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* ...under "Network Structure"... |
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** "significant ties and support between dedicated neo-luddite groups" -- no evidence of ties between any of the groups listed |
** "significant ties and support between dedicated neo-luddite groups" -- no evidence of ties between any of the groups listed |
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:Not yet. |
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** "providing shelter outside the US to terrorist fugitives" [The Anarchist Organization] |
** "providing shelter outside the US to terrorist fugitives" [The Anarchist Organization] |
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** "providing... anonymous website hosting and encrypted email communications for various ad hoc sabotage groups or campaigns" [the associated link does not support this claim -- it appears to include links to 3rd party tools and educational material, no indication of providing named services] |
** "providing... anonymous website hosting and encrypted email communications for various ad hoc sabotage groups or campaigns" [the associated link does not support this claim -- it appears to include links to 3rd party tools and educational material, no indication of providing named services] |
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:It is not a 3rd party site, TAO.ca treats those sites as subsidiary sites providing products and services to its members.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** Alleged funding sources for Ruckus Society, and relevance of that funding allegation to the remainder of the article |
** Alleged funding sources for Ruckus Society, and relevance of that funding allegation to the remainder of the article |
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: Already referenced. Relevance is that the neo-luddite movement has significant funding channelled to it from wealthy individuals. I will have more names to name in the future on this.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** Alleged operations of IWW and activities of "Project Underground" (moles.org link is dead, but whois indicates it is registered to Project Underground in Berkeley CA) |
** Alleged operations of IWW and activities of "Project Underground" (moles.org link is dead, but whois indicates it is registered to Project Underground in Berkeley CA) |
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: And what is the address? A bookshop. An IWW related bookshop. At least it was last time I checked. [[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** Alleged "entryism" campaign of WWP; alleged relationship between WWP and other named groups |
** Alleged "entryism" campaign of WWP; alleged relationship between WWP and other named groups |
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:Entryist campaign is well documented both in the US and Britain.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Use of Ad Hoc Fronts"... |
* ...under "Use of Ad Hoc Fronts"... |
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** alleged coordination/adoption of a uniform strategy employing decentralized ad-hoc fronts. [[Occam's Razor]]: without evidence of coordination, incidents should be considered separate. |
** alleged coordination/adoption of a uniform strategy employing decentralized ad-hoc fronts. [[Occam's Razor]]: without evidence of coordination, incidents should be considered separate. |
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* ...under "Violence"... |
* ...under "Violence"... |
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** allegation that 2 specific incidents and 2 categorical groupings of incidents are "successful neo-luddite attacks". |
** allegation that 2 specific incidents and 2 categorical groupings of incidents are "successful neo-luddite attacks". |
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: Offhand, the burning of the Deer Valley ski lodge was confessed to by a self-admitted member of a neo-luddite cell, as was the NYC apartment building. [[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Politics: Stem cells"... |
* ...under "Politics: Stem cells"... |
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** relevance of Bush policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and Bush actions |
** relevance of Bush policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and Bush actions |
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:As Bush policy was written by Kass and Fukuyama, self-declared 'bio-luddites', the relevance is clear.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** relevance of EU GMO policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and EU government actions. |
** relevance of EU GMO policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and EU government actions. |
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:Clear lobbying actions of neo-luddites, like Prince Charles, Jeremy Rifkin, among others, in lobbying for limits on GMO. These will be documented.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Prominent neo-luddites"... |
* ...under "Prominent neo-luddites"... |
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** relationship of Paul R. Ehrlich, Fritjof Capra and Donella Meadows to the activities or organizations described in the article |
** relationship of Paul R. Ehrlich, Fritjof Capra and Donella Meadows to the activities or organizations described in the article |
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:Primarily propaganda oriented relationship, although Meadows' Institute has some operational links to the active movement.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** relationship of Mike Roselle, Kirkpatrick Sale, Howie Wolk, Bill Joy, or Bill McKibben to activities or organizations described in the article |
** relationship of Mike Roselle, Kirkpatrick Sale, Howie Wolk, Bill Joy, or Bill McKibben to activities or organizations described in the article |
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: All exist and will be documented. |
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** relevance of Fukuyama's predictions on fall of USSR to content of article. |
** relevance of Fukuyama's predictions on fall of USSR to content of article. |
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: Goes to his credibility as a social scientist.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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The article includes the following POV language unsupported by evidence: |
The article includes the following POV language unsupported by evidence: |
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* ...under "Network Structure"... |
* ...under "Network Structure"... |
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** "Ruckus Society operates several boot camps for... ''neo-luddite saboteurs''" |
** "Ruckus Society operates several boot camps for... ''neo-luddite saboteurs''" |
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I have already provided several references which document this as a fact. |
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** Comparison between infoshop.org and Sinn Fein |
** Comparison between infoshop.org and Sinn Fein |
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: This was a comparison of tactics/strategy and not policy. Sinn Fein is a legitimate political party that acts as a PR front for the IRA. This is documented and proven, yet they have always maintained public claims to not have control of any kind over. Infoshop.org's various cells and committees and sites operate in a similar fashion to arms-length neo-luddite operations groups. Should I instead compare them as Al jazeera relates to al Quaeda?[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** "In this [antecedent unclear], WWP is using luddism to push its goal..." |
** "In this [antecedent unclear], WWP is using luddism to push its goal..." |
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WWP's entryist campaign and its goals are well documented in many other sites, which I will provide links to.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Violence"... |
* ...under "Violence"... |
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** "widespread embarrassment and half-hearted disavowal by mainstream members of the movement" |
** "widespread embarrassment and half-hearted disavowal by mainstream members of the movement" |
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Many movement members are against violence, but tend to express their disapproval in the same sort of rationalizing way that anti-abortion protesters who cherish life disapprove of but excuse the actions of those who kill abortionists.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"... |
* ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"... |
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** "no transhumanist has ever attacked or sabotaged anyone or anything, while luddites do so as a matter of right." |
** "no transhumanist has ever attacked or sabotaged anyone or anything, while luddites do so as a matter of right." |
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: There is a complete lack of any documented evidence that transhumanists, who tend to be openness fetishists to varying degrees, have ever attacked, sabotaged, or otherwise initiated agression against any luddite individual, organization, asset, or demonstration. You can't prove a negative other than by lack of evidence. [[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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The article uses the following excessively vague and/or "[[WP:AWT|weasel terms]]": |
The article uses the following excessively vague and/or "[[WP:AWT|weasel terms]]": |
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* ...under "Violence"... |
* ...under "Violence"... |
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** "destruction of genetically modified organisms in a number of locations" |
** "destruction of genetically modified organisms in a number of locations" |
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Well documented vandalism and destruction of GMO plants and animals at farms and labs across the US, Canada, and Europe since the late 1990's.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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** "attacks on prominent researchers and technology executives beyond the highly publicized serial bombings of the Unabomber." |
** "attacks on prominent researchers and technology executives beyond the highly publicized serial bombings of the Unabomber." |
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All valid and documented elsewhere, which i will link to later.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Politics: GMO"... |
* ...under "Politics: GMO"... |
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** "A number of countries..." |
** "A number of countries..." |
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Documented fact, the Precautionary Principle is a part of the EU constitution, for instance.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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* ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"... |
* ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"... |
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** "...members of the right wing acting in opposition to technology are primarily at the level of..." |
** "...members of the right wing acting in opposition to technology are primarily at the level of..." |
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As stated, other than anti-abortion terrorists, there is a complete dearth of violence oriented right-wing luddites. They all seem to prefer to work through political channels at this point. If this changes I will be sure to note it.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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Please review [[WP:NPOV]] and add your comments here. Thanks. [[User:Lukethelibrarian|Lukethelibrarian]] 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
Please review [[WP:NPOV]] and add your comments here. Thanks. [[User:Lukethelibrarian|Lukethelibrarian]] 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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:I appreciate your concerns over this. As previously stated several times, I am gradually putting up references to everything, but don't have a lot of time every day to put into this, so I would appreciate some forebearance in finishing the documentation. The allegations are very serious, however I highly doubt you would demand similar documentation of every action committed by other terrorist organizations, like, say, the IRA, etc.. I intend to cover all sides of the issue, which is why I'm also including the right-wing luddism as well. I think it is important that this movement be documented as extensively as possible and I am welcoming other contributors in this effort (I have already enlisted support from others who have investigated this movement), but I object to being held to a higher standard than is accepted with those documenting other subversive/secretive insurgency/guerilla/terrorist organizations which normally require a sophisticated intelligence service to find out extensive information about. I also appreciate those who have restored edits in the past that have been erased by some I suspect of either sympathy for or involvement in the neo-luddite movement. They have a vested interest in keeping their organization and activities secret from the general public in order to invent the false public perception of a 'grass roots' uprising. I guarantee you that everything here will be either documented or removed/edited by myself. [[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:12, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
:I appreciate your concerns over this. As previously stated several times, I am gradually putting up references to everything, but don't have a lot of time every day to put into this, so I would appreciate some forebearance in finishing the documentation. The allegations are very serious, however I highly doubt you would demand similar documentation of every action committed by other terrorist organizations, like, say, the IRA, etc.. I intend to cover all sides of the issue, which is why I'm also including the right-wing luddism as well. I think it is important that this movement be documented as extensively as possible and I am welcoming other contributors in this effort (I have already enlisted support from others who have investigated this movement), but I object to being held to a higher standard than is accepted with those documenting other subversive/secretive insurgency/guerilla/terrorist organizations which normally require a sophisticated intelligence service to find out extensive information about. I also appreciate those who have restored edits in the past that have been erased by some I suspect of either sympathy for or involvement in the neo-luddite movement. They have a vested interest in keeping their organization and activities secret from the general public in order to invent the false public perception of a 'grass roots' uprising. I guarantee you that everything here will be either documented or removed/edited by myself. Part of the problem is that these groups have been sanitizing themselves lately, eliminating a lot of material that used to exist on the web.[[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:12, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
Revision as of 05:34, 3 June 2005
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I "fixed" this entry, removing a bunch of propaganda from right wing sources. Frankly, this article shouldn't even exist, because there is simply no self-identified "neo-luddite" movement. This entry is an attempt by right wingers to establish that such a mythical movement exists. The stuff about Teresa Heniz Kerry funding this so-called movement is the dead giveaway that this entry has no factual basis.
How do people go about removing article from Wikipedia that have no factual basis? This "neo-luddite" movement is a right wing fantasy.
Chuck Munson. (Infoshop.org).
- Here is Wikipedia's deletion policy. The term "neo-luddite" is in common usage, and I doubt you will find much community consensus for deletion. While few would identify themselves as "neo-luddites", there certainly is a diverse movement advocating everything from a critical analysis of modern technologies to the elimination of such technologies. ElBenevolente 22:48, 21 Apr 2005 (UTC)
I concur that this article is still POV-heavy; the list of "prominent neo-luddites" is particularly suspicious for the reasons cited by Munson above. Specifically, I removed Gretel Ehlrich from the list after reviewing a number of interviews (i.e. Library Journal 129:18 [84] 15 Nov 2004) with Ehlrich as well as biographical overviews of her life and writings (see Contemporary Authors and Dictionary of Literary Biography) which showed no evidence of the positions, beliefs or activities described by the article. Lukethelibrarian 21:36, 31 May 2005 (UTC)
- I concur that Gretel Ehrlich doesn't belong there, someone modified the earlier reference to Paul R Ehrlich, who is a noted neo-malthusian/neo-luddite. I have done extensive research on the movement and am working on this article. I do not have time to complete it at once. However, Munson is a member of one group involved in the network, so his opinions here amount to non-NPOV revisionism and disinformation. Mlorrey 20:00, 1 Jun 2005 (UTC)
On Fukuyama
"Fukuyama is famously wrong for predicting the end of history with the fall of the U.S.S.R". Yet the The End of History says "Fukuyama's thesis is often misinterpreted and misunderstood. For example, it is frequently claimed that Fukuyama believes that history ended in 1989 (with the fall of the Berlin Wall)."
- Fukuyama says, "What we may be witnessing in not just the end of the Cold War, or the passing of a particular period of post-war history, but the end of history as such: that is, the end point of mankind's ideological evolution and the universalization of Western liberal democracy as the final form of human government." (quoted from "The End of History?", 1989) What is clear to most is that liberal democracy is not the end-state of human ideological evolution, despite its continuing attempts to retain the idea of the social-welfare semi-free market nation-state through hook, crook, or force of arms. Fukuyama is famously wrong because the promise of transhuman advancement and the future technological singularity indicate a future stage of punctuated equilibrium in human affairs, the results of which are impossible to predict. See Ray Kurzweil's books for further elucidation on these ideas. It is for this reason that Fukuyama now calls transhumanism, "the world's most dangerous idea", if only because it will further demonstrate how wrong he was. Transhumanism is dangerous to his future royalty stream... Mlorrey 16:43, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)
Specific POV concerns
It seems to me that this topic is covered more thoroughly and with better NPOV in Primitivism. Could this topic be redirected there?
My specific reasons for adding the NPOV dispute tag are the following.
The article fails to provide evidence to support/document:
- ...under "Network Structure"...
- "significant ties and support between dedicated neo-luddite groups" -- no evidence of ties between any of the groups listed
- Not yet.
- "providing shelter outside the US to terrorist fugitives" [The Anarchist Organization]
- "providing... anonymous website hosting and encrypted email communications for various ad hoc sabotage groups or campaigns" [the associated link does not support this claim -- it appears to include links to 3rd party tools and educational material, no indication of providing named services]
- It is not a 3rd party site, TAO.ca treats those sites as subsidiary sites providing products and services to its members.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- Alleged funding sources for Ruckus Society, and relevance of that funding allegation to the remainder of the article
- Already referenced. Relevance is that the neo-luddite movement has significant funding channelled to it from wealthy individuals. I will have more names to name in the future on this.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- Alleged operations of IWW and activities of "Project Underground" (moles.org link is dead, but whois indicates it is registered to Project Underground in Berkeley CA)
- And what is the address? A bookshop. An IWW related bookshop. At least it was last time I checked. Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- Alleged "entryism" campaign of WWP; alleged relationship between WWP and other named groups
- Entryist campaign is well documented both in the US and Britain.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Use of Ad Hoc Fronts"...
- alleged coordination/adoption of a uniform strategy employing decentralized ad-hoc fronts. Occam's Razor: without evidence of coordination, incidents should be considered separate.
- ...under "Violence"...
- allegation that 2 specific incidents and 2 categorical groupings of incidents are "successful neo-luddite attacks".
- Offhand, the burning of the Deer Valley ski lodge was confessed to by a self-admitted member of a neo-luddite cell, as was the NYC apartment building. Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Politics: Stem cells"...
- relevance of Bush policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and Bush actions
- As Bush policy was written by Kass and Fukuyama, self-declared 'bio-luddites', the relevance is clear.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- relevance of EU GMO policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and EU government actions.
- Clear lobbying actions of neo-luddites, like Prince Charles, Jeremy Rifkin, among others, in lobbying for limits on GMO. These will be documented.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Prominent neo-luddites"...
- relationship of Paul R. Ehrlich, Fritjof Capra and Donella Meadows to the activities or organizations described in the article
- Primarily propaganda oriented relationship, although Meadows' Institute has some operational links to the active movement.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- relationship of Mike Roselle, Kirkpatrick Sale, Howie Wolk, Bill Joy, or Bill McKibben to activities or organizations described in the article
- All exist and will be documented.
- relevance of Fukuyama's predictions on fall of USSR to content of article.
- Goes to his credibility as a social scientist.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
The article includes the following POV language unsupported by evidence:
- ...under "Network Structure"...
- "Ruckus Society operates several boot camps for... neo-luddite saboteurs"
I have already provided several references which document this as a fact.
- Comparison between infoshop.org and Sinn Fein
- This was a comparison of tactics/strategy and not policy. Sinn Fein is a legitimate political party that acts as a PR front for the IRA. This is documented and proven, yet they have always maintained public claims to not have control of any kind over. Infoshop.org's various cells and committees and sites operate in a similar fashion to arms-length neo-luddite operations groups. Should I instead compare them as Al jazeera relates to al Quaeda?Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- "In this [antecedent unclear], WWP is using luddism to push its goal..."
WWP's entryist campaign and its goals are well documented in many other sites, which I will provide links to.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Violence"...
- "widespread embarrassment and half-hearted disavowal by mainstream members of the movement"
Many movement members are against violence, but tend to express their disapproval in the same sort of rationalizing way that anti-abortion protesters who cherish life disapprove of but excuse the actions of those who kill abortionists.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"...
- "no transhumanist has ever attacked or sabotaged anyone or anything, while luddites do so as a matter of right."
- There is a complete lack of any documented evidence that transhumanists, who tend to be openness fetishists to varying degrees, have ever attacked, sabotaged, or otherwise initiated agression against any luddite individual, organization, asset, or demonstration. You can't prove a negative other than by lack of evidence. Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
The article uses the following excessively vague and/or "weasel terms":
- ...under "Network Structure"...
- ..."to what many consider to be a rather extreme degree"
- ...under "Violence"...
- "destruction of genetically modified organisms in a number of locations"
Well documented vandalism and destruction of GMO plants and animals at farms and labs across the US, Canada, and Europe since the late 1990's.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- "attacks on prominent researchers and technology executives beyond the highly publicized serial bombings of the Unabomber."
All valid and documented elsewhere, which i will link to later.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Politics: GMO"...
- "A number of countries..."
Documented fact, the Precautionary Principle is a part of the EU constitution, for instance.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"...
- "...members of the right wing acting in opposition to technology are primarily at the level of..."
As stated, other than anti-abortion terrorists, there is a complete dearth of violence oriented right-wing luddites. They all seem to prefer to work through political channels at this point. If this changes I will be sure to note it.Mlorrey 05:34, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)
Please review WP:NPOV and add your comments here. Thanks. Lukethelibrarian 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- I appreciate your concerns over this. As previously stated several times, I am gradually putting up references to everything, but don't have a lot of time every day to put into this, so I would appreciate some forebearance in finishing the documentation. The allegations are very serious, however I highly doubt you would demand similar documentation of every action committed by other terrorist organizations, like, say, the IRA, etc.. I intend to cover all sides of the issue, which is why I'm also including the right-wing luddism as well. I think it is important that this movement be documented as extensively as possible and I am welcoming other contributors in this effort (I have already enlisted support from others who have investigated this movement), but I object to being held to a higher standard than is accepted with those documenting other subversive/secretive insurgency/guerilla/terrorist organizations which normally require a sophisticated intelligence service to find out extensive information about. I also appreciate those who have restored edits in the past that have been erased by some I suspect of either sympathy for or involvement in the neo-luddite movement. They have a vested interest in keeping their organization and activities secret from the general public in order to invent the false public perception of a 'grass roots' uprising. I guarantee you that everything here will be either documented or removed/edited by myself. Part of the problem is that these groups have been sanitizing themselves lately, eliminating a lot of material that used to exist on the web.Mlorrey 05:12, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)