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This article is much more notable than the content provides. Will be adding more information. [[User:Clifford mcgraw|Clifford mcgraw]] ([[User talk:Clifford mcgraw|talk]]) 07:23, 29 September 2019 (UTC) |
This article is much more notable than the content provides. Will be adding more information. [[User:Clifford mcgraw|Clifford mcgraw]] ([[User talk:Clifford mcgraw|talk]]) 07:23, 29 September 2019 (UTC) |
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 20 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Clifford mcgraw (article contribs). This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 January 2021 and 21 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Papalkayak (article contribs).
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This article is much more notable than the content provides. Will be adding more information. Clifford mcgraw (talk) 07:23, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
The lead section should be re-written, especially the second sentence, as it was plagiarized from the source. [1] Clifford mcgraw (talk) 12:02, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
Would like to change article title to Diversity in Computer Science. Clifford mcgraw (talk) 12:39, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
Restrict opening statement to the U.S. being as though other countries may not have the same issues with their STEM pipeline. Clifford mcgraw (talk) 14:37, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
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I think you made a very wise choice in topic as this is a very notable and topical issue to cover. The lead so far does a good job setting up a basic overview of the topic. The content also appears to be fairly neutral which is important when dealing with a topic like this. The sources include PDFs and .coms but after checking them they are trustworthy links to government backed policy research for the UK and US. The only issues as you already mentioned on the talk page are lack of content but I know you're going to inevitably add more information to page. I also would like to suggest organizing the article by how computing affects each little ethnic demographic under separate sub headers with other stats that you have. Otherwise I think the article with your improvements is going to be a nice new addition. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jcbreur84 (talk • contribs) 19:19, 30 October 2019 (UTC)