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Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheBritinator was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Relies entirely on bare URLs.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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TheBritinator (talk) 17:08, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I have revised the version, and replaced the bare URLs with formatted citations. I hope this will make the references more reliable for reviewers to consider adding the profile of this person of notoriety. Asphalt Redd (talk) 22:25, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Claims made in the personal life section are only sourced to a PR company. External links should also be removed or converted to inline citations where appropriate.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Greenman (talk) 06:13, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is my third re-submission. I have revised the version to maintain a neutral tone, avoids promotional language, and replaces external links with inline citations for a more encyclopedic style, as you noted. Asphalt Redd (talk) 20:24, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Revision as of 06:13, 28 January 2024 edit Greenman (talk \| contribs) Autopatrolled, Event coordinators, Extended confirmed users 61,087 edits Notification: Your Articles for Creation submission has been declined (AFCH) ← Previous edit		Revision as of 20:24, 28 January 2024 edit undo Asphalt Redd (talk \| contribs) 15 edits →Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 28): Reply Tag: Reply Next edit →
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			:This is my third re-submission. I have revised the version to maintain a neutral tone, avoids promotional language, and replaces external links with inline citations for a more encyclopedic style, as you noted. [[User:Asphalt Redd\|Asphalt Redd]] ([[User talk:Asphalt Redd#top\|talk]]) 20:24, 28 January 2024 (UTC)