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This article, lie other biographies in Wikipedia, must follow Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. There are numerous problems with this article. In particular:

in places it is written like a resume or a hagiography -- it should be neutral toward the subject. Please reivew WP:NPOV.
The formatting should follow standard Wikipedia style -- see Wikipedia:Manual of Style.
There is a lot of repetition in the article. The "Timeline of Key Events" seems to be largely a repeat of the article. Can this be removed completely? This is not the way Wikipedia articles are formatted.
A lot of the same information was being stuffed into the info box. I have started removing some of it.
The article should follow the rules for biographies set out in WP:BIO.

Regards, Ground Zero | t 02:13, 30 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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+==Please note==
-Thanks for your input and all comments which were incorporated accordingly. Antecedently, the article does meet, and in many regards exceeds, pertinent criteria! It is colorable and replete with documentation.
+This article, lie other biographies in Wikipedia, must follow Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. There are numerous problems with this article. In particular:
+*in places it is written like a resume or a [[hagiography]] -- it should be neutral toward the subject. Please reivew [[WP:NPOV]].
+*The formatting should follow standard Wikipedia style -- see [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style]].
+*There is a lot of repetition in the article. The "Timeline of Key Events" seems to be largely a repeat of the article. Can this be removed completely? This is not the way Wikipedia articles are formatted.
+*A lot of the same information was being stuffed into the info box. I have started removing some of it.
+*The article should follow the rules for biographies set out in [[WP:BIO]].
+Regards, [[User:Ground Zero|Ground Zero]] | [[User talk:Ground Zero|t]] 02:13, 30 May 2014 (UTC)