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:::thanks for pointing this out one solution for this could possible using a table similar to the one seen on the article for the [[Glen Waverley railway line]] i have removed the accessiblity and terrain for now, the table was mostly a remodified version of the one seen at [[Pakenham_railway_line#Stations]] and I didn't plan on it for being the permanant version. [[User:NotOrrio|NotOrrio]] ([[User talk:NotOrrio|talk]]) 03:56, 25 December 2022 (UTC) |
:::thanks for pointing this out one solution for this could possible using a table similar to the one seen on the article for the [[Glen Waverley railway line]] i have removed the accessiblity and terrain for now, the table was mostly a remodified version of the one seen at [[Pakenham_railway_line#Stations]] and I didn't plan on it for being the permanant version. [[User:NotOrrio|NotOrrio]] ([[User talk:NotOrrio|talk]]) 03:56, 25 December 2022 (UTC) |
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::::Some line don't have anything (eg [[Craigieburn railway line]]), others have just services (eg [[Belgrave railway line]]). My proposal would be use both (as I have started for [[User:ThylacineHunter/Lines/Metro#Williamstown]]). -- <b><span style="font-family: Kristen ITC; color: rgb(0, 35, 102); text-align: center; text-decoration: underline #FFD700;">[[User:ThylacineHunter|ThylacineHunter]]</span></b> ([[User talk:ThylacineHunter#top|talk]]) 06:19, 25 December 2022 (UTC) |
::::Some line don't have anything (eg [[Craigieburn railway line]]), others have just services (eg [[Belgrave railway line]]). My proposal would be use both (as I have started for [[User:ThylacineHunter/Lines/Metro#Williamstown]]). -- <b><span style="font-family: Kristen ITC; color: rgb(0, 35, 102); text-align: center; text-decoration: underline #FFD700;">[[User:ThylacineHunter|ThylacineHunter]]</span></b> ([[User talk:ThylacineHunter#top|talk]]) 06:19, 25 December 2022 (UTC) |
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:::ive made a couple of changes to the stations table |
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:::# I had split of the stopping patterns on to a seperate table |
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:::# I re did the connections section to be more compact and user friendly |
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:::[[User:NotOrrio|NotOrrio]] ([[User talk:NotOrrio|talk]]) 11:30, 26 December 2022 (UTC) |
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== Things to do for reworking == |
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Reworking this article
The article is lacking in crucial information about the line and since the Pakenham line is currently getting a good article nomination i figured it would be best to start reworking on it NotOrrio (talk) 13:44, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
- @NotOrrio, I'll work on updating the infoboxs & route maps (metro service & actual line), stopping patterns, and station histories (similar to what I have started doing with the Williamstown line). -- ThylacineHunter (talk) 14:57, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not happy with how the stations table is shown... Southern Cross (although soon to be removed from this line, it will still be on others) spans 25 rows due to the Train Connections column. This is not easily readable on a pc screen, and totally impossible on a mobile. Changes I'd propose:
- Both train and other connections will also be shown on both the service and line route maps (still under construction)
- Accessibility and terrain, although important, are probably better suited to remaining on individual station pages
- Services and stopping patterns can be moved to a seperate table to better show Local, Ltd Express or Express services
- -- ThylacineHunter (talk) 02:59, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- thanks for pointing this out one solution for this could possible using a table similar to the one seen on the article for the Glen Waverley railway line i have removed the accessiblity and terrain for now, the table was mostly a remodified version of the one seen at Pakenham_railway_line#Stations and I didn't plan on it for being the permanant version. NotOrrio (talk) 03:56, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- Some line don't have anything (eg Craigieburn railway line), others have just services (eg Belgrave railway line). My proposal would be use both (as I have started for User:ThylacineHunter/Lines/Metro#Williamstown). -- ThylacineHunter (talk) 06:19, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- ive made a couple of changes to the stations table
- I had split of the stopping patterns on to a seperate table
- I re did the connections section to be more compact and user friendly
- NotOrrio (talk) 11:30, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
- thanks for pointing this out one solution for this could possible using a table similar to the one seen on the article for the Glen Waverley railway line i have removed the accessiblity and terrain for now, the table was mostly a remodified version of the one seen at Pakenham_railway_line#Stations and I didn't plan on it for being the permanant version. NotOrrio (talk) 03:56, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not happy with how the stations table is shown... Southern Cross (although soon to be removed from this line, it will still be on others) spans 25 rows due to the Train Connections column. This is not easily readable on a pc screen, and totally impossible on a mobile. Changes I'd propose:
Things to do for reworking
- Fix referencing and add references where needed
- Add Sections
-History, Doing atm -Services, Doing atm -Infrastructure -Future
- Add Pictures
NotOrrio (talk) 01:50, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
Final Clean up
I have almost finished on reworking the article as much of the information is already in place, here are the final things to do before the rework is complete and the article is potentially eligable for GA status
- Fix Grammar
- Add pictures
- Make the stations table more user friendly
NotOrrio (talk) 11:01, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
- finished making the stations table more user friendly NotOrrio (talk) 11:26, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
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