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Deadline 4（Week 5)ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear Professor,

1. This is the first draft of Media Trends and Globalization, please check it User:ZHANG0822ZH/Drug policy of China

2. This is the first draft of Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, please check it [1]

3. This is the weekly task of "Media Trends and Globalization"and"Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" in September. It has been edited a total of 60 times. Please check. 1) [2] 2) [3] 3) [4] 4) [5] 5) [6] 6) [7] ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 11:00, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Your draft right now is not very useful, I fear. Sections on Korea and Germany are irrelevant, and the Chinese information is just a rough translation of what reads like a propaganda piece. Please use scholarly sources instead found on Google Scholar [8] such as [9], [10], [11] or [12]. You can also start by translating content found at zh:毒品禁制政策#中华人民共和国.

Your Huzhou expansion is going well. Please merge all of your content to voy:Huzhou.

Regarding your other edits - please add references to content added here and in other places (although plot summaries do not require references, that's fine, but for our extra credit, most of your edits should have references to get full credit, as noted in the syllabus). Here is a suggestion for you to learn a new skill: try to add an infobox to Big Ear Tutu and Where is Mama, for example (copy one from another article and modify the parameters to fit; practice in your sandbox first). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:31, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have revised my first draft, please check it [13] ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 12:46, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH The tiny section on China is now factually correct, if unreferenced. It needs a major expansion using scholarly sources I pointed out above. The sections on Korea and Germany, as I noted earlier, are totally irrelevant, since the last time I checked, neither Korea nor Germany were part of China. This content, when referenced and checked for redundancy, could be merged to Drug policy of South Korea or Drug policy of Germany for extra credit. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:40, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

Good afternoon, professor, I have revised the first draft again. Check, please. I'm very sorry that I misunderstood the point of the article and caused you trouble. [14] ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 07:11, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Nothing to be sorry about, it is all a learning experience. Your focus (content) is correct now, but please use good sources like the ones I mentioned above. Right now you cite three sources. Wikipedia cannot be use as a source about itself (WP:SPS, although you can reuse - copy - relevant referenced text on Wikipedia from other articles to yours), and Baidu is not consiered reliable per WP:BAIDU. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 00:08, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Good evening, professor, I changed the Baidu citation to the paper in Google Scholar, but since Wikipedia cannot search it and cannot quote it directly, I added it manually. I'm not sure if I'm doing it right. [15] ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 10:28, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH This is good. Please add the translated title to the metadata article, and a quotation from the journal that proves the content is relevant (since it is not an English-language source). Both metadata elements have their own parameters in the citation template (if you cannot find them, ask me in class tomorrow). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 11:08, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have modified it, please check it [16] ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 14:06, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Very well done! _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:42, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 5)：BAILINHAN

Hello Professor, I finished Deadline 4 and this is my first draft please check it out：Economic inequality in China Bai0926 (talk) 13:02, 6 October 2023 (UTC)

@Bai0926 While this is a start, please remember that only content referenced to reliable sources is accepted for this project (see WP:V, WP:RS for relevant Wikipedia rules we have to respect). Please try to base your article on English academic sources found through Google Scholar such as this or this. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:44, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Other excellent resources include documents like this or this found through this simple Google query. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:46, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Professor, this is my revised first draft. Please check it.User:Bai0926/Economic inequality in China Bai0926 (talk) 06:38, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Hmmm, I am not seeing any English sources used? In addition, there are two style issues. First, an article should be in prose format, not bullet point. Second, you use essay-style language like pronoun "we" ("we must"). Please read the linked guidelines. Please also compare your article to an existing article on the topic, such as economic inequality in South Korea or economic inequality in the United States to see what you are expected to write. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:03, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Possible copyright infringement

I noticed that much of the Lithuanian Territorial Defense Force article looks like a machine translation of Arūnas Bubnys' article "Lietuvos vietinė rinktinė ir nauji bandymai mobilizuoti Lietuvos vyrus 1944 metais" ([17]). The issue is mainly with this edit made by @Cukrakalnis. I have already reported this issue on WP:CPN, but I don't know what to do next? Should we remove this section? Restore the article to its original state before the C edits? I don't want to do this because of my 0RR, and you promised to advise me in similar situations. Also please check if I'm right or maybe I just confused something and it's ok to just translate like that and use it on Wiki. Marcelus (talk) 21:12, 6 October 2023 (UTC)

@Marcelus @Cukrakalnis Best nice outcome would be for Cukrakalnis to rewrite it, go over their past edits and ensure any similar violations are removed, and do not repeat this. Whether blanking of history is required, CPN experts will decide. I hope no sanctions on anyone will be merited. Note I have not yet reviewed the diff in detail myself, but I did a spotcheck. I notice a sentence "The Lithuanian army is commanded by a reliable Lithuanian officer" is based for example on "The Lithuanian army is led by a reliable Lithuanian officer" (ditto for the rest of that bullet list), but this can be argued to be a quote (it just needs to be put in quotations). I concur the next sentence "in 1944 on January 3-4, councilors considered the draft petition." rendered on wiki as "On 3-4 January 1944, the councilors discussed the draft petition." is problematic, as we now move beyond quoting what some historical figure said. Ditto for the second half of the paragraph, even if we AGF the quote in the middle: wiki has "Next, permission was requested to organize a military unit, which would be called the 1st Lithuanian Division and that would be headed by a senior Lithuanian officer, called the inspector general. The division would be created by mobilization, its task would be to defend the territory of Lithuania from the Bolshevik invasion.", original text has "Next, permission is requested to organize a military unit, which could be called the 1st Lithuanian Division. It would be headed by a senior Lithuanian officer, called the inspector general. The division would be created by mobilization, its task would be to defend the territory of Lithuania from the Bolshevik invasion.". So, note again that I checked just an excerpt, but I think this is a copyvio and I suggest Cukrakalnis rewrites it properly (see Wikipedia:Copying_text_from_other_sources#Can_I_copy_if_I_change_the_text_a_little_bit?). Note that verbatim translation is a copyvio too. If you could list other similarities, it could help us to figure out what needs to be rewitten, but frankly, I think Cukrakalnis should rewrite this first, then ask us to check again, rather than the other way around (note: it is also possible admins at CPN will just blank this). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:37, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for checking up on this. In my opinion everything from words "On 23-24 November 1943" to "with military units assigned to them" was copied from the mentioned article. Marcelus (talk) 07:29, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll rewrite the sections where you think there's copyvio when I have the time sometime either this week or next week. I know the promise is vague, but I will make sure it happens. Cukrakalnis (talk) 12:59, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Cukrakalnis; you can use the "rewrite" link on the listing to open a temporary page to do your rewrite, as it complicates things to directly rewrite on the article. It also lets us know that you are working on a rewrite, and we won't blank or delete the article for a reasonable amount of time. Sennecaster (Chat) 04:13, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits—JIN SIYU

Good morning Professor, I am JIN SIYU. I have completed my ten Chinese Wiki edits this week, here is the link. Please check. Thank you! Jinnnbrynn (talk) 01:34, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Jinnnbrynn Good, but please note that to get full extra credit for this activity, "At least 5, or half of your total edits, should be to English Wikipedia". _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:46, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I have completed my ten English Wiki edits this week, here is the link. Please check. Thank you! Jinnnbrynn (talk) 08:47, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

@Jinnnbrynn Good, but try to review the following issues: here your edits were reverted because you added too many blue links. Blue links (hyperlinks) are good, but check when to add them (read WP:OVERLINK). For the same reason, your links were removed from here. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:05, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline4(week 5) XIA YIRONG

Good afternoon professor. I have completed my translation of article in my sandbox. Please check it. Thank you. Hayeyong (talk) 03:58, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Hayeyong Please provide a link to the relevant sandbox, then I'll review it. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:46, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

User:Hayeyong/sandbox Hayeyong (talk) 00:04, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Hayeyong Thank you. I notice that you never asked me for approval of your topic. What is it it, exactly? Are you translating form Chinese Wikipedia? Your article looks like a translation of zh:另類全球化 which already exists at Alter-globalization. The English article can be expanded (I see Chinese is longer), but remember that all content added to Wikipedia in our assignment have to be referenced to reliable sources (much of the Chinese Wikipedia article is unreferenced).

You should first copy the contents of the existing article on alter-globalization to your sandbox. Then merge it with your transltion. Next, ensure all content is referenced, and in correct English. Your translation has many language problems, starting with the very title Alternative globalization, not Altmondialisme (that's French). Please let me know when you have done so. (It is also ok for you to chose a different topic to translate, perhaps something easier that does not exist on English Wikipedia - an article about Chinese historical monument or figure or such, for example). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:49, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

I edited but forgot to tell you, I thought I didn’t need to leave a message for every post. I modified it according to your request

This is the Chinese translation

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hayeyong/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92#%E6%96%87%E5%8C%96%E5%BD%B1%E5%93%8D

This is the English translation

User:Hayeyong/sandbox

Also I was wondering if I could add the history of this place to my topic on Wikivoyage, I have already added it, here is the link.https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ma%27anshan If not, please tell me Hayeyong (talk) 03:41, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Hayeyong Your translation to Chinese seems to be going well. Please ensure that your article reads good in Chinese, to avoid having your article declined due to problems with weak translation. Please read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 carefully.

Regarding the English translation, it seems the the underlying quality of the Chinese article is very poor - much of it is unreferenced or unencyclopedic. As I wrote above, you should select a differnet topic. It will be easier for you to translate some well-referneced short article then try to find references for the vast amounts of unreferenced claims in the Chinese article that then you'd have to merge with the existing English article. You should always double check with me if the topic is acceptable before beginning work on it.

Regarding the Wikivoyage edits. A short history is ok, but it should be found under 'understand'. Compare the structure of your article with voy:Beijing or voy:Shanghai to see what you should add or move. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:23, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Polish municipal councilors in Kiev 1917

Hi Piotrus, hope all good with you. I'm working a bit on Talk:1917_Kiev_City_Duma_election#full_list_of_elected_members, to have a full list of the members of the 1917 Kiev City Duma. I've entered the list of 120 names from Russian newspaper source [18]. Out of the deputies of the Polish lists, I have 3 out of 5 well identified, but for the other two (deputies 76 and 78 from the reference) I have only arbitrary transliteration from Russian Cyrillic. What could be the correct names of these persons? Any Polish language ref talking about these individuals? Any other Polish people in the list whose name could be adjusted? -- Soman (talk) 14:46, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Soman As I do not read cyryllic, if you give me a Latin transliteration here, I'll see what I can dig up. Dymitr Szarzyński (1875-1963) seems notable (entry in Polish Biographical Dictionary). I could probably stub him sooner or later (lawyer, publisher, banker). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:33, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi Piotrus. Many thanks. The family names I have difficulty to identify is "Dragoshenski" and "Tsetkevich". It seems however that "tsetkevich" could be a typo of Mieczysław Mickiewicz, who would have had the initials "M. K." and seems plausible person to have been the number 1 candidate of the Polish list. "Dragoshevsky" would be "Dragoszewski"? But that surname has very few google hits, not sure if there would be another spelling? --Soman (talk) 14:53, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

@Soman Tough. Dragoszeński gives me nothing. Dragoszewski as you note yields very little too. Tsetkevich is very weird, I would not even think about connecting him to Mickiewicz. Maybe Czerkiewicz (since Czetkiewicz gives me nothing)? But I am afraid I am drawing blanks for anything associted with Kiev here in my search. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 00:17, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks Piotrus. I found another contemporary newspaper, giving the name as "M. M. Petkevich", which on one hand matches better Polish family name. There was Kazimierz Pietkiewicz (działacz polityczny) in Kiev at this time - but that doesn't match the initials "M. M." and he was a socialist. I still think that it could be Mickiewicz due to the initials in the first ref but still unsure. --Soman (talk) 13:52, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Soman Sadly, I am drewing blanks trying to look for Polish sources on uk:Київська міська дума (good article to create here if you could) and the 1917 elections to it. (the terms "duma kijowska"/"duma kijowa" don't seem to exist in Polish). I wonder if query in Polish newspapers would help. Dziennik Kijowski, for example (no article on pl wiki, even) (pl:Dziennik Kijowski (1906–1920)). Some issues are here, some others linked from the pl article. I will try to stub it on en and pl in the near future for what it is worth. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:03, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

I think this would settle the family names: "Wiarą we własne siły mogły Pol . Komitet Wykonawczy natchnąć wybory do rady miejskiej Kijowa : tzw . „ Polska lista wyborcza " otrzymała 6 mandatów ( M. Pietkiewicz , D. Szarzyński , A. Drogoszewski , Krzyżanowski , M. Zarębski , Smólski ) . Tymczasem P.P.S. frakcja tylko 1 ( Kaz . Domosławski ) i P.P.S. lewica 1 ( Jan Białogrodzki )", the source would be issues 185 and 187 of Dziennik Kijowski. When I try to access the Dziennik Kijowski archives in the link you mentioned, my browser refuses and says connection is unsecure ... 'M. Pietkiewicz' is mentioned in Narodowa Demokracja wobec chłopów w latach 1887-1914: programy, polityka, działalność as a ND politician in early 1900s, could be the same. Drogoszewski seems to be Aureli Drogoszewski. Here we find a mention of Marcjan Zarębski, but appears nowhere else. --Soman (talk) 13:12, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

@Soman I don't have a problem with the link, hmmm. Another archive is linked from the pl wiki article on the newspaper. Do let me know if you need anything else. pl:Kazimierz Domosławski has a wiki article too. See also [19], seems to mention some of those names (Domosławski, Białogrodzki). Let me know if you need a translation. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:30, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks Piotrus. The PDF link you shared gives more insight on the Polish Executive Committee (I'll see if I can create a wiki article on the party), and the PDF settles that my previous hypothesis on the first deputy would have been Mickiewicz was completely wrong. In regard to the DK archives, the Poznan archive has no copies from July 1917, and the JBC archive (trying different browsers, from different laptops) always comes up as SSL certificate invalid and I can't access. If you have time, and if you find July 25, 26 or 27 copies of DK, if it would be possible to crop screenshot on articles on election result and upload on Commons, that would be very appreciated. --Soman (talk) 16:17, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, jbc (Krakow Jagiellon University Library) has very few issues digitized, for 1917, that's just # 14 (1917.01.14 ; (1917.01.27)) and # 19 (1917.04.16 ; (1917.04.29)). I'll see if I can dig up anything else for the time period you are interested in. If I do so, I'll message you. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:29, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

WBC (Poznan) has more issues but sadly, as you noted, only until late June of that year. I am not seeing anything else online, I fear. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 05:01, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello professor,

I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia and Wikivoyage this week.

Please check:[20][21]

I would appreciate it if you could provide me with correction. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:44, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhongxxin Your edits look very nice. Please reword this sentence "China's shared service system is still very mature" - what is a "shared service system" and what do you mean by "still mature"? Is it expected to be come immature soon? This sentnece is difficult to understand. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 05:10, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

I have made some modifications to the content, please check.

Thank you for your correction! Zhongxxin (talk) 07:10, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhongxxin Good. I removed some broken code and fixed code to enable colored map pins. Try to add more see and do information, compare for example to voy:Ansan to get ideas on what is missing from your article. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:38, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits--ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening, Professor. I have completed edits to Wikipedia and Wikivoyage.This is my Chinese wikivoyage link. Here is my English wikivoyage link. Here is my English Wikipedia link. Please check it, thank you very much！AYAO32269 (talk) 16:47, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@AYAO32269 Good. Please review this fix to your edits and read voy:Wikivoyage:Links to Wikipedia. When adding links to articles on Wikipedia that exists in Chinese, but not English like you did here ([22]) please try to use Template:Interlanguage link. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 05:13, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Yes professor. Now I have modified it. Please check whether it is correct. AYAO32269 (talk) 05:30, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

If this is an official website, it can be listed like this. But see comment by experienced editor Ikan here. Is your link a reference or an official website? Unlike Wikipedia, which requires referneces for all content, Wikivoyage does not use many external links (just for the official website like what I shown you above in my WP:DIFF). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 00:21, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Yes professor. I will add the link correctly ! AYAO32269 (talk) 14:22, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you very much!!! AYAO32269 (talk) 14:22, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits--ZHENGYAYUAN

Hello professor,

I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia and Wikivoyage this week.Please check it, thank you very much！https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Rizhao Zhengyayuan (talk) 13:40, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan Good. Please see how an experienced Wikivoyage editor, User:Ground Zero, has cleaned up your edits here - what can you learn from that to make your next edits better? As for your Wikipedia edits, I cannot locate them - please let me know where they are? _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 00:23, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello! Professor, my edits are viewable in the edit log of this article in Rizhao, also I checked your suggestion and I will change my mistake in the next edit, thanks for your suggestion! Zhengyayuan (talk) 02:36, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan I see you mean the voy:Rizhao, not Wikipedia's Rizhao (in your first sentence you mentioned Wikipedia and Wikivoyage). To improve Rizhao more, as we practiced today in class, add a climate and history subsections to the 'Understand' one. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:08, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

OK! I'm very sorry, Professor. I made a typo. Zhengyayuan (talk) 00:18, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 (second draft) is approaching

Hello Professor, I am Zheng Yayuan, a member of group 11, and this is our group's editing process regarding the article. I've added some hotels and cuisines, also I've added some pictures, please check if they are correct, I need your advice very much, thank you![23] Zhengyayuan (talk) 13:44, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan Good. Please replace the three identical broken maps with a working map. Copy the map from Ansan and adjust GPS coordinates; if you don't know how to, ask me in class or during office hours tomorrow. It would be good to expand the See and Do sections with other places. Are there any musums? Historical landmarks like temples, old graveyards, monuments? For do, how about festivals? Compare your entry to Ansan to see what is missing. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 00:26, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor! We have made the changes, as for the rest of the content, my group and I are in the process of refining it, we have now added some content about the scenic area and introduction to Rizhao. Zhengyayuan (talk) 03:18, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan Ok. Please let me know when you'd like me to review it again. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:27, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Dave Rudden

Hi! I wish to thank you very much for creating this page and nominating it for DYK. It's been a unique experience for me as a complete newcomer to the English Wikipedia. I will slightly modify Rudden's page when the third book is finally released at the end of the month, adding it to the list od Dr Who stories. If you ever look for Poland-related topics for DYK, consider Jerzy Iwanowski (hipolog), a very interesting biography of Major George Iwanowski: he has a red link and biography in the article about South African Lipizzaners. Best wishes. Laked98 (talk) 03:03, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Laked98 I just sub-stubbed it - you did all the heavy lifting (all the work!). Thank you for doing that! I hope you'll have time to translate articles about his books from pl to en. And I hope you'll consider translating more stuff (including Iwanowski). There is so much to do (the last few days I was working on Władysław Umiński, which now looks much better in English than in Polish, I think...). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:07, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

deadline (weekend 5) kim jiwon

I couldn't answer what the professor said, so I wrote it again Sorry to be a bother. Previously, I told you that Hadestown and Ennio Morricone Wikipedia are translated from English to Korean, but there are many problems, so I want to translate https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Memphis_(musical) and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Grinning_Man_(musical) from English to Korean. I'll work alone Will it be possible?

I have a lot of questions to ask because I am not good enough skills I think I won't have enough time if I ask after class, so can I stop by the office before class at 1 o'clock tomorrow and ask about the assignments?

Wldnjsdk1 (talk) 03:16, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Wldnjsdk1 We can meet tommorrow but it is better to meet after the class (at 4pm), since this is when the office hours start. As for the other question, please see my reply to you above. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:08, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week 5) - Kim Minji

Hello, professor! I would like to inform you of the media trend and the posting of the group project on deadline 4 of globalization and I would like to ask you a question. I finished the process of translating English articles into Korean, and I refined them and posted the articles. I'm sending you a message because you asked me to tell you when I published it. You can check it out at this link! [24]If there is anything I want to add in terms of content, can I add content and references to both Korean and original English articles? 9.i0000 (talk) 09:08, 12 October 2023 (UTC) 9.i0000 (talk) 09:05, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@9.i0000 Good. We will see if the Korean Wikipedia reviewers have any concerns in the near future. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:18, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4(week7, second draft)-Moon Hayun, Kim Minji

Hello, professor! We are Moon Hayoon and Kim Minji who are taking Understanding Small data and Big data with wikis. We Added more information for our assginment. I'd appreciate it if you could check it out. https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Boseong_County Moonhayun (talk) 11:51, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Moonhayun Your article is developing very nicely. For festivals, I suggest a new subeading under do. Please add information when they happen, their websites and directions how to participate. Festivals should have their own listings too. Adding several images would be good too. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 13:26, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 7) - Jihyun Choi

Hello, professor! I'm Jihyun Choi, taking your <Media Trends and Globalization> class. I'm still translating the article(sustainable agriculture), and I currently translated almost all English languages into Korean. Based on your feedback last time, I fixed cases of red links and added other informations. In addition, I revised the composition of words and sentences to make it easier to read when translating into Korean. I'm still working on inserting additional Wikipedia links into the words now, and I'll share the current progress with you, so I would appreciate it if you could check it. You can see the article here. Bamgoguma (talk) 17:13, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

@Bamgoguma Good progress. Look at the article history and study the fixes by experienced Korean volunteers like Ykhwong to see how you can improve the quality of your work further. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:03, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4:Week 7 (second draft) is approaching --- LINGXUAN HUANG

Hello professor, I am LINGXUAN HUANG，taking Understanding Small data and Big data with wikis. I have completed more than ten edits to https://en.wikivoyage.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Hezhou&action=history Please check thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 06:40, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Hhhlx I am afraid you missed the part of the 10 edits assignment description where it is clearly stated that you need to edit "articles different from their group article(s); also edits for deadlines and posting to my talk page does not count". _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:25, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Regarding your main article, please add a map and a banner as we practiced in recent classes. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:26, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

deadline4 (week 5)kim jiwon

Hello professor! Is it okay to translate https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fashion_in_South_Korea for the remaining articles of media globalization? I looked it up and I don't think it's translated into Korean yet! I want to translate from English to Korean

One more thing is that I sent you an email about attendance last week, so please check it when you have time! I'm sorry to bother you even though you must be busy...! Wldnjsdk1 (talk) 15:06, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Wldnjsdk1 I am afraid this topic has already been chosen by another student to translate to Korean. How about translating Fashion in India instead?

I will try to catch up to attendance issues shortly. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:42, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 7) - Choisieon, changyeop Jung

Hello, professor. We have revised the part you pointed out 2 weeks ago.  We added words  in various heading such as understand, eat, see, do, buy, and so on, and added pictures. In the future, we will add more items with poor contents such as sleep. I'll add more pictures too. please check it. Thank you! Choisieon (talk) 16:03, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Choisieon Good progress. The structure of your article is pretty good. Please ensure the content is correct in English by using tools like Grammarly and AI. Sentences like "It is a primitive geological topography", "who Simcheong threw his body to open his father's eyes" or "Let's take a quiet step" are just few examples - almost all of your content needs to be proofread carefully. There are numerous other vocabulary issues (rape flower???).

You should summarize the relevant legend (The Tale of Sim Chong) in a section at Understand. Copying the text from Wikipedia is fine. I am a bit surprised The Tale of Sim Chong does not mention Baengnyeongdo, or vice versa. I don't see the connection at Korean Wikipedia, either - you can add it there and in English with references for extra points. Korean Wikipedia article about the island at ko:백령도 says something about unique culture/food related to the North Korean Hwanghae Province, as well as something about the local Lotteria store being famous/unique? This stuff may be of interest to Wikivoyage.

@Ikan Kekek - does Wikivoyage has an equivalent of {{grammar}}? _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:08, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Not to my knowledge. Grammar is just corrected by volunteers. About copying from Wikipedia to Wikivoyage: It's OK to do with credit to the Wikipedia article in an edit summary that's typed in the "Summary" box below the edit screen, or failing that, with a note on the article's talk page, and in that case, only when it's in keeping with voy:Wikivoyage:Goals and non-goals. It's usually best to instead summarize or paraphrase, still with credit in the manner I describe. Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:23, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4:Week7 (second draft)-Chang Yeop Jung, Choi Sieon

Hello professor! We are Chang yeop Jung and Choi sieon who are taking Understanding Small data and Big data with wikis. we have revised the part you pointed out 2 weeks ago. We added words in various contents such as understand, eat, see, do, buy, and so on, and added pictures. In the future, we will add more words in lacking contents such as sleep. I'll add more pictures too. please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 16:06, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@Ckdduq0919 Please see my comment above. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:09, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4:Week7 - ZHANG RUIQING

Hello, professor! I'm taking <Media Trends and Globalization> and <Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis> class.

About<Media Trends and Globalization> class, I currently translated the article(Immigration to South Korea) almost all English languages into Chinese. Based on your feedback last time, I added more references and other relevant information, and fixed the incoherent statements. You can see the article here.

About <Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis> class, I have almost finished the content about Yuhuan City. And more complete information and pictures of attractions have been added based on your feedback. It also adds attractions to the map.You can check it here.

I would appreciate it if you could check it. Thank you! Rachel.zrq (talk) 11:00, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

@Rachel.zrq Good progress. When you double check your Chinese translation for language, and finish translating all the content, you can publish it (move it to the mainspace). See Help:Move for how to move a page if necessary. After moving, please add a WP:Interwiki link to connect your article to the English one (this is done through Wikidata, which you can edit either by opening the Wikidata item, or selecting "Add language".).

As for the Wikivoyage article, good progress. Please edit the map and change the zoom level. You have a see section, but no "do". Take a look at voy:Ansan for some ideas on what could be missing (Festvals?). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:38, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

deadline (weekend 5) kim jiwon

I couldn't write back, so I wrote it again! alright I'll translate https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fashion_in_India for another topic I will translate from English to Korean. Thank you for your reply! Wldnjsdk1 (talk) 14:29, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

@Wldnjsdk1 Good, topic approved. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:38, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Move review for Category:18th-century people from the Polish–Lithuanian Commonwealth by occupation

An editor has asked for a Move review of Category:18th-century people from the Polish–Lithuanian Commonwealth by occupation. Because you closed the move discussion for this page, or otherwise were interested in the page, you might want to participate in the move review. Marcelus (talk) 19:49, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits--CHENG SHIYI

Hello professor,

I'm CHENG SHIYI.

I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia and Wikivoyage this week.

Here's the link and the link, please check it out. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 20:50, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

@CHENG SHIYI Good progress. It would be nice to add GPS coordinates to listings at voy:Changde _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:41, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline4(week7) : Cho Minseok & Kim Soongki (team 23)

Hello professor, We did a second draft of our team's article.

Can check it out here. Please check out our second draft and give us your feedback!

Thank you. Soongki (talk) 02:26, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Soongki Good progress, but the most important part - the list of castles - is still missing. Some images would be good to help illustrate various points about design/style you make in the current sections. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:42, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

That part is already considered, and the reference we have already found contains the contents.

It also plans to reflect the restored palaces in modern times.

We just haven't felt like we're at a stage where we're reflecting because it's more permanent, not writing about the current transition.

I appreciate your feedback. thank you :) Soongki (talk) 07:50, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

I find a banner for out article. please check this banner's picture followed the wikivoyage's rule.

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Rukkha1024/Korean_palaces Rukkha1024 (talk) 04:36, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Rukkha1024 The banner looks very nice! _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:29, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 (second draft) Yoon Chae Eun

Hello professor. Please check my second draft [25] for Understanding Small and Big Data with wikis. Thank you! ChaeEunYoon (talk) 04:50, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@ChaeEunYoon The history is a bit short - a few more sentences would be nice. How old is the town? Also, "Due to this regional importance, in 1908, it became a gathering place when the 13th-degree Creative Army, a unit of the Union, planned to advance to Seoul." - this should at least mention what conflict (war) that was. Most tourists are only familiar with the Korean War of the 1950s. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:36, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits-YueJuntong

Hello professor, I'm Yue Juntong from Media Trends and Globalization. I have finished this week's 10 edits, please check. this is link [[26]]thank you.악준동 (talk) 07:51, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@악준동 Good, but some content added here is unreferenced. Please add references (section 'Water resources' in particular) to ensure your edits are not removed from Wikipedia. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:38, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

[Deadline 4 (Week 7) -Hyeonsung Do]

Hello, professor! I'm hyeonsung Do, taking your <Media Trends and Globalization> class. I started translating the second article (Superstition in Korea).

I'll share the current progress with you, so I would appreciate it if you could check it. [here]

Have a nice weekend and see you in the next class! Thank you! HyeonsungDo (talk) 08:29, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@HyeonsungDo Please review the fixes that were needed here and ensure your future edits follow the relevant Korean Wikipedia rules. Please note you received a warning message on your Korean talkpage at ko:사용자토론:HyeonsungDo for relying on machine translation too much. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:39, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

World values survey:ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor, this is a survey of world values on homosexuality in China, South Korea, and France that Li Yushuo and I completed together. https://pan.baidu.com/s/1l1i6Ng9iUEztDQdy2u61Wg?pwd=fcyk ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 10:05, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG0822ZH Good. You should present it in class to get extra credit, otherwise you can make an extra credit blog. I did ask to day in class if there was anyone willing to present. You can have last chance to present on this Friday if you want to receive extra points for presentation. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:49, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUO

Good evening Professor, I have completed my Five English Wiki voyage edits this week,here is the link https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Zhuo1221. And I have completed my fifteen Chinese Wiki voyage edits this week,here is the link https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/Zhuo1221 , please check it out. Have a pleasant day!Zhuo1221 (talk) 12:02, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhuo1221 Your Wikivoyage edits need some fixing. As noted here by User:Pashley, "Read your talk page (talk) & try again". Please ensure your edits are well formatted. Stop by my office hours if you want a review of particular part or if you want to learn how to do various edits. Try to add content we have recently learned in class (banners, maps, listings with gps coordinates, climate/history sections). That article you linked is missing pretty much all of these elements. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:53, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 -ZHONG XIN

Hello professor, my team member Cheng Shiyi and I have completed the Week7 of Wikivoyage editing tasks and have made secondary improvements to the page in Zhuzhou. Please check it.

I would appreciate it if you could provide us with correction if there are any errors. Zhongxxin (talk) 12:04, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhongxxin Good. See here for some fixes that were done to improve your edits.

Please also edit the code for your page and ensure that there listings for a correct section have the right keywords - otherwise there are errors in colors. For example, Your 'buy' section has one 'buy' color and then two generic listings. Your drink starts with two listings, then has one 'drink'. There are many similar errors. To fix them, edit the code of the page. If you do not know how to fix this, ask me in class or during office hours. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:56, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 (second draft) CHENG SHIYI

Hello professor,Good evening!

I'm CHENG SHIYI.

My group member ZHONG XIN and I finished the second draft content of the wikivoyage, here is the link.Please check it out. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 12:05, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@CHENG SHIYI Good - see above for my reply to your teammate. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:57, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Week 7_Second Draft) Jiwon Park

hello. Professor. I'd like to share my progress on the assignment.

1. Media Trends class - here

->  I only made a small amount of progress on the translation. This week I spent a lot of time and focus on embedding articles, papers, and images, and now that I'm used to it, I expect to make more progress next week, including internet memes.

2. Small Data class - here

-> Based on the professor's feedback, I changed the location from Gwangjin to eastern Seoul and modified the text of the introduction, things to eat, etc. accordingly. Also, as an interesting fact, I found out that Dongdaemun is in Jongno-gu, not Dongdaemun-gu, so I will put a picture of DDP instead of Dongdaemun as the banner picture, and I plan to visit and take pictures sometime this week.

Thanks. Jiwon8230 (talk) 12:41, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Jiwon8230 Since you are translating articles from English to Korean, you should work in your Korean sandbox, not English. (Sandbox at Korean Wikipedia). There may be some code that will need to be fixed and you won't see it until you work with it on Korean Wikipedia. Please copy your work to your sandbox at Korean Wikipedia's and ask me for feedback again when you fix any resulting errors.

For the Wikivoyage article, try to add your content to voy:Seoul/East. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:02, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 - Gaeun Um

Hello, professor! I'm Gaeun Um, taking your <Media Trends and Globalization> class. Here's the project I translated with Sarang Yoon. You can check out my article here at the link. Please check! Thank you :) Garongronga (talk) 13:44, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Garongronga Since you are translating articles from English to Korean, you should work in your Korean sandbox, not English. (Sandbox at Korean Wikipedia). There may be some code that will need to be fixed and you won't see it until you work with it on Korean Wikipedia. Please copy your work to your sandbox at Korean Wikipedia's and ask me for feedback again when you fix any resulting errors. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:04, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 : Week 7 (Second Draft) Jihyun Choi

Hello, professor! I'm Jihyun Choi, taking your <Understanding Small and Big Data with wikis> class. I'm continuing to work on the article about Haenam, and I'd like to share the second draft with you. You can check out the article here. Thank you :) Bamgoguma (talk) 13:52, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@Bamgoguma Good progress. Try to add more see and do listings - compare your article to Ansan, for example. Do listings can include information on festivals, for example. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:08, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

World values survey：BAILINHAN

Dear professor, this is an assignment I completed about working in China, South Korea, and Austria.链接：https://pan.baidu.com/s/1wH9t1zt6Oq46onSB6k2Zkw?pwd=1111 提取码：1111

Dear student: please remember WP:SIGN your posts. As for your presentation: you should present it in class to get extra credit, otherwise you can make an extra credit blog. I did ask to day in class if there was anyone willing to present. You can have last chance to present on this Friday if you want to receive extra points for presentation. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:09, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits--MENGRU LI

Good evening professor,

I'm MENGRU LI. I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia and Wikivoyage this week.

Here's the link and the link, please check it . Thank you! TMXX0818 (talk) 14:59, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@TMXX0818 Good, but please find a better reference for this. The one you added was a clone of Wikipedia. Read more at WP:CIRCULAR.

Your Wikivoyage is seeing good progress. Try to add more see and do listings - compare your article to Ansan, for example. Do listings can include information on festivals, for example. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:11, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

DYK for Czesław Lewicki

On 16 October 2023, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Czesław Lewicki, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Czesław Lewicki, Polish composer and conductor, was recognized as Righteous Among the Nations for aiding the Polish-Jewish composer Władysław Szpilman? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Czesław Lewicki (Righteous). You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, Czesław Lewicki), and the hook may be added to the statistics page after its run on the Main Page has completed. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 00:02, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

World values survey:FAN XINRU

Dear professor, this is a survey of world values on Duty towards society to have children in China, South, Indonesia.Data from three countries were analyzed and compared. Please review it. [27] Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:28, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good start. You should present it in class to get extra credit, otherwise you can make an extra credit blog. I did ask to day in class if there was anyone willing to present. You can have last chance to present on this Friday if you want to receive extra points for presentation. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:13, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

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Deadline 4 : Week 7 (Second Draft) Hajin Park

Hi, professor. I'm Hajin Park who is taking <Understanding small and big data with wiki>, and my second draft is still on progress. You can check it out here. Thanks :) Hakaawaii (talk) 12:20, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Hakaawaii The article has some useful information, but there are some confusing parts that need to be rewritten due to confusing English grammar/vocabulary. Pleae use a spellchecker, and services like Grammarly and AI tools to ensure this can be read in English. The first sentence is "The load in the middle of the Bukhan River. ". What is a "load"? The first sentence should say that "XX is an island located in YY". Please compare to voy:Debudo. Later, the article suddenly talks about "Namiseom Island". Is this the same location as the "Nami Island"? Please be consistent with names (later, there is another strange name, "Naminara Republic"). First sentence of the second paragraph that begins with "In the early days of the construction" is very convoluted and confusing. Why what seems like people names is in quotation marks ("Nosan Lee Eun-sang"), etc.? Who are the "descendants" in the next [paragraph? What is meant by "[3]" and "[8]" (artifacts from copypaste from Wikipedia)? Why is there a subsectionc alled "Read"? Why is there an adjective "Strangely"? Who thinks this is strange?

Other than that, the article needs all the elements we discussed in class over the past few weeks: listings with GPS coordinates and a banner. It is good that it has a map and a climate template already. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:02, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Oh okay, it's not completed yet and still editing! I'll make it more carefully, appreciate for your advice. Hakaawaii (talk) 03:21, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 (second draft) Kim minjun

Hello, professor. I'm Kim minjun. I take 'Understanding small and big data with wiki' class , and my second draft is here. I'm continuing this work. Check this link. KMJ0521 (talk) 04:34, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

@KMJ0521 Looks good. Few fixes needed: 1) The first line of the article should clarify what is this (a village, town, city...). 2) Sentence "On October 1, 1938, Goseong-myeon was promoted to Goseong-eup." should tell the reader what is 'myeon' and 'eup' in English 3) For the Do section, it would be good to add more (how about festivals? Are there any?. 4) The Dinosaur Expo - is it a festival or is it permanent? The text in 'get in' suggests that is not pernmanent? If so, the description should tell the reader when is this event happening. If not, then content under 'get in' needs fixing. 5) Understand mentions "Hakdong Village, which has a nice old stone wall, is good for walking lightly.", but Hakdong is not mentioned later in the article. 6) Likewise, Understand mentions "Goseong Dinosaur Museum" but such museum is not mentioned later in the article. 7) Understand mentions "Sangjokam Rock", but the Rock is not mentioned in the article, which only mentions Sangjokam Park and Sangjokam Beach. Please be consistent with names in the article, and ensure all items mentioned in 'Understand' are mentioned later in the text with the same name. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:05, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 (second draft) Choi Min Joon

Hi, professor. I'm Min Joon Choi, who is taking <Understanding small and big data with wiki>, and my second draft is still on progress. You can check it out here. Thanks! Alswns001 (talk) 04:37, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

@Alswns001 See above for my comments to your teammate. _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:06, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

WP:REREQ email

I just resent the email. If you're still not seeing anything, some editors report emails from me end up in the Gmail spam folder, so maybe take a look there. Sorry! Extraordinary Writ (talk) 05:45, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

@Extraordinary Writ Thanks, I got it. No idea what ate the first one (gremlins...). _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 05:58, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

TFA

Thank you today for Venus in fiction, introduced: "Following the successful nomination for Mars in fiction, I bring you our other planetary neighbour's depiction in fiction. Compared to Mars, Venus has made fewer and less influential appearances in fiction, resulting in a comparatively sparse secondary literature which is reflected in a significantly shorter article here on Wikipedia. This is not to say that Venus's history in fiction is less interesting—while the depiction of Mars was heavily influenced by observations of its surface that later turned out to be mistaken, the depiction of Venus was equally influenced by the fact that its surface could not be observed at all through the planet's thick cloud layer. Thus, while science fiction writers thought they had a pretty good understanding of the conditions on the surface of Mars, the Venusian surface was a complete mystery to them, opening the door for all kinds of imaginative speculation."! -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:23, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Weekly wiki edits——LI LINLIN

Hello professor!

I'm LI LINLIN taking Media Trends and Globalization class. I have completed more than ten edits to Wikivoyage this week.

Here's the link. please check it .

Thank you! Leeinm (talk) 12:40, 17 October 2023 (UTC)