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Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
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::''They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City.'' - "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch. |
::''<s>They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City.'' - "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch.</s> |
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::''The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million'' - reads oddly |
::''<s>The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million'' - reads oddly</s> |
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::''The Football Association charged him with misconduct.'' ....aaaand the punishment was....? |
::''<s>The Football Association charged him with misconduct.'' ....aaaand the punishment was....?</s> |
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::Earwig's copyvio [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=2015+FA+Cup+Final&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 okay] - false positive due to some quotes. |
::Earwig's copyvio [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=2015+FA+Cup+Final&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 okay] - false positive due to some quotes. |
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'''1. Well written?:''' |
'''1. Well written?:''' |
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:Prose quality: {{GAList/check| |
:Prose quality: {{GAList/check|yes}} |
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:[[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|Manual of Style]] compliance: {{GAList/check|yes}} |
:[[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|Manual of Style]] compliance: {{GAList/check|yes}} |
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'''Overall''': |
'''Overall''': |
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:Pass or Fail: {{GAList/check| |
:Pass or Fail: {{GAList/check|yes}} - <s>a couple of minor prose issues</s>. Fixed a couple of typoes I couldn't be arsed noting here (and were straightforward). Nice work. [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 09:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
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::{{U|Casliber}} thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] <small>([[User talk:The Rambling Man|Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!]])</small> 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
::{{U|Casliber}} thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] <small>([[User talk:The Rambling Man|Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!]])</small> 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
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:::All good/nice work [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 12:36, 14 July 2021 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City.- "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch.
The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million- reads oddly
The Football Association charged him with misconduct.....aaaand the punishment was....?
- Earwig's copyvio okay - false positive due to some quotes.
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
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a couple of minor prose issues. Fixed a couple of typoes I couldn't be arsed noting here (and were straightforward). Nice work. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)- Casliber thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- All good/nice work Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:36, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- Casliber thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)