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===Good article criteria=== |
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===={{GAList/check}} Well written==== |
===={{GAList/check}} Well written==== |
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*Maybe spell out the IBSF in full. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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===={{GAList/check}} Verifiable with no original research==== |
===={{GAList/check}} Verifiable with no original research==== |
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*Luckily for me, I have access to reference 1 through the Wikipedia Library and reference 19 through some other means. For the other three print references, I will have to assume good faith. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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*The archive for reference 3 does not want to load for me. I tried Google Chrome, Firefox and Microsoft Edge. Is that the case for you? Is it possible to use an archive from a different archiving service? [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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*Not required for GA, but reference 3 is dead, so you might want to put the archive link in front of the original link. If would do it myself, but Template:Cite web is not used so I won't. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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*All references appear to be from reliable sources. I have yet to check each one to see if they match up with the article. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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===={{GAList/check}} Broad in its coverage==== |
===={{GAList/check}} Broad in its coverage==== |
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*{{tq|Chamberlain died on 28 May 1944 aged 88.}} – You could change this to {{tq|Chamberlain died from myocarditis at his home on 28 May 1944, aged 48.}} As that information is there in the reference, you'd might as well use it. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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===={{GAList/check}} Neutral==== |
===={{GAList/check}} Neutral==== |
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===={{GAList/check}} Stable==== |
===={{GAList/check|yes}} Stable==== |
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*No edit wars or content disputes. Article passes this criterion. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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===={{GAList/check}} Illustrated, if possible==== |
===={{GAList/check}} Illustrated, if possible==== |
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*Copyright status of the sole image used is acceptable. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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*If all the caption is saying is his name (which is already at the top of the infobox), then I think there should be no caption. [[WP:CAP]] allows for no caption in this case. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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*This isn't necessary for GA, but the image should have alt text to aid with accessibility. [[User:Steelkamp|Steelkamp]] ([[User talk:Steelkamp|talk]]) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC) |
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===General=== |
===General=== |
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Reviewer: Steelkamp (talk · contribs) 14:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Hello. I will be doing a good article review of this article. I aim to get the review done within the next few days. If you would like to return the favour, I have several good article nominations active right now. Good luck. Steelkamp (talk) 14:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Good article criteria
Well written
- Maybe spell out the IBSF in full. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research
- Luckily for me, I have access to reference 1 through the Wikipedia Library and reference 19 through some other means. For the other three print references, I will have to assume good faith. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- The archive for reference 3 does not want to load for me. I tried Google Chrome, Firefox and Microsoft Edge. Is that the case for you? Is it possible to use an archive from a different archiving service? Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- Not required for GA, but reference 3 is dead, so you might want to put the archive link in front of the original link. If would do it myself, but Template:Cite web is not used so I won't. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- All references appear to be from reliable sources. I have yet to check each one to see if they match up with the article. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Broad in its coverage
Chamberlain died on 28 May 1944 aged 88.
– You could change this toChamberlain died from myocarditis at his home on 28 May 1944, aged 48.
As that information is there in the reference, you'd might as well use it. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Neutral
Stable
- No edit wars or content disputes. Article passes this criterion. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Illustrated, if possible
- Copyright status of the sole image used is acceptable. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- If all the caption is saying is his name (which is already at the top of the infobox), then I think there should be no caption. WP:CAP allows for no caption in this case. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- This isn't necessary for GA, but the image should have alt text to aid with accessibility. Steelkamp (talk) 14:58, 20 April 2022 (UTC)