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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that one can change from doing 'sad girl music' to dissing your favorite rapper?

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Hello everyone. I announce that I have just corrected the article a bit, according to what some suggested on the FAC page of the article. As you can see in the editions, I only corrected what @ChrisTheDude and @Ippantekina proposed.

Regarding what ChrisTheDude suggested, I did everything he said. I only made two of the five suggestions that Ippantekina made, since, regarding record companies, the article deals with two, not one; I didn't heed the other two suggestions because I don't understand at all. I didn't do anything that @MRN2electricboogaloo suggested, since he mentioned that this is his first time contributing to a FAC; So, I leave those suggestions to the judgment of the nominator. Also, I followed @Aoba47's suggestions regarding the image (first thing I did) and the "Release" and "Critical Reception" sections (I'll do that after posting this message).

Before I finish, I have to say five additional things: first, I need a revision regarding the sentence that deals with what inspired Versace for the song. Secondly, I am a non-native English contributor, so please correct me if I got anything wrong regarding the language. Thirdly, I'm nervous as this is my first time contributing to an article being Featured Article, so I hope I didn't make the article worse instead of better. Fourth, I think that what I just did should have been done by the nominator, so excuse me if I violated a rule around FACs, since I don't know deeply about these processes, I only know the basics. Fifth, I am the user Pollosito; I just like more to contribute anonymously than logged in, since edits I make while logged in are evidenced on my user page, and sometimes that makes me lazy. I hope you have a good time on Wikipedia. 186.28.158.31 (talk) 17:49, 19 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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 Hello everyone.