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August 28, 2015	Peer review	Reviewed
October 22, 2015	Peer review	Reviewed
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March 2, 2016	Good article nominee	Listed
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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:28, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have this to you either tonight or tomorrow JAGUAR 13:28, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"a 2015 Indian Malayalam thriller film" - optional, but would you prefer to write this as Malayalam-language? It's just that I've seen it in other GAs

Done

"C. Rajamani composed the soundtrack and film score respectively" - comma needed in between "score" and "respectively"

Done

"setting a record in 2015 for highest opening day gross for a Malayalam film" - a "the" is needed between "for" and "highest"

Done

"an Indian Revenue Service (IRS) officer" - 'IRS' isn't mentioned again in the body, so it's safe to lose it here

Done

"Raju identifies himself as a RAW agent" - what does RAW stand for?

Done

"at the Calicut International Airport, Kozhikode" - might sound better as at the Calicut International Airport in Kozhikode

Done

"The first poster showed an ensemble cast with Mohanlal in the center" - centre (Indian English)

Done

"Ajmal's character's looks were modelled after popular young politicians in the country" - delink this

Done

I think that the third paragraph in the Release section could be merged with the second, to improve prose flow

Done

No dead links

Looks very good! I couldn't find much wrong with it. Once all of the minor prose issues are addressed then this should be good to go. JAGUAR 16:37, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Wow. That really helped. Thanks for your quick response. I have corrected all the addressd issues. And thanks to all the editors who worked to make this a GA. --Charles Turing (talk) 16:58, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. This looks like it's good to go.

JAGUAR 20:40, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Error in the section development

'The announcement of Loham received considerable media attention as it was Manju Warrier's return to the screen after leaving the film industry to marry actor Dileep. The media coverage was further heightened when Prithviraj Sukumaran joined the cast."

This is completely wrong as Manju Warrier and Prithviraj is not a part of this film. Can I delete it or can anyone provide a reliable source to this.Paavamjinn (talk) 20:52, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Error in the section development ==
+'The announcement of Loham received considerable media attention as it was Manju Warrier's return to the screen after leaving the film industry to marry actor Dileep. The media coverage was further heightened when Prithviraj Sukumaran joined the cast."
+This is completely wrong as Manju Warrier and Prithviraj is not a part of this film. Can I delete it or can anyone provide a reliable source to this.[[User:Paavamjinn|Paavamjinn]] ([[User talk:Paavamjinn|talk]]) 20:52, 22 April 2022 (UTC)