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As a matter of fact Marwaris are subgroup of [[Rajasthani people]]. I propose to merge Marwaris to [[Rajasthani people]] article. This makes sense. --<b>[[User:Onef9day|<font color="#aff3333">Onef9day</font>]]</b><small><sup>[[User talk:Onef9day| Talk!]]</sup></small> 08:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)
As a matter of fact Marwaris are subgroup of [[Rajasthani people]]. I propose to merge Marwaris to [[Rajasthani people]] article. This makes sense. --<b>[[User:Onef9day|<font color="#aff3333">Onef9day</font>]]</b><small><sup>[[User talk:Onef9day| Talk!]]</sup></small> 08:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

== Not well written ==

Although the article does provide detailed information on Marwaris, the style and approach are very stilted. The writing is poor in grammar and uses words inappropriately (malapropisms). While the historical and geographical profiles are adequately neutral, many other sections are written like endorsements, rather than facets of a community presented objectively.

Overall, this article needs extensive rewriting.

[[Special:Contributions/59.92.174.21|59.92.174.21]] ([[User talk:59.92.174.21|talk]]) 05:04, 11 September 2011 (UTC)Mallikarjuna K

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Famous Marwaris

There is a lot of vandalism going on in this section. Vandalism will be immediately reverted back. It is only hurting the marwari community by adding not so famous names. WilliamFord 03:03, 29 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The vandalism of this section is still going on unabated. It is quite disgraceful as the representatives of the community themselves are not feeling responsible and continuing to add unknown/little known names on this list.

Removed Keshub Mahindra from the list (Mahindra is a Punjabi Khatri family).

Famous and Influential should list those who have received world-wide recognition and/or fame in their chosen profession and beyond. WilliamFord 04:03, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have pruned the list. Lists of people should ideally only include those who are sufficiently notable to be eligible for a Wikipedia article - see Wikipedia:Notability, or, failing that, there should be a source for their notability. --Bonadea (talk) 09:50, 5 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Map of marwar is incorrect

The Marwar region is located in south-west rajasthan not north east as shown on the map.

WikiProject class rating

This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 18:43, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

WP:INDIA Banner/Rajasthan workgroup Addition

Note: {{WP India}} Project Banner with Rajasthan workgroup parameters was added to this article talk page because the article falls under Category:Rajasthan or its subcategories. Should you feel this addition is inappropriate , please undo my changes and update/remove the relavent categories to the article -- TinuCherian (Wanna Talk?) - 07:31, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Merger

As a matter of fact Marwaris are subgroup of Rajasthani people. I propose to merge Marwaris to Rajasthani people article. This makes sense. --Onef9day Talk! 08:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not well written

Although the article does provide detailed information on Marwaris, the style and approach are very stilted. The writing is poor in grammar and uses words inappropriately (malapropisms). While the historical and geographical profiles are adequately neutral, many other sections are written like endorsements, rather than facets of a community presented objectively.

Overall, this article needs extensive rewriting.

59.92.174.21 (talk) 05:04, 11 September 2011 (UTC)Mallikarjuna K[reply]