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67.231.194.182 (talk) 20:02, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

American Indians should be changed to Native Americans. Since "Indians" is just a mistake made by Christopher Columbus.

I did it, although some quotes couldn't be changed obviously.βӪᑸᙥӴ • Talk • Contribs 17:00, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

We go by Common Name - that, and the vast majority of the indigenous lower-48 state American First Nations PREFER to go by "Indian." HammerFilmFan (talk) 15:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Better summary information?

There's some basic summary information that I had trouble finding in this article: how many members did the expedition have, and what were there names? How many died on the trip? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dylan Thurston (talk • contribs) 11:08, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Aftermath: Stephen Ambrose sentence

The Aftermath section has a full sentence apparently taken directly from “Reporting to the President, September 23-December 31, 1806” by Stephen Ambrose without attribution:

In the course of their journey, they acquired a knowledge of numerous tribes of Native Americans hitherto unknown; they informed themselves of the trade which may be carried on with them, the best channels and positions for it, and they are enabled to give with accuracy the geography of the line they pursued. 2600:6C4A:413F:97A0:217F:C530:692D:BA0A (talk) 04:58, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Can you use the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/York_(explorer) 2601:646:8400:C150:C8CF:AF5C:BF9B:EC4D (talk) 03:01, 4 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: Link already present in article Tollens (talk) 03:12, 4 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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- [[Special:Contributions/67.231.194.182|67.231.194.182]] ([[User talk:67.231.194.182|talk]]) 20:02, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
+[[Special:Contributions/67.231.194.182|67.231.194.182]] ([[User talk:67.231.194.182|talk]]) 20:02, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
+American Indians should be changed to Native Americans. Since "Indians" is just a mistake made by Christopher Columbus.
-:Bbbuihy [[Special:Contributions/209.136.168.26|209.136.168.26]] ([[User talk:209.136.168.26|talk]]) 14:03, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
-American Indians should be changed to Native Americans. Since "Indians" is just a mistake made by Christopher Columbus.
 :I did it, although some quotes couldn't be changed obviously.[[User:Bop34|βӪᑸᙥӴ]] • [[User talk:Bop34|Talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Bop34|Contribs]] 17:00, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
-:We go by Common Name - that, and the vast majority of the indigenous lower-48 state American First Nations PREFER to go by "Indian." [[User:HammerFilmFan|HammerFilmFan]] ([[User talk:HammerFilmFan|talk]]) 15:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
+::We go by Common Name - that, and the vast majority of the indigenous lower-48 state American First Nations PREFER to go by "Indian." [[User:HammerFilmFan|HammerFilmFan]] ([[User talk:HammerFilmFan|talk]]) 15:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
 == Better summary information? ==
+There's some basic summary information that I had trouble finding in this article: how many members did the expedition have, and what were there names? How many died on the trip? <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Dylan Thurston|Dylan Thurston]] ([[User talk:Dylan Thurston#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Dylan Thurston|contribs]]) 11:08, 5 September 2021 (UTC)</small>
-There's some basic summary information that I had trouble finding in this article: how many members did the expedition have, and what were there names? How many died on the trip?
 == Aftermath: Stephen Ambrose sentence ==
 The Aftermath section has a full sentence apparently taken directly from “Reporting to the President, September 23-December 31, 1806” by Stephen Ambrose without attribution:
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 == Semi-protected edit request on 4 April 2023 ==
 {{Edit semi-protected|Lewis and Clark Expedition|answered=yes}}
 Can you use the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/York_(explorer) [[Special:Contributions/2601:646:8400:C150:C8CF:AF5C:BF9B:EC4D|2601:646:8400:C150:C8CF:AF5C:BF9B:EC4D]] ([[User talk:2601:646:8400:C150:C8CF:AF5C:BF9B:EC4D|talk]]) 03:01, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
 :[[File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:ESp --> Link already present in article [[User:Tollens|Tollens]] ([[User talk:Tollens|talk]]) 03:12, 4 April 2023 (UTC)