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Hello,dear yueziyi
Hello,dear yueziyi
I have read your two translated articles carefully, think it is a very good translation, Chinese sentences are very smooth, clearly expressed the original meaning, no omission, the added pictures are also very suitable for the topic.The only downside is that some of the links in your article aren't working, and it would be better if you could add link to the entry better. [[User:Babaibiaobin|Babaibiaobin]] ([[User talk:Babaibiaobin|talk]]) 17:51, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
I have read your two translated articles carefully, think it is a very good translation, Chinese sentences are very smooth, clearly expressed the original meaning, no omission, the added pictures are also very suitable for the topic.The only downside is that some of the links in your article aren't working, and it would be better if you could add link to the entry better. [[User:Babaibiaobin|Babaibiaobin]] ([[User talk:Babaibiaobin|talk]]) 17:51, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

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Dear YUE ZIYI

I read both of your wiki articles.,'''''[[:zh:User:YZY2233/沙盒|Social psychology (sociology)]] and [[:zh:User:YZY2233/沙盒2|Sailor tattoos]]'''''

I enjoyed reading your second article because you followed the structure, linked the most important terms to other Wikipedia articles, and included images from the original article. The same goes for the first article.

It is recommended that you proofread your first article again as there may be some translation grammatical errors.

Also, both posts are in draft stage, so remember to post them, and have a great week. [[User:Csiiiyu|Csiiiyu]] ([[User talk:Csiiiyu|talk]]) 05:44, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

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Hello,dear yueziyi I have read your two translated articles carefully, think it is a very good translation, Chinese sentences are very smooth, clearly expressed the original meaning, no omission, the added pictures are also very suitable for the topic.The only downside is that some of the links in your article aren't working, and it would be better if you could add link to the entry better. Babaibiaobin (talk) 17:51, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear YUE ZIYI

I read both of your wiki articles.,Social psychology (sociology) and Sailor tattoos

I enjoyed reading your second article because you followed the structure, linked the most important terms to other Wikipedia articles, and included images from the original article. The same goes for the first article.

It is recommended that you proofread your first article again as there may be some translation grammatical errors.

Also, both posts are in draft stage, so remember to post them, and have a great week. Csiiiyu (talk) 05:44, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]