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::* [https://www.rd.nl/artikel/921038-nederlands-onlinemode-outlet-otrium-haalt-120-miljoen-dollar-op Paywalled]. The url states. 120-miljoen-dollar-op. Press-release.
::* [https://www.rd.nl/artikel/921038-nederlands-onlinemode-outlet-otrium-haalt-120-miljoen-dollar-op Paywalled]. The url states. 120-miljoen-dollar-op. Press-release.
::* [https://www.nu.nl/ondernemen/5870838/online-modeplatform-otrium-haalt-miljoeneninvestering-op.html Paywalled]. The url states. 7million raised. Press-release.
::* [https://www.nu.nl/ondernemen/5870838/online-modeplatform-otrium-haalt-miljoeneninvestering-op.html Paywalled]. The url states. 7million raised. Press-release.
Assuming AGF and taking the 3 press-releases as typical of the five, they are extremely poor references that fails [[WP:ORGIND]] and [[WP:NCORP]]. IThey are all from company news, PR. This whole article is native advertising, for a furniture shop. As cool as its a shop, which it is, cool European furniture, its completly typical coverage of a startup. The article fails [[WP:NCORP]]. '''<span style="text-shadow:7px 7px 8px black; font-family:Papyrus">[[User:scope_creep|<span style="color:#3399ff">scope_creep</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:scope_creep#top|Talk]]</sup></span>''' 08:29, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
Assuming AGF and taking the 3 press-releases as typical of the five, they are extremely poor references that fails [[WP:ORGIND]] and [[WP:NCORP]]. IThey are all from company news, PR. This whole article is native advertising, for a furniture shop. As cool as its a shop, its completly typical coverage of a startup. The article fails [[WP:NCORP]]. '''<span style="text-shadow:7px 7px 8px black; font-family:Papyrus">[[User:scope_creep|<span style="color:#3399ff">scope_creep</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:scope_creep#top|Talk]]</sup></span>''' 08:29, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
*'''Comment''' Nom has made several statements that show [[WP:BEFORE]] was not done, and that this is a bad faith nomination. Since he says he's a new page patroller, I'm also concerned about his ability to understand what he's reading, or at least the haste with which he's reviewing and nominating articles. He writes above that this article is about a furniture store, and describes the furniture as "cool" and the company as a "shop", but it's a multinational online clothing retailer. I can only assume he saw a picture of their office in one of the Dutch articles and didn't do a translation. He claims to have read [https://www.forbes.com/sites/joanverdon/2021/11/03/european-off-price-designer-marketplace-otrium-launches-in-us/ the Forbes article] but brushes it off as a repurposed press release. Anyone can click on that link and see that's not true. I posted a link to the Forbes writer's bio above. He mentions [[WP:SPA]], which I don't see. He even calls a personal essay an article above, when it's clearly marked as an essay. Finally, as I also pointed out above, he deleted a big chunk of info with sources, since trimmed and restored, before nominating this for deletion, instead of letting the nomination play out. [[User:TechnoTalk|TechnoTalk]] ([[User talk:TechnoTalk|talk]]) 14:01, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
*'''Comment''' Nom has made several statements that show [[WP:BEFORE]] was not done, and that this is a bad faith nomination. Since he says he's a new page patroller, I'm also concerned about his ability to understand what he's reading, or at least the haste with which he's reviewing and nominating articles. He writes above that this article is about a furniture store, and describes the furniture as "cool" and the company as a "shop", but it's a multinational online clothing retailer. I can only assume he saw a picture of their office in one of the Dutch articles and didn't do a translation. He claims to have read [https://www.forbes.com/sites/joanverdon/2021/11/03/european-off-price-designer-marketplace-otrium-launches-in-us/ the Forbes article] but brushes it off as a repurposed press release. Anyone can click on that link and see that's not true. I posted a link to the Forbes writer's bio above. He mentions [[WP:SPA]], which I don't see. He even calls a personal essay an article above, when it's clearly marked as an essay. Finally, as I also pointed out above, he deleted a big chunk of info with sources, since trimmed and restored, before nominating this for deletion, instead of letting the nomination play out. [[User:TechnoTalk|TechnoTalk]] ([[User talk:TechnoTalk|talk]]) 14:01, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
::{{ping|TechnoTalk}} If you keep making personal attacks like this [[WP:NPA]], I will need to make a report at [[WP:ANI]] and cut out the bludgeoning per [[WP:BLUDGEON]]ing. It is deeply uncool. '''<span style="text-shadow:7px 7px 8px black; font-family:Papyrus">[[User:scope_creep|<span style="color:#3399ff">scope_creep</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:scope_creep#top|Talk]]</sup></span>''' 18:22, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
::{{ping|TechnoTalk}} If you keep making personal attacks like this [[WP:NPA]], I will need to make a report at [[WP:ANI]] and cut out the bludgeoning per [[WP:BLUDGEON]]ing. It is deeply uncool. '''<span style="text-shadow:7px 7px 8px black; font-family:Papyrus">[[User:scope_creep|<span style="color:#3399ff">scope_creep</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:scope_creep#top|Talk]]</sup></span>''' 18:22, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

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Fails WP:NCORP. Routine startup coverage. scope_creepTalk 10:49, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

User eyeballed the article instead of analyzing sources per WP:NEXIST and WP:BEFORE. gidonb (talk) 00:47, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
You have no idea what the user did. Best Alexandermcnabb (talk) 09:29, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I see the results ;-) gidonb (talk) 20:41, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Yup, and the results is a delete vote. Best Alexandermcnabb (talk) 05:52, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep As part of WP:BEFORE, always check to make sure a large chunk of properly sourced info wasn't removed before the nomination was made. You may be voting on a weakened version intended to support the nomination. I restored the info about the business model, renamed simply as business. It's an entire section with nothing about funding. After rereading and trying to see things in the eyes of the nom, I rewrote the business section so nobody could claim it's a manual. Future participants and closer, please review with this new info in mind. The multiple independent sources that are there demonstrate that the organization has received significant independent media coverage, meeting the critical requirements of WP:NCORP. I'll point out that the media reports that the organization has 3 million customers, which clearly makes it notable. TechnoTalk (talk) 18:28, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep. Meets the WP:GNG and WP:NCORP per [1][2][3][4][5]. Nomination is a WP:BEFORE failure. Removal of information was improper. gidonb (talk) 00:49, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep after reviewing the above citations provided by gidonb, I agree that there is good coverage on them and they are notable.Zeddedm (talk) 02:57, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment An overnight conspiracy with a virtual WP:SPA turning up, particularly since it doesn't meet NCORP. scope_creepTalk 06:03, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delete. Even the removed material and its citations don't really meet the requirements of WP:NCORP. It's just routine business stuff, not the impact I describe in WP:SERIESA. User:Technotalk's argument about the number of customers is irrelevant for notability; we need some kind of in-depth coverage in reliable secondary sources. And it's all like: won this award; raised that amount of money; profiled in Forbes again; is in business. FalconK (talk) 08:55, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Inserted comment - I went to your essay and there's a section about significant coverage that says it should "contextualize the impact the company had on the history of its field of industry, its community, or society". Wouldn't having 3 million subscribers suggest that there's an impact on society, just like you wrote you'd like to see? TechnoTalk (talk) 00:40, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
That is a handsome article. I've not seen it before but I will need to start using it now. scope_creepTalk 09:04, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Seconded. Best Alexandermcnabb (talk) 09:30, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Lets examine the references:
  • Ref 1 Receives 750k funding Fails WP:CORPDEPTH, of a capital transaction, such as raised capital
  • Ref 2 120milllion raised Fails WP:CORPDEPTH, {[tq|of a capital transaction, such as raised capital}}
  • Ref 3 Partnership Fails WP:CORPDEPTH of the expansions, acquisitions, mergers, sale, or closure of the business
  • Ref 4 Raises 102.3m raised Fails WP:CORPDEPTH of a capital transaction, such as raised capital
  • Ref 5 raised a €7m Series-A round PR.Fails WP:CORPDEPTH of a capital transaction, such as raised capital
  • Ref 6 Invests 7million Fails WP:CORPDEPTH of a capital transaction, such as raised capital
  • Ref 7 Tech Crunch. Raises 26million. Fails WP:CORPDEPTH of a capital transaction, such as raised capital

You start to see how banal these refs are and its more of the same. Routine annoucements, startup news. Fails WP:NCORP, WP:SIRS. scope_creepTalk 21:41, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You just said a lot and really nothing. Notability is judged by sources, NOT by references. I provided 5 sources, all in independent, nationwide media. All but one proudly signed by journalists. The fifth is sourced from the Dutch independent prime press agency. gidonb (talk) 23:45, 23 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Gidonb: Thanks for finding those sources. Unfortunately the Dutch seem to be following our lead with paywalls. Hopefully someone will add more info from them. There's also significant non-financial related coverage in this Forbes article. The writer lists 20 years of retail journalism experience on her bio but I've seen others question the "Forbes contributor" (senior contributor in this case) byline and use that in their deletion arguments, so I left it out. But once this is kept, I can use that coverage to improve the article. TechnoTalk (talk) 01:10, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@TechnoTalk:, I managed to read all with my free subscription of Het Financieele Dagblad and Google's own paywall workaround ;-) 01:24, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I managed to miss the references at the top. Looking at each of one of them.
  • European Off-Price Designer Marketplace Otrium Launches In U.S. Low quality Forbes ref. Routine annoucement of company launching in the US.Fails WP:CORPDEPTH Standard notices from a press-release. of a product or a product line launch, sale, change, or discontinuance The 120million Series funding press-release.
  • Paywalled. Unable to read it.
  • Paywalled A March 2018 article, when they got a 750k funding round, so probably a press-release.
  • Paywalled Growth of designer outlet webshop Otrium positive for XL Business Park in Almelo
  • Paywalled. The url states. 120-miljoen-dollar-op. Press-release.
  • Paywalled. The url states. 7million raised. Press-release.

Assuming AGF and taking the 3 press-releases as typical of the five, they are extremely poor references that fails WP:ORGIND and WP:NCORP. IThey are all from company news, PR. This whole article is native advertising, for a furniture shop. As cool as its a shop, its completly typical coverage of a startup. The article fails WP:NCORP. scope_creepTalk 08:29, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment Nom has made several statements that show WP:BEFORE was not done, and that this is a bad faith nomination. Since he says he's a new page patroller, I'm also concerned about his ability to understand what he's reading, or at least the haste with which he's reviewing and nominating articles. He writes above that this article is about a furniture store, and describes the furniture as "cool" and the company as a "shop", but it's a multinational online clothing retailer. I can only assume he saw a picture of their office in one of the Dutch articles and didn't do a translation. He claims to have read the Forbes article but brushes it off as a repurposed press release. Anyone can click on that link and see that's not true. I posted a link to the Forbes writer's bio above. He mentions WP:SPA, which I don't see. He even calls a personal essay an article above, when it's clearly marked as an essay. Finally, as I also pointed out above, he deleted a big chunk of info with sources, since trimmed and restored, before nominating this for deletion, instead of letting the nomination play out. TechnoTalk (talk) 14:01, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@TechnoTalk: If you keep making personal attacks like this WP:NPA, I will need to make a report at WP:ANI and cut out the bludgeoning per WP:BLUDGEONing. It is deeply uncool. scope_creepTalk 18:22, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]