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Edward Eaton Mason moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Edward Eaton Mason, is not suitable as written to remain published. It appears there is a WP:UPE or WP:COI conflict. Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, and have addressed the UPE/COI issue, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. As per WP policy, please do not move into mainspace yourself. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 11:54, 21 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Too long

The intent is not a biography. Limit the draft to Mason. I've made some cuts as examples of where information was not relevant, even if referenced. David notMD (talk) 21:45, 21 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@David notMD I did not click "Submit your draft for review". I agree that there is much that can be cut. I will learn from your examples. However Mason's work with tuberculosis and treatment of giant hernias with air injected to stretch the abdomen are important to his career. I will continue seek your and other's help. I hope I have answered the UPE and COI issues. ParaDocs (talk) 04:10, 22 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"important to his career" or contribute to his notability? Only obesity surgery matters. Also, do you have a strong reference for "father of obesity surgery"? David notMD (talk) 11:55, 22 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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	:@[[User:David notMD\|David notMD]] I did not click "Submit your draft for review". I agree that there is much that can be cut. I will learn from your examples. However Mason's work with tuberculosis and treatment of giant hernias with air injected to stretch the abdomen are important to his career. I will continue seek your and other's help. I hope I have answered the UPE and COI issues. [[User:DavidTanCreti\|ParaDocs]] ([[User talk:DavidTanCreti#top\|talk]]) 04:10, 22 November 2022 (UTC)		:@[[User:David notMD\|David notMD]] I did not click "Submit your draft for review". I agree that there is much that can be cut. I will learn from your examples. However Mason's work with tuberculosis and treatment of giant hernias with air injected to stretch the abdomen are important to his career. I will continue seek your and other's help. I hope I have answered the UPE and COI issues. [[User:DavidTanCreti\|ParaDocs]] ([[User talk:DavidTanCreti#top\|talk]]) 04:10, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
			::"important to his career" or contribute to his notability? Only obesity surgery matters. Also, do you have a strong reference for "father of obesity surgery"? [[User:David notMD\|David notMD]] ([[User talk:David notMD\|talk]]) 11:55, 22 November 2022 (UTC)