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{{ping|Fossiladder13}} Before I continue the review, I'll give you time to perhaps simplify the prose for accessibility, and to implement [https://www.manchester.ac.uk/discover/news/new-fossil-reveals-origin-of-arthropod-breathing-system/ this source] that was published in February 8th. [[User:Wretchskull|Wretchskull]] ([[User talk:Wretchskull|talk]]) 16:31, 11 February 2022 (UTC) |
{{ping|Fossiladder13}} Before I continue the review, I'll give you time to perhaps simplify the prose for accessibility, and to implement [https://www.manchester.ac.uk/discover/news/new-fossil-reveals-origin-of-arthropod-breathing-system/ this source] that was published in February 8th. [[User:Wretchskull|Wretchskull]] ([[User talk:Wretchskull|talk]]) 16:31, 11 February 2022 (UTC) |
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Ok I edited it a bit, is there anything else that could be improved?. |
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Reviewer: Wretchskull (talk · contribs) 16:31, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
This is a highly technical article that isn't accessible to normal readers; work will be needed on prose.
- Lede
- Link arthropod and nektonic.
- The lede could probably be expanded considering the amount of info in the body.
- History of study
- Link carapace and euarthropod.
- Citations come after punctuation; quotation marks included.
- Classification
- The last sentence is unreferenced.
- Add a comma after "however".
- Paleoecology
- Link Cambrian period and fauna.
- General
- Is there any info on the etymology of "Erratus sperare"?
@Fossiladder13: Before I continue the review, I'll give you time to perhaps simplify the prose for accessibility, and to implement this source that was published in February 8th. Wretchskull (talk) 16:31, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
Ok I edited it a bit, is there anything else that could be improved?.