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Marketing copy

Several passages in this article sound like they were lifted directly from Providence's marketing copy. Definitely not an appropriate encyclopedic tone. These need to be removed or reworked.

"Our hospitalists also have access to..."

"Seaside is a beautiful place to call home and a wonderful place to practice medicine."

"this picturesque area is a favorite day-trip and vacation destination for people from Portland and beyond."

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+== Marketing copy ==
+Several passages in this article sound like they were lifted directly from Providence's marketing copy. Definitely not an appropriate encyclopedic tone. These need to be removed or reworked.
+* "Our hospitalists also have access to..."
+* "Seaside is a beautiful place to call home and a wonderful place to practice medicine."
+* "this picturesque area is a favorite day-trip and vacation destination for people from Portland and beyond."
+[[User:Pdxgimlet|Pdxgimlet]] ([[User talk:Pdxgimlet|talk]]) 16:30, 14 May 2024 (UTC)