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I need to do a project on Aerobie and i need some help. I have a few questions I would like to ask. So if anyone would be kind and knows a lot about Aerobie please help me.

A picture of an aerobie in your article might help.

I've improved the article a little bit and added my picture. It's not a very good picture, but better than nothing. -SpellcheckW7 (talk) 04:48, 16 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A revision way back had an a picture (http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aerobie&oldid=182438544), but someone blanked it, and it was rebuilt rather than reverted. If I wasn't the middle of exams I'd look at combining that revision and the current one. mode_seven (talk) 12:09, 16 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the tip. I've put the old version in with the current one while the article is under construction for comparison in order to find improvements from the old version that are not in the new one. -SpellcheckW7 (talk) 22:16, 16 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Revamp

I've added the missing elements from the old article, which consisted of some internal links, the Aerobie Sprint image, and an additional paragraph about a World Record attempt. I've seen a couple additional words that can also be linked. -SpellcheckW7 (talk) 01:18, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've also made various other corrections and modifications. Hopefully, everything flies. :) The Sprint image is much better. If you hate the Pro image that I added, you have my permission to remove it. -SpellcheckW7 (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have, I'm a photographer so pictures with so many artifacts make me cringe ;). Great work sorting the article! mode_seven (talk) 15:36, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I want to divide the article into sections and change the products paragraph into a bulleted list. -SpellcheckW7 (talk) 17:10, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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 I've also made various other corrections and modifications. Hopefully, everything ''flies''.   :) The Sprint image is much better. If you hate the Pro image that I added, you have my permission to remove it. -[[User:SpellcheckW7|SpellcheckW7]] ([[User talk:SpellcheckW7|talk]]) 02:50, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
 :I have, I'm a photographer so pictures with so many artifacts make me cringe ;). Great work sorting the article! [[User:Tom A Smith|mode_seven]] ([[User talk:Tom A Smith|talk]]) 15:36, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
+I want to divide the article into sections and change the products paragraph into a bulleted list. -[[User:SpellcheckW7|SpellcheckW7]] ([[User talk:SpellcheckW7|talk]]) 17:10, 17 June 2008 (UTC)