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A fact from Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A. appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 March 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Bobby Reynolds (pictured) was known as "Mr. Touchdown" after winning a promotional contest for the song "Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A."?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A..

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Edge3 (talk) 02:13, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Mr. Touchdown pictured in 1951

... that Mr. Touchdown (pictured) won a promotional contest for "Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A.", a song composed by Ms. Roberts?

ALT1:... that Bobby Reynolds (pictured) won a contest to promote the song "Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A."'?
ALT2:... that Bobby Reynolds (pictured) was known as "Mr. Touchdown" after winning a promotional contest for the song "Mr. Touchdown, U.S.A."'?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ernie Calcutt
Comment: Could this be queued for January 11, which is the College Football Playoff National Championship?

Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 03:01, 31 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. However, none of the Newspapers.com articles are clipped; if you could clip those, I could check them too. QPQ done.
I find the hook repetitively worded and therefore not so interesting. Can you suggest another hook angle? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:50, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yoninah - sorry sorry sorry for this great delay in response. I've locked myself out of my newspapers.com account and am trying to recover the password but I may need to file a request at the library. In the interim, I've given an updated hook, above. Chetsford (talk) 21:53, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chetsford, I've clipped the newspapers.com articles for you and can conduct the rest of the review since yoninah has been inactive for a bit. I see two cn tags that should be resolved first. Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 15:10, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Citation needed tags still remain. SL93 (talk) 05:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Had a crack at cleaning that up & removed some list-trivia. ƒirefly ( t · c ) 15:29, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Issues appear to have been addressed so a new review can be done. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 10:15, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

New enough, meets length requirement, hook has inline citation, article is appropriately written and cited, neutral, no copyright issues. I think Alt0 is the "hookiest" option, but Alt3 is a little clearer. QPQ done. Image is public domain, features in the article, and should look good at front page DYK size. I think this article is ready to go. Glorioussandwich (talk) 15:42, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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