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:@[[User:Anna karligkioti|Anna karligkioti]] please confirm that you have read and understood the message left by the reviewer who declined (not rejected, which is final) your submission. They have given you a route forward. Ask them why they consider it a neologism, please. Have you done so before posting here? All reviewers must be able to justify reviews and explain them [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 22:36, 15 November 2021 (UTC) |
:@[[User:Anna karligkioti|Anna karligkioti]] please confirm that you have read and understood the message left by the reviewer who declined (not rejected, which is final) your submission. They have given you a route forward. Ask them why they consider it a neologism, please. Have you done so before posting here? All reviewers must be able to justify reviews and explain them [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 22:36, 15 November 2021 (UTC) |
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[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] thank you very much for your reply! Yes I have and I am currently try to follow suggestions! |
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November 10
02:30:35, 10 November 2021 review of draft by Skybluegroundpink
- Skybluegroundpink (talk · contribs) (TB)
"Please help me understand which part is promotional in this article since I have linked every information that needs a reference to make sure that they are all credible and reliable information. If you may specify the parts that seem promotional, please list them. Thank you!"
Skybluegroundpink (talk) 02:30, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Skybluegroundpink: The first few sources are company web sites. See WP:PRIMARY. The sources need to be independent to demonstrate notability. Another editor has been helping clean up the article but it still needs work. The history section shouldn't be bulleted and the sentences shouldn't start Year 2003, etc. But mostly, you need to source everything that's there, with independent, reliable sourcing. TechnoTalk (talk) 03:54, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
08:11:05, 10 November 2021 review of draft by Lior79
Lior79 (talk) 08:11, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
I want to translate to English a Hebrew Wikipedia post. https://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D7%99%D7%A8%D7%95%D7%9F_%D7%A8%D7%95%D7%96%D7%9F
I keep getting the English version declined, as I don't have enough cites in footnotes. The problem is that all the references I have are in Hebrew
- Hi Lior79. I'm not sure what makes you say, "The problem is" that your references are in Hebrew. English-language sources are preferred, when available, but Hebrew sources are acceptable. Liorl added two inline, so they appear to understand the correct way to do so (are you and they the same person, or are you connected off-wiki?). And if you're translating the article, you presumably are fluent in Hebrew. So how is Hebrew a problem?
- A few other things to be aware of:
- Each language version of Wikipedia operates according to policies and guidelines set by the community of editors who contribute there, so what is an acceptable article on the Hebrew Wikipedia may not be acceptable on the English Wikipedia, and vice versa.
- For a long time, all general officers were presumed to be notable here, but that changed earlier this year. Now a general must meet WP:BIO to warrant a stand alone article.
- The draft is rather promotional. It reads as if it was written to praise Rosen.
- --Worldbruce (talk) 00:51, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
09:11:17, 10 November 2021 review of submission by MuratHerbert
- MuratHerbert (talk · contribs) (TB)
MuratHerbert (talk) 09:11, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello, I created a page about a famous international designer, that is more important to the design field than many other designers who have approved Wikipedia pages, who also have fewer references listed. I am wondering why my submission has been denied. I believe it is in error. There are dozens of pages of minor designers who are published on the site, this one is very relevant and one of the most famous in the field.
- MuratHerbert As the reviewer noted, you have not demonstrated tha this person meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable person, as shown with significant coverage in independent reliable sources. The sources you have offered do not seem to be significant coverage of the subject.
- Note that others similar articles existing does not automatically mean that yours can too. Please read other stuff exists. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible for inappropriate articles to get by us. We can only address what we know about. It could be that these other articles you have seen are also not appropriate; if you'd like to help out, you can point out these other articles, they can be addressed if that's the case, we could use the help. The drafting/submission process has not existed for the entire time Wikipedia has existed, and only new users and IP users are absolutely required to use it(though it is a good idea for all until one gains experience in submission). 331dot (talk) 09:57, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
10:13:25, 10 November 2021 review of draft by Manu9305
Hello, my draft has been rejected twice now. Here is the draft:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dara_(platform)
Here is the feedback:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of websites). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
So with this in mind, could anyone tell me what sort of changes I need to make to it? I've tried my best to bring it in line with guidelines, and in terms of legitimacy, I have used some links to leading Indian news outlets. Furthermore, I see pages that offer far less information such as the page for the platform LucidChart, so I am a bit confused. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Manu9305 (talk) 10:13, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
- Manu9305 Wikipedia is not a place to just tell about the existence of something and what it does. A Wikipedia article must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the subject, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability. The sources you have offered are not significant coverage of this platform- they merely tell of its existence, its features, and when it was released. You should look for at least three independent reliable sources- wholly unconnected with the platform- to summarize. This does not include things like press releases, interviews, brief mentions, announcements of routine activities(like the release of a product) or other primary sources.
- If you are associated with this platform, please review conflict of interest and paid editing for information on required formal disclosures. 331dot (talk) 10:26, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
11:51:45, 10 November 2021 review of submission by Shivansh Singh111
- Shivansh Singh111 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Shivansh Singh111 (talk) 11:51, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
- Shivansh Singh111 You don't ask a question, but Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. That's what social media is for. Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources state about a topic. Please see Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 11:59, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
16:29:49, 10 November 2021 review of draft by Ekotkww
Ekotkww (talk) 16:29, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
I would like some help to restructure this to seem less like a commercial/ad. It is very brief and is meant for people to understand what WeddingWire is as a company!
- @Ekotkww: I started to clean it up a bit. I also renamed XO Group as The Knot Worldwide. Just needs a new logo. TechnoTalk (talk) 03:18, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
16:56:16, 10 November 2021 review of submission by Lokesh7597
Lokesh7597 (talk) 16:56, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
17:25:17, 10 November 2021 review of submission by MiCirazoncito
- MiCirazoncito (talk · contribs) (TB)
MiCirazoncito (talk) 17:25, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
- MiCirazoncito You don't ask a question, but see my earlier reply to you. As the draft was rejected, it won't be considered any more. 331dot (talk) 17:28, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
November 11
04:12:41, 11 November 2021 review of submission by Mnikumr58
Mnikumr58 (talk) 04:12, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Mnikumr58 You need to prove that he passes WP:NACTOR FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 18:09, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
08:27:12, 11 November 2021 review of draft by EgilsDoro
Hi, there! Well, I tried to fix all the suggestions, the problem is that there are no lots of references to site, as the person article is about is quite "a rocket" in his field. Dont know how to improve more the article.
Also - if I may ask for the advise - I've tried to translate Latvian page into English (unsuccessfully:)) and wanted to ask You - the page I try to create in en.wiki and page I try to translate form LV - are they counted as a different pages or same?
EgilsDoro (talk) 08:27, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @EgilsDoro: We do not have articles on the up-and-coming; they must have already arrived for us to even consider having an article. Encyclopaedias are lagging indicators, after all. And they would be considered different pages on different projects. Each Wikipedia project has different communities and, as a consequence, different standards, with the English-language Wikipedia having some of the toughest. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 11:12, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 15:22:11, 11 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Barberknows
- Barberknows (talk · contribs) (TB)
The draft “Frank Walmsley” has been unfairly rejected on the grounds that it does not have sufficient media coverage (!): this has been New Zealand’s MOST PUBLICIZED sexual abuse trial, and the draft has shown numerous links and references to the country’s main newspapers where it made headlines for an extended period of time. It is a very important article to have on Wikipedia, to raise awareness of child abuse that often goes unnoticed and uncredited.
I do not understand what is missing. Can you please help ? Thank you.
Barberknows (talk) 15:22, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Barberknows You have swathes of unsourced text which can be judged to be controversial. Walmsley is alive. For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today.
- Speaking about unfairness is unhelpful, so is using block capitals.
- It is not a "very important article to have on Wikipedia". it is just a draft article. When accepted it will just be an article. We do not care about the topic. It must be correctly written and referenced according to our rules. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 18:08, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 16:20:44, 11 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Haru4sooya
- Haru4sooya (talk · contribs) (TB)
hello, im a admin of a fanbase on twitter for south korean girlgroup aespa member WINTER and im trying to create and publish a informative page for her. I never used wikipedia as "writer" before... could you please help me exactly what i have to do? I know, reliable sources, references. I will definitely try to gain all korean websites and gather them into the references box... but, here are sooo many different pages and so much text - isnt there a easy methode to exactly guide me in a "wikipedia page writing for dummys" or something? Im 17 years old.
kind regards and stay healthy dear admin :)
Haru4sooya (talk) 16:20, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Haru4sooya Please read Help:Your first article FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 18:03, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
17:28:12, 11 November 2021 review of draft by Javytamez
I am trying to create a Wiki page for our company's 100th anniversary. I saved it as a draft, cause after it's created others will be adding content. So I published it, but then could not find it again. I submitted for review, without references. Is there a way to expedite reviews?
Javytamez (talk) 17:28, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- Javytamez There is no way to guarantee a speedy review, but I declined your draft as it has almost no content. First, please review WP:COI and WP:PAID for information on required formal disclosures. Second, please understand that Wikipedia is not a web host where companies can create pages about themselves and their anniversaries. This is an encyclopedia, typically written by independent editors, that has criteria for inclusion, see WP:ORG. Please read WP:5P and Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 17:38, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
17:55:50, 11 November 2021 review of draft by Aljones001
- Aljones001 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am trying to publish an article for a well known and recognized artist (Aaron T Stephan) that had previously been denied back in April due to lack of citations. I added citations, but the article was declined due to my sources not being considered "reliable." What should I do? The sources are from published articles/newspapers/legitimate websites. Just now I went back to add sources for the first paragraph on his background and education (sources from Forbes and two galleries. Do you think this will solve the problem? Or is the problem with the previously included sources? here is the draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Aaron_T_Stephan&action=submit
Aljones001 (talk) 17:55, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Aljones001 What is likely to help is for you to help the review team by linking to online versions of your reference where they exist.
- Just to remind you: For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today.
- You need to prove that the person passes Wikipedia:Notability (people) See the section on Creative professionals there FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 18:02, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 18:58:07, 11 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Sidney Switzer
- Sidney Switzer (talk · contribs) (TB)
Sidney Switzer (talk) 18:58, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- Sidney Switzer You don't ask a question, but your draft was deleted as a blatant copyright infringement. Please see WP:COPYVIO. 331dot (talk) 18:59, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 20:32:57, 11 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by ThinkerCastillo
- ThinkerCastillo (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello, I am a PhD student at Purdue University. I recently created an article for my Professor and advisor on his behalf, Dr. Luciano Castillo who is a very notable personality in the field of fluid mechanics. He has major contributions to the community of science, as well as in energy and social sector where he works on under-represented groups in STEM community. However, the page was reviewed and declined on basis of copyright issues. I was wondering if someone could please help me understand the problem so I could fix it. Can you please help? Thank you :)
ThinkerCastillo (talk) 20:32, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @ThinkerCastillo The reason for declining the draft is copying of text from elsewhere. Having run a copyright checker on it I am not sure that I agree with @Eagleash and would like them to comment further. I do agree with their removal of external links from the text. I would also have pushed this back to you for further work based upon your referencing.
- For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today.
- I have concerns that you have written this on his behalf. Please read Wikipedia:Conflict of interest. This doesn't;t prevent you from writing a draft, but it needs to be declared FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 20:47, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Timtrent: Hi Tim, thanks for picking this up and the ping. Looking at it again the CV is not as bad as I initially thought; there's a lot more 'routine' wording it seems, However, a 50% indication (via 'earwig') is a bit of a red flag though. I agree also that the referencing isn't ideal and might also have returned it if RL had not intervened. Cheers. Eagleash (talk) 23:15, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
21:55:20, 11 November 2021 review of submission by Huanggab
Dear editors,
I have recently posted an article on the Kresling fold, a type of creasing pattern with multiple applications in aerospace and everyday objects, and also a very interesting subject from a mathematical perspective. I have included extensive references on the subject, including multiple papers by Biruta Kresling, the researcher whose name was given to that fold in the scientific community.
My draft was declined on the basis of not being "supported by reliabled sources", without any guidance on how to improve the article.
The sources I have used include several peer-reviewed conference and journal papers, such as Journal of Mechanisms and Robotics, International Design Engineering Technical Conferences and Computers and Information in Engineering Conference, Structural Dynamics, and Materials Conference, Physical Review E. , Journal of Applied Mechanics, Science advances and more.
Those sources are substantiated by a wide body of researchers and academic institutions. If they cannot be considered reliable, then what is?
Please reconsider this article for acceptance.
Thank you so much.
Huanggab (talk) 21:55, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
23:13:39, 11 November 2021 review of submission by 1nM4W0
Hi there. My name is Ian and I'm inquiring about when the above-mentioned draft might receive a review? I submitted it about 2 months ago and was told that a high percentage of drafts get some sort of response within the first week. I understand that your team has a lot of content to review and am hopeful we can get some sort of response to our draft after so long. Please let me know if there's anything I can or need to do on my end to help expedite this process. Any other questions would also be welcome. Thank you! 1nM4W0 (talk) 23:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
- Hi 1nM4W0. Please clarify what you mean by "we" and "our". The policy on Wikipedia is "one user—one account". Usernames should not be shared by multiple individuals. Do you have a conflict of interest to declare? --Worldbruce (talk) 14:27, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
My apologies. I am the sole user of this account and have no conflict of interest to declare. Please let me know if I can answer any other questions for you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1nM4W0 (talk • contribs) 16:09, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @1nM4W0 I have left a comment on the draft. The reason for the delay seems to me to be that yiou have not helped us to help you FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 16:18, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Ah. I see the problem, thank you for pointing that out. I erroneously assumed that the sources were working properly. I'll be sure to get that fixed and circle back around once that's done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1nM4W0 (talk • contribs) 16:27, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
I have added the links to the references on this article. I am experiencing one display problem in which it appears the references are showing up twice in the same section. Any advice or assistance with that problem would be greatly appreciated. The links appear on the first iteration of the references list and should be functioning properly. Let me know if there's anything else I need to do. Thank you!
Thank you for the further instructions on setting up citations. I'll do that research and get those placed properly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1nM4W0 (talk • contribs) 17:36, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- 1nM4W0 I'm wondering who told you a review would take under a week, and how you came to edit about this company. 331dot (talk) 19:52, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Happy to answer that. I can't remember which editor I previously spoke to, but they claimed that 80% of submissions receive a response within 1-2 weeks. However, I've also seen the messaging that it can take up to 2 months, so I hope no one takes that conversation point as a complaint. Just seeking some more clarity on the process.
As for how I came to write about this company, I am a current employee. I hope that doesn't constitute a conflict of interest, but I worked closely with another Wikipedia editor, Tol, to ensure that the piece met encyclopedic writing standards and in no way sounded promotional. Before being assigned to other projects, Tol indicated that I had removed all traces of language that could be construed as promotional.
The other reason I'm here is because InMoment, the company this article is about, actually had a Wikipedia page for many years until a disgruntled ex-employee filled it with obscene language, forcing its takedown. Ultimately, I hope to restore InMoment's presence on Wikipedia with this new page about the company, and am willing to collaborate/answer additional questions as needed. Sorry for writing a novel. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1nM4W0 (talk • contribs) 22:25, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
23:59:44, 11 November 2021 review of draft by Curtis8516
Curtis8516 (talk) 23:59, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
23:59:44, 11 November 2021 review of submission by Curtis8516
Hi there. I have been asked by musciian of Sneaker Pimps - Liam Howe, to create an album page for the band's Wikipedia. The only one missing is Squaring The Circle. I attempted to duplicate the album page of previous Sneaker Pimps albums with this one, but it has been declined. I'm new to this, so was wondering if anyone could help. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Stchttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Stc
- @Curtis8516: No references, no article, no debate. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 00:05, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Jéské Couriano, Is Google broken where you live? Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:55, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- I was judging the draft based on the sources it presently cited at that time. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 14:11, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- The point is that you could have Googled and found at least 3/4 reliable sources in about two minutes and added them to the article, saving everybody a lot of time. WP:RUBBISH isn't an acceptable argument at AfD; why do you think it is here? Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 14:28, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- I prefer to not be yelled at by a draft author who assumes their draft is theirs alone to edit, or who are editing on behalf of someone else who wants their article just so. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 15:24, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- The point is that you could have Googled and found at least 3/4 reliable sources in about two minutes and added them to the article, saving everybody a lot of time. WP:RUBBISH isn't an acceptable argument at AfD; why do you think it is here? Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 14:28, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- I was judging the draft based on the sources it presently cited at that time. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 14:11, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Jéské Couriano, Is Google broken where you live? Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:55, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Curtis8516: You must, if you haven't already, formally declare your conflict of interest, see WP:COI. 331dot (talk) 08:29, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
November 12
02:01:07, 12 November 2021 review of draft by Sassamiss
Sassamiss (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Sassamiss I'm afraid we need to upgrade to Telepathy 2.0.37b in order to determine your question. I thought this reply at you for a while, but, since you didn't seem to receive it, I thought I'd better reply here. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 16:20, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
07:12:25, 12 November 2021 review of submission by Kakyoin95
Dear,
I am writing regarding the Dewesoft article. The article was rejected even after big reconstruction and inclusion of important sources - Ph.D.'s. I really don't understand why. I am following the guidelines and trying my best to make this an academic article. I was making sure to exclude every material that might seem promotional - this excludes all self-published sources (which are allowed to use but I specifically didn't just to make sure), I excluded the part about the awards company got (since it might be misleading to the readers), I am not including any products (just to make sure), I was researching deeply into the history of the company and its founders and try to include as many details as possible to make a suitable article, selecting only information that I believe it is suitable for an academic article.
I understand that this article has a bad history since it was rejected many times. But for the last times it was resubmitted for a review I did take into consideration all the guidelines and comments I was getting. I specifically focused on similar, already published articles on the same theme as this, for example, Wikipedia article for National Instruments. NI is a data acquisition company and most of the sources in the Wiki article are self-published! Most of the article consists of the History of the company and it even includes the part about the products! This is why I really can't understand how can one article on the same theme and similar content be published and other rejected.
I understand you might be worried that this is promotional content but it really isn't. I am a young (just graduated) researcher who is currently spending much time learning about data acquisition in general. Normally I wouldn't care much if the article was published or not, but this one is bugging me for quite a time. I published about Dewesoft because I was researching the DAQ companies and I haven't found Dewesoft on Wikipedia. I believe that if someone is searching for this kind of information it is always good to have at least basic info in Wikipedia, so then you can continue your research otherwhere. For this, I decided to create it. It was meant for fun and to maybe facilitate the search for someone like me. I understand I was not putting my best to make an article for Wikipedia standards but I was really stubborn and try to follow all the given advice and really make something valuable. If it wasn't for my stubbornness I wouldn't insist on publishing it... But it really annoys me because I don't understand. I even asked for the opinion of my University professor - if he thinks that the article is being promotional. He did comment that this kind of article is not well supported with news references but after I mentioned to him that it is an article made for Wikipedia, he agreed that the resources are good and should be accepted as reliable.
So... I am really frustrated about this... I am trying my best and I am trying for some quite time... Again, I understand that this article was problematic. But it was problematic in the past. I strongly believe that for someone who puts this much time into improving, this should be rewarded.
I did get some valuable information from the last rejections - and I did consider them to improve myself. But for this last rejection, it just says it is 'contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia'. It doesn't make sense... It really does not... I strongly believe that this article was not rejected because it contains 'bad' content, but because it was problematic in the past.
Please I would love to hear your opinion and constructive advice on how to improve the article. I don't believe it is the right thing for me to just give up... Not after so much time and effort, I put into it. I hope you can understand.
Best regards!
Kakyoin95 (talk) 07:12, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Kakyoin95 Self-published sources are not prohibited(see WP:PRIMARY), but cannot be used to establish notability. Wikipedia is mainly interested in what independent reliable sources say about a topic, not in what it says about itself.
- Please read Other Stuff Exists. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible for inappropriate articles to get by us. Furthermore, this submission process has not existed the entire time Wikipedia has existed, nor is everyone required to use it(though it is a good idea to). We can only address what we know about. If you would like to help out, you can identify other similar articles you have seen for possible action. If you wish to use other articles as a model, make sure that they are classified as good articles; those are the best ones to use.
- As an encyclopedia, not every topic merits an article on Wikipedia just for existing. We aren't interested in "basic info". A company merits a Wikipedia article if it receives significant coverage in independent reliable sources that have chosen on their own to write about it, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company. Independent reliable sources does not include press releases, annoucements of routine business activities, brief mentions, staff interviews, or other primary sources. I cannot read Slovene but it appears to me that most of the sources you offered fall into those categories or similar. This is why it was rejected, after other chances at resubmission failed to remedy the situation. It was not rejected solely because it was previously declined. 331dot (talk) 08:28, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Thank you so much for your reply and advice! It makes much more sense now. I will look deeply into the criteria for notable companies and try to find better articles for a model to help me out.
I kinda knew that solely press release is not enough to support the notability of a company, that's why I really tried to focus more on the English Ph.D. I put into it and just support the facts with other news articles. But I guess this is not enough to establish notability? I could support the facts with some self-published sources but I don't believe it will do any good with the article... I also believe you are right that it can be problematic for Slovenian sources to be cited so I will try to focus more on finding English ones.
I know that my statement about the article not being published because it was deleted so many times might seem aggressive, but I was really disappointed with the rejection because I did not know what I did wrong. The rejections only state that the article is not suitable for Wikipedia and then you have so many pages to read on your own and then you just have to figure it out and predict what is wrong with your article... And even if you do it still gets rejected... it is just so frustrating.
So I apologize if I'm complaining much, I am just sad to see all the effort go to vain. However, I am grateful for your communication and the piece of advice you gave me... I will try to do better next time.
Best regards!
Kakyoin95 (talk) 09:05, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Kakyoin95 Might I suggest you abandon the rejected draft. Instead, write a tight, brief, well referenced item. Start from scratch by reading this essay, one of many that discusses creation of articles. Write it short, sharp and factual. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 12:32, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
12:23:23, 12 November 2021 review of draft by Rdxmen000
Rdxmen000 (talk) 12:23, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Rdxmen000 You don't ask a question. 331dot (talk) 13:02, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
18:53:07, 12 November 2021 review of draft by Leoz1999
My draft[1] was declined because the subject was not deemed notable enough. His version of the 14 characteristics of fascism is one of the most common definitions given for fascism, even showing up before Umberto Eco in Google's search results. He has also been mentioned before in Wikipedia talk and it was suggested that a page for him be made. [2]
He is also the subject of many recent article discussing definitions of fascism including the sources linked in the draft and the following article.[3]
Please read through the cited sources before deciding whether or not he is notable enough for a Wikipedia page.
Leoz1999 (talk) 18:53, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- We do not consider mentions in other articles to be any sort of justification for an article. Medium is not an acceptable source. Your sources overall aren't much help, as the first is written by him and the third doesn't mention him at all; the second source is good but cannot in and of itself carry the article. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 18:59, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
References
19:41:11, 12 November 2021 review of draft by Emmachernandez
- Emmachernandez (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am requesting help to see why my article for Jake Allyn has not been approved. There was a dispute of notability but the editor agreed "No Mans Land" was notable enough. To add another source, Jake has been a lead in TV series "The Quad" and many other projects. His brother, Conor Allyn, just had his article approved on wikipedia and as they work together at their own production studio I would say Jake qualifies the same if not more since he is involved in even more projects as an actor. I attempted to take out some of the biased jargon and would love to know how I can further improve his article for approval! Thank you so much for your help in advance!
Emmachernandez (talk) 19:41, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Emmachernandez (talk) 19:41, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Emmachernandez Please see WP:NACTOR
- For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today.
- The photograph in the draft is being considered but Wikimedia Commons as a copyright violation. Commons has very precise rules. You may not just upload a picture you have been sent by someone. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 12:24, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
21:40:17, 12 November 2021 review of draft by Pennyframstad
- Pennyframstad (talk · contribs) (TB)
Pennyframstad (talk) 21:40, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
I would to request deleting this article as I will be creating an article titled "Professor Louie & the Crowmatix" as the majority of citations are for his band. Thank you Pennyframstad (talk) 21:40, 12 November 2021 (UTC)pennyframstad
- @Pennyframstad You may place {{db-user}} at the head of the item you wish to be deleted since you are its sole substantive author. However, unless the band is called "Professor Louie & the Crowmatix" may I counsel you against that course of action. Instead write about the one or the other. Articles that span two subjects almost always fail because they are neither one thing nor the other FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 12:20, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
FaddleTalk to me thank you so much for clarifying this, I really appreciate it. Now I know to be very specific on only one subject in the article. Pennyframstad (talk) 17:20, 15 November 2021 (UTC)pennyframstad
- @Pennyframstad Happy to be of some small help. The second thing I can do to help you is to say "Write tight, dull-but-worthy, correctly referenced prose."
- In Wikipedia terms, less prose is truly more use than overblown verbiage. We need facts, but made to run as fair prose.
- The existing draft can be a good basis, or you can simply overwrite it or even abandon it and start afresh. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 17:46, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
FaddleTalk to me thank you Pennyframstad (talk) 19:49, 15 November 2021 (UTC)pennyframstad
22:44:48, 12 November 2021 review of submission by ThePoliticalDebate
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ThePoliticalDebate (talk) 22:44, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- @ThePoliticalDebate please see WP:NPOLITICIAN FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 12:16, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
The article is better written and mkre relevant now that the subject is an elected leader.
- The article as presently writ is woefully undersourced. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 15:40, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
November 13
09:16:26, 13 November 2021 review of draft by TrickShotFinn
- TrickShotFinn (talk · contribs) (TB)
I'm at bit of loss how to proceed with this, since I'm not that familiar with Arsene Lupin. Also, from what I understand, 813 is supposed to be pretty significant work in Lupin canon.
And once again, I cannot handle this alone and it is unjust to expect me to.TrickShotFinn (talk) 09:16, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
TrickShotFinn (talk) 09:16, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- TrickShotFinn It's unjust to expect you to do the work to write about a topic for which you chose to write about? I'm wondering why you attempted to write about a subject that you know little about and need others to help you with. Typically, editors write about subjects that they know something about and can support what they write with sources. You don't need to submit a totally finished, complete draft, but to pass this process you must summarize at least three independent reliable sources with significant coverage of this novel, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable novel.
- As you have found, you attempted to create this in mainspace yourself, but it was not kept there; it was not just deleted because there is a chance it can be brought up to standards, but it can't just be left there. If you need help, my suggestion would be to find a relevant WikiProject, perhaps the Books project, which may have other editors willing to help you(but they won't necessarily just do it for you). 331dot (talk) 09:35, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, I must've misinterpreted what "collaborative online encyclopedia" meant - if I get this sort of sardonic treatment over asking for help. I could have taken this on some other day, but not now. I'll cool down and ask WP Books later.TrickShotFinn (talk) 10:07, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- @TrickShotFinn not really sardonic. The editors here are generalists who specialise in helping with technical aspects of creation of articles. You have mace an excellent choice to aim for specialists.
- Sometimes one is lucky, here, and finds an editor with an interest I the topic, and oohysicla hope arrives, but, mostly, the editors here are likely to be unable to offer editing help tat is not a technical issue. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 11:09, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- I have left what I hope you will find to be a helpful comment on the draft itself FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 11:16, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, I must've misinterpreted what "collaborative online encyclopedia" meant - if I get this sort of sardonic treatment over asking for help. I could have taken this on some other day, but not now. I'll cool down and ask WP Books later.TrickShotFinn (talk) 10:07, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- TrickShotFinn I apologize for giving offense, that was not my intention whatsoever. As I said, you are not expected to publish a completely finished, perfect article in one try. But you are expected to provide a bare minimum start for something that you create in the main, public space of the encyclopedia. In this case, you did so, and it was noticed by another editor who saw that it did not meet those minimum standards and they decided to move it into the Draft area for further work. You might have, through pure luck that it was not noticed in the New Pages feed, had it stick in the main space for a bit- but that's not the best way to seek collaboration as you would then rely on the pure luck that another editor interested in the topic would come along and add to it. Creating Drafts and then telling other people about them- either at the relevant WikiProject, or on the general Help Desk(this desk is primaily for asking about submitted drafts) is the best way to start something that you think has a chance at being improved but you don't have the means(like sources) to do. If you submit a draft or directly create an article, it is expected to meet certain minimum standards. 331dot (talk) 12:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
Sorry if I caused an alarm. The "It's unjust to expect you to do the work to write about a topic for which you chose to write about?" and other such from 331dot went down the wrong pipe and it's not been a best week for me. I maybe not that familiar with Arsene Lupin, but I do know 813 gets brought up in the conversation a lot (i.e fansites, tvtropes etc). I was further enticed into doing it when I noticed that the other language wikis had entries for 813 - and yes, I am aware certain languages are much looser with citations than the English one. I was also aware of the risk that it would be sent to draftspace, but I gambled on it, believing it would attract somebody who knew more about it. I'll probably be unable to focus on 813 - as well as Roland Habersetzer, another entry that has suffered same fate. I have the real life things to wrestle with. That and before the draftspace double strike, I was meant to focus on improving the Wing Chun page here on Wikipedia, so I'm just burnt out with little energy for this stuff at the moment. Again, sorry for the trouble. TrickShotFinn (talk) 17:40, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
09:52:08, 13 November 2021 review of submission by Yasercs89
YASER ARAFATH (talk) 09:52, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Yasercs89 I'm afraid we need to upgrade to Telepathy 2.0.37b in order to determine your question. I thought this reply at you for a while, but, since you didn't seem to receive it, I thought I'd better reply here FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 12:15, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Yasercs89: This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. Your sources are unusable. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 18:02, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
22:05:12, 13 November 2021 review of submission by Fnoll
Fnoll (talk) 22:05, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
I consulted the notability guidelines for Web portals at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(web) and believed I had met all requirements there as well as having addressed all the comments on my draft and so I submitted the article again for review.
If I didn't, I'd be very grateful if you could guide me on what specifically needs to be added to the article in to meet Wikipedia requirements and then let me submit the article for review again.
Fnoll (talk) 22:05, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
- Fnoll The draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. You have not offered significant coverage of the subject. 331dot (talk) 22:21, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
November 14
03:04:57, 14 November 2021 review of draft by Ornithoptera
- Ornithoptera (talk · contribs) (TB)
Working on Draft:Falcon Lake Incident, on the mainspace it is a redirect to the list of Canadian UFO sightings but due to the amount of prolonged coverage of the event from independent sources even 57 years following the incident and the amount of material published regarding the event I do believe it warrants a separate page. I am unsure as to if the draft will be published as a result of the current redirect status of the mainspace article.
Ornithoptera (talk) 03:04, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
08:29:53, 14 November 2021 review of submission by 219.90.98.228
- 219.90.98.228 (talk · contribs) (TB)
IVE MADE CHANGES ACCORDING TO THE GUIDLINES AND WANT THIS COMPLETED ASAP SO THANK YOU MODERATORS. 219.90.98.228 (talk) 08:29, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- The draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 08:31, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- Please do not type in all capital letters, that is considered yelling. 331dot (talk) 08:32, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
in need to complete my project asap and i have made changes accordingly so can you pls check it again 219.90.98.228 (talk) 08:57, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- As you were told, the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. If this was your project, it was unfair to give you such a project as whomever gave it to you could not guarantee that you would succeed. For additional comment, please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections. This is easier to do in full desktop mode in a browser on your device; the mobile and app versions do not have full functionality. 331dot (talk) 09:01, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- If your project was from a educational facility, your instructors should review the Education program materials to learn how to design fairer assignments. 331dot (talk) 09:03, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 10:17:08, 14 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by 49.204.138.228
- 49.204.138.228 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Friends, recently I stumbled upon an Art Gallery organized by NGMA in Bangalore, India http://ngmaindia.gov.in/ngma_bangaluru.asp which is all about Upendra Maharathi and when I was looking information on Google, I couldn't see Wikipedia.
Therefore, I need your help in writing an article on Upendra Maharathi, who is an artist extraordinaire http://www.artsillustrated.in/architecture/who-was-upendra-maharathi/ and here https://indianexpress.com/article/express-sunday-eye/an-artist-extraordinaire-upendra-maharathi-5992225/. He won many awards https://umsas.org.in/achievements/ & here https://indianexpress.com/article/lifestyle/art-and-culture/confessions-of-a-creative-mind/.
Do let me know how can we help people know about this man.
Thank you 49.204.138.228 (talk) 10:17, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
49.204.138.228 (talk) 10:17, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- Please create a draft yourself using the wizard at WP:AFC. Often it is better to have an account, but it is not mandatory. Please read WP:YFA before starting FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 10:43, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
Request on 13:30:33, 14 November 2021 for further review and assistance on AfC submission by NewManila2000
- NewManila2000 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I just want to request for another review of the mentioned draft since I had added an information there after the AFC submission of the article was first rejected. Thanks. NewManila2000 (talk) 13:30, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
NewManila2000 (talk) 13:30, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- @NewManila2000 You have submitted it for review, and it will be reviewed in due course FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 14:51, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
15:27:28, 14 November 2021 review of draft by Godisawoman1
- Godisawoman1 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi there! My draft got deleted. So, I wanted to know the reason behind rejection, is it about the sources I've attached or the language used in my article, since i'm new to this, and I really want to make a significant contribution to this community.
Godisawoman1 (talk) 15:27, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
16:07:57, 14 November 2021 review of submission by Msftstar
Msftstar (talk) 16:07, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- All of your sources are useless. We don't cite social media or streaming websites, and government documents are primary sources. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 17:09, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
19:42:17, 14 November 2021 review of submission by PeelyMan
19:42:17, 14 November 2021 review of submission by PeelyMan
PeelyMan (talk) 19:42, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- @PeelyMan: No sources, no article, no debate. We also do not speculate on how subjects are connected. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 19:46, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- Your draft was rejected your topic is not notable, you have removed the rejection notice but this will not help. Theroadislong (talk) 19:56, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
20:05:20, 14 November 2021 review of submission by 2601:241:480:6340:0:0:0:BD0C
2601:241:480:6340:0:0:0:BD0C (talk) 20:05, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
I wanted to updated that Kale My Name has 61K followers now and that Tabitha Brown announced opening of Los Angeles location end of the month. But it says it’s not notable enough? It’s currently in 300 news articles and it got over million views. Please do not deny veganisam and Kale My Name as something not notable, because this is huge.
- It could have 61 million followers and it still might not be notable, notability is assessed by the quality of reliable independent sources that have discussed the topic. Theroadislong (talk) 20:11, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
22:18:29, 14 November 2021 review of submission by PrinceJoshie
- PrinceJoshie (talk · contribs) (TB)
PrinceJoshie (talk) 22:18, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
22:33:47, 14 November 2021 review of draft by EcheveriaJ
- EcheveriaJ (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I created an "article" and submitted it but was declined. This article was meant to be more as a neat place to find different sampling techniques - a list. Hence, as it is a list, it doesn't really need citations as it is just a convenient place to group things together. What edits would make this clear? Many thanks --EcheveriaJ (talk) 22:33, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
EcheveriaJ (talk) 22:33, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- Hi EcheveriaJ. Your statement, "as it is a list, it doesn't really need citations", isn't really true. Stand-alone lists are a type of article. Wikipedia's verifiability policy applies to them, and they should be sourced. I've left a more detailed comment on the draft.
- You also may find Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lists helpful. --Worldbruce (talk) 01:21, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
November 15
04:34:12, 15 November 2021 review of draft by Melissa Mwaura
Are there any updates that need to be made prior to the publication?
Melissa Mwaura (talk) 04:34, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Melissa Mwaura: there are major changes which need to happen before this accepted, you need to support everything with what we classify as reliable sources. So far none of the references that discuss the artist in any detail are considered reliable. I also don't see any indication on how they meet our other criteria of WP:NMUSICBIO. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 04:40, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
05:53:33, 15 November 2021 review of submission by Neelmohapatra
- Neelmohapatra (talk · contribs) (TB)
- No draft specified!
Neelmohapatra (talk) 05:53, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Draft:Maharishi University of Information Technology
Hello 331dot,
I am working on a draft of an article for a private University in Uttar Pradesh (Maharishi University of Information Technology). I have modified the content also summurised again on the base of wiki policies. I would appreciate any more experienced eyes on this.
- Neelmohapatra Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about the existence of an organization like a university and what it does. A Wikipedia article about a universtity should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about it, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization. The only sources you have offered merely confirm the existence of the university. Please see Your First Article. As I stated in the draft, I fear that you are too close to your university to be able to write about it as Wikipedia requires. To succeed, you need to set aside everything you know about the univerity, all materials put out by the university(including press releases and announcements), and all brief mentions of it, and only write based on the content of independent sources with significant coverage. It's usually very hard for people in your position to do that. 331dot (talk) 09:59, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
06:18:34, 15 November 2021 review of submission by VadimBlack89
- VadimBlack89 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am still wondering what is needed to have one's own Wikipedia page for an artist. There are a number of links showing author's work including the reference from the Pahlavi queen.
VadimBlack89 (talk) 06:18, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- VadimBlack89 Wikipedia does not have pages, it has articles. This is a subtle but important distinction. You have not offered independent reliable sources with significant coverage of this artist. Because of this, the draft was rejected, and will not be considered further. Please see Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 09:54, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
09:19:02, 15 November 2021 review of submission by JulieFr
The draft has been declined because it does "not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject" However this draft is very similar to (inspired by, in fact) the Wikipedia page of James Kennedy (social psychologist), a friend and colleague of M. Clerc. They both worked on the same topic (Particle Swarm Optimization, PSO), they both had the same IEEE rewarded paper, and, on this page, I do not see more "published, reliable, secondary sources".
Actually J. Kennedy himself says the contribution of M. Clerc to PSO is greater than his own. Even if you do not ask him directly, you could search on "pso contribution kennedy clerc".
So I do not understand. Please explain. And because I don't understand I don't know what to do.
JulieFr (talk) 09:19, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- JulieFr Wikipedia has articles, not pages. This is a subtle but important distinction. Please see other stuff exists. That other similar articles exist does not automatically mean that yours can too. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible for inappropriate articles to get by us. We can only address what we know about. I've marked the Kennedy article as problematic(with poor citations). It isn't required (except for new or unregistered users) to use this process, though it's a good idea.
- The sources you have offered do not seem to be about Clerc personally, and/or do not offer significant coverage of him; most seem to confirm the specific facts given(such as the existence of his work). There is a line about his hobbies that is completely unsourced and likely inappropriate unless independent sources discuss his hobbies. 331dot (talk) 09:51, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
11:29:15, 15 November 2021 review of draft by JJking56
JJking56 (talk) 11:29, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- JJking56 You don't ask a question. If you want to submit your draft, click the "Submit your draft for review" button in the box at the top of your draft. 331dot (talk) 11:30, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
15:17:57, 15 November 2021 review of submission by Nuttyprofessor2016
- Nuttyprofessor2016 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Nuttyprofessor2016 (talk) 15:17, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
He has received 3 awards since the last submission. There are interviews and other things about him out. Should I submit it for re-review?
- Hi Nuttyprofessor2016. No, don't bother. The subject isn't notable. The awards are meaningless, non-notable, business puffery. Interviews are primary sources, and rarely have independent analysis by the interviewer, so they don't help establish notability. This piece of pyrite is unwelcome in the treasury of knowledge that is Wikipedia. Don't waste volunteer time with it. --Worldbruce (talk) 23:25, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
15:26:02, 15 November 2021 review of submission by Anna karligkioti
- Anna karligkioti (talk · contribs) (TB)
Dear editors, I have questions on the comments given on my proposed entry "Historical bioarchaeology" as it was declined. I would be glad if you could help me out on the following. First of all can you elaborate on why my term is considered neologism by the editor? My proposed entry aimed at giving this term publicly since it is the combination of two subfields of research (in my study areas) and it is very often misunderstood. In addition to that I didn't promote any personal work but rather did initial research in order to contribute in Wikipedia in a detailed manner that followed both code of conduct and guidelines. Lastly, I cannot see how my detailed article is not sufficient for being published, while another less detailed and updated one has an entry of its own namely "Medieval bioarchaeology" (which also counts less words). Thank you in advance! Best regards, Anna
Anna karligkioti (talk) 15:26, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Anna karligkioti please confirm that you have read and understood the message left by the reviewer who declined (not rejected, which is final) your submission. They have given you a route forward. Ask them why they consider it a neologism, please. Have you done so before posting here? All reviewers must be able to justify reviews and explain them FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 22:36, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
FiddleTimtrent thank you very much for your reply! Yes I have and I am currently try to follow suggestions!
16:39:30, 15 November 2021 review of submission by Shassafrass
- Shassafrass (talk · contribs) (TB)
Shassafrass (talk) 16:39, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Trying to figure out why there are approved wikipedia entries for many white male designers and artists with less accomplishments and references while this page is continually refused publication.
- See other poor quality articles exist for that argument. Theroadislong (talk) 16:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- And there's a distinct possibility that they weren't approved. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 16:57, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- As to the sources:
- https://tedxboulder.com/speakers/rick-griffith is useless for notability (connexion to subject). TED talks in general are worthless for notability since it's the subject speaking about a topic at length.
- https://www.thisiscolossal.com/2020/09/field-notes-united-states-of-letterpress/ is useless for notability (too sparse). Name-drop.
- We can't use https://morematter.com/ (website homepage, connexion to subject).
- https://morematter.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/RG-Bio-and-CV.pdf is useless for notability (connexion to subject). Anything on his firm's website is by default a surrogate for him.
- https://sightlinesmag.org/other-worlds-film-festival-announces-lineup is useless for notability (too sparse). Name-drop.
- https://www.westword.com/arts/rick-griffith-of-denvers-matter-studio-puts-his-faith-in-young-people-9768166 looks fine.
- https://mashable.com/article/free-posters-black-lives-matter is useless for notability (too sparse). Name-drop. Mashable in and of itself is dodgy as a source.
- https://www.culturetype.com/2020/07/03/art-for-change-12-black-designers-created-black-lives-matter-protest-posters/ is borderline. I'd prefer to see a bit more than what this article has.
- https://lampoonmagazine.com/matter-denver-rick-griffith-debra-johnson/ is 404-compliant.
- https://www.5280.com/2020/09/colorados-only-black-owned-bookstore-is-ready-for-the-revolution/ looks fine.
- https://theknow-old.denverpost.com/2020/12/18/tattered-cover-new-owners-backlash/250784/ is useless for notability (too sparse). Practically all the information about Griffith in the article is either direct quotes from him or attributions to him.
- https://www.westword.com/news/rick-griffith-has-designs-on-denver-bold-ones-5111186 seems fine.
- https://theknow-old.denverpost.com/2020/07/31/independent-bookstores-denver/242589/ is useless for notability (too sparse). Listicle article's mostly about MATTER and doesn't really discuss Griffith specifically, except to attribute views and quotes to him.
- https://www.washingtonpost.com/graphics/2020/business/black-owned-bookstores-anti-racist-literature/ is useless for notability (too sparse). Name-drop in photo caption and a direct quote.
- https://www.thedenverchannel.com/news/national/black-owned-bookstores-work-to-keep-up-with-high-demand-on-black-history-anti-racism-books is useless for notability (too sparse). Almost all of the content about Griffith in the article is direct quotes, with the one outlier being a one-line mention.
- https://www.printmag.com/design-inspiration/last-minute-gifts-for-designers-rick-griffith-s-words-to-design-and-live-by/ is useless for notability (connexion to subject).
[...]Rick Griffith is PRINT’s first Artist-in-Residence.
- https://www.printmag.com/design-thinking/rick-griffith-a-love-letter-to-design-a-list-of-demands-and-a-stern-look/ is useless for notability (connexion to subject). The above applies, and he wrote the article.
- https://www.printmag.com/design-inspiration/rick-griffith-the-art-and-craft-of-the-second-guess/ is useless for notability (connexion to subject). The above applies.
- I can't assess https://mcadenver.org/exhibitions/colorado-present-tense without knowing (1) how significant the exhibition was and (2) how significant Griffith's works were in it.
- https://303magazine.com/2012/07/rick-griffith-genius-matters/ seems to be useless for notability (connexion to subject). 303 Magazine is an arm of 303 Mixed Media, which is
a full-service creative marketing agency providing clients with social media management, content creation, marketing consulting and event solutions.
In this light, the source is suspect. - https://designarchives.aiga.org/#/entries/Rick%20Griffith/_/detail/relevance/asc/0/7/2530/seeking-new-suprematist-forms-through-typography/1 is useless for notability (too sparse). A short descriptive profile of one of his works doesn't help a whit for his notability.
- https://colorado.aiga.org/about-us/past-boards/ is useless for notability (too sparse, connexion to subject).
- https://www.artsandvenuesdenver.com/scfd-tier-iii/denver-county-cultural-council is a non-sequitur.
- In summary, while you do have good sources, they are few and far between compared to all the crap. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 18:08, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
21:02:11, 15 November 2021 review of submission by 94.147.24.90
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94.147.24.90 (talk) 21:02, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- You don't ask a question, but the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about something; a Wikipedia article summarizes what independent reliable sources say about a topic. 331dot (talk) 22:03, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
November 16
00:57:28, 16 November 2021 review of submission by Pantsbear official
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Pantsbear official (talk) 00:57, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Pants Bear Official
Hello! We created a page about our upcoming brand, however, our submission has been in review for months. Could someone please help me understand how to speed up or improve our article in order to have it published?
Thank you.
- Your draft was declined, please see the comments left by reviewers. Once the issues are addressed and you resubmit, there is no way to guarantee a speedy review as reviews are conducted by volunteers. Wikipedia has no interest in the needs of your brand. 331dot (talk) 01:03, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
04:00:11, 16 November 2021 review of draft by WikiVuclip
WikiVuclip (talk) 04:00, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi there,
I work for Viu (MY) and have been assigned to setting up a Wiki page for our Original Show; Ganjil.
How do I contribute in a way that doesn't require me to quote sources? Since all the info about the show is from the company, which I work for, itself.
Regards, Aqil
- @WikiVuclip: That is easy there is no way you can create an article and have it accepted without 3rd party reliable sources. First hand knowledge or primary sources can only be used to verify only the most basic information that is unlikely to be challenged at all. Please also read through WP:COI and understand that Wikipedia is not a place to tell the world about your show, if it is a condition of your employment that you create this article I would suggest you find a new job as it is likely not going to happen if no media has written about the subject in detail on their own accord. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 04:51, 16 November 2021 (UTC)