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== [[IBM System/360 architecture]] ==

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This article was written with the intention of being merged into [[IBM System/360]]. It concentrates on the CPU architecture, since [[IBM System/360|base article]] already contains some material on the bus&tag cables used for S/360 I/O channels.

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Revision as of 13:52, 8 November 2010

This is my first Wiki page. I went through the tutorial and used the Article Wizard but welcome feedback on whether or not I followed the guidelines and formatted correctly. Thank you!

StephanieTilton (talk) 01:36, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

hey im new to editing on wikipedia and need some help with this article, thanks in advance

Mynamismik (talk) 01:56, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ThatGirl42 (talk) 03:34, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have composed a new article which I believe has numerous credible sources. How do I use the same reference again without citing the entire url as another source? Also, please send any and all feedback that you may have. Thanks.


Bluetiger50 (talk) 03:36, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first wikipedia article and I have followed all the guidelines, but just want to make sure everything is fine before I publish it. Thanks for the help!


Rouelshimi (talk) 09:47, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've been working on this article for some time now, and have moved it into the main namespace as of yesterday. It's the first article I've ever written about a song, so I wasn't entirely sure how it should be set out, and what information needed to be included - I simply used a few FAs as a guideline. I welcome any and all feedback from the community on how it can be improved. Thanks very much! Vobedd731 (talk) 10:32, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first article and I'm just looking to make sure I'm on the right track. Thanks very much.

Tillander 11:43, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This article was written with the intention of being merged into IBM System/360. It concentrates on the CPU architecture, since base article already contains some material on the bus&tag cables used for S/360 I/O channels.

Shmuel (Seymour J.) Metz Username:Chatul (talk) 13:52, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]