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Carabus japonicus is currently a Biology and medicine good article nominee. Nominated by NHanselman (talk) at 02:43, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

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Short description: Species of ground beetle that predominates in Japan

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Wiki Education assignment: Behavioral Ecology 2024

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 16 January 2024 and 25 April 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): NHanselman (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by NHanselman (talk) 13:35, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 23:57, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that larvae of the Carabus japonicus species prey on earthworms up to 400 times larger than themselves? Source: Page 48 of Sota's Evolutionary Biology of Carabus Ground Beetles (https://www.google.com/books/edition/Evolutionary_Biology_of_Carabus_Ground_B/O_JQEAAAQBAJ?)
"Surprisingly, Ohomopterus larvae seldom failed to attack any size earthworm and could kill earthworms up to 400-fold larger in body weight than themselves."
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Created by NHanselman (talk).

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NHanselman (talk) 02:37, 7 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

No QPQ required. Hook is interesting and the source provided is reliable. My only issue with the article is that the Behavior section is improperly cited. Aside from that, everything seems fine. Davest3r08 >:3 ^(talk) 14:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Davest3r08! I appreciate the review. How can I update the Behavior section so that it is properly cited? NHanselman (talk) 04:48, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

NHanselman, I'd recommend adding a citation at the end of each paragraph. Davest3r08 >:3 ^(talk) 11:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- All issues have been addressed. You're all caught up, congrats! Davest3r08 >:3 ^(talk) 11:52, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: The image included with this nomination is not of Carabus japonicus and should not be used. RecycledPixels (talk) 06:10, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Removed 🌙Eclipse ^(talk) ^(contribs) 17:34, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I think I fixed it. Is this what you had in mind? NHanselman (talk) 16:41, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

NHanselman, there's nothing else to do. Your hook has been approved. — Davest3r08 >:3 ^(talk) 14:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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This page is overall very informative. You did a really good job. It’s very interesting to know the experiment that put a male and a female of different species in a box together. For some suggestions, I think you can move the life cycle section up a little, like between the diet and the behavior sections. For other structural improvements please refer to the beetle topic order document. Besides, if possible, I think you could add a little on the interaction of the beetles with human, as they predate on earthworms. Heater4 (talk) 01:02, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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 Alright, I think I fixed it. Is this what you had in mind? [[User:NHanselman|NHanselman]] ([[User talk:NHanselman|talk]]) 16:41, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
 :[[User:NHanselman|NHanselman]], there's nothing else to do. Your hook has been approved.<span id="Davest3r08:1712760627201:TalkFTTCLNCarabus_japonicus" class="FTTCmt"> —&nbsp;[[User:Davest3r08|<span style="color: brown;">Davest3r08</span> <span style="color: #21b1ff;">></span><span style="color: #ffd800;">:</span><span style="color:#ff218c;">3</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Davest3r08|talk]])</sup> 14:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)</span>
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+This page is overall very informative. You did a really good job. It’s very interesting to know the experiment that put a male and a female of different species in a box together. For some suggestions, I think you can move the life cycle section up a little, like between the diet and the behavior sections. For other structural improvements please refer to the beetle topic order document. Besides, if possible, I think you could add a little on the interaction of the beetles with human, as they predate on earthworms. [[User:Heater4|Heater4]] ([[User talk:Heater4|talk]]) 01:02, 12 April 2024 (UTC)