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== [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Flightx52/NGEN_Radio] ==

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First Wikipedia article. I know it's not anywhere close to being put in the mainspace, I would just like some advice on what to put into this article. Thanks!


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Your signature has already been added! --><small><font color="green">'''''I'm</font> </small>[[User:Flightx52|Flightx52]]<small><font color="red"> and</font> [[I approve this message]]'''''</small> 22:06, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

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This is my first Wiki page. I went through the tutorial and used the Article Wizard but welcome feedback on whether or not I followed the guidelines and formatted correctly. Thank you!

StephanieTilton (talk) 01:36, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

hey im new to editing on wikipedia and need some help with this article, thanks in advance

Mynamismik (talk) 01:56, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That was not an article, it was an advertisement; it has already been deleted. If it makes you feel any better, there is no evidence that the subject is notable in any way, so any article on this topic would have been deleted fairly soon anyway. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:37, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ThatGirl42 (talk) 03:34, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have composed a new article which I believe has numerous credible sources. How do I use the same reference again without citing the entire url as another source? Also, please send any and all feedback that you may have. Thanks.


Bluetiger50 (talk) 03:36, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first wikipedia article and I have followed all the guidelines, but just want to make sure everything is fine before I publish it. Thanks for the help!


Rouelshimi (talk) 09:47, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've been working on this article for some time now, and have moved it into the main namespace as of yesterday. It's the first article I've ever written about a song, so I wasn't entirely sure how it should be set out, and what information needed to be included - I simply used a few FAs as a guideline. I welcome any and all feedback from the community on how it can be improved. Thanks very much! Vobedd731 (talk) 10:32, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first article and I'm just looking to make sure I'm on the right track. Thanks very much.

Tillander 11:43, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This article was written with the intention of being merged into IBM System/360. It concentrates on the CPU architecture, since base article already contains some material on the bus&tag cables used for S/360 I/O channels.

Shmuel (Seymour J.) Metz Username:Chatul (talk) 13:52, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I have made the advised changes to our wiki page and wanted feedback as to if this article is ready to post live. Thanks for your help.


Car0lina01 (talk) 15:08, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've written an article on an editorial website, NOWNESS.com. I am looking for general feedback before pushing it live. Thank you for your help!


Wendylu15 (talk) 15:20, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

100 Women in Hedge Funds

we are new to editing/contributing to wikipedia. please let us know how we can improve the new article on the association and foundation, 100 Women in Hedge Funds. We posted tons of external references and there are many many news stories on the web from the organization's ten year history.


Danabhall (talk) 19:23, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

How do I add a pic or diagram?


76.175.96.58 (talk) 19:31, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I would like this article to be reviewed to be sure the content is well written and appropriate for Wikipedia. Thank you!


Brandydominelli (talk) 21:28, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Article is a translation from the Spanish wikipedia, which in turn says to be a translation from the Catalan one. Neither of them cited any sources, so I tried to back up and expand their claims. Please check it is valid. DSkael (talk) 21:29, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

First Wikipedia article. I know it's not anywhere close to being put in the mainspace, I would just like some advice on what to put into this article. Thanks!


I'm Flightx52 and I approve this message 22:06, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]