Talk:Internet meme/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 15:22, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. [[MOS:|MoS]] () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• Will do. AryKun (talk) 15:22, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
• Sorry for the delay in reviewing this.
• I have removed duplinks and linked several terms I thought might benefit from linking; feel free to discuss.
• "They appear in a...with copyright" the two clauses aren't related to each other, just split this into two sentences.
• "Lastly, a meme's...the Internet itself" not exactly clear on what this sentence is trying to say.
• "emoticon ":-)" introduced" should be "emoticon ":-)", introduced"
• "LOLcats" is inconsistently capitalized.
• doujin should be in a lang template.
• "such as rickrolling" Our article on the meme capitalizes Rickrolling.
• "additional vessels for" Vessel? Medium would be a better word.
• "was damaged by...he Zodiac Killer" Might wanna clarify that this was due to the general implication of him being creepy, not because anyone actually though he ws the Zodiac Killer.
• "Gabrielle et al." Mention who she is (as in profession, type of scientist, etc)
• Add inflation templates for the amounts in "Non-fungible tokens".
• Earwig is clear.
• References seem to be to reliable sources and correctly formatted.
• Most of the journal and book references need cites to specific pages; pages ranges that include 30 or 40 pages are way too large.
• I don't think that "— What does dank meme mean?" should be part of the Dictionary.com ref title.
• Spotchecks: All checked sources verify all claims made.
  • Griffin, Annaliese (March 9, 2018). "What does "dank" mean? A definition of everyone's new favourite adjective". Quartz.
  • Plaugic, Lizzie (January 10, 2017). "How a group of Redditors is creating a fake stock market to figure out the value of memes". The Verge.
  • Hathaway, Jay (November 5, 2018). "The 'E' meme shows just how weird memes can get". The Daily Dot.
  • Lee, Bruce Y. (December 2, 2018). "They Did Surgery On A Grape: What Is This New Viral Meme?". Forbes.
  • Whitten, Sarah (January 4, 2017). "A Wendy's tweet just went viral for all the wrong reasons". CNBC.
  • Victor, Daniel (August 19, 2019). "Hong Kong Protesters Love Pepe the Frog. No, They're Not Alt-Right". The New York Times.
  • Msughter, Aondover Eric; Iman, Maryam Lawal (March 15, 2020). "Internet Meme as a Campaign Tool to the Fight against Covid-19 in Nigeria" (PDF). Global Journal of Human-Social Science.
  • Fazio, Marie (April 29, 2021). "The World Knows Her as 'Disaster Girl.' She Just Made $500,000 Off the Meme". The New York Times.
• Images are correctly licensed and used, and illustrate the article well.
• The first sentence in "Modern memes" is slightly sandwiched, move the deep-fried meme a couple lines lower.
• That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 15:55, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

• Courtesy ping GenericWikiUser1. AryKun (talk) 02:37, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

• AryKun Thanks for the feedback, I've tried my best to address your points. GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 04:38, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

  The page ranges are still too large for most journal refs, they should be 2 or 3 pages at most. A lot of them have over a dozen pages citing a single sentence in the article. If any of them really have ranges that large, use sfn templates to cite each individual claim instead. AryKun (talk) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

  Courtesy ping GenericWikiUser1. AryKun (talk) 16:06, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

  Another ping GenericWikiUser1. AryKun (talk) 14:20, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

Yep I’m working on it, thanks. GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 15:49, 17 August 2023 (UTC)