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:Fair enough re run-on, but the sentence went into far too much detail for the lede. I'll change 'claim' to 'complaint' which will mitigate the MOS issue. cheers. [[User:Anastrophe|anastrophe]], [[User talk:Anastrophe|an editor he is.]] 23:24, 19 May 2024 (UTC) |
:Fair enough re run-on, but the sentence went into far too much detail for the lede. I'll change 'claim' to 'complaint' which will mitigate the MOS issue. cheers. [[User:Anastrophe|anastrophe]], [[User talk:Anastrophe|an editor he is.]] 23:24, 19 May 2024 (UTC) |
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::Fair. Thanks! <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 20px lightskyblue, -4px -4px 20px lightgray;font-weight:bold;">[[User:Err a Parrot|🪞🦜]]∞[[User talk:Err a Parrot|👩💻💬]]</span> 23:25, 19 May 2024 (UTC) |
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== Elon Musk == |
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I'm not sure what the issue is. I added the Natalism category because he's well known for his advocacy there. [[User:Killuminator|Killuminator]] ([[User talk:Killuminator|talk]]) 17:10, 26 May 2024 (UTC) |
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Rebekah Jones edit summary
A long sentence is not a run-on sentence. That was an unnecessary characterization of my edit.
I was trying to remove that it was a MOS:CLAIM and capture this in a more neutral way:
The differences included adding a statement that she had "demonstrated a) violation of law 'which create and presents a substantial and specific danger to the public's health, safety, or welfare;' or b) actual or suspected 'gross mismanagement' as defined by the Act, …" and references to specific rules related to firing state employees.
🪞🦜∞👩💻💬 23:16, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough re run-on, but the sentence went into far too much detail for the lede. I'll change 'claim' to 'complaint' which will mitigate the MOS issue. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 23:24, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
- Fair. Thanks! 🪞🦜∞👩💻💬 23:25, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
Elon Musk
I'm not sure what the issue is. I added the Natalism category because he's well known for his advocacy there. Killuminator (talk) 17:10, 26 May 2024 (UTC)