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:Life insurance is the main business of the Knights of Columbus. I'd say the exact opposite, that other articles about insurance companies, should be a good template for the KoC article with the addition of the fraternal/religious elements. [[User:Jahaza|Jahaza]] ([[User talk:Jahaza|talk]]) 22:45, 22 March 2023 (UTC) |
:Life insurance is the main business of the Knights of Columbus. I'd say the exact opposite, that other articles about insurance companies, should be a good template for the KoC article with the addition of the fraternal/religious elements. [[User:Jahaza|Jahaza]] ([[User talk:Jahaza|talk]]) 22:45, 22 March 2023 (UTC) |
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== Named for Christopher Columbus == |
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Although the article says the anchor in their logo represents Christopher Columbus, the article doesn't explicitly mention that the group is named in his honor and why. --[[User:Lsloan|Mr. Lance E Sloan]] ([[User talk:Lsloan|talk]]) 16:08, 14 May 2023 (UTC) |
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November 2020: Several times over the years, detailed conversations have occurred on this talk page about whether an editor has a WP:COI with respect to editing this page if the editor is a member of the Knights. This is a summary of the points made. This section was developed in order to avoid a certain Groundhog Day-ish aura surrounding the question of whether a Knight has a COI. The (always defeasible) consensus as of November 2020 is that being a member of the Knights is not a COI for editing this page. Here are the three main points.
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Council officers
I am curious to know how a local council is structured. What are its officers? J S Ayer (talk) 05:03, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
- You would really need to ask them. Slatersteven (talk) 10:32, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
- There is no published description? I should look. J S Ayer (talk) 17:07, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
- I found a weighty tome with the information, and inserted a list of the officers of a council, and hours later the information was deleted. Should we list the officers (there is a separate article on Masonic lodge officers), or should we not? J S Ayer (talk) 02:30, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- For one thing, I noticed your addition was from a 1982 edition, and it is already quite outdated; I have been a Knight since 2008 and I've never heard of the "Physician" office, and we have 2 Guards, just as a few examples. I believe Slugger O'Toole's table adds value, considering that it collates the information from Council/Assembly/Circle fairly well. We definitely don't need a separate article. Elizium23 (talk) 02:56, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- Very well. J S Ayer (talk) 03:16, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- @Slugger O'Toole, do you have a reference for the current officer line-ups? If you don't, it could be primary-sourced from kofc.org's booklets; they publish voluminous info in PDF form that could be easily searched. Elizium23 (talk) 03:42, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- I don't. It was added in 2007 by anon and removed at some point. I remembered it when I saw JS's list in prose and went back to find it. -- Slugger O'Toole (talk) 04:16, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- Here is your primary source. It was an easy search. I don't envision any obstacles to citing this in lieu of a secondary; it should satisfy WP:SPS. Elizium23 (talk) 04:20, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- I don't. It was added in 2007 by anon and removed at some point. I remembered it when I saw JS's list in prose and went back to find it. -- Slugger O'Toole (talk) 04:16, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- For one thing, I noticed your addition was from a 1982 edition, and it is already quite outdated; I have been a Knight since 2008 and I've never heard of the "Physician" office, and we have 2 Guards, just as a few examples. I believe Slugger O'Toole's table adds value, considering that it collates the information from Council/Assembly/Circle fairly well. We definitely don't need a separate article. Elizium23 (talk) 02:56, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- The Council Officer roles are described in the Charter Constitution and Laws of the Knights of Columbus, Linked here: https://www.kofc.org/en/forms/leadership/charter-constitutionlaws-30.pdf
- Particularly, Chapter XV, Duties of Council Officers. 138.88.147.70 (talk) 21:09, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
The list of officers shows some titles marked with asterisks, or double asterisks. Is this explained somewhere? J S Ayer (talk) 03:25, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, I don't know why I missed that the first few times. J S Ayer (talk) 03:32, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
Degrees
The Order comprises four different "degrees", each one of which exemplifies one of the core principles of the order. So says the lede, but all I find in the article now is a statement that there is a fourth degree with its own assemblies. I may be impertinent, but what are the degrees? Are they the same as in medieval knighthood? I don't even see a list of the core principles. Has the article been over-edited, or am I again suffering from spot-blindness? J S Ayer (talk) 03:21, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
- In 2020, the order changed from 3 separate degrees with separate exemplification ceremonies:
- 1. First Degree: Charity
- 2. Second Degree: Unity
- 3. Third Degree: Fraternity
- to a combined exemplification of Charity, Unity, and Fraternity, detailed here: https://www.kofc.org/en/news-room/knightline/2020/february/new-kofc-exemplification.html
- The practical effect is that once a person joins the order and takes this degree, they are a 3rd degree Knight.
- The 4th degree is the patriotic degree of the order; and with its own separate hierarchy (subordinate to the Supreme Council, but separate and distinguishable, with its own roles). An Assembly (the 4th degree version of a council) is made up of Knights from up to several councils. 138.88.147.70 (talk) 21:36, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
"Modern program" lawsuit
There's a "modern program" subsection in the section about the Knight's insurance program. This section is three relatively short paragraphs long. The last paragraph says this, "For 40 consecutive years, the order has received A. M. Best's highest rating, A++. A 2017 lawsuit claimed the Knights were inflating their membership numbers to improve their rankings and demanded $100 million in damages. A jury ruled in favor of the Knights in two of the three counts of the lawsuit, but ordered them to pay $500,000 for breach of contract." This seems WP:Undue to me. It's about one lawsuit out of what has to be many: "the average company balances a docket of 37 U.S. lawsuits. For $1 billion-plus companies in the U.S., the average number of cases being juggled at home soars to 147.". The Knights say that this was a garden variety contract dispute. Does anyone want to argue to leave that in? Beyond that, I'd like to generally speaking say more in this article about their insurance business. They are a huge insurance company but this tends to get lost in their charitable and political activities. Novellasyes (talk) 22:15, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
- I don't feel strongly either way about that detail, but I also don't have any way of knowing if this was a garden variety dispute or was something more. If you want to delete it, I won't complain. I agree that this section could and should be much longer. If you go back to early 2019, you will see that it was. Much of that content was self-sourced, but it could provide you avenues to explore if you want to tackle an expansion. -- Slugger O'Toole (talk) 23:14, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
- I've read some of the background material. The Knights entered into a software development contract with the company that went on to sue them. This was because after some period of time, the Knights abandoned/breached the contract. That's what the $500,000 was for. The litigant made more dramatic claims which we currently re-state in the article, namely, "A 2017 lawsuit claimed the Knights were inflating their membership numbers to improve their rankings and demanded $100 million in damages." The part about how they were inflating the membership numbers is one of the two counts (of three) that the Knights won on. It doesn't seem fair to repeat the allegation, since the court evidently disagreed with it. But if we take out that sentence, which contains a rather dramatic allegation, I don't see how we can justify leaving in anything about the lawsuit, because reporting that they were sued for breach of contract with a software developer and had to pay $500,000 -- that just doesn't seem due at all. Novellasyes (talk) 13:59, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
- I had read about that case in the past. I agree with removing the statement about the inflation of membership numbers and the case overall. That lawsuit was interesting, I think the software company tried to throw in other "defamatory" claims against the Knights which they figured would make headlines to pressure them to settle the breach of contract issue before even filing the case or to settle. I support removing that. ---Avatar317(talk) 22:37, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
- I've read some of the background material. The Knights entered into a software development contract with the company that went on to sue them. This was because after some period of time, the Knights abandoned/breached the contract. That's what the $500,000 was for. The litigant made more dramatic claims which we currently re-state in the article, namely, "A 2017 lawsuit claimed the Knights were inflating their membership numbers to improve their rankings and demanded $100 million in damages." The part about how they were inflating the membership numbers is one of the two counts (of three) that the Knights won on. It doesn't seem fair to repeat the allegation, since the court evidently disagreed with it. But if we take out that sentence, which contains a rather dramatic allegation, I don't see how we can justify leaving in anything about the lawsuit, because reporting that they were sued for breach of contract with a software developer and had to pay $500,000 -- that just doesn't seem due at all. Novellasyes (talk) 13:59, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
The Knights as an insurance/financial services company
Here are links to a few other articles on WP about insurance/financial services companies; the ones I chose are the five largest life insurance/financial services companies.
- Northwestern Mutual, New York Life Insurance Company, MassMutual, Prudential Financial, Lincoln National Corporation
To my eyes, they all seem to have a slight tinge of puffery about them. I don't think it would wear well in this article to treat the KOC insurance/financial services division to this level of detail. I do wonder if, just as WP has separate articles about the History of the Knights of Columbus and the Charitable activities of the Knights of Columbus and the Political activity of the Knights of Columbus, there should eventually be a separate article called something like Life insurance and financial services of the Knights of Columbus or something along those lines. In the meantime, I will (eventually) add more content to this article about this part of the Knights. Novellasyes (talk) 13:28, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
- Life insurance is the main business of the Knights of Columbus. I'd say the exact opposite, that other articles about insurance companies, should be a good template for the KoC article with the addition of the fraternal/religious elements. Jahaza (talk) 22:45, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
Named for Christopher Columbus
Although the article says the anchor in their logo represents Christopher Columbus, the article doesn't explicitly mention that the group is named in his honor and why. --Mr. Lance E Sloan (talk) 16:08, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
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