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Happy to review. '''< |
Happy to review. '''<span style="color: gold;">★[[User:Retrolord|<span style="color: gold;">★</span>]]</span>[[User:Retrolord|Retro]][[User talk:Retrolord|Lord]][[User:Retrolord|★]]<span style="color: gold;">★</span>''' 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) |
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I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it? |
I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it? |
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Thanks, '''< |
Thanks, '''<span style="color: gold;">★[[User:Retrolord|<span style="color: gold;">★</span>]]</span>[[User:Retrolord|Retro]][[User talk:Retrolord|Lord]][[User:Retrolord|★]]<span style="color: gold;">★</span>''' 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC) |
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:I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC) |
:I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:Retrolord]]: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC) |
::@[[User:Retrolord]]: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it. '''< |
:::Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it. '''<span style="color: gold;">★[[User:Retrolord|<span style="color: gold;">★</span>]]</span>[[User:Retrolord|Retro]][[User talk:Retrolord|Lord]][[User:Retrolord|★]]<span style="color: gold;">★</span>''' 13:06, 15 July 2013 (UTC) |
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PASS! '''< |
PASS! '''<span style="color: gold;">★[[User:Retrolord|<span style="color: gold;">★</span>]]</span>[[User:Retrolord|Retro]][[User talk:Retrolord|Lord]][[User:Retrolord|★]]<span style="color: gold;">★</span>''' 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Happy to review. ★★RetroLord★★ 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
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[edit]"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?
" presented to it" Presented by who?
"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?
I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?
Thanks, ★★RetroLord★★ 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- @User:Retrolord: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it. ★★RetroLord★★ 13:06, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- @User:Retrolord: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
PASS! ★★RetroLord★★ 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC)