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This user is a student editor in Texas_AM/Technical_Editing_(Spring_2021).

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Finance: [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finance] I chose this article because I felt that the readability could be improved with general editing, and it needs revision with its citations.
Zou People: [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zou_people] I chose this article because it needs to be edited for readability, and is lengthy enough to where substantial improvements can be made.
Nicholas Tolstoy: [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nicholas_Tolstoy] I chose this article because all of its information is listed underneath one section. I think this page would benefit from being edited so that information is more clearly organized and easier to read through.
Forestry in Russia: [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forestry_in_Russia] I chose this article because it has a specific tag at the top of the page that states it requires copyediting. The page is not organized as well as it could be, and needs a consistent tone throughout.
Weather Warfare: [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weather_warfare] I chose this article because it is tagged for being written like an essay; it needs heavy edits in tone in order for it to be presented as an encyclopedic article. It also needs light grammatical edits and needs to be organized better.

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 ==Potential articles==
-*'''Finance:''' [[en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finance]] I chose this article because I felt that the readability could be improved with general editing, and it needs revision with its citations.
+*'''Finance:''' [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finance] I chose this article because I felt that the readability could be improved with general editing, and it needs revision with its citations.
-*'''Zou People:''' [[en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zou_people]] I chose this article because it needs to be edited for readability, and is lengthy enough to where substantial improvements can be made.
+*'''Zou People:''' [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zou_people] I chose this article because it needs to be edited for readability, and is lengthy enough to where substantial improvements can be made.
-*'''Nicholas Tolstoy:''' [[en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nicholas_Tolstoy]] I chose this article because all of its information is listed underneath one section. I think this page would benefit from being edited so that information is more clearly organized and easier to read through.
+*'''Nicholas Tolstoy:''' [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nicholas_Tolstoy] I chose this article because all of its information is listed underneath one section. I think this page would benefit from being edited so that information is more clearly organized and easier to read through.
-*'''Forestry in Russia:''' [[en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forestry_in_Russia]] I chose this article because it has a specific tag at the top of the page that states it requires copyediting. The page is not organized as well as it could be, and needs a consistent tone throughout.
+*'''Forestry in Russia:''' [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forestry_in_Russia] I chose this article because it has a specific tag at the top of the page that states it requires copyediting. The page is not organized as well as it could be, and needs a consistent tone throughout.
-*'''Weather Warfare:''' [[en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weather_warfare]] I chose this article because it is tagged for being written like an essay; it needs heavy edits in tone in order for it to be presented as an encyclopedic article. It also needs light grammatical edits and needs to be organized better.
+*'''Weather Warfare:''' [en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weather_warfare] I chose this article because it is tagged for being written like an essay; it needs heavy edits in tone in order for it to be presented as an encyclopedic article. It also needs light grammatical edits and needs to be organized better.