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Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University

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https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_Uttarakhand_flood#Page_name A discussion was already started before you created the similiar article. Please tell your opinion there. Regards

Suggestions and Review Request for Draft:Dhanraj Nathwani

Hi Hatchens, I hope you are doing well. I have tried to create the article on Draft:Dhanraj Nathwani but it gets under review since long after multiple edits and re-submission. Currently, it is under review since long time and I am not able to get any response from current editor/admin TheAafi. I request you to review the stated article and let me know is it good to got published on Wikipedia. I have tried to make it well-referenced as well as worked on tone of the article. Thanks in advance. Awaiting your response. હમઝા ઘાંચી (Talk) 05:57, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

હમઝા ઘાંચી, thank you for reaching out. Since, I'm not able to deduce the notability of this particular person. I'm going to take some time. p.s: TheAafi... Would you care to have a look at this draft? - Hatchens (talk) 02:17, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hatchens, The user also left some messages on my talk page but I couldn't reply because I'm preparing for the semester exams just starting from tomorrow. I don't understand if the subject is notable but the whole case depends on Group President at Reliance Industries & vice president of the Gujarat Cricket Association — but this serves no help. So I'd decline it. There is no other assertion of notability and the coverage is routine. ─ The Aafī on Mobile ^(talk) 02:24, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

AafiOnMobile, I trust your assessment on this draft. Wishing you all the best with your exams. - Hatchens (talk) 02:39, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hatchens, I agree with issues which AafiOnMobile was having. But now in given AFC, I have added official website's reference links where Nathwani's official post and identification added especially for his post of VP of Gujarat Cricket Association, as well as his post in Reliance Industries. Here are they . I request you to kindly re-look into this and let me know if anything is required in this AFC. Thanking you. હમઝા ઘાંચી (Talk) 18:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

હમઝા ઘાંચી, both the links doesn't establish notability of the entity. I will stick with TheAafi's assessment till you modify the draft as per WP:BIO, WP:SIGCOV, and WP:THREE. - Hatchens (talk) 12:03, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

References

Sexual violence against Tamils in Sri Lanka

Hi Hatchens, thanks for your review. Could you please point me to an example of when the tone was not neutral enough? So I can rectify it. Also some of the links became dead many months after i referenced them, i will need to search on cache pages or archive websites to see if they are available anywhere else, its frustrating. thanks Oz346 (talk) 16:34, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

Oz346, thanks for reaching out. once you're done, just ping me. - Hatchens (talk) 07:33, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Resubmitting Draft:Nicolas_Aguzin for review

Hi Hatchens, Thanks for your comments on my draft on Nicolas Aguzin https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nicolas_Aguzin I have made necessary adjustments in lines with Wikipedia standard and I agree that it was like a resume before. Could you pls help review it again? He is the CEO of Hong Kong Stock Exchanges, and I found that his preceder, Charles Li, is also on wiki at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Li. Thanks a lot. --Bubblyheap (talk) 16:46, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

Resubmitting Draft:Vasant_more for review

Hi Hatchens, Thanks for your review of the draft on Vasant more https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vasant_More . I have removed the content which seemed like promotion/advertisement and resubmitted the draft. I have included references, which prove the appointments of the said person to the offices. Could you please take another look? Thanks. Abhisanket (talk) 17:16, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Pauson–Khand reaction

This is a somewhat modified version of an existing article, Pauson-Khand reaction. I will not use my chemistry degree to decline it as 'exists', with advice to the submitter. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:09, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Robert McClenon, in total agreement with your call for merging. I apologize for not checking the existing article in the first place. - Hatchens (talk) 06:57, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Seethalakshmi Prakash

Thank you for your quick review. Yes, I agree your points and will resubmit it with changes in a few weeks. Sankarnair2 (talk) 15:25, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Sankarnair2, thanks for reaching out. Once you're done, just ping me. - Hatchens (talk) 07:32, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks again - my error was to use Sreya Jayadeep as a sample - in retrospect that article has some defects. Will resubmit my article by Mid July Sankarnair2 (talk) 12:09, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Sankarnair2, sure. If you have any doubt, then kindly raise questions at WP:TEA. - Hatchens (talk) 13:17, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Dance Maharashtra Dance

Please can you tell me what changes should be done in that article? I didn't get it that why you tagged the page as deletion. Which thing seems as promotional in that article? Mhatre Akash (talk) 11:33, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Gaurav Taneja

Hello brother, Hope you fine. I am new to Wikipedia. But this article has many reliable sources this person pass the notability test then why this article is rejected?. Please review this article I think this article can survive. Please if you can mention me any wrong thing on that article. Thanks. Trap133 (talk) 08:31, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Trap133, this person's wiki draft is being submitted n number of times and it duly fails WP:SIGCOV. A single event doesn't justifies the notability. The draft need to be salted. - Hatchens (talk) 12:16, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Viraj Singh Gohil

Yes Hatchens. I have rechecked it. I have mentioned 8 points in which 7 were given sources and the one left is the general introduction. In the 7 sources i have mentioned, only one is the interview of the mentioned person and the rest 6 were independent sources. Whereas coming to its reliability the i have mentioned the Indulge express (a part of the most reliable 89 year old Indian Express Newspaper. I also mentioned Imdb mentions and The news minute newspapers artcile too. I also mentioned the new york times article too. Mostly they mentioned his name in crew members as a cinematographers which defines his role in those projects. Once again check it. I am not asking you to review it. but, as you raised a question please brief me again what exactly is missing in the artcile. Thank you.Rushi1122334455 (talk) 15:12, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Dear Rushi1122334455, Thank you for reaching out. Entity clearly failing WP:BIO, WP:SIGCOV, and WP:THREE/WP:RSP. And, even if I look at the citations... these are just passing mentions. As of now, the entity is not ready for mainspace. - Hatchens (talk) 15:21, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

ok Thank you. I have added more information and other reliable mentions to it. I made it a stub , so i will wait for the reviewer to review the draft. Thank you once again dear Hatchens.Rushi1122334455 (talk) 15:36, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Once can you verify it again. As it is a stub i think the mention i made is enough according to WP:STUB. The person i had mentioned definitely had his notability and a cinematographer whose work had been mentioned many times. If you can suggest any further changes i will follow it. Thank you.-Rushi1122334455 (talk) 15:52, 17 June 2021 (UTC)