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'''Reviewer:''' [[User:Cloudz679|Cloudz679]] ([[User talk:Cloudz679|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Cloudz679|contribs]]) 08:36, 7 June 2014 (UTC) |
'''Reviewer:''' [[User:Cloudz679|Cloudz679]] ([[User talk:Cloudz679|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Cloudz679|contribs]]) 08:36, 7 June 2014 (UTC) |
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*I will undertake this review. < |
*I will undertake this review. <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 08:36, 7 June 2014 (UTC) |
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*comments… |
*comments… |
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*In 1921, it was played by the Football League champions and FA Cup winners for the first time; (accuracy) |
*In 1921, it was played by the Football League champions and FA Cup winners for the first time; (accuracy) |
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:*Not sure what is inaccurate about this? |
:*Not sure what is inaccurate about this? |
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::*I think it mentions that the football league champions already took part? Perhaps better "between the Football League champions and…"? < |
::*I think it mentions that the football league champions already took part? Perhaps better "between the Football League champions and…"? <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 18:26, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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:::*Corrected. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
:::*Corrected. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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*the formation of a new top-tier division, the Premier League in 1992, meant it displaced the Football League spot. (this is 70 years later so deserves its own sentence) |
*the formation of a new top-tier division, the Premier League in 1992, meant it displaced the Football League spot. (this is 70 years later so deserves its own sentence) |
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*Liverpool fashioned the first chance of the game |
*Liverpool fashioned the first chance of the game |
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*Lukic just about saved Rush's shot |
*Lukic just about saved Rush's shot |
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:"Lukic all but saved Rush's shot" is no better. < |
:"Lukic all but saved Rush's shot" is no better. <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 18:29, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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::*Tweaked it. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
::*Tweaked it. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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*felt his team could have been more sharper (grammar) |
*felt his team could have been more sharper (grammar) |
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*The last paragraph of the Pre-match section and the Team selection section seem to be duplicates of each other |
*The last paragraph of the Pre-match section and the Team selection section seem to be duplicates of each other |
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*Reading the reference about moving to Wembley in '74, there is some interesting info about the competition not featuring league vs cup winners in the years before that, something omitted in the Wikipedia article. < |
*Reading the reference about moving to Wembley in '74, there is some interesting info about the competition not featuring league vs cup winners in the years before that, something omitted in the Wikipedia article. <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 06:03, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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:*Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I chose not to incorporate that information in Ref 7 because it's somewhat irrelevant/mentioned discreetly in the article already. The background section should just be concise summary of the Shield changes which are relevant to that year's event. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 12:24, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
:*Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I chose not to incorporate that information in Ref 7 because it's somewhat irrelevant/mentioned discreetly in the article already. The background section should just be concise summary of the Shield changes which are relevant to that year's event. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 12:24, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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*Good. A couple of things about the image. First it is lacking a caption. Secondly it explicitly mentions Tennent's as a main sponsor, was it actually known as the Tennent's F.A. Charity Shield as displayed on the programme? There is nothing about this at all in the article. I would be interested to know your thoughts on this. < |
*Good. A couple of things about the image. First it is lacking a caption. Secondly it explicitly mentions Tennent's as a main sponsor, was it actually known as the Tennent's F.A. Charity Shield as displayed on the programme? There is nothing about this at all in the article. I would be interested to know your thoughts on this. <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 18:40, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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::Have added caption. Most of the Charity/Community Shield articles which have been promoted to GA don't refer to the sponsors; in most cases there isn't any sourcable and/or relevant information to add. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:53, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
::Have added caption. Most of the Charity/Community Shield articles which have been promoted to GA don't refer to the sponsors; in most cases there isn't any sourcable and/or relevant information to add. [[User:Lemonade51|Lemonade51]] ([[User talk:Lemonade51|talk]]) 18:53, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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:::Fair enough. All issues have been satisfactorily dealt with, criteria is met, closing review accordingly. < |
:::Fair enough. All issues have been satisfactorily dealt with, criteria is met, closing review accordingly. <span style="font-family:Century Gothic;">[[User:Cloudz679|C]][[:User talk:Cloudz679|<span style="color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration: inherit; -moz-text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD; text-decoration-color: #6A5ACD;">679</span>]]</span> 20:08, 8 June 2014 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Cloudz679 (talk · contribs) 08:36, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
- I will undertake this review. C679 08:36, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
- comments…
Prose
- For Arsenal, Gus Caesar came in place of the injured Steve Bould.
- It was a contest between the respective champions of the Football League and Southern League, and then by 1913 teams of amateur and professional players. (ambiguous)
- In 1921, it was played by the Football League champions and FA Cup winners for the first time; (accuracy)
- Not sure what is inaccurate about this?
- I think it mentions that the football league champions already took part? Perhaps better "between the Football League champions and…"? C679 18:26, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Corrected. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- the formation of a new top-tier division, the Premier League in 1992, meant it displaced the Football League spot. (this is 70 years later so deserves its own sentence)
- Liverpool won seven previous Shields outright (had)
- Given Liverpool's recent successes in the Shield, coupled with the prospect of Arsenal beating Liverpool for a third time in succession,[13] the spectacle was lost on certain football journalists previewing the match. (unclear)
- Liverpool fashioned the first chance of the game
- Lukic just about saved Rush's shot
- "Lukic all but saved Rush's shot" is no better. C679 18:29, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Tweaked it. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- felt his team could have been more sharper (grammar)
- is "below par" a quote or paraphrase?
linking
- link first mention of Arsenal in the body
- Achilles tendon
- Hepatitis (lower case)
- shingles
- Quotes should be followed by an immediate inline citation, I don't know that a quote is needed in the lead.
- The last paragraph of the Pre-match section and the Team selection section seem to be duplicates of each other
- Reading the reference about moving to Wembley in '74, there is some interesting info about the competition not featuring league vs cup winners in the years before that, something omitted in the Wikipedia article. C679 06:03, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I chose not to incorporate that information in Ref 7 because it's somewhat irrelevant/mentioned discreetly in the article already. The background section should just be concise summary of the Shield changes which are relevant to that year's event. Lemonade51 (talk) 12:24, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Good. A couple of things about the image. First it is lacking a caption. Secondly it explicitly mentions Tennent's as a main sponsor, was it actually known as the Tennent's F.A. Charity Shield as displayed on the programme? There is nothing about this at all in the article. I would be interested to know your thoughts on this. C679 18:40, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Have added caption. Most of the Charity/Community Shield articles which have been promoted to GA don't refer to the sponsors; in most cases there isn't any sourcable and/or relevant information to add. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:53, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Fair enough. All issues have been satisfactorily dealt with, criteria is met, closing review accordingly. C679 20:08, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- Have added caption. Most of the Charity/Community Shield articles which have been promoted to GA don't refer to the sponsors; in most cases there isn't any sourcable and/or relevant information to add. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:53, 8 June 2014 (UTC)