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Explanation of issue: Added pertinent information about Geisinger to provide a more comprehensive overview.[[User:Mlsobieski|Mlsobieski]] ([[User talk:Mlsobieski|talk]]) 11:58, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
Explanation of issue: Added pertinent information about Geisinger to provide a more comprehensive overview.[[User:Mlsobieski|Mlsobieski]] ([[User talk:Mlsobieski|talk]]) 11:58, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
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==Geisinger Health System Update Proposals September 2021==

{{request edit}}

Hi, I’m an employee at Geisinger Health System. This article is out of date and incomplete. Can a volunteer editor please review these suggested edits? I have modelled my suggestions based on the Good Article for similar healthcare providers such as [[UPMC Children's Hospital of Pittsburgh]], [[UPMC Presbyterian]], [[Northwestern Memorial Hospital]], and [[Lurie Children's Hospital]]. Thank you for your help. ~~~~


'''1)''' The article lacks an About section and relevant subsections to describe the organizational structure of the company, what it does, etc. All the GAs for healthcare providers I could find, including those mentioned above, have an About section. All the sources are from the press, except for one, from the Geisinger website, but I use it only for “straightforward, descriptive statements of facts”, which I think Wikipedia policy allows under [[WP: Primary]]. Below is language for the proposed “About” section, to be placed below “History”:

'''About'''

Geisinger Health System serves over half a million patients across multiple states in the [[Northeastern United States]]<ref name=Refunds>{{cite news |last1=Sun |first1=Lena H. |title=The most unexpected hospital billing development ever: Refunds |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/national/health-science/2016/04/14/207cb934-fd95-11e5-886f-a037dba38301_story.html |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=Washington Post |date=15 April 2016}}</ref> Geisinger’s primary geographical area of coverage is central and northeastern [[Pennsylvania]].<ref name=vaccines>{{cite news |last1=Rubinkam |first1=Michael |title=Health network allowed employees’ kin to skip vaccine line |url=https://apnews.com/article/us-news-pennsylvania-coronavirus-pandemic-737ff60341acdd91fceef078134bd4f7 |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=Associated Press |date=24 February 2021}}</ref> As of September 2021, it operated 11 hospitals as well as a number of smaller clinical care facilities and pharmacies.<ref name=Facilities>{{cite web |title=Geisinger.org Find a Location Page |url=https://www.geisinger.org/patient-care/find-a-location |access-date=16 September 2021}}</ref> In July 2020, the organization operated 13 hospitals.<ref name=PBJ2020>{{cite news |last1=George |first1=John |title=AtlantiCare and Geisinger health systems complete their divorce |url=https://www.bizjournals.com/philadelphia/news/2020/11/02/atlanticare-geisinger-complete-their-divorce.html |access-date=5 August 2021 |work=Philadelphia Business Journal |date=2 November 2020}}</ref>

The organization offers its own internal health insurance plans to the public within its coverage area.<ref name=NPR2015>{{cite news |last1=Andrews |first1=Michelle |title=Some Hospital Systems Want To Care For You And Sell You Insurance |url=https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2015/11/10/455465297/some-hospital-systems-want-to-care-for-you-and-sell-you-insurance |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=NPR |date=10 November 2015}}</ref> Geisinger also conducts medical research, and it operates a medical school, [[Geisinger Commonwealth School of Medicine]],<ref name=STT2016>{{cite news |last1=O’Connell |first1=Jon |title= Geisinger/medical school deal final |url=https://www.thetimes-tribune.com/news/geisinger-medical-school-deal-final/article_ecf15e68-a17f-5dc0-ba5e-d7759c72fa0c.html |access-date=19 August 2021 |work=Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA) |date=31 December 2016}}</ref> and the Geisinger Lewistown School of Nursing.<ref>{{cite news |last1=Peachey |first1=Meredith |title=Understanding cultural health practices crucial in medicine |url=https://www.lewistownsentinel.com/news/local-news/2019/04/understanding-cultural-health-practices-crucial-in-medicine/ |access-date=23 August 2021 |work=Lewistown Sentinel |date=26 April 2019}}</ref> The organization also has a charitable arm, the Geisinger Foundation.<ref>{{cite news |title=GEISINGER FOUNDATION DEDICATES NEW CENTER |work=The Morning Call (Allentown, PA) |date=23 September 1987}}</ref>

'''The Morning Call article from 1987 is not accessible on the internet. But here is an excerpt of that article:'''

''“The Geisinger health system, founded in 1915, serves a 22,000- square-mile area of central and northeastern Pennsylvania.”''

{{request edit}}

'''2)''' I propose that the current “Quality and Cost-Containment” section be renamed as a subsection -- “Programs and Healthcare Practices” -- a heading that allows for more relevant information -- and moved into the proposed “About” section. Consolidating healthcare system information under “About” is in keeping with the structure of the healthcare GAs I found. For the proposed replacement text, I have removed excessive details while adding the basic information about the clinical operations of Geisinger Health System. I have also removed statements without citations or which rely on unreliable sources.

'''Programs and Practices'''

Geisinger launched a patient satisfaction program called ProvenExperience in 2015, which offers refunds of co-pays or deductibles for patients unhappy with their medical treatment or other aspects of care.<ref name=Refunds>{{cite news |last1=Sun |first1=Lena H. |title=The most unexpected hospital billing development ever: Refunds |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/national/health-science/2016/04/14/207cb934-fd95-11e5-886f-a037dba38301_story.html |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=Washington Post |date=15 April 2016}}</ref> In 2017, it started a program called the Fresh Food Farmacy, which provides healthy foods and nutrition advice, at no cost, to low-income patients at high risk for obesity-related diseases.<ref name=NPR2017>{{cite news |last1=Aubrey |first1=Allison |title=Fresh Food By Prescription: This Health Care Firm Is Trimming Costs — And Waistlines |url=https://www.npr.org/sections/thesalt/2017/05/08/526952657/fresh-food-by-prescription-this-health-care-firm-is-trimming-costs-and-waistline |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=TIME Magazine |date=8 May 2017}}</ref><ref name=TIME2019>{{cite news |last1=Park |first1=Alice |title=Why Food Could Be the Best Medicine of All |url=https://time.com/longform/food-best-medicine/ |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=TIME Magazine |date=21 February 2019}}</ref> In 2018, Geisinger introduced a program that drives patients unable to arrange their own transportation to medical appointments or pharmacies.<ref name=transport>{{cite news |last1=Krize |first1=Nikki |title=Geisinger Unveils New Transportation Program |url=https://www.wnep.com/article/news/local/montour-county/geisinger-unveils-new-transportation-program/523-4a55efa5-bc1f-413a-96e7-7cd470e96911 |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=WNEP |date=22 March 2018}}</ref>

Geisinger incorporates [[electronic health records]] (EHRs) and [[genomics]] into its healthcare practices. Geisinger first adopted EHRs in 1996.<ref name=HBR2016>{{cite news |last1=Erskine |first1=Alistair R. |last2=Karunakaran |first2=Bipun |last3=Slotkin |first3=Jonathan R. |last4=Thomas |first4=David A. |title=How Geisinger Health System Uses Big Data to Save Lives |url=https://hbr.org/2016/12/how-geisinger-health-system-uses-big-data-to-save-lives |access-date=3 August 2021 |work=Harvard Business Review |date=15 December 2016}}</ref> By 2002 it was using EHRs for a service called Tel-a-Nurse that allowed patients to receive medical advice over the phone from nurses informed by EHRs.<ref name="ACM2002">{{cite journal |last1=Raghupathi |first1=Wullianallur |last2=Tan |first2=Joseph |title=Strategic IT applications in health care |journal=Communications of the ACM |date=1 December 2002 |volume=45 |issue=12 |pages=56-61 |url=https://cacm.acm.org/magazines/2002/12/6943-strategic-it-applications-in-health-care/fulltext |access-date=19 August 2021}}</ref> In 2007, Geisinger opened a genetic biobank and screening program called MyCode, which sequences the genetic code of volunteer patients to screen them for risk markers of diseases.<ref name=NPR2018>{{cite news |last1=Andrews |first1=Michelle |title=Routine DNA Screening Moves Into Primary Care |url=https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2018/05/22/613090774/routine-dna-screening-moves-into-primary-care |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=NPR |date=22 May 2018}}</ref> As of 2018, MyCode had obtained genetic information from over 200,000 patient volunteers.<ref name=NPR2018 /> This bank of genetic material has also been used for medical research purposes.<ref name=NYT2014>{{cite news |last1=Pollack |first1=Andrew |title=Aiming to Push Genomics Forward in New Study |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2014/01/13/business/aiming-to-push-genomics-forward-in-new-study.html |access-date=4 August 2021 |work=New York Times |date=13 January 2014}}</ref>


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'''3)''' I propose that the “List of Facilities” section of the current article be moved and renamed “Facilities” as a subsection in the proposed “About” section. There is no source now for any facility, so I propose adding a primary source to the introductory sentence (acceptable since this is such straightforward information). And, please add two more hospitals that are missing from this list. FYI, there is a multi-facility GA I found that uses a list format just like this: [[Northwestern Memorial Hospital]],

'''Facilities'''

As of August 2021, there are 11 major facilities operated by Geisinger Health System<ref name=Facilities />:

Geisinger St. Luke's Hospital in [[Orwigsburg, PA]]
Geisinger Marworth in Waverly, PA

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'''4)''' I also propose moving and rewriting the existing Research section into a subsection of the proposed “About” section. This placement of “Research” inside “About” follows the structure of existing GAs about healthcare providers, including [[Lurie Children's Hospital]] and [[Northwestern Memorial Hospital]]. I’ve rewritten the proposed subsection so it only includes more reliably-sourced research and adds a new reliable source for the research already described.

'''Research'''

In 1967, Geisinger was awarded a federal grant to study the effectiveness of medications to prevent heart attacks or their recurrence.<ref name=STT1967>{{cite news |title=Geisinger Gets Federal Grant |url=https://www.newspapers.com/image/43786991/?terms=%22Geisinger%20Foundation%22&match=1 |access-date=5 August 2021 |work=Scranton Times-Tribune |date=17 July 1967}}</ref> In 1974, the Central Pennsylvania Chapter of the Arthritis Foundation awarded a grant to Geisinger to study the potential treatment of [[Raynaud syndrome]] with drugs normally used at that time to treat high blood pressure.<ref name=DI1974>{{cite news |title=Geisinger receives foundation grant |url=https://www.newspapers.com/image/484740054/?terms=%22Geisinger%20Foundation%22&match=1 |access-date=5 August 2021 |work=The Daily Item (Sunbury, PA) |date=15 February 1967}}</ref>.

Geisinger has a database of [[electronic health records]] (EHR), and set up a genetics research program called MyCode in 2007.<ref name=NYT2014 /> The use of EHR allows [[longitudinal study]] of patient outcomes, in a study called "DiscovEHR".<ref>{{cite journal |last1=Pandi |first1=Maria-Theodora |last2=Williams |first2=Marc S. |last3=van der Spek |first3=Peter |last4=Koromina |first4=Maria |last5=Patrinos |first5=George P. |title=Exome-Wide Analysis of the DiscovEHR Cohort Reveals Novel Candidate Pharmacogenomic Variants for Clinical Pharmacogenomics |journal=Genes |date=18 May 2020 |volume=11 |issue=5 |url=https://www.mdpi.com/2073-4425/11/5/561 |access-date=23 August 2021}}</ref><ref>{{cite journal|title=Distribution and clinical impact of functional variants in 50,726 whole-exome sequences from the DiscovEHR study|first1=Frederick E.|last1=Dewey|first2=Michael F.|last2=Murray|first3=John D.|last3=Overton|date=23 December 2016|journal=Science|volume=354|issue=6319|pages=aaf6814|doi=10.1126/science.aaf6814|pmid=28008009}}</ref><ref>{{cite journal|title=A Protein-Truncating HSD17B13 Variant and Protection from Chronic Liver Disease|first1=Noura S.|last1=Abul-Husn|first2=Xiping|last2=Cheng|date=22 March 2018|journal=New England Journal of Medicine|volume=378|issue=12|pages=1096–1106|doi=10.1056/nejmoa1712191|pmid = 29562163|pmc=6668033}}</ref> The program uses gene sequencing by the biotechnology company [[Regeneron Pharmaceuticals]].<ref name=CV2016>{{cite news |last1=O’Connell |first1=Jon |title=Geisinger receives $5.5M grant |url=http://citizensvoice.com/news/geisinger-receives-5-5m-grant-1.2103883 |access-date=23 August 2021 |work=Citizens’ Voice (Wilkes-Barre, PA) |date=13 October 2016}}</ref> The [[National Institutes of Health]] gave a grant of US$5.5 million to the research program in 2016.<ref name=CV2016 /> The program was expanded to whole exome sequencing in 2018.<ref name=NPR2018 /> Using genetic data from patient volunteers stored in its MyCode program, Geisinger has conducted or collaborated on genetic research studies aimed at identifying potential links between genetic variants and higher or lower risk factors for certain diseases.<ref name=NYT2014 /> Geisinger contributed data from 35,000 of its patients to a 2016 [[Johns Hopkins University]] study that demonstrated linkages between [[asthma]] and [[fracking]].<ref name=BalSun2016>{{cite news |last1=Cohn |first1=Meredith |title=Fracking linked to asthma attacks in Hopkins study |url=https://www.baltimoresun.com/health/bs-hs-asthma-and-fracking-20160728-story.html |access-date=19 August 2021 |work=Baltimore Sun |date=5 August 2016}}</ref> In 2021, a Regeneron-led study that was partially based on genetic data from the MyCode biobank was able to identify a genetic variant that appears to lower obesity risk.<ref name=WITF2021>{{cite news |last1=Sholtis |first1=Brett |title=Study links genetic variant to lower obesity risk |url=https://www.witf.org/2021/07/28/study-links-genetic-variant-to-lower-obesity-risk/ |access-date=17 August 2021 |work=WITF (PBS affiliate) |date=28 July 2021}}</ref>

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'''5)''' I propose adding a new sub-section called “Education” to the proposed “About” section. This is the same structure as the GA for [[UPMC Children's Hospital of Pittsburgh]] . I propose consolidating two sentences at the bottom of the History section, about the medical school, into “Education.” The two sentences to be removed from “History” begin ‘In order to "fix the primary care shortage facing the organisation…’”

'''Education'''

On January 1, 2017, Geisinger acquired a Scranton, PA, medical college called The Commonwealth School of Medicine.<ref name=STT2016 /> Opened in 2008, the school had struggled financially prior to its acquisition by Geisinger and had debts of about $40 million, which Geisinger agreed to assume as part of the deal.<ref name=TT2016>{{cite news |last1=O’Connell |first1=Jon |title= Geisinger acquisition opens doors for TCMC research, financial stability |url=https://www.thetimes-tribune.com/news/geisinger-acquisition-opens-doors-for-tcmc-research-financial-stability/article_9922f32e-c222-5e60-a30c-c072ffa047aa.html |access-date=19 August 2021 |work=Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA) |date=31 December 2016}}</ref> Geisinger Commonwealth School of Medicine received a $3.4 million grant from the federal government in 2017 to promote diversity and provide opportunities for disadvantaged minorities.<ref name=STT2017>{{cite news |last1=O’Connell |first1=Jon |title= Medical school gets $3.4 million federal grant to target disadvantaged communities |url=https://www.thetimes-tribune.com/news/medical-school-gets-3-4-million-federal-grant-to-target-disadvantaged-communities/article_95b104a8-7a0a-5044-a48b-17079c1377d5.html |access-date=19 August 2021 |work=Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA) |date=28 November 2017}}</ref> In order to "fix the primary care shortage facing the organisation", Geisinger announced a program in 2019 to cover full tuition plus a $2,000 monthly stipend for 40 students, with the recipients committing to work at Geisinger for at least four years after completing their [[Residency (medicine)|residency]].<ref>{{cite web |last1=Ramsey |first1=Lydia |title=A health system hidden in the heart of Pennsylvania is offering free tuition to its medical students to fix one of the biggest problems in healthcare |url=https://www.businessinsider.com.au/geisinger-health-system-scholarship-for-students-to-work-in-primary-care-2019-11?r=US&IR=T |website=Business Insider |access-date=6 November 2019}}</ref>

Thank you for your consideration. [[User:HealthcareHistorian|HealthcareHistorian]] ([[User talk:HealthcareHistorian|talk]]) 19:48, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

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Comment

Someone with time/knowledge of Geisinger should fix this up, as it was obviously written by Geisinger PR. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.254.118.131 (talk) 15:07, 22 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Why doesn't Geisinger put down in writing what it contenders in it's commercials. That they were formed in the face of the 1918 pandemic. rem486 Rem486 (talk) 20:27, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Edit request

Please change “Geisinger Health System” page title to just “Geisinger”

Explanation of issue: Geisinger Health System shortened its name to Geisinger

Source: https://www.beckershospitalreview.com/hospital-management-administration/geisinger-shortens-name-nixes-all-drinks-with-sugar.html Mlsobieski (talk) 22:33, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

See also, the organization's 'about pages' at https://www.geisinger.org/about-geisinger and https://www.geisinger.org/about-geisinger/news-and-media/for-media Additional media sources: https://www.dailyitem.com/news/local_news/geisinger-cuts-its-name-sugary-beverages/article_3df4a856-99a7-55cb-9a69-6096284ad206.html and http://www.wkok.com/from-geisinger-health-system-to-just-geisinger/ Mlsobieski (talk) 20:35, 12 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 8-MAR-2019

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Regards,  Spintendo  22:57, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 12-MAR-2019

  Please use WP:RMCM  

  • Thank you for providing the additional references. Unfortunately, it's not entirely clear from the websites you've provided that the name change has taken place as you've described. The subject's own website uses the following at the bottom of its web pages: © 2019 Geisinger Health[a]
  • To ensure that it's appropriate, the request to change the article's title should be submitted using the {{requested move}} template specifically as a controversial move request process requiring discussion amongst the wider community.
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    Regards,  Spintendo  23:02, 12 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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  1. ^ Additionally, name changes should only be accomplished once a majority of sources reporting on the subject use the name, irregardless of whether the subject itself uses it.

Edit request

Please add/edit Geisinger's history section:

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Geisinger was founded in 1912 by Abigail Geisinger, who at age 85 recognized the need for advanced healthcare in her rural central Pennsylvania community. The first hospital opened earlier than expected in Danville on September 15, 1915, to treat those affected by a typhoid outbreak in the area.

Geisinger’s flagship facility is Geisinger Medical Center, and the system includes 12 other hospital campuses: Geisinger Wyoming Valley Medical Center, Geisinger South Wilkes-Barre, Geisinger Community Medical Center, Geisinger Janet Weis Children's Hospital, Geisinger Bloomsburg Hospital, Geisinger Lewistown Hospital, Geisinger Woodbine, Geisinger Shamokin Area Community Hospital, Geisinger Holy Spirit, Geisinger Jersey Shore, Geisinger Marworth Treatment Center and AtlantiCare Health System, a member of Geisinger. There are more than 250 clinical sites throughout Geisinger’s footprint in central, north-central, northeast, western and south-central Pennsylvania, and New Jersey.

From 2001 through early 2015, Glenn Steele, Jr., MD, PhD, served as Geisinger’s president and chief executive officer. Known for pioneering innovative healthcare services for Geisinger’s patients and health plan members, including the ProvenCare model, Dr. Steele’s emphasis on value-based care and quality is still present in the health system’s care delivery today. The author or co-author of close to 500 scientific and professional articles, Dr. Steele has a clinical background in the treatment of liver cancer, colorectal cancer surgery, the cell biology of gastrointestinal cancer and pre-cancer. Prior to his time at Geisinger, he served in roles including dean of the Biological Sciences Division and the University of Chicago’s Pritzker School of Medicine and as chairman of the Department of Surgery at New England Deaconess Hospital. In 2016, Geisinger Medical Center announced the naming of the Glenn D. Steele Jr. Hospital for Advanced Medicine, and the health system also named its Steele Institute for Healthcare Innovation after Dr. Steele.

When Dr. Steele left Geisinger in 2015, David Feinberg, MD, MBA, joined Geisinger as president and CEO. With a background in psychiatry, Dr. Feinberg came to Geisinger after a career at UCLA Health, where he served as CEO of UCLA’s hospitals and the president of UCLA Health System. Dr. Feinberg implemented the health system’s ProvenExperience program, a satisfaction-guaranteed patient refund program, in 2015. The year after this program’s introduction, Geisinger issued $400,000 to unhappy patients. He was selected third on Modern Healthcare’s “50 Most Influential Physician Executives and Leaders” in 2017 and named one of 2018’s “100 Most Influential People in Healthcare.” [18] In 2019, Dr. Feinberg left Geisinger to pursue a role with Google to help develop and expand its healthcare strategy.

In December 2018, Jaewon Ryu, MD, JD, was named interim president and CEO of Geisinger. Serving as the health system’s executive vice president and chief medical officer since 2016, Dr. Ryu holds an undergraduate degree from Yale University and medical and law degrees from The University of Chicago. Dr. Ryu’s internship and residency training was in emergency medicine at Harbor-UCLA Medical Center. Before coming to Geisinger, he was the president of Integrated Care Delivery for Humana in Louisville, Kentucky, and held various leadership roles at the University of Illinois Hospital & Health Sciences System in Chicago, Kaiser Permanente, and in government at the Centers for Medicare and Medicaid Services (CMS) and serving as a White House Fellow at the Department of Veterans Affairs.

Explanation of issue: The existing history is missing up-to-date and pertinent information about Geisinger's history

Sources: https://www.dailyitem.com/dr-foss-helps-to-develop-the-finest-hospital-ever-built/article_1d6bc562-7a72-5b5c-9712-2c3532b525a4.html https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/a-century-of-innovation-pennsylvanias-geisinger-health-system-celebrating-100-years-of-excellence-in-2015-300015622.html https://www.geisinger.org/patient-care/find-a-location https://www.modernhealthcare.com/article/20140728/NEWS/307289925/steele-to-step-down-as-geisinger-ceo-next-year http://shoutengine.com/CreatingaNewHealthcare/emancipating-value-in-healthcare-provencare-wit-53871 https://www.haponline.org/Newsroom/News/ID/1004/Former-Geisinger-Health-System-CEO-Glenn-D-Steele-Jr-MD-PhD-Earns-National-Innovation-Award https://mfdp.med.harvard.edu/cff/curriculum/leadership-forums/speakers/glenn-d-steele-jr-md-phd https://www.dailyitem.com/dr-glenn-d-steele-jr-hospital-for-advanced-medicine/image_49ed51f0-163e-11e5-8817-ffc3775cfa33.html https://www.beckershospitalreview.com/lists/66-hospitals-and-health-systems-with-innovation-programs-2018.html https://www.modernhealthcare.com/article/20150223/NEWS/302239970/ucla-s-feinberg-named-geisinger-ceo https://www.beckershospitalreview.com/finance/geisinger-ceo-david-feinberg-talks-1-year-of-patient-refunds.html https://www.healthcarefinancenews.com/news/what-geisinger-ceo-david-feinberg-accomplished-leaving-google https://www.modernhealthcare.com/awards/50-most-influential-physician-executives-2017 https://www.modernhealthcare.com/awards/100-most-influential-people-healthcare-2018 https://www.beckershospitalreview.com/hospital-executive-moves/geisinger-taps-cmo-as-interim-ceo-6-things-to-know.html

Mlsobieski (talk) 18:28, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Please add the following sentence to the first paragraph of the article's "Sun and Moon" section:

  • The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,<ref>{{cite book|last1=Sjöblad|first1=Tristan|title=The Sun|url=http://www.booksource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=1}}</ref> while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<ref>{{cite journal|last1=Harinath|first1=Paramjit|title=Size of the Moon|journal=Science|issue=78|volume=51|url=http://www.journalsource.com|date=2018|page=46}}</ref> The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.<ref>{{cite book|last1=Uemura|first1=Shu|title=The Sun's Heat|url=http://www.websource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=2}}</ref>


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Please add the following sentence to the first paragraph of the article's "Sun and Moon" section:

  • The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.[3]


References

  1. ^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2018, p. 1.
  2. ^ Harinath, Paramjit. "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.
  3. ^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2018, p. 2.

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc. Also, the ref tags are placed in the exact location where the text which they reference resides. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo  23:09, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

  1. ^ The use of bare URLs as references is a style which is acceptable for use in Wikipedia. However, general practice dictates that the style already in use for an article be the one that is subsequently used for all future additions unless changed by editorial consensus. (See WP:CITEVAR.)

Edit request

In the history of Geisinger section, please add the following information:

From 2001 through mid 2015, Glenn Steele, Jr., MD, PhD,Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page). Geisinger’s primary geographical area of coverage is central and northeastern Pennsylvania.[1] As of September 2021, it operated 11 hospitals as well as a number of smaller clinical care facilities and pharmacies.[2] In July 2020, the organization operated 13 hospitals.[3]

The organization offers its own internal health insurance plans to the public within its coverage area.[4] Geisinger also conducts medical research, and it operates a medical school, Geisinger Commonwealth School of Medicine,[5] and the Geisinger Lewistown School of Nursing.[6] The organization also has a charitable arm, the Geisinger Foundation.[7]

The Morning Call article from 1987 is not accessible on the internet. But here is an excerpt of that article:

“The Geisinger health system, founded in 1915, serves a 22,000- square-mile area of central and northeastern Pennsylvania.”

2) I propose that the current “Quality and Cost-Containment” section be renamed as a subsection -- “Programs and Healthcare Practices” -- a heading that allows for more relevant information -- and moved into the proposed “About” section. Consolidating healthcare system information under “About” is in keeping with the structure of the healthcare GAs I found. For the proposed replacement text, I have removed excessive details while adding the basic information about the clinical operations of Geisinger Health System. I have also removed statements without citations or which rely on unreliable sources.

Programs and Practices

Geisinger launched a patient satisfaction program called ProvenExperience in 2015, which offers refunds of co-pays or deductibles for patients unhappy with their medical treatment or other aspects of care.[8] In 2017, it started a program called the Fresh Food Farmacy, which provides healthy foods and nutrition advice, at no cost, to low-income patients at high risk for obesity-related diseases.[9][10] In 2018, Geisinger introduced a program that drives patients unable to arrange their own transportation to medical appointments or pharmacies.[11]

Geisinger incorporates electronic health records (EHRs) and genomics into its healthcare practices. Geisinger first adopted EHRs in 1996.[12] By 2002 it was using EHRs for a service called Tel-a-Nurse that allowed patients to receive medical advice over the phone from nurses informed by EHRs.[13] In 2007, Geisinger opened a genetic biobank and screening program called MyCode, which sequences the genetic code of volunteer patients to screen them for risk markers of diseases.[14] As of 2018, MyCode had obtained genetic information from over 200,000 patient volunteers.[14] This bank of genetic material has also been used for medical research purposes.[15]


3) I propose that the “List of Facilities” section of the current article be moved and renamed “Facilities” as a subsection in the proposed “About” section. There is no source now for any facility, so I propose adding a primary source to the introductory sentence (acceptable since this is such straightforward information). And, please add two more hospitals that are missing from this list. FYI, there is a multi-facility GA I found that uses a list format just like this: Northwestern Memorial Hospital,

Facilities

As of August 2021, there are 11 major facilities operated by Geisinger Health System[2]:

Geisinger St. Luke's Hospital in Orwigsburg, PA Geisinger Marworth in Waverly, PA

4) I also propose moving and rewriting the existing Research section into a subsection of the proposed “About” section. This placement of “Research” inside “About” follows the structure of existing GAs about healthcare providers, including Lurie Children's Hospital and Northwestern Memorial Hospital. I’ve rewritten the proposed subsection so it only includes more reliably-sourced research and adds a new reliable source for the research already described.

Research

In 1967, Geisinger was awarded a federal grant to study the effectiveness of medications to prevent heart attacks or their recurrence.[16] In 1974, the Central Pennsylvania Chapter of the Arthritis Foundation awarded a grant to Geisinger to study the potential treatment of Raynaud syndrome with drugs normally used at that time to treat high blood pressure.[17].

Geisinger has a database of electronic health records (EHR), and set up a genetics research program called MyCode in 2007.[15] The use of EHR allows longitudinal study of patient outcomes, in a study called "DiscovEHR".[18][19][20] The program uses gene sequencing by the biotechnology company Regeneron Pharmaceuticals.[21] The National Institutes of Health gave a grant of US$5.5 million to the research program in 2016.[21] The program was expanded to whole exome sequencing in 2018.[14] Using genetic data from patient volunteers stored in its MyCode program, Geisinger has conducted or collaborated on genetic research studies aimed at identifying potential links between genetic variants and higher or lower risk factors for certain diseases.[15] Geisinger contributed data from 35,000 of its patients to a 2016 Johns Hopkins University study that demonstrated linkages between asthma and fracking.[22] In 2021, a Regeneron-led study that was partially based on genetic data from the MyCode biobank was able to identify a genetic variant that appears to lower obesity risk.[23]

5) I propose adding a new sub-section called “Education” to the proposed “About” section. This is the same structure as the GA for UPMC Children's Hospital of Pittsburgh . I propose consolidating two sentences at the bottom of the History section, about the medical school, into “Education.” The two sentences to be removed from “History” begin ‘In order to "fix the primary care shortage facing the organisation…’”

Education

On January 1, 2017, Geisinger acquired a Scranton, PA, medical college called The Commonwealth School of Medicine.[5] Opened in 2008, the school had struggled financially prior to its acquisition by Geisinger and had debts of about $40 million, which Geisinger agreed to assume as part of the deal.[24] Geisinger Commonwealth School of Medicine received a $3.4 million grant from the federal government in 2017 to promote diversity and provide opportunities for disadvantaged minorities.[25] In order to "fix the primary care shortage facing the organisation", Geisinger announced a program in 2019 to cover full tuition plus a $2,000 monthly stipend for 40 students, with the recipients committing to work at Geisinger for at least four years after completing their residency.[26]

Thank you for your consideration. HealthcareHistorian (talk) 19:48, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Rubinkam, Michael (24 February 2021). "Health network allowed employees' kin to skip vaccine line". Associated Press. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  2. ^ a b "Geisinger.org Find a Location Page". Retrieved 16 September 2021.
  3. ^ George, John (2 November 2020). "AtlantiCare and Geisinger health systems complete their divorce". Philadelphia Business Journal. Retrieved 5 August 2021.
  4. ^ Andrews, Michelle (10 November 2015). "Some Hospital Systems Want To Care For You And Sell You Insurance". NPR. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  5. ^ a b O’Connell, Jon (31 December 2016). "Geisinger/medical school deal final". Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA). Retrieved 19 August 2021.
  6. ^ Peachey, Meredith (26 April 2019). "Understanding cultural health practices crucial in medicine". Lewistown Sentinel. Retrieved 23 August 2021.
  7. ^ "GEISINGER FOUNDATION DEDICATES NEW CENTER". The Morning Call (Allentown, PA). 23 September 1987.
  8. ^ Sun, Lena H. (15 April 2016). "The most unexpected hospital billing development ever: Refunds". Washington Post. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  9. ^ Aubrey, Allison (8 May 2017). "Fresh Food By Prescription: This Health Care Firm Is Trimming Costs — And Waistlines". TIME Magazine. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  10. ^ Park, Alice (21 February 2019). "Why Food Could Be the Best Medicine of All". TIME Magazine. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  11. ^ Krize, Nikki (22 March 2018). "Geisinger Unveils New Transportation Program". WNEP. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  12. ^ Erskine, Alistair R.; Karunakaran, Bipun; Slotkin, Jonathan R.; Thomas, David A. (15 December 2016). "How Geisinger Health System Uses Big Data to Save Lives". Harvard Business Review. Retrieved 3 August 2021.
  13. ^ Raghupathi, Wullianallur; Tan, Joseph (1 December 2002). "Strategic IT applications in health care". Communications of the ACM. 45 (12): 56–61. Retrieved 19 August 2021.
  14. ^ a b c Andrews, Michelle (22 May 2018). "Routine DNA Screening Moves Into Primary Care". NPR. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  15. ^ a b c Pollack, Andrew (13 January 2014). "Aiming to Push Genomics Forward in New Study". New York Times. Retrieved 4 August 2021.
  16. ^ "Geisinger Gets Federal Grant". Scranton Times-Tribune. 17 July 1967. Retrieved 5 August 2021.
  17. ^ "Geisinger receives foundation grant". The Daily Item (Sunbury, PA). 15 February 1967. Retrieved 5 August 2021.
  18. ^ Pandi, Maria-Theodora; Williams, Marc S.; van der Spek, Peter; Koromina, Maria; Patrinos, George P. (18 May 2020). "Exome-Wide Analysis of the DiscovEHR Cohort Reveals Novel Candidate Pharmacogenomic Variants for Clinical Pharmacogenomics". Genes. 11 (5). Retrieved 23 August 2021.
  19. ^ Dewey, Frederick E.; Murray, Michael F.; Overton, John D. (23 December 2016). "Distribution and clinical impact of functional variants in 50,726 whole-exome sequences from the DiscovEHR study". Science. 354 (6319): aaf6814. doi:10.1126/science.aaf6814. PMID 28008009.
  20. ^ Abul-Husn, Noura S.; Cheng, Xiping (22 March 2018). "A Protein-Truncating HSD17B13 Variant and Protection from Chronic Liver Disease". New England Journal of Medicine. 378 (12): 1096–1106. doi:10.1056/nejmoa1712191. PMC 6668033. PMID 29562163.
  21. ^ a b O’Connell, Jon (13 October 2016). "Geisinger receives $5.5M grant". Citizens’ Voice (Wilkes-Barre, PA). Retrieved 23 August 2021.
  22. ^ Cohn, Meredith (5 August 2016). "Fracking linked to asthma attacks in Hopkins study". Baltimore Sun. Retrieved 19 August 2021.
  23. ^ Sholtis, Brett (28 July 2021). "Study links genetic variant to lower obesity risk". WITF (PBS affiliate). Retrieved 17 August 2021.
  24. ^ O’Connell, Jon (31 December 2016). "Geisinger acquisition opens doors for TCMC research, financial stability". Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA). Retrieved 19 August 2021.
  25. ^ O’Connell, Jon (28 November 2017). "Medical school gets $3.4 million federal grant to target disadvantaged communities". Times-Tribune (Scranton, PA). Retrieved 19 August 2021.
  26. ^ Ramsey, Lydia. "A health system hidden in the heart of Pennsylvania is offering free tuition to its medical students to fix one of the biggest problems in healthcare". Business Insider. Retrieved 6 November 2019.
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