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This article almost makes no sense, both grammatically and in composition. It needs to be totally re-written. |
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[[User:Guradi|Guradi]] ([[User talk:Guradi|talk]]) 16:05, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[[Image:Flag_of Chile.svg|25px]] |
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Revision as of 16:05, 31 May 2008
y copied the page from the spanish version, hope you guys can improve the page, y dont know how to do it, but with your help it can be as bettes as the spanish one
Gabrielzorz (talk) 01:12, 5 April 2008 (UTC)Jaidar Saud
This article almost makes no sense, both grammatically and in composition. It needs to be totally re-written.
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Hi, I'm trying to rewrite the article. Please be patient. Jump in to aid anytime you want.
