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::I just removed a {{tl|split}} tag from the [[List of tenants in 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001)]] article. It seems that, rather than splitting the "tenants" article, we should move that page to [[7 World Trade Center (1987–2001)]], then relocate the info from ''this'' page into the 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001) article. The only reason I have not done this yet is that this is a featured article (albeit an old one), so any major edit requires much more consensus compared to most articles.{{pb}}Incidentally, there is a similar issue with [[4 World Trade Center]]. This building also has a predecessor structure, but the old building, old building's tenants, and new building are all described in one article. Honestly, the WTC pages have suffered from this problem for two decades; the combination of old and new buildings into one article makes it really hard to focus on either structure. – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:01, 6 September 2022 (UTC) |
::I just removed a {{tl|split}} tag from the [[List of tenants in 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001)]] article. It seems that, rather than splitting the "tenants" article, we should move that page to [[7 World Trade Center (1987–2001)]], then relocate the info from ''this'' page into the 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001) article. The only reason I have not done this yet is that this is a featured article (albeit an old one), so any major edit requires much more consensus compared to most articles.{{pb}}Incidentally, there is a similar issue with [[4 World Trade Center]]. This building also has a predecessor structure, but the old building, old building's tenants, and new building are all described in one article. Honestly, the WTC pages have suffered from this problem for two decades; the combination of old and new buildings into one article makes it really hard to focus on either structure. – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:01, 6 September 2022 (UTC) |
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*'''Support split'''. Both buildings are independently notable. [[User:162 etc.|162 etc.]] ([[User talk:162 etc.|talk]]) 17:27, 23 December 2022 (UTC) |
*'''Support split'''. Both buildings are independently notable. [[User:162 etc.|162 etc.]] ([[User talk:162 etc.|talk]]) 17:27, 23 December 2022 (UTC) |
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:'''Support split''' as well--independently notable and separate buildings. [[User:DecafPotato|DecafPotato]] ([[User talk:DecafPotato|talk]]) 07:06, 30 December 2022 (UTC) |
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About splitting the articles into two
Should we have separate articles for the original 7 World Trade Center and the new one? I ask because this article, despite its inbox being the new 7 WTC, has more of a focus on the original building. --InPursuitOfAMorePerfectUnion (talk) 09:48, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
- @InPursuitOfAMorePerfectUnion I don't know what other people think, but my personal opinion is that we should at least consider it. However, the fact that it's a featured article means we really should get consensus for a split before trying to split it ourselves. I'm not sure whether the two resulting articles would be up to FA standards; there's a lot of info about both of them, but such a major change may mean a featured article review is needed. – Epicgenius (talk) 12:45, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for the response. I have to agree; we need a consensus first, and a feature article review would help get a better consensus on this. My opinion now remains the same as it did in September, having this articles split in two makes the most logical sense IMO, the other World Trade Center buildings are split in two, to separate the destroyed buildings from the rebuilt ones (e.g. One World Trade Center/Freedom Tower being the one post-9/11 and List of tenants of One World Trade Center being the one pre-9/11). We also have two pages for each respective World Trade Center complex as well. --InPursuitOfAMorePerfectUnion (talk) 13:32, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
- Agree, should be separated. Each of the buildings are different and deserve their own articles and their own unique infoboxes. i guess this is already the split page of the original WTC 7 - List_of_tenants_in_7_World_Trade_Center_(1987–2001) , it has an infobox and description about the building itself. YitzhakNat (talk) 02:12, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
- I just removed a {{split}} tag from the List of tenants in 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001) article. It seems that, rather than splitting the "tenants" article, we should move that page to 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001), then relocate the info from this page into the 7 World Trade Center (1987–2001) article. The only reason I have not done this yet is that this is a featured article (albeit an old one), so any major edit requires much more consensus compared to most articles.Incidentally, there is a similar issue with 4 World Trade Center. This building also has a predecessor structure, but the old building, old building's tenants, and new building are all described in one article. Honestly, the WTC pages have suffered from this problem for two decades; the combination of old and new buildings into one article makes it really hard to focus on either structure. – Epicgenius (talk) 15:01, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support split. Both buildings are independently notable. 162 etc. (talk) 17:27, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
- Support split as well--independently notable and separate buildings. DecafPotato (talk) 07:06, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
@Aude: This old featured article appears to be in fairly good shape since its 2007 promotion. As part of the unreviewed featured article sweeps, I did notice a few things. From most to least important:
- I notice that there's been discussion above of splitting the article (including by myself). If that happens, the page may no longer be stable and thus fail WP:FACR #1e; however, there's been no other input thus far on a split, so I'd consider the page to be relatively stable.
- Have there been any notable events since 2011?
- This source,
Cuozzo, Steve (September 19, 2011). "7 World Trade Center fully leased". New York Post.
, is deprecated per WP:NYPOST. Is there a good reason to retain it? - The sentence
Building Seven was not included in the original World Trade Center master plan by Daniel Libeskind, but was designed by Skidmore, Owings & Merrill under the leadership of David Childs, who largely redesigned One World Trade Center.
is unsourced. (This is the only unsourced claim in the entire article, which is why this point is lower on the list.) The building is being promoted as the safest skyscraper in the U.S.
- The article doesn't mention by whom this claim is being made. Is it still promoted as such?- There are several sentences for which wording can be improved. Examples:
The lobby of 7 World Trade Center held three murals by artist Al Held: The Third Circle, Pan North XII, and Vorces VII
- "Held" may be seen as slightly unencyclopedic.The office tower has a narrower footprint at ground level than did its predecessor, so the course of Greenwich Street could be restored to reunite TriBeCa and the Financial District. The original building, on the other hand, had bordered West Broadway on the east, necessitating the destruction of Greenwich Street between Barclay Street and the northern border of the World Trade Center superblock.
- It may be worth combining these sentences to make it more clear that the old 7 WTC required Greenwich Street to be destroyed, but the new 7 WTC restored the right-of-way of the street.
- The word "floor" (e.g.
Floor 44
,floors 6–10, 13–14, 19–22, and 29–30
) should be capitalized, or lowercased, consistently. - Some images are staggered, resulting in minor instances of MOS:SANDWICH, e.g. File:Abcnews-wtc7damage.jpg is aligned to the right between two left-aligned images.
- Some links are in close proximity to each other, such as
Otis destination elevators
; it may be worth spacing the links out so they can be distinguished from each other, per MOS:SEAOFBLUE. - There are a couple violations of MOS:REPEATLINK, e.g. Larry Silverstein, Salomon Brothers
Overall, this old featured article doesn't look bad considering its age, but it may need a little work before it can be marked satisfactory at WP:URFA/2020. – Epicgenius (talk) 13:32, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- Update six months later:
Have there been any notable events since 2011?
- I have taken the liberty (no pun intended) of adding events since 2011. The article now contains additional info about post-2011 history, including a recent refinancing.The sentence
- The sentence is removed.Building Seven was not included in the original World Trade Center master plan by Daniel Libeskind, but was designed by Skidmore, Owings & Merrill under the leadership of David Childs, who largely redesigned One World Trade Center.
is unsourced.- Actually, I was wrong, the New York Post is merely unreliable, not deprecated. However, I am still not convinced that this is an FA-quality source.
- – Epicgenius (talk) 19:06, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
Major edit to "original building'9/11"
I made major revisions. But it turned out I violated guidelines, and so it was rolled back. I would like your opinion on whether it can be restored or not.
The rollback can be seen here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1081213541
The edits were as follows:
1. Splitting the second paragraph of the section "collapse" into 3.
A.The first one is dedicated to the impact damage and initial firefighting efforts,
B.the second to the spread and loss of control of the fire
C.the third to the appearance of structural damage and resultant evacuation
D.the fourth to the collapse itself
These are different topics that deserve a separate paragraph
2. Removed redundant content in section "collapse". This section is descriptive, not rxplanatory
A.there is no need to mention explosives, as that is covered by the "reports" section
B.ditto for girder expansion and column buckling
3.added to section "collapse" by mentioning that daylight appeared in windows. This detail is important to understanding that the building fell from the inside out
4. Created section "Aftermath' to move all discussion of collateral damage, to reduce clutter in other sections. Anon4z58u770 (talk) 07:27, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
Splitting section "Original building"
I think the subsection on 9/11 should be moved to a new section. It's better not to have to scroll to such a distinct and important topic. Anon4z58u770 (talk) 08:57, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
There is a Duplicate
This article is a featured one but while searching for the world trade center I found another GA class article named World Trade Center (1973-2011). Isn't it a duplicate? PrathuCoder (talk) 12:43, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- No. DId you read both articles? Acroterion (talk) 13:07, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
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