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This user is a student editor in Chapman_University/CSCW_Interterm_2022_(Interterm) .

Please return Celebratory Technology to draftspace

I'm not sure why you moved it in the first place, considering the first section header is literally called "Article Draft". Regardless, the article is in an abysmal state—it's not clear what exactly the subject of the article even is, it reads like a personal essay, and there are very few inline citations. I suggest putting the article through Articles for creation as a sanity check that it is in line with norms, as there are many more issues I did not bother to list.

I'm sorry I couldn't find a softer way to word this. Thank you for your contributions. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 01:07, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this feedback. This is a class assignment and it is subpar at this point. Students are expected to provide missing details and polishing this week and next, getting global feedback is part of their experience although I agree what is posted is less than I expected at this point. I will address all the issues that got missed. Happy2be2022! (talk) 01:51, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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	I'm sorry I couldn't find a softer way to word this. Thank you for your contributions. [[User:Snowmanonahoe\|Snowmanonahoe]] ([[User talk:Snowmanonahoe\|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Snowmanonahoe\|contribs]] '''·''' [[User:Snowmanonahoe/Typos\|typos]]) 01:07, 1 May 2024 (UTC)		I'm sorry I couldn't find a softer way to word this. Thank you for your contributions. [[User:Snowmanonahoe\|Snowmanonahoe]] ([[User talk:Snowmanonahoe\|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Snowmanonahoe\|contribs]] '''·''' [[User:Snowmanonahoe/Typos\|typos]]) 01:07, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

			:Thank you for this feedback. This is a class assignment and it is subpar at this point. Students are expected to provide missing details and polishing this week and next, getting global feedback is part of their experience although I agree what is posted is less than I expected at this point. I will address all the issues that got missed. [[User:Happy2be2022!\|Happy2be2022!]] ([[User talk:Happy2be2022!#top\|talk]]) 01:51, 1 May 2024 (UTC)