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Fixed, thanks 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)djs[reply]

Stabbed

The article says she was stabbed, but "so no one had realized she'd been stabbed, and thought perhaps she had a seizure or medical ailment. The identity of the man/men who spoke to the desk clerk has never been determined." Clearly someone at some stage realised she had been stabbed or we wouldn't know she was stabbed in the article. I presume this was discovered in the autopsy, but this isn't clear from the article. Also the time is given in 12 hour format with making it clear if it was am or pm. The fact that she was supposed to be there during office hours and it seems unlikely the library was open at 4am suggests its pm but this isn't clear. Nil Einne (talk) 17:45, 4 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed, thanks! Any other suggestions to help get this pages' quality rating up? 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:07, 10 August 2009 (UTC) djs[reply]

One or two

It is suprising that the desk clerk cannot remember how many men spoke to him or her. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.179.49.237 (talk) 15:28, 2 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I know...Between the time that has surpassed (clerk has since passed away) and the inaccuracy of news reports at the time, it's hard to tell if the police know how many people there were in reality, or if the confusion goes all the way to the top.