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: I agree that these are excessive or irrelevant: Dentist, Parsons, custody, Rhodesia map, Signorelli. I like the Purple Heart and the parody images, and would like to see them stay. Bay Head and volcano were probably part of a reaction to remove some of the quotations that another editor asserted were 'excessive' in this article. Those two pictures could definitely go. If the quotes are desirable, then put them back into the paragraphs. [[User:Grorp|Grorp]] ([[User talk:Grorp|talk]]) 06:49, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
: I agree that these are excessive or irrelevant: Dentist, Parsons, custody, Rhodesia map, Signorelli. I like the Purple Heart and the parody images, and would like to see them stay. Bay Head and volcano were probably part of a reaction to remove some of the quotations that another editor asserted were 'excessive' in this article. Those two pictures could definitely go. If the quotes are desirable, then put them back into the paragraphs. [[User:Grorp|Grorp]] ([[User talk:Grorp|talk]]) 06:49, 28 August 2023 (UTC)


You could move them to a gallery section. --[[User:Devokewater|<span style="background:crimson; color:white; padding:2px;">Devoke</span>]][[User talk:Devokewater|<span style="background:#e2e2e2; color:crimson; padding:2px;">water</span>]] 10:01, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
You could move these pictures to a gallery section. --[[User:Devokewater|<span style="background:crimson; color:white; padding:2px;">Devoke</span>]][[User talk:Devokewater|<span style="background:#e2e2e2; color:crimson; padding:2px;">water</span>]] 10:01, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

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Former featured articleL. Ron Hubbard is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 7, 2006Good article nomineeListed
June 1, 2007Featured article candidateNot promoted
October 23, 2008Good article reassessmentDelisted
March 5, 2011Featured article candidatePromoted
April 2, 2020Featured article reviewDemoted
Current status: Former featured article

L. Ron Hoyabembe

There is not any serious speculation that Hubbard was a black man named L. Ron Hoyabembe. The video cited here is a comedy sketch. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:642:C481:4640:8849:F24B:EA8:CFE0 (talk) 15:30, 2 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

There actually was quite a bit of speculation. A painting he created in his later years depicted a man clearly of African-American ancestry. The comedy sketch brought more attention to the rumor. SadInAShed (talk) 21:39, 6 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for pointing this out, it's been removed. Feoffer (talk) 01:47, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Actually there is a theory that he was a black man. Removing this reference is academically unsound and rooted in racist rhetoric. 67.85.198.188 (talk) 19:00, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@67.85.198.188: If you can provide a reliable source, then okay. Otherwise, it is still speculation and rumor, which is insufficient to make it into a Wikipedia article. Grorp (talk) 05:30, 8 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"held by Guinness World Records to be for the most..." - under Death and Legacy

Full sentence: "Hubbard is held by Guinness World Records to be for the most published author with 1,084 works, most translated book (70 languages for The Way to Happiness) and most audiobooks (185 as of April 2009)."

This appears to be out of date, if not simply false as even in 2009.

If considering works, Hubbard was unlikely to have had the most, even at his death. He definitely did not have the most translated book. Perhaps convert to say that Hubbard formerly held these world records (per the Guinness World Records), or additional context could be added, or the sentence struck completely.

For most published author:

Wikipedia itself notes Ryoki Inoue as being the most published author (also referencing the Guinness World Records), though it notes only 1075 works (regardless the conflict between the two seemingly needs to be corrected). Corín Tellado is noted as having over 4000 works published, with even the partial bibliography on Wikipedia extending over 1200 works. As it considers works rather than novels, Charles Hamilton is identified as having over 5000 short stories.

For most translated book:

Guinness World Records shows Le Petit Prince as the most translated single author, single book, and Wikipedia itself notes that The Little Prince and Adventures of Pinocchio as having the most translations and third most translations (with 300+ and 240-260 languages respectively).

These are single-author examples only, as there are multi-author works with even more translations (ex: the Bible (with 724 translations of the Protestant Canon) or the Quran (with 112 translations as of 2010)).

For most audiobooks:

It seems unlikely to be the most audiobooks as of today, but I can't find a more up to date reference for this, and the article notes the date. Spindrift Aura (talk) 04:48, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Most published works by one author
Most audiobooks published for one author 91.110.25.16 (talk) 22:50, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The numbers are that high only because the Church of Scientology continues to revise and republish the same books and tapes over and over again. Every audio lecture was released on reel-to-reel tapes, then cassette tapes, then CDs, then DVDs. Hubbard never published any "audiobooks" during his lifetime. All of Hubbard's books and audiobooks have been SELF PUBLISHED by the Church of Scientology with at least 4 new revisions of everything having been made after Hubbard's death. So no matter how Scientology got Guinness to recognize the numbers they assuredly provided, the results are still skewed and worthless. Hubbard never wrote 1,084 books. Grorp (talk) 01:32, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"Discovery" of sabotage in quotations

The subtitle for his military history section implies that his discovery of attempted sabotage was falsified/planted himself due to being in quotes, but nothing in the body of the article suggests that 215.67.148.5 (talk) 13:09, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Excellent point, I've added quotes from Nibbs and competing opinion from Owens, replaced scare quotes with a question mark at the end of heading Feoffer (talk) 05:08, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

To-do list

  • Hubbard learning of upcoming commitment prompting kidnapping  Done
  • Consolidate stories of religion for money  Done
  • Emeter  Done
  • Interaction with D.C. psychiatrists Done
  • Letter from Polly to Sara Done
  • grab the contemporary source about Hubbard discovering gold on Grubb farm.  Done
  • Racetrack Kools theory  Done
  • Sara on him being surrounded by sycophants  Done
  • Outed as occult practitioner  Done
  • Track down quote on returning to excalibur - love or hate for man. - Try these: [1] [2] [3] [4] note by Grorp  Done THanks!!!
  • Winter 'ought to have known better'. Done
  • Telling Mayo that people blow because of ARC breaks not missed Overts/withholds  Done
  • Hypnosis and swami career  Done
  • Track down quote from Nibs "What my father was really good what destroying people" Done
  • Massive attention needed to sara divorce, make own era section? Done
  • R2-45 Done
  • Commented out "Scientology biographies" for now  Done
  • R2-45 order in Sea Org era Done
  • only earned $100?  Done
  • Legacy: Hubbard in Nation of Islam  Done
  • Document response to Shrine debacle outside auditorium  Done
  • Barbara Klowden  Done
  • Gardner statement: Craze has fizzled  Done
  • Calling for Mayo after injury  Done
  • In popular culture  Done
    • Simpsons, Strange Angel  Done
  • Trimed non-essential blockquotes (keeping Walnut Lodge, Excalibur, some Affirmations, Request for Treatment, Dr Center, NulAs, Psych Denunciation )  Done
  • Fixed reintroduced MOSBACKREF issues  Done
  • Diabetes and cancer cures in Dianetics 1950  Done
  • Widespread clerical collars were much later,Scientology cross  Done
  • Increasing authoritarianism Done
  • summarize start of public anti-psychiatry  Done
  • Massive improvements needed to early pulp fiction -- currently just a recitation  Done
  • John McMaster Done
  • Expand APA denunciation,  Done not really a denunciation after all, all things considered
  • "Lonnie", twelve year old canadian boy locked in chain locker and subjected to introspection rundown, went psychotic, offloaded in Morocco discussed by Franks but lots of people talk about it  Done H.E. gives different name and age, better provenance use that. In future sub-article, go into more details.
  • improve written works of l. ron hubbard page  Done
  • Add comments about Hubbard's prolific writing style  Done
  • Roommate interview: George Bernard Shaw perfect cranium story and polar bear story  Done
  • Pseudobiography of L. Ron Hubbard  Done
  • From fiction to autobiography: Done
  • Affirmations: you know which are lies, real stories good enough  Done
  • Split bio into subarticles Done
  • --
  • --
  • Better public domain picture of subject?
  • Resolve uncertainty about first marriage narrative -- miscarriage?
  • Hubbard narrative of Polly as humanly glider guardian angel
  • Can we find a good pic of a 1930s dentist office, perhaps with dentist and patient.
  • Track down lead from llywrch: "Someone had come to Hubbard's front door , begging to read Excalibur; Hubbard managed to get rid of the stranger, then after the door closed he laughed & said, "One of these days I'll need to actually write the darned thing."
  • massive trimming/summarizing of Scientology section
  • kidnapping students during phoenix era
  • pushing peanuts with nose till bloody on ship
  • When does Hubbard first start talking about 75 million years ago?
  • When did he mention 75 million years ago and then say he was only joking? PDC I think
  • relationship with Nibs
  • When did Hubbard personally do the purif? Before or after Narconon?
  • Hubbard in South Africa
  • Filming
  • Person aboard ship that Ron gave book to, later heard Ron repeat stories from it
  • Legacy: Scholars on linkage between mental illness and NRMs
  • --
  • Curate images
  • Rescue and fix refs
  • Add refs to all unrefed statements
  • Summarize subarticles and discuss themes
  • Decide what to do with In Scientology section
    • Estimate of assets? Other measures of success?
    • Portraits at orgs and events (My Scientology Movie)
    • LRH Reincarnation? (is this even a thing outside of South Park?)
  • Trim lede
  • Expand todo list
  • Wikipedia needs a better article on "swami" in 20th-century western entertainment.
  • Wikipedia needs a better article on Magical worldview.
  • Wikipedia needs an article on ice/cold water therapy in 20th-century psychiatry.

Feoffer (talk) 02:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Feoffer, I saw in a recent edit summary that you're looking for an RS assessment of Hubbard's fiction. I think this is a top-quality source -- the SFE is the most authoritative science fiction reference work. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:49, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's exactly the source I needed! Thank you!!! Feoffer (talk) 21:13, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Edit conflicts

@Feoffer: I would really like you to put a banner at the top of the page during the chunk of time you are working on the article, such as Template:In use. I'd noticed you hadn't edited in hours, so I sat down to clean up all the Wright citations, and just before clicking "Publish changes" I checked. You had just made 5 edits in the time I was editing the file. Needless to say, I didn't publish my changes, but it was a waste of my work. Please add a banner while you're doing these major edits and remove it when you are done. Thank you. Grorp (talk) 00:16, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry!! Please, in future, just publish your changes over mine in situations like this, so your improvements won't be lost! Literally, when you see the Edit conflict, just copy everything in the "your text" box into the article box without spending a second thought about it. I'll be happy to resolve the edit conflicts and incorporate your fixes into my revisions! (And of course, I'll also try to remember add the in-use banner as you request.)
Do you have any ideas for the Military subheadings? Per SilkTork, the current subheadings might sound a little "this happened, then this happened, then this happened". Feoffer (talk) 00:40, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Commented out section is missing an end code

@Feoffer: FYI, the commented out section which immediately follows "Each franchise holder was required to pay ten percent of income to Hubbard's central organization" doesn't have any end code (and therefore ends with the end of the following commented out section). I couldn't identify or guess where the end code should go, so I'm just letting you know so you can put in an appropriate end code. Grorp (talk) 07:50, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

MartinPoulter got to it before I had a chance! Thanks! Feoffer (talk) 20:52, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Doing an "Inset map" on Wikipedia?

L._Ron_Hubbard#Hiding_in_California features two maps of Hubbards various hideouts -- one nationwide with another map of Southern California. Ideally these should be visually linked somehow, but presently they're rendered as two separate, unlinked maps. Does anyone have a solution? (short of rasterizing the entire thing)? Feoffer (talk) 20:52, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Feedback before going forward

For reference:

The article come a long way since June, but also developed problems along the way. The current version of bio is far too lengthy and detailed, uses historical quotes instead of summaries. Simultaneously, the post-1953 sections are somewhat barebones at this point. I think Pop Culture and Bibliography are mostly good. The entire article needs a close reading to remove unnecessary detail, and to reduce the amount and length of the quotes.

Before shunting off excess detail into biographical subarticles, is there anything we're "missing"? There's lots of things that are in the article that shouldn't be -- is there anything in particular that's NOT in the article that SHOULD be. Feoffer (talk) 01:39, 10 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Feoffer: As I said before your changes look great so far. In the section "In the Dianetics era", or perhaps in "Pivot to Scientology", it would be good to include some material about the wider range of sources Hubbard was getting his ideas from, particularly Crowley's writings but also elsewhere. Currently we cite Christensen, who focuses on Freudian influence. There's articles by Jon Atack and Hugh Urban which cover some of the other sources Hubbard was drawing from: Atack, Urban 1, Urban 2. Message on my talk if access is an issue.
In a similar vein, we might include a brief summary of the reviews by more prominent individuals on the initial publication of DMSMH. For example, the psychologist and public intellectual Erich Fromm reviewed it in The New York Herald Book Review. Cambial foliar❧ 19:30, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the suggestions! I've added Fromm's reaction -- how could I have missed having an important psychologist's feedback. I've also added a "Sources and Doctrines" section summarizing the Atack and Urban refs you provided! Good call, give a shout if you see any other opportunities for improvement Feoffer (talk) 00:36, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Too many pictures?

I feel that there are too many pictures on this page, especially of vaguely related or irrelevant images. It's just a constant stream of pictures on right side, several of which are not necessary. Specifically, these are the ones I think could be removed without detracting too much from the article:

  • Dentist office
  • Jack Parsons (maybe)
  • Bay Head cottage (or at least move part of the excessively long caption into the main article)
  • Sara Northrup custody photo (there is a clearer photo of Sara's face earlier in the article)
  • Rhodesia map
  • Volcano
  • Signorelli devil painting
  • Purple Heart medal
  • SNL parody comparison (maybe)

I'd like to know what thoughts other users have on this matter. Legocity264 (talk) 06:14, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that these are excessive or irrelevant: Dentist, Parsons, custody, Rhodesia map, Signorelli. I like the Purple Heart and the parody images, and would like to see them stay. Bay Head and volcano were probably part of a reaction to remove some of the quotations that another editor asserted were 'excessive' in this article. Those two pictures could definitely go. If the quotes are desirable, then put them back into the paragraphs. Grorp (talk) 06:49, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You could move these pictures to a gallery section. --Devokewater 10:01, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]