WP:Biographies of living persons|We are not interested]] in a rerun of the [[Wikipedia Seigenthaler biography incident|Seigenthaler incident]]. Inline citations are expected to be in the text proper, used to [[WP:Verifiability|verify]] claims the article makes. Search results are not acceptable sources. Trivial mentions (name-drops and sound bites) are not acceptable sources. Two of your sources 404 out. Three of your sources (would be four if one of them weren't a 404) are the exact same article, which makes all but one of those useless and implies a press release. Your sources are, frankly, not up to par. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 22:25, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju == |
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{{anchor|20:53:50, 23 October 2020 review of submission by Khadar shah}} |
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should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? [[User:Sunuraju|Sunuraju]] ([[User talk:Sunuraju|talk]]) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Khadar shah|ts=20:53:50, 23 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Mogha}} |
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[[User:Khadar shah|Khadar shah]] ([[User talk:Khadar shah|talk]]) 20:53, 23 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Khadar shah}} You don't ask a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:36, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji == |
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I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Chinese VC Yunqi Partners targets to raise $275m for third fund |
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:@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: you ''are'' an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia. |
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[[User:许木23|许木23]] ([[User talk:许木23|talk]]) 12:46, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:But no editor can magic [[WP:notability|notability]] out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|许木23}} What is your question? [[User:Cyphoidbomb|Cyphoidbomb]] ([[User talk:Cyphoidbomb|talk]]) 15:00, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::So do i have to create a new draft? [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:: what is "This topic is not sufficiently notable "? and what should I do? <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:许木23|许木23]] ([[User talk:许木23#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/许木23|contribs]]) 04:32, 26 October 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: in a word, no. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It ''could'' be notable, as it does seem to be a popular ''series'' of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin ''is'', let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{ping|JustBeenji}} Popularity is fleeting, [[WP:N|notability]] is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell == |
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i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? [[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]] ([[User talk:SarahSamuell|talk]]) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See [[WP:N]]) which in most cases requires significant coverage ([[WP:SIGCOV]]) in multiple independent ([[WP:INDY]]) reliable sources ([[WP:RS]]). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see [[WP:NSCHOOL]] and [[WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES]]. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]]. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 [[#06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18|above]], most of which applies to you as well. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:In addition to what has already been said, there are ''serious'' problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at [[WP:NFC]]. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore == |
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significant?he was included in Forbes’ China Midas 100 list in 2017, 2018and 2019。and the subject in https://www.forbeschina.com/entrepreneur/46520 |
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{{Lafc|username=WikiBaltimore|ts=14:09, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Turner_Development}} |
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Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission..... |
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"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater." |
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[[User:许木23|许木23]] ([[User talk:许木23|talk]]) 13:00, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|许木23}} The decline notice says that you need to demonstrate that the subject has received "significant coverage". If you read [[WP:GNG|our general notability guidelines]], they will explain what "significant coverage" means. [[User:Cyphoidbomb|Cyphoidbomb]] ([[User talk:Cyphoidbomb|talk]]) 15:00, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::the topic has 6 references in reliable sources that are independent of the subject--[[User:许木23|许木23]] ([[User talk:许木23|talk]]) 04:29, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit. |
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== 19:20:00, 24 October 2020 review of draft by Magitroopa == |
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{{Lafc|username=Magitroopa|ts=19:20:00, 24 October 2020|draft=Draft:Santiago_of_the_Seas_(2)}} |
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For example, [[Silo Point]] is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past. |
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Would there be a way of getting this draft merged or deleted altogether? I'm never the best with where/how to request things for deletion/merge. Seems like {{u|Mcnickleguy57}} created it on October 18, and it [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Santiago_of_the_Seas_(2)&diff=prev&oldid=984105169 was later moved to draftspace]. There is already a draft at [[Draft:Santiago of the Seas]] that has been around since July, so I see no reason for this second draft to exist. |
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[[User:Magitroopa|Magitroopa]] ([[User talk:Magitroopa|talk]]) 19:20, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Magitroopa}}, if you think the two drafts should be merged, [[WP:SOFIXIT|go ahead and do that]]. If you believe it should be deleted, a request to delete a draft should be made at [[WP:MFD|miscellany for deletion]]. [[User:Seraphimblade|Seraphimblade]] <small><sup>[[User talk:Seraphimblade|Talk to me]]</sup></small> 11:54, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]]: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see [[WP:YESPROMO]]), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for [[WP:REFBOMBING]] purposes. |
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== Request on 00:08:40, 25 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Bhumi2tandon == |
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:Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{anchor|00:08:40, 25 October 2020 review of submission by Bhumi2tandon}} |
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:The references are about the ''projects'' Turner Development has been involved in, not, ''about'' Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "''specializes'' in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's [[WP:OR]]. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Bhumi2tandon|ts=00:08:40, 25 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Ram_Setu_Controversy}} |
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::Well said, thank you for the feedback [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez == |
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I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. [[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]] ([[User talk:Juanestebanfernandez|talk]]) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]]: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources. |
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:Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like [[Language interpretation]]. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder == |
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{{Lafc|username=CerebralPathfinder|ts=21:23, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:dogAdvisor}} |
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Why has my article been denied? |
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I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|CerebralPathfinder}} I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::ah yes just seen! thank you [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. |
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:If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see [[WP:PAID]], as well as [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 25 = |
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Respected sir |
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My article was vindictively and maliciously declined by a reviewer. |
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== 05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS == |
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Please go through my coversation below with the previous reviewer and you will understand why I was in no position to fix the problem. |
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{{Lafc|username=NOMAN ABBASS|ts=05:21, 25 December 2024|draft=Above Ground Pool Removal Cost - Average Prices in 2025}} |
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I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me [[User:NOMAN ABBASS|NOMAN ABBASS]] ([[User talk:NOMAN ABBASS|talk]]) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|NOMAN ABBASS}} [[WP:NOT#HOWTO|We do not accept guides.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Copy of my conversation:- |
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== 06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710 == |
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"Please see a copy of my conversation with him below. |
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{{Lafc|username=Anonymous 21710|ts=06:02, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sree_Udhyan_.M}} |
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can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article. |
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[[User:Anonymous 21710|Anonymous 21710]] ([[User talk:Anonymous 21710|talk]]) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Anonymous21710}} Not only is this draft [[WP:SPAM|blatantly promotional]] and [[WP:BLP|entirely unsourced]], the subject is a [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|''minor'']] and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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"The POV forks have already been fixed please check. Actually this is my first wiki page submission so I guess every place has its own style and language in which content is required to be written. Be it newspaper or websites :)) |
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== 08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence == |
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You cannot "fix" it. The whole thing is a POV fork. The answer was "no", and will remain "no" no matter how many times you repeat the question. Seraphimblade Talk to me 14:05, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=NakiwugeFlorence|ts=08:29, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Waya_Boy}} |
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What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general [[WP:GNG]] or the special [[WP:MUSICBIO]] guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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You are entitled to your opinion and I respect that but a gentler tone would be appreciated. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bhumi2tandon (talk • contribs) 14:20, 24 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement == |
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Mr Seraphimblade At 14:20 I objected to a high toned message from you and requested you to use a gentler tone and within 20 minutes of my message you went ahead and declined my draft page submission and arbitrarily closed a discussion that was posted on the page with respect to the merger of the page which was started today morning only and in which only you had given your opinion so far. The page was supposed to remain open for atleast seven days as per guidelines. I find this act on your behalf highly vindictive and prejudiced. Let me remind you that while Wikipedia grants some discretionary powers such vindictive acts are not covered by that. |
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{{Lafc|username=KimJongUnsBasement|ts=13:27, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Pau_Quesada}} |
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It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Had you deleted my page the first time you went through it and thought it to be a POV fork I would not have objected but the action was done within 20 minutes of my submitting a message respectfully objecting to you high toned message this is clearly a vindictive act and highly objectionable behaviour for a place like wikipedia. Let me remind you no one not even you OWN the Wikipedia and small editors like us are the reason the Wikipedia exists. I would really appreciate if you stay away from the draft page now." |
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I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]]: footballers have to demonstrate notability per [[WP:GNG]], which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none. |
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How can I fix the reason for decline when the page was declined vindictively and arbitrarily after removing a discussion posted in the group with respect to its merger that had been opened in morning only and in which only the reviewer had given his opinion so far. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bhumi2tandon (talk • contribs) 00:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{reply|Bhumi2tandon}} Wikipedians use a lot of jargon and it is possible <strike>you've not been made aware</strike> {{diff2|985183599|did not read}} what we mean by 'POV fork'. If you take a look at [[WP:POVFORK]] you'll understand that {{u|Seraphimblade}} meant that there are two existing articles about the bridge which talk about the origin theories and the canal project, which you could expand. A 'point of view fork' means that rather than expanding those, you perhaps don't like those articles and would rather have a new one which is written in a way that promotes your particular view. So when you say 'the POV forks have already been fixed please check', anyone who checks will see that the issue has not been fixed. |
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:{{u|KimJonUnsBasement}} Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for [[WP:AFD|a deletion discussion]]. |
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:There are two processes here, one to do with achieving consensus about merging some of the content you've written into those other articles, and the other about whether right now the draft you've written should be converted into an article. These are related issues, but the decision of not just Seraphimblade but other very experienced editors is that the draft should not ''currently'' be made into an article, hence the decline. If in a few days, the consensus is that there is no merit in merging the articles then the question of a stand-alone article about the controversies can be reviewed. [[User:Curb Safe Charmer|Curb Safe Charmer]] ([[User talk:Curb Safe Charmer|talk]]) 11:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:As for other articles, see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{reply|Bhumi2tandon}} Above, you claim that {{tq|At 14:20 I objected to a high toned message from [Seraphimblade] [...] and within 20 minutes of my message [Seraphimblade] went ahead and declined my draft page submission}}. You don't remember the sequence of events correctly, however. Seraphimblade declined the draft [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Ram_Setu_Controversy&diff=985177688&oldid=985165471 at 12:40 UTC], and ''after'' that you posted to their user talk page, and you had a short discussion including the "objection" post you refer to above, [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Seraphimblade&diff=985189799&oldid=985187775 at 14:20 UTC]. The decline was not caused by your discussion – the discussion was not started until after the decline. Presumably you were misled by the fact that the time stamps in discussions are unified to show UTC time, unlike the time stamps you can see in the article history (which will show whatever time you have set in your preferences). --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 12:22, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198 == |
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this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article [[Special:Contributions/2.190.166.198|2.190.166.198]] ([[User talk:2.190.166.198|talk]]) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hi Editors, I have created an article to be published on Wikipedia for Moin-ud-din, the screenwriter and story writer for Indian Film Cinema. Due to the lack of the references, the article was rejected and I was redirected to this link to seek any assistance. I have cleaned the article by rephrasing the wording to avoid the conflict of interest and also added a couple of references. Hope this is good to go. Please advise or make any changes as necessary. If you find it fit to be published, please do so. Thank you in advance! |
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== 14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso == |
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[[User:Aminuddinshroff|Aminuddinshroff]] ([[User talk:Aminuddinshroff|talk]]) 13:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Amjsso|ts=14:01, 25 December 2024|draft=User:Amjsso/sandbox}} |
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:(1) A [[WP:Conflict of interest|conflict of interest]] is more about you, the editor, and less what you write. (2) [[WP:Biographies of living persons|We are not interested]] in a rerun of the [[Wikipedia Seigenthaler biography incident|Seigenthaler incident]]. You need to have a strong secondary source (newspaper, news magazine, industry journal) for every claim the article makes. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 14:13, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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I just wanted to create a politician page [[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]] ([[User talk:Amjsso|talk]]) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]], have you read the policy at [[WP:VERIFY]]? Everything on Wikipedia ''must'' have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:07:28, 25 October 2020 review of draft by Caerulescens == |
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{{Lafc|username=Caerulescens|ts=17:07:28, 25 October 2020|draft=Draft:Elsa_Hansen_Oldham}} |
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== 18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18 == |
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Hi, I just submitted an article for review yesterday, and it was declined today. The reason was that my article didn't show significant coverage of the subject in "published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject." I'm asking for help identifying which of the four sources are acceptable and which are not.<br><br> |
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{{Lafc|username=Sanjaygowda18|ts=18:44, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SANJAY_GOWDA_S_G}} |
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I cited four sources in my draft article. The first is an interview with the subject published on an online arts media website. The second is a profile of the subject in ''The New York Times''. The third is a press release for the subject's first solo exhibition, published by the gallery where the exhibition was held. The fourth is an interview with the subject's husband, published in ''GQ magazine''.<br><br> |
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My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Could you help me by identifying which of the four sources do not meet Wikipedia's standards for significant coverage of the article's subject?<br><br> |
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Edit after reviewing Wikipedia:Notability - I see that press releases are not considered "independent of the subject." This is the only published source for the paragraph about the subject's first solo exhibition. I could remove that paragraph from the article draft, thus removing the need for citing the press release. Would the removal of that source then make the article acceptable for submission?<br><br> |
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Thanks! |
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[[User:Caerulescens|Caerulescens]] ([[User talk:Caerulescens|talk]]) 17:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Please [[Wikipedia:Spam|don't write spam]] on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit [[Help:Your first article]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Interviews are not considered independent either. I cant realy determine how independent is [https://www.artnet.com/galleries/dickinson-uk/elsa-hansen-eve-through-eve the third one], but probbably also at least weak, since the most of the text is written by the subject. I havent checked the last one yet. The removal of the problematic sources would ''not'' help your cause, as there would still be no evidence of [[WP:NPERSON]] anywhere in the draft. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 18:23, 25 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud == |
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<ref></ref> |
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{{Lafc|username=AngelicaMonsalud|ts=23:20, 25 December 2024|draft=User:AngelicaMonsalud/sandbox}} |
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I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? [[User:AngelicaMonsalud|AngelicaMonsalud]] ([[User talk:AngelicaMonsalud|talk]]) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23 == |
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My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. [[Special:Contributions/117.254.37.23|117.254.37.23]] ([[User talk:117.254.37.23|talk]]) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Firstly, if you're {{u|Ssaisushanth45}}, please log into your account whenever editing. |
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:Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing). |
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:I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts? |
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:It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any. |
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:We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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:As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a [[WP:deadline|deadline]]. |
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:Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: [[WP:BOSS]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this |
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::: "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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::: As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us." |
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::: Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me. |
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::[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]] ([[User talk:Ssaisushanth45|talk]]) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]]: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. ''When'' you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug == |
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I want to know what other content is needed for the page to be approved. Thanks |
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{{Lafc|username=Ramakrishnan.babug|ts=06:47, 26 December 2024|draft=Babu Ramakrishnan.G}} |
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May I know the reason for rejecting my article? |
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[[User:Naijabroads|Naijabroads]] ([[User talk:Naijabroads|talk]]) 01:11, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] ([[User talk:Ramakrishnan.babug|talk]]) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] Wikipedia is not for [[WP:PROMO|self-promotion]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:02:22, 26 October 2020 review of submission by Thelmaandlouiseltd == |
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{{Lafc|username=Thelmaandlouiseltd|ts=02:02:22, 26 October 2020|page= |
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Is the page Garfield Doakes being submitted for publication? I can only see it if I say Draft:Garfield Doakes but if I search for submissions on October 25, I don't see it. Please advise. |
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[[User:Thelmaandlouiseltd|Thelmaandlouiseltd]] ([[User talk:Thelmaandlouiseltd|talk]]) 02:02, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Thelmaandlouiseltd}}, Yes, it has been submitted for review. [[User:Snowycats|Snowycats]] ([[User talk:Snowycats|talk]]) 03:32, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 02:33:10, 26 October 2020 review of submission by President-Wiki-Man == |
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{{Lafc|username=President-Wiki-Man|ts=02:33:10, 26 October 2020|declined=Draft:JackSucksAtLife}} |
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[[User:President-Wiki-Man|President-Wiki-Man]] ([[User talk:President-Wiki-Man|talk]]) 02:33, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|President-Wiki-Man}}, Can we help you? No question was asked. Best, [[User:Snowycats|Snowycats]] ([[User talk:Snowycats|talk]]) 03:33, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:We don't cite anything the subject has created when it comes to determining notability, and YouTube is practically never useful as a source. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 13:29, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 07:10:51, 26 October 2020 review of submission by 2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493|ts=07:10:51, 26 October 2020|declined=Draft:Israel_Taekwondo_Federation}} |
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For the reasons stated on the talk page. The other examples of similar articles are not the lone reason - I think there is sufficient coverage for a national sports federation that sends teams to the Olympics. But it does in addition support my view. --[[Special:Contributions/2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493|2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493]] ([[User talk:2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493|talk]]) 07:10, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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[[Special:Contributions/2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493|2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493]] ([[User talk:2604:2000:E010:1100:A445:719D:15E7:F493|talk]]) 07:10, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 14:58:51, 26 October 2020 review of submission by CSTeller == |
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{{Lafc|username=CSTeller|ts=14:58:51, 26 October 2020|page= |
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This is my first Wikipedia article and I hope you can assist me in resolving the comments I received from Robert so my article can be published. On the first comment about the picture of Rebecca Hawkins. It Is actually in the public domain as confirmed by the Jackson County Historical Society which sent me scan of this portrait. It is more than 160 years old from a family collection of portraits that a descendent donated to the society who confirmed that there are no restrictions on its use. I did read the lengthy rules and talked to the society to make sure this was acceptable. However, I think I mistakenly uploaded the wrong one from my files. Instead of the one I received from the society, this may be the copy I had sent to the society so they could identify Rebecca Hawkins in their collections. I cannot see much difference in them but it was a copy I found in a publication that used the photo with the society identified as the owner. So I think I selected the wrong one as I was uploading it. It may take me a little because I’m still figuring out how to navigate my way around, but I will figure out how to get the original scan from the society loaded instead as quickly as I can. |
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On the comment about the work being copied from another source. Please let me clarify that the writing is all my own. I have cited my sources but none of it is copied or even paraphrased from the sources. I wrote it all in my own words (It took weeks of consulting multiple sources). This is a project for a history course I am taking toward a master’s in History). I think it appears copied because I did copy it from what I thought was a sandbox where I could submit the draft from. I wrote it all in word and copied into this sandbox and tried to submit it for review from there. I could not get it to work so I created a separate draft and copied all of my work into the new draft and submittted it from there. I believe this may be why it looks like it is not my original work. I was crushed when I originally thought I was going to have to re-type all of my work again and happy when I figured out how to copy it over with all the references and links I had created in the sandbox. I will do it if that is required, but I hope not. Any tips you can give me on how to get my work into a draft page for submission that reflects that it truly is my own work, which it definitely is, more easily I would be extremely grateful. I will figure out to delete the redirect. It’s good to know what was causing this. I was wondering why that was happening and how to fix it! Again thank you for your comments and any advice you can offer that will help me get them resolved. [[User:CSTeller|CSTeller]] ([[User talk:CSTeller|talk]]) 14:58, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|CSTeller}} Your assignment is to successfully write a Wikipedia article? That would be extremely unfair to you as a student as you have limited control over the process. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:03, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::I have to submit the article, I am not required to succeed. So, the Professor is not being unfair. I will turn it in as is, but I would like to see it through as this is a subect I have had an interest in for a couple of years and have invested a considerable amount of time in it even before I took the History class. So timing is not critical, I would just like to learn how to do this properly. I am just looking for some guidance so I can satisfy the comments and hopefully get it published. The commentator seems to think it is as noteworthy as I thought it was. There have been many articles and a scholarly work published on her life. I have taken great pains to write it from an objective perspective and cite as many sources as are relevant and where needed. I am struggling with the process though. I think the fact that I have copied some things improperly, I may be giving the impression I have not done my due diligence. This is why I included all the explanation about what I have done to show that I have done my due diligence, I just need help reflecting that through the mechanics of editing properly in Wikipedia. |
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::I am struggling right now trying to figure out how to get the updated version of Rebecca's picture from the Jackson County History Society (in the public domain) loaded into creative commons and back into my new draft page. |
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::Next I will tackle getting the redirect line deleted. |
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::I don't know what to do about the fact that it appears my narrative and references appear copied, because I did copy all of it from what I thought was my sandbox intended for the purpose of creating a draft. |
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::I hope you can follow this. You can probably tell I'm hung up on the mechanics. If any sherpa out there can give me some guidance, I'd be so grateful. [[User:CSTeller|CSTeller]] ([[User talk:CSTeller|talk]]) 15:19, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:::{{re|CSTeller}} The comments on the draft say it was copied from multiple books, not a sandbox -- I myself have copied content from my Sandbox with no issues. I recommend pulling up the books and comparing them to your own work, to make sure you haven't accidentally plagiarized anything (I myself have done this while having the article and the work/essay I am trying to write side by side -- makes it very easy). ''[[User:Sam1370|sam1370]] ([[User talk:Sam1370|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Sam1370|contribs]])'' 16:39, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:[[User:CSTeller]] - I have also replied to you on the talk page of the draft, [[Draft talk:Rebecca Hawkins]]. I am inferring that the draft consists of work that you have copied from papers or books that you wrote. That takes care of the matter of copyright, but there are still major matters of style. It is not written in the style of a Wikipedia article, and has far too much background material. An article on Rebecca Hawkins should be a brief biography (stressing brief) describing her life, without providing lengthy background material about the Western United States in the nineteenth century, and your draft is more background than biography. The first style issue that a reviewer notes is that the draft lacks a proper [[WP:LEDE|lede sentence]] of the form "Rebecca Hawkins was a ..." (Western pioneer woman who was tried for murdering her husband?). That is easy to add. But the draft needs to be trimmed and put into the form of a short Wikipedia biography without a lot of background. |
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:Do not worry about details such as the status of the photograph, or the redirect. You appear to think that the details are what are preventing acceptance of the draft. Rewriting and shortening the draft is what prevents acceptance of the draft. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:53, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:::[[User:CSTeller]] - I put a hatnote at the top of your draft to deal with the existing redirect for the manga character. Did it ever occur to you that maybe I put the hatnote there because I knew what I was doing, or at least a little bit about the oddities of Wikipedia? Did it ever occur to you that maybe deleting the hatnote was not the way to deal with the existing redirect? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 19:00, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 15:20:07, 26 October 2020 review of submission by BenNeumann23 == |
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{{Lafc|username=BenNeumann23|ts=15:20:07, 26 October 2020|declined=Draft:Sebastien_Neumann}} |
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The information regarding the coach has been sourced from the official Thai League website, which also has the managerial statistics. |
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[[User:BenNeumann23|BenNeumann23]] ([[User talk:BenNeumann23|talk]]) 15:20, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. You were repeatedly told by the reviewers on the draft itself that the draft doesn't satisfy [[WP:NFOOTY|our notability criteria for football players and coaches]]. There is no presumption of notability for coaches/players not in a top-level league (in this case, [[Thai League 1|T1]]). Even then, statlines can't be used for notability (too sparse). —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Takes a strong man to deny...]]</small></sup> 16:39, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 17:09:58, 26 October 2020 review of submission by CSTeller == |
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[[User:CSTeller|CSTeller]] ([[User talk:CSTeller|talk]]) 17:09, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{re|CSTeller}} The comments on the draft say it was copied from multiple books, not a sandbox -- I myself have copied content from my Sandbox with no issues. I recommend pulling up the books and comparing them to your own work, to make sure you haven't accidentally plagiarized anything (I myself have done this while having the article and the work/essay I am trying to write side by side -- makes it very easy). ''[[User:Sam1370|sam1370]] ([[User talk:Sam1370|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Sam1370|contribs]])'' 16:39, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Thank you for your response above. It is not my practice to copy and paste from an original source and I am very careful about this as a rule. But I know that it is possible to rephrase in such a way as to copy another author's work as you describe without intending to. So, I doublehecked the sources thoroughly once more as you suggested before I submitted my response. I did not see any of my narrative that comes directly from either of these sources or any of the other sources that I used either. I know the reviewers must be extrememly busy, but I would greatly appreciate it if the specific narrative in question could be shown to me so that I can make any necessary corrections. |
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CSTeller[[User:CSTeller|CSTeller]] ([[User talk:CSTeller|talk]]) 17:09, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 22:58:13, 26 October 2020 review of submission by 2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|ts=22:58:13, 26 October 2020|declined=Draft:Flag_of_Islamabad_Capital_Territory}} |
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I believe this flag deserves a review as a special representation for federal capital territories. Thanks! |
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[[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|talk]]) 22:58, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 23:12:39, 26 October 2020 review of submission by 2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|ts=23:12:39, 26 October 2020|declined=Draft:Flag_of_Hyderabad_State}} |
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This was the Richest and Largest State with its own Army and was supported by Mountbatten and Churchill. |
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[[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:811C:6901:5422:A30E:7F6:4AD0|talk]]) 23:12, 26 October 2020 (UTC) |
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= October 27 = |
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== 02:22:48, 27 October 2020 review of draft by Blackkittycat71 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Blackkittycat71|ts=02:22:48, 27 October 2020|draft=Template:AFC_submission/pending}} |
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I cannot figure out if this article is still under review? |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Arthur_Langer?action=edit |
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[[User:Blackkittycat71|Blackkittycat71]] ([[User talk:Blackkittycat71|talk]]) 02:22, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Blackkittycat71}} As noted at the top, the draft was declined. Please review the comments left by the reviewer, and you are welcome to address them and resubmit. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:42, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 08:00:29, 27 October 2020 review of submission by Makmurguy == |
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{{Lafc|username=Makmurguy|ts=08:00:29, 27 October 2020|page= |
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MOHD NIZAM MAHSHAR |
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I am new to be an editor (or creation for submission). But the person that I set up Wikipedia's site for him is one of the important guys in Malaysia who had contributed important achievement in Civil Society's arena in Malaysia. I hope you can really guide me, how to make sure that this site (Mohd Nizam Mahshar) can get approval to be published at Wikipedia. |
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Thank you. |
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[[User:Makmurguy|Makmurguy]] ([[User talk:Makmurguy|talk]]) 08:00, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Makmurguy}} You are attempting to create a Wikipedia article, not an entire website. You were given some advice by the reviewers at the top of your draft, do you have any questions about that? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:41, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 09:01:51, 27 October 2020 review of submission by Penofdestiny == |
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{{Lafc|username=Penofdestiny|ts=09:01:51, 27 October 2020|page= |
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I have never done this before ever and I just wanted to make sure this new young pop/rock singer has her first Wikipedia page. It was recently rejected and I wanted to get help so that she will have her first page as her career gets going.[[User:Penofdestiny|Penofdestiny]] ([[User talk:Penofdestiny|talk]]) 09:01, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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[[User:Penofdestiny|Penofdestiny]] ([[User talk:Penofdestiny|talk]]) 09:01, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Penofdestiny}} Wikipedia does not have mere "pages", it has '''articles'''. Your draft has been rejected, not just declined, meaning that it will not be considered further. It appears that this musician does not meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BAND|a notable musician]], as shown with significant coverage in independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. Please see [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]] for more information. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:19, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== Request on 09:23:02, 27 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Serv181920 == |
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{{anchor|09:23:02, 27 October 2020 review of submission by Serv181920}} |
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{{Lafc|username=Serv181920|ts=09:23:02, 27 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:Farzam_Kamalabadi}} |
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I had created a draft for [[Draft:Farzam_Kamalabadi|Farzam Kamalabadi]] which was rejected giving the reason that it looks like an advertisement. I realised that the wordings used were not in line with Wikipedia policies. I have updated the article, made it neutral but still not sure if this meets wikipedia guidelines. This is my first independent submission. After editing the article, I have not re-submitted for review. Help from experts would be appreciated. Thank you. |
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== 09:46:27, 27 October 2020 review of submission by ITO SHINOBU == |
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{{Lafc|username=ITO SHINOBU|ts=09:46:27, 27 October 2020|accepted=Glyceryl_octyl_ascorbic_acid}} |
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This Glyceryl octyl ascorbic acid (GO-VC) column is about 2-glyceryl-3-octyl ascorbic acid. |
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However, the IUPAC Name, Other name, CAS Number, 3D model, PubChem CID are for 2-octyl-3-glyceryl ascorbic acid and should be changed to those for 2-glyceryl-3-octyl ascorbic acid. |
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[[User:ITO SHINOBU|ITO SHINOBU]] ([[User talk:ITO SHINOBU|talk]]) 09:46, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 10:12:09, 27 October 2020 review of submission by LeenaEvilin == |
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{{Lafc|username=LeenaEvilin|ts=10:12:09, 27 October 2020|link=Draft:Shinichirou_Ueda}} |
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Hello, |
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I'm a little bit confused about the fact that the article seemed to be not written from a 'neutral point of view'. I did research here on the English wikipedia how other Japanese actors (ex:[[Hiroki Suzuki (actor, born 1983)]]) are introduced before creating the article. So it would be really helpful to know what exactly the problem is in order to fix it. And the citations problem is confusing me as well. Does it mean that I need to put a footnotes after every bulletpoint ('performance') to get the article approved? |
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I created this article as a mirror-page to the Japanese article (edited by me as well), but unlike here I never encountered any problems, which really adds to all my confusion.[[User:LeenaEvilin|LeenaEvilin]] ([[User talk:LeenaEvilin|talk]]) 10:12, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455 == |
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regarding to uploading a new page or Article |
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i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it [[User:Shaurya4455|Shaurya4455]] ([[User talk:Shaurya4455|talk]]) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at [[WP:GNG]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Shaurya4455}} (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD == |
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[[User:ACSP01|ACSP01]] ([[User talk:ACSP01|talk]]) 10:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=CorosanD|ts=19:25, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:Michail_Boiadjiev_(Михаил_Бояджиев)}} |
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:{{u|ACSP01}} You don't ask a question, but your draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:59, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. [[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]] ([[User talk:CorosanD|talk]]) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{yo|CorosanD}} That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]]. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft [[WP:BACKWARDS|BACKWARDS]], starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is ''only'' interested in what reliable published sources say. |
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:Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see [[WP:42]]. |
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:Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{tl|ill}}: so <code>{{tlx|ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}</code> is displayed as {{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}} - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it. |
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:The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the [[:C:COM:Threshold of originality|COM:Threshold of originality]], and so is in the public domain). |
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:You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see [[WP:image use policy|image use policy]]. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 27 = |
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Somebody review this page and approve it [[User:ACSP01|ACSP01]] ([[User talk:ACSP01|talk]]) 11:06, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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:{{re|ACSP01}} I have reviewed it. still no evidence of [[WP:NCORP]] whatsoever. In the current state this draft isn't going to be approved. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 11:11, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=03:24, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office_Hours_Live}} |
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{{anchor|11:28:58, 27 October 2020 review of submission by Khadar shah}} |
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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved. |
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{{Lafc|username=Khadar shah|ts=11:28:58, 27 October 2020|declinedtalk=User_talk:Khadar_shah}} |
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Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany == |
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{{Lafc|username=Al Gattany|ts=08:01, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Mohammad_Hossain}} |
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:{{u|Khadar shah}} You don't ask a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:28, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:22:29, 27 October 2020 review of draft by Ervikasbhargava == |
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::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Ervikasbhargava|ts=12:22:29, 27 October 2020|draft=Draft:Rajesh_Krishnan_(filmmaker)}} |
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:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi == |
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I need help with my references and citations. |
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{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=12:42, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}} |
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I have added a lot of references to this article. |
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Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. |
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I want to know if this is correct and can i submit it for review? |
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I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions ''in this thread'' explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Ervikasbhargava|Ervikasbhargava]] ([[User talk:Ervikasbhargava|talk]]) 12:22, 27 October 2020 (UTC) |
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::I addressed the '''peacock prose''' by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 == |
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== Request on 13:49:39, 27 October 2020 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by PA Packard == |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|ts=16:09, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Alturas}} |
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{{anchor|13:49:39, 27 October 2020 review of submission by PA Packard}} |
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Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. [[Special:Contributions/2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689]] ([[User talk:2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|talk]]) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=PA Packard|ts=13:49:39, 27 October 2020|declinedtalk=Draft:The_Human_Journey}} |
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:We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide == |
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I submitted an article for the website humanjourney.us and got the reply: Please provide independent reliable sources that discusses the web site |
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{{Lafc|username=Kolorguide|ts=18:58, 27 December 2024|draft=Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy}} |
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I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists [[User:Kolorguide|Kolorguide]] ([[User talk:Kolorguide|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's ''very'' far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I looked up the backlinks to the website, to see if I could find another website that might review it. I found many mentions, including specialized forums and educational resources, including wikipedia articles, linking to the the humanjourney.us or using it as a reference. But I didn't find a website that did an extensive review of it. I might be mistaken but it seems to me that formal independent reviews of websites of this kind are not the norm. |
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== 19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak == |
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I'm not sure what to do at this point really. Is there any solution to this? Should I add what I wrote as a subsection of the wikipedia page about the charity that is behind the website? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Institute_for_the_Study_of_Human_Knowledge |
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{{Lafc|username=Movied Freak|ts=19:00, 27 December 2024|draft=User:Movied_Freak/sandbox}} |
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what should i have to add ? [[User:Movied Freak|Movied Freak]] ([[User talk:Movied Freak|talk]]) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Movied Freak}} YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see [[WP:NFF|notability of future films]]) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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cheers, |
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== 20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib == |
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{{Lafc|username=Abu muttalib|ts=20:20, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft: Deepali Sahay}} |
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The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Abu muttalib}} Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it. |
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:I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[edit]03:00, 21 December 2024 review of submission by MajorbucksYT
[edit]- MajorbucksYT (talk · contribs) (TB)
Are corp.roblox.com, kristolex.com, ginx.tv, dilt.co or Roblox dev forum reliable sources?
Roblox dev forum only allows a select amount of people post, not everyone.
MajorbucksYT (talk) 03:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MajorbucksYT: How many people are allowed to post is irrelevant. What matters is if they have an editorial staff that fact-checks, issues retractions, etc. And by default BBSes do not have those. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 09:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
08:46, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Vishalarya1
[edit]Please reload page Vishalarya1 (talk) 08:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not social media for people to tell about themselves or post their resume. Please use actual social media to do that. Writing about yourself is highly discouraged, please see the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 09:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
09:09, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Spworld2
[edit]I have been requesting to move this article to the main space for many months and have not received a proper result from the admins. The article is developed based on the available information and the sources are notable Spworld2 (talk) 09:09, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reviewers are not just admins. The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to post essays. 331dot (talk) 09:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
15:25, 21 December 2024 review of submission by JaredWEngland
[edit]- JaredWEngland (talk · contribs) (TB)
Greetings. I'm trying to establish a new page, but am unsure how to adequately address the comments provided to my first draft. I added several additional references, but am not sure that will be adequate. In short, I'm trying address some confusion with the hierarchy of existing Wikipedia articles. There are articles about Air Station Elizabeth City and the Elizabeth City Regional Airport. However, these are just two of several Base Elizabeth City tenants. My goal is to create a Base page to clarify the structure, better communicate what's at the campus, and provide a framework that will enable better information moving forward. Without a Base page, there isn't a location for this information to be built. Contributing to the challenge, the general pubic is largely unclear of the differing functions on the Base, so external references I can cite often have embedded in them the very confusion that I'm trying to address with this article. I know I cannot cite myself, but I'm a career Coast Guard officer who has worked on the Base at high levels. I'm seeking to address a problem I've seen both in the community here, and to a lesser degree within the Coast Guard itself. Especially for new members transferring to Elizabeth City, it is difficult to understand the makeup of the location. My hope is that this new page can become a repository for useful information to address these concerns, but it must exist first. Thanks for any help or guidance you can provide. JaredWEngland (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- The purposes you outline above are no doubt very laudable, but they are not what we do at Wikipedia. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what reliable indpendent sources say about a notable topic, and very little else. "A base page to clarify the structure" doesn't sound like that - it sounds more like original research, which is not permitted in Wikipedia articles. ColinFine (talk) 18:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: All but the articles on Ketchikan and Cape Cod predate the drafting process entirely, and those two predate drafting being made all-but mandatory. They did not go thru the same process as your draft has to. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Beware of the other stuff exists argument. Those other articles could themselves be inappropriate and just not addressed yet by volunteers.
- A draft article does not need to be complete, but it does need to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the base. If you have a source for the claim that it generates 50% of the GDP for part of North Carolina, that's a start. 331dot (talk) 18:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've edited again and resubmitted. Unfortunately, many of the sources for information I have aren't available on the internet, so citing them isn't possible. The most recent adds & references what I was able to find in existing sources.
- Taking a step back, I understand the need for a draft/review process but this feels excessive. I've put a fair amount of time into this (creating a page and learning all the rules/software/formatting/ect has a steep learning curve) for what still may be 100% waste effort. I'm afraid that most people will give up much quicker, and Wikipedia will devolve to the major mainstream dated info model that the now defunct encyclopedias of yore used. In the balance between the unconstrained free for all of the early wiki days and absolute odious control of a rigorous academic reference, this feels too much like the latter. However, I'm an infrequent Wikipedia contributor and light financial backer, so my opinion is likely of low value. Volunteers are the magic of Wikipedia, and that's mostly you. Even though this has been frustrating, thanks for what you do! JaredWEngland (talk) 20:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: You can still cite - and we can still accept - offline sources, as long as they are cited properly. If we disallowed offline sources, we'd basically have to decimate every article on historical events and figures that we have. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:14, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello again @JaredWEngland. Neither the number of people who work there nor the revenue it generates is necessarily indicative of meeting Wikipedia's criteria for notability. Meeting those criteria is the absolute first stage of creating an article, because otherwise the article is not going to get accepted. ColinFine (talk) 19:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sources do not need to be online, they only need to be publicly available; books/magazines in a library are fine.. 331dot (talk) 22:20, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
15:41, 21 December 2024 review of submission by ProofandTrust
[edit]- ProofandTrust (talk · contribs) (TB)
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you for your feedback on my submission. I’ve carefully reviewed your explanation but still find it unclear why my article was not accepted. I noticed that Wikipedia currently lacks a dedicated definition of Vendor Risk Assessment, a fundamental concept in information security. My goal is to provide an encyclopedic explanation of this widely used term to inform readers about its importance and relevance. Your feedback mentioned that the article resembles an essay. However, I intended it to be a neutral, fact-based description aligned with Wikipedia’s standards. If there are specific sections or phrases that need revision to make it more suitable, I’d appreciate detailed guidance. I’m committed to improving the article to meet Wikipedia's guidelines and would greatly value further clarification to ensure it aligns with community standards.
Thank you for your time and assistance. ProofandTrust (talk) 15:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @ProofandTrust. Your draft is a blog-post style essay/how to guide/critique. That's not what an encyclopaedic entry on Wikipedia about a subject should look like. Instead, you should be paraphrasing reliable published sources (not blog posts, which most of your sources are) in a dry, factual manner using the Wikipedia Voice. I am afraid you will have to completely re-write your draft from scratch and find new sources for there to be any chance of it being accepted. qcne (talk) 16:36, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
17:07, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Wilfred Day
[edit]- Wilfred Day (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am surprised this is not in place. It is highly relevant since the government will fall on the next confidence vote. What is wikipedia waiting for? Wilfred Day (talk) 17:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia, being an encyclopaedia and not a news organ, is waiting until there is substantial independent coverage of the subject in reliable sources. I suspect that by the time there are adequate sources for such an article, the election will already have taken place, so there will be no need for this article. But I know nothing of Canadian politics.
- See also there is no deadline. ColinFine (talk) 18:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- There are no certainties in life. We don't assume something might happen, no matter how likely it is. 331dot (talk) 23:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
December 22
[edit]06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007
[edit]To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game.
I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person.
I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files.
Thanks- MonkeyBanjo007 (talk) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MonkeyBanjo007 see Help:Pictures for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple independent reliable sources that notability do. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0
[edit]You Should Agree This Draft 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Link to the draft: Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar --bonadea contributions talk 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Previously answered here (question posted by blocked user User:Bollysocialmedia) and here (by User:Royaloaksschoolking) and here.
- See also: Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and this question as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account User:Shubhamxrameshwar564. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --bonadea contributions talk 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador
[edit]- Batoenonghistoryador (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello,
I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."?
Additionally, I have a few questions:
1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? 2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it?
Thank you so much for your guidance!
Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Batoenonghistoryador: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title.
- You can cite online PDFs with the {{cite web}} template. The
format=
parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. - Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliably published sources say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all?
- As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been reliably published or not. ColinFine (talk) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for this informative response. Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566
[edit]HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 (talk) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah okay. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05
[edit]How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? Nigel D James (talk) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Njames05: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should.
- One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say.
- You should also unbold the section headers. ColinFine (talk) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B
[edit]Check now 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B (talk) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. 331dot (talk) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127
[edit]This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion here on the Rafael de Miguel González page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft.
I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed.
I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: User:Timtrent, User:Joe Roe, User:Benison, User:Mr.choppers, and User:asilvering. Cheers. LR.127 (talk) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a request for comment) or on the more general Help Desk. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.
Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- asilvering (talk) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1
[edit]- Bentasyt.1 (talk · contribs) (TB)
what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia Bentasyt.1 (talk) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. 331dot (talk) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Bentasyt.1. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Very brief summary of writing an article:
- Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See WP:42
- If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else.
- If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it.
- ColinFine (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening
[edit]- Sophisticatedevening (talk · contribs) (TB)
I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. Sophisticatedevening (talk) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed up for you Sophisticatedevening. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins
[edit]Why was the article declined Mariah Hopkins (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Courtesy link: User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox ColinFine (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for notability - see WP:42. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have significant coverage of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited.
- Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources.
- Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as disruptive editing.
- My comments to another editor above are equally applicable to your case. ColinFine (talk) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
December 23
[edit]06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv
[edit]please upload my wikipedia
Sonshiv (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE
[edit]i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE (talk) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assuming you're Manasi32, please log into your account when editing.
- There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources.
- Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway.
- Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see WP:AUTOBIO for why you shouldn't. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032
[edit]- Thanvi 032 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. Thanvi 032 (talk) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: your draft Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanvi 032, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of Verifiability, a core content policy. Please read and study Reliable sources and Referencing for beginners. Cullen328 (talk) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. Thanvi 032 (talk) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you have made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400
[edit]Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You are wrong see Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. Theroadislong (talk) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Tropical Appreciater10001-400: not so; every article has to cite its sources.
- In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context.
- Thank you for your time and consideration. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. 331dot (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- User-generated content, such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70
[edit]- 14.194.64.70 (talk · contribs) (TB)
this is page information please live it. 14.194.64.70 (talk) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition
[edit]- Pr.nutrition (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. Pr.nutrition (talk) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pr.nutrition Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher
[edit]- FelixKerscher (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why was my submission declined? FelixKerscher (talk) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You could also ask the reviewer CSMention269 if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. KylieTastic (talk) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher: By commenting on their user talk page. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz
[edit]Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ?
I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments.
Regards. Zraffarz (talk) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. Theroadislong (talk) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work.
- Regards Zraffarz (talk) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? Draft:Surmesur
- Much appreciated Zraffarz (talk) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09
[edit]hey what exactly was wrong 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 (talk) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. ColinFine (talk) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 24
[edit]00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest
[edit]Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) Nycrest (talk) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nycrest "no promotion"? I don't see how
unorthodox approach to fine dining
,theatrical presentations
, andplayful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions
is neutral. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists?
- I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. Nycrest (talk) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing how this establishment meets WP:ORG- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. 331dot (talk) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212
[edit]I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. Hedax212 (talk) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hedax212 to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being
US patent number US4988065A
, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see Help:Your first article first. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer
[edit]- MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk · contribs) (TB)
Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello Knitsey (talk) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MarkDiBelloBiographer: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image.
- Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least.
- On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18
[edit]- Muhammedramees18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why My edit is declined? Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of notability, not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view.
- What is your relationship with this school? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Muhammedramees18. Writing a new article is much more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a conflict of interest. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible.
- Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world except you and your colleagues. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242
[edit]- 223.190.86.242 (talk · contribs) (TB)
how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article 223.190.86.242 (talk) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. cyberdog958Talk 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju
[edit]should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? Sunuraju (talk) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji
[edit]- JustBeenji (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. JustBeenji (talk) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: you are an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia.
- But no editor can magic notability out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It could be notable, as it does seem to be a popular series of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin is, let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: Popularity is fleeting, notability is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell
[edit]- SarahSamuell (talk · contribs) (TB)
i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? SarahSamuell (talk) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see WP:NSCHOOL and WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES. KylieTastic (talk) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @SarahSamuell. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 above, most of which applies to you as well. ColinFine (talk) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- In addition to what has already been said, there are serious problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at WP:NFC. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore
[edit]- WikiBaltimore (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission.....
"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater."
I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit.
For example, Silo Point is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past.
Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. WikiBaltimore (talk) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiBaltimore: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see WP:YESPROMO), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for WP:REFBOMBING purposes.
- Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- The references are about the projects Turner Development has been involved in, not, about Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's WP:OR. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well said, thank you for the feedback WikiBaltimore (talk) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez
[edit]- Juanestebanfernandez (talk · contribs) (TB)
I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. Juanestebanfernandez (talk) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Juanestebanfernandez: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources.
- Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like Language interpretation. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder
[edit]- CerebralPathfinder (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has my article been denied? I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- CerebralPathfinder I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? 331dot (talk) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah yes just seen! thank you CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
- If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see WP:PAID, as well as conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 25
[edit]05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS
[edit]- NOMAN ABBASS (talk · contribs) (TB)
I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me NOMAN ABBASS (talk) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NOMAN ABBASS: We do not accept guides. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710
[edit]- Anonymous 21710 (talk · contribs) (TB)
can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article.
Anonymous 21710 (talk) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Anonymous21710: Not only is this draft blatantly promotional and entirely unsourced, the subject is a minor and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence
[edit]- NakiwugeFlorence (talk · contribs) (TB)
What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general WP:GNG or the special WP:MUSICBIO guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement
[edit]- KimJongUnsBasement (talk · contribs) (TB)
It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. 331dot (talk) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @KimJongUnsBasement: footballers have to demonstrate notability per WP:GNG, which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none.
- What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- KimJonUnsBasement Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for a deletion discussion.
- As for other articles, see other stuff exists. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. 331dot (talk) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. 331dot (talk) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198
[edit]this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article 2.190.166.198 (talk) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. qcne (talk) 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso
[edit]I just wanted to create a politician page Amjsso (talk) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Amjsso, have you read the policy at WP:VERIFY? Everything on Wikipedia must have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. qcne (talk) 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18
[edit]- Sanjaygowda18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please don't write spam on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit Help:Your first article. qcne (talk) 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud
[edit]- AngelicaMonsalud (talk · contribs) (TB)
I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? AngelicaMonsalud (talk) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. Theroadislong (talk) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
December 26
[edit]06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23
[edit]- 117.254.37.23 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
- Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
- I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
- It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
- We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
- Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
- "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
- Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
- Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug
[edit]- Ramakrishnan.babug (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I know the reason for rejecting my article?
Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455
[edit]regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD
[edit]Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
- Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
- Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so
is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.{{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}
- The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
- You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
December 27
[edit]03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.
Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Fuzzpumpkin Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany
[edit]- Al Gattany (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi
[edit]- Itsfaizanfaizi (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions in this thread explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689
[edit]Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 (talk) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. 331dot (talk) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide
[edit]- Kolorguide (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists Kolorguide (talk) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's very far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak
[edit]- Movied Freak (talk · contribs) (TB)
what should i have to add ? Movied Freak (talk) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Movied Freak YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see notability of future films) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) 331dot (talk) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib
[edit]- Abu muttalib (talk · contribs) (TB)
The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. Abu muttalib (talk) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Abu muttalib Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it.
- I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? 331dot (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)