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Hello everyone. I reviewed this article and I think there are a few sections that could use some further development. The marriage section is one that I feel would have more information than what is given. I also checked the source for the first sentence that describes life satisfaction, and I believe it should be revised. The source cited states that it is more of a reflective state than a mood or emotion, but I feel as though the first sentence almost suggests that it is an emotion or mood. I would like to revise this to better represent the information in the source. [[User:Hannah Braithwaite|Hannah Braithwaite]] ([[User talk:Hannah Braithwaite|talk]]) 03:52, 21 January 2021 (UTC) |
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I added a in-text citation and an extra sentence to provide addition info on life satisfaction and wellbeing. I have a suggestion for the seasonal section. Rather than having the opinion of how our society should be more open to mental health or seasonal depression, there could be more factual info added on why our society could benefit from doing do. [[User:Kierstend08|Kierstend08]] ([[User talk:Kierstend08|talk]]) 03:33, 21 January 2021 (UTC) |
I added a in-text citation and an extra sentence to provide addition info on life satisfaction and wellbeing. I have a suggestion for the seasonal section. Rather than having the opinion of how our society should be more open to mental health or seasonal depression, there could be more factual info added on why our society could benefit from doing do. [[User:Kierstend08|Kierstend08]] ([[User talk:Kierstend08|talk]]) 03:33, 21 January 2021 (UTC) |
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Hello everyone. I reviewed this article and I think there are a few sections that could use some further development. The marriage section is one that I feel would have more information than what is given. I also checked the source for the first sentence that describes life satisfaction, and I believe it should be revised. The source cited states that it is more of a reflective state than a mood or emotion, but I feel as though the first sentence almost suggests that it is an emotion or mood. I would like to revise this to better represent the information in the source. Hannah Braithwaite (talk) 03:52, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
I added a in-text citation and an extra sentence to provide addition info on life satisfaction and wellbeing. I have a suggestion for the seasonal section. Rather than having the opinion of how our society should be more open to mental health or seasonal depression, there could be more factual info added on why our society could benefit from doing do. Kierstend08 (talk) 03:33, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
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The text is similar to that in Subjective life satisfaction so I have merged that into this article and added a redirect. Ben Finn (talk) 18:33, 19 November 2010 (UTC)
I added references to the Life Satisfaction and Age part of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wallm53 (talk • contribs) 08:53, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
I added references to the Life Satisfaction's Religion section, please edit or remove them if inappropriate. This is an assignment for project. Windvally (talk) 05:17, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
My name is Neris Nfor, am doing this for my Psychology class. Here are my sources: http://www.oecdbetterlifeindex.org/topics/life-satisfaction/ http://www.foxnews.com/health/2011/07/17/top-10-proven-ways-to-improve-life-satisfaction/ http://ftp.iza.org/dp4015.pdf
The sources you used to improve this article were very good secondary journal and/or websites because not only are they dependable but recent too. There wasn’t much movement of editing in this article since mid 2012, so the new information you added really help out understanding life satisfaction. Wmiguel08 (talk) 01:03, 21 March 2013 (UTC)