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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ligier JS2 (November 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has no independent references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:55, 29 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Kumboloi, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 04:55, 29 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ligier JS2 (December 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

Most likely notable, but the article suffers from several issues. First, and the largest, is the tone of the article. It's written very informally, and has a pov issue. Avoid terms/phrases like "Fortunately for Ligier", "to fulfill a dream". Also, remove any assertions which do not have a reference.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ligier JS2 and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 15:30, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ligier JS2|Ligier JS2]] (December 31) ==
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