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Your submission at Articles for creation: Geoffrey Woo (November 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sources look to be decent; those are some heavy hitting publishers, although this article is still very much written in a promotional tone which needs to be fixed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 03:41, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I've gone through line-by-line and deleted any promotional, non-neutral language leftover from the original contributor. I've also added a couple additional sources. 104.63.84.181 (talk) 17:16, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 104.63.84.181! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 03:41, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Geoffrey Woo has been accepted

Geoffrey Woo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Missvain (talk) 16:39, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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