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If no one else gets to it first, I will make an attempt to assess your article. I'm not sure how effective I will be, since I haven't taken an article above B level. One thing to do is look at [[mouth organ]] to see if there is anything useful there. Also, this instrument can be linked to the [[Harmonium]] used in Europe and South Asia--talking about the reeds which originated in Asian mouth organs and the eventual transmission of them to Europe (to create pump organs, and I think harmonicas and accordions) is one of the ways they are important on the worldwide scene. It's a lot to add but that is one possibility that comes to mind. I'll be off in about a week, and can try to assess then. Best wishes, [[User:Jacqke|Jacqke]] ([[User talk:Jacqke|talk]]) 20:20, 1 June 2021 (UTC) |
If no one else gets to it first, I will make an attempt to assess your article. I'm not sure how effective I will be, since I haven't taken an article above B level. One thing to do is look at [[mouth organ]] to see if there is anything useful there. Also, this instrument can be linked to the [[Harmonium]] used in Europe and South Asia--talking about the reeds which originated in Asian mouth organs and the eventual transmission of them to Europe (to create pump organs, and I think harmonicas and accordions) is one of the ways they are important on the worldwide scene. It's a lot to add but that is one possibility that comes to mind. I'll be off in about a week, and can try to assess then. Best wishes, [[User:Jacqke|Jacqke]] ([[User talk:Jacqke|talk]]) 20:20, 1 June 2021 (UTC) |
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:Hi {{Ping|Jacqke}}, Thank you so much for your help and effort. And I totally agree with you. I've included a short paragaph about how it spread westward in the 18th century in the History section, but I beleive we can definitely expand it to a bigger non- |
:Hi {{Ping|Jacqke}}, Thank you so much for your help and effort. And I totally agree with you. I've included a short paragaph about how it spread westward in the 18th century in the History section, but I beleive we can definitely expand it to a bigger non-Asian section. [[User:Ryssian|Ryssian]] ([[User talk:Ryssian#top|talk]]) 00:55, 2 June 2021 (UTC) |
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== A kitten for you! == |
== A kitten for you! == |
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Revision as of 00:56, 2 June 2021
Please don’t bite me, I’m a newbie!
I’m a university student in a Wikipedia Education class, and I’m currently learning how to contribute to Wikipedia.
I am approaching my subject in good faith.
If you have any concerns or questions, my tutor’s name is Blythekombucha (talk · contribs). Thanks!
Assessment
If no one else gets to it first, I will make an attempt to assess your article. I'm not sure how effective I will be, since I haven't taken an article above B level. One thing to do is look at mouth organ to see if there is anything useful there. Also, this instrument can be linked to the Harmonium used in Europe and South Asia--talking about the reeds which originated in Asian mouth organs and the eventual transmission of them to Europe (to create pump organs, and I think harmonicas and accordions) is one of the ways they are important on the worldwide scene. It's a lot to add but that is one possibility that comes to mind. I'll be off in about a week, and can try to assess then. Best wishes, Jacqke (talk) 20:20, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- Hi @Jacqke:, Thank you so much for your help and effort. And I totally agree with you. I've included a short paragaph about how it spread westward in the 18th century in the History section, but I beleive we can definitely expand it to a bigger non-Asian section. Ryssian (talk) 00:55, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
A kitten for you!
Love the pic you have of your cat~
Blythekombucha (talk) 04:12, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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