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:The term is shorthand and perfectly acceptable, meaning "whatever surface the roach happens to be sitting on at the time". If the roach is sitting on a log, then the substrate is a log; if it is sitting on a coffee can, then the substrate is a coffee can; it if is sitting on a linoleum floor, then the substrate is a linoleum floor, etc. There is no simpler way to express this than "the substrate". [[User:Dyanega|Dyanega]] ([[User talk:Dyanega|talk]]) 20:40, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
:The term is shorthand and perfectly acceptable, meaning "whatever surface the roach happens to be sitting on at the time". If the roach is sitting on a log, then the substrate is a log; if it is sitting on a coffee can, then the substrate is a coffee can; it if is sitting on a linoleum floor, then the substrate is a linoleum floor, etc. There is no simpler way to express this than "the substrate". [[User:Dyanega|Dyanega]] ([[User talk:Dyanega|talk]]) 20:40, 4 October 2022 (UTC)

== Cockroach ==

Any [[Special:Contributions/122.164.212.233|122.164.212.233]] ([[User talk:122.164.212.233|talk]]) 13:58, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

== Cockroach ==

Bn [[Special:Contributions/122.164.212.233|122.164.212.233]] ([[User talk:122.164.212.233|talk]]) 13:58, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

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Good articleCockroach has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a few cockroach species (example pictured) are kept as pets, and several species are raised as food for insectivorous pets?
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 02:54, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Comments by Dunkleosteus77

  • I haven't read it yet, but the one thing I noticed was that the In research section was just one sentence, so consider expanding that (if you can); expand in areas such as: why do people research on cockroaches opposed to other insects, and what discoveries have been made (that benefit humans)
@Dunkleosteus77: Added a section on its convenience and use in education. The major discovery areas have already been listed and wikilinked. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:13, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • and, since the As pests and Control are basically talking about the same thing, consider merging them.
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:00, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • There is a mish-mash of American and British English; I'm seeing "generalised", "generalized" (in the same paragraph), "realised", "colors", "recognize", "characterised", "specialisation", and "behavior"

Done a few edits, although I cannot guarantee that I removed all British English spelling. Please double check. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:50, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

It'll pass
Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:38, 9 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

In the section on biological control the ""House Centipede" namely Scutigera coleoptrata, is known to feed on cockroaches.

  • In the lead, change "...which however also includes the termites" to "...which also includes termites"
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:37, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Taxonomy and evolution section, change "However recent genetic evidence..." to "However, recent genetic evidence..."
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:38, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Taxonomy and evolution section, change "...when F. A. McKittrick noted similar..." to "...when F. A. McKittrick (1965) noted similar..."
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:38, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Description section, include the weight of Blaberus giganteus
Removed mention of its weght. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:51, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Description section, change :They have relatively small heads and broad, flattened bodies, and..." to "They have a relatively small head and a broad, flattened body, and..."
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:00, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Description section, change "The tegmina or first pair of wings are tough and protective..." to "The tegmina, or first pair of wings, are tough and protective..."
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:43, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Description section, change "...have demonstrated they help..." to "...have demonstrated that they help..."
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:50, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • n the Description section, change "Males have a aedeagus..." to "Males have an aedeagus..."
Done. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:43, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Collective decision-making section, explain what happened in the roach-robot experiment
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:07, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Expect more comments, I haven't finished reading yet.

Thanks for taking this on. We look forward to your additional comments. Burklemore1 (talk) 06:41, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

2nd set of comments

  • In the Social behavior section, change "...the sum of individual choices but reflects..." to "...the sum of individual choices, but reflects..."
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:08, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Social behavior section, put the last paragraph, second seconds, in quotes using template {{pull quote|1=insert quote and source}}, and also state who said it
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have stated "Lihoreau and his fellow researchers stated:", and if they didn't say it, then I don't know who did. I haven't got access to the research study. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:04, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Sounds section, change "...in the presence of a potential mate some..." to "...in the presence of a potential mate, some..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Instead of wikilinking American cockroach in the Digestive track section, wikilink it in the Social behavior
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Digestive track section, change "...(Periplaneta americana) for example feeds..." to "...(Periplaneta americana), for example, feeds..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Digestive track section, change " In many species these..." to " In many species, these..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Digestive track section, change "...the wood-eating cockroach Panesthia cribrata is able..." to "...the wood-eating cockroach, Panesthia cribrata, is able..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Digestive track section, change " It my be that..." to " It may be that..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Reproduction section, change "...keeping the eggs inside their bodies..." to "...keeping the eggs inside their body..."
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Hardiness section, change "P. japonica" to "Periplaneta japonica", since the genus wasn't stated
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:09, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:10, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Conservation section, what does NSW stand for?
Done, linked. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:11, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the In culture section, change " 'For tetanus cockroach tea is given...' " to " 'For tetanus, cockroach tea is given...' "
No, it's as it is in the original, inside quotation marks. I've added a comment to this effect. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:12, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Unlock please

Why is this page locked again? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 106.133.171.205 (talk) 04:40, 17 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 2 August 2019

IN THE UPPER RIGHT CORNER OF THE ARTICLE COCKROACH:

Cockroach Temporal range: 145–0 Ma PreЄ Є O S D C P T J K Pg N Cretaceous–recent

THE WORD 'CRETACEOUS' SHOULD BE CHANGED TO 'CARBONIFEROUS'. THE DATE '145' SHOULD BE ALSO CHANGED ACCORDINGLY. 31.59.14.250 (talk) 21:02, 2 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Willbb234 (talk) 10:30, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Revision deleted?

I am wondering when and why was a revision made on 02:50, 1 May 2017, was completed hidden from the log? Can anyone explain who hided it?--▸ ‎épine talk♬ 19:06, 12 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Based on comments made on your talk page when you did this, it was extremely offensive vandalism that merited permanent deletion. Dyanega (talk) 20:05, 12 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Dyanega:, not really. I've seen worse comparisons being made and they still stay in the logs, but it is so wrong to call Erdogan a roach for abusing the Turkish wikipedia and censoring hundreds of thousands of people from accessing free information and education? I know talk pages are not for expressing personal opinions and stuff, but come on. I really want to get the input from the person who deleted the log though, because I know that you should only do this in cases of "gross offenses" according to the usage policy--how does a normal vandalism fit this criteria?--▸ ‎épine talk♬ 21:36, 12 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wrong or right, Wikipedia is not the place to call people names (no matter how richly the names may be deserved). 2601:200:C000:1A0:D038:88EA:8F27:9A72 (talk) 19:34, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Substrate?

The article contains two mentions of the word "substrate". For instance:

"Furthermore, in the presence of a potential mate, some cockroaches tap the substrate in a rhythmic, repetitive manner."

But what is this "substrate" ???

I hope someone can write these sentences more clearly so that readers will understand what this means. 2601:200:C000:1A0:D038:88EA:8F27:9A72 (talk) 19:33, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The term is shorthand and perfectly acceptable, meaning "whatever surface the roach happens to be sitting on at the time". If the roach is sitting on a log, then the substrate is a log; if it is sitting on a coffee can, then the substrate is a coffee can; it if is sitting on a linoleum floor, then the substrate is a linoleum floor, etc. There is no simpler way to express this than "the substrate". Dyanega (talk) 20:40, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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