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Hi, I removed the citation for this missile being available for the JF-17 because "Military Watch Magazine" is an amateur blog with a lot of wild unsubstantiated claims. Ghost1736 (talk) 05:40, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

clarification of text needed

What is this supposed to mean: "Compared to ramjet-powered Meteor, which advantages in sustained flight profile with a fly-out speed between Mach 3 and 3.5, the dual-pulsed solid propellant rocket motor of PL-15 potentially offers higher burn-out speed excess of Mach 5, then gradually loses its velocity at the terminal phase."

If it intends to say, "the Meteor has advantages in sustained flight..." please omit the comma after Meteor.

Also, the phrase "which advantages" is awkward perhaps "with advantages" would be better. 75.72.161.233 (talk) 18:55, 6 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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 Hi, I removed the citation for this missile being available for the JF-17 because "Military Watch Magazine" is an amateur blog with a lot of wild unsubstantiated claims. [[User:Ghost1736|Ghost1736]] ([[User talk:Ghost1736|talk]]) 05:40, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
+== clarification of text needed ==
+What is this supposed to mean:
+"Compared to ramjet-powered Meteor, which advantages in sustained flight profile with a fly-out speed between Mach 3 and 3.5, the dual-pulsed solid propellant rocket motor of PL-15 potentially offers higher burn-out speed excess of Mach 5, then gradually loses its velocity at the terminal phase."
+ If it intends to say, "the Meteor has advantages in sustained flight..." please omit the comma after Meteor.
+Also, the phrase "which advantages" is awkward perhaps "with advantages" would be better. [[Special:Contributions/75.72.161.233|75.72.161.233]] ([[User talk:75.72.161.233|talk]]) 18:55, 6 August 2023 (UTC)