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Hello, I'm GoldMiner24. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Dohnovan West have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse. Thanks. GoldMiner24 ^Talk 22:02, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at Dohnovan West. Your edits appear to constitute vandalism and have been reverted. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. Repeated vandalism may result in the loss of editing privileges. Thank you. Helen(💬📖) 22:05, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, I'm GPL93. I noticed that you made a comment on the page Dohnovan West that didn't seem very civil, so it may have been removed. Wikipedia is built on collaboration, so it's one of our core principles to interact with one another in a polite and respectful manner. If you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. GPL93 (talk) 19:40, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Football coaching film director (May 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Gusfriend were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

A large portion of the article lacks in line citations including the entire "History section" and the CFL section. The tone including sentences like "Now the all-22 film is widely enjoyed by fans all over the world via the NFL Game Pass." is overly promotional. The sections are poorly laid out which causes the article to lack cohesion. I also note that articles Draft:Video Directors and Draft:Coaching film director exist and suggest concentrating on one of them and requesting deletion of the other 2.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Gusfriend (talk) 02:19, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 75.72.69.2! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Gusfriend (talk) 02:19, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Edit to Dohnovan West

Do not make personal attacks against other editors, as you did here Special:Diff/1085868886, or you will be blocked from editing. Enterprisey (talk!) 04:47, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Football coaching film director has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Football coaching film director. Thanks! Gusfriend (talk) 16:51, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have no idea what exactly you think this article is about. it is facts and information on the people that did it - it isn't a promo piece for the NFL. This is real life people who performed a job and started in 1920 - but the full time jobs started in 1956 75.72.69.2 (talk) 19:47, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at [[Draft:Football coaching film director]]. Thanks! [[User:Gusfriend|Gusfriend]] ([[User talk:Gusfriend|talk]]) 16:51, 4 May 2022 (UTC) </div>
+:I have no idea what exactly you think this article is about.  it is facts and information on the people that did it - it isn't a promo piece for the NFL.  This is real life people who performed a job and started in 1920 - but the full time jobs started in 1956 [[Special:Contributions/75.72.69.2|75.72.69.2]] ([[User talk:75.72.69.2#top|talk]]) 19:47, 4 May 2022 (UTC)